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作业 53 应用文写作＋读后续写
Ⅰ.应用文写作(邀请信)(满分15分)
(2024·湖南益阳三模)
假定你是学生会主席李华，你校计划定于6月10日在体育馆举办高三毕业典礼，请写
封邮件邀请你校外教 David 参加，内容包括：
1．典礼时间与地点；2.典礼内容；3.期待回复。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear David，
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
Ⅱ.读后续写(满分25分)
(2024·山东青岛一模)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I begged my mom to let me make cookies by myself.Even though I had never attempted
baking before，I was nine years old and my friend Emmie had been baking cupcakes by herself for
a year.I was determined to prove that I could make it.
My brother，Caleb，laughed at the idea of me cooking alone，calling it a disaster.Having a
big brother can be annoying.Despite his laughing，my mom agreed to let me try.She reminded me
to take my time and be careful because I’d had some messy spills before I was nine.
I raced to the kitchen and went to work.I cracked eggs and put a cold stick of butter into the
bowl.I turned on the mixer at medium speed—and whoa.Whoa.Whoa! What a disaster! I had to
wipe butter off my face，then off the table and floor.
Caleb made fun of me again，calling me a mess.I chased him away with a spoon and turned
back to the mixing bowl.I started again with softer butter.Referring to the recipe ，I pouredeverything needed into the bowl and mixed it.After that，I put round batter(面糊) onto the cookie
sheet and put it into the oven(烤箱)．Within a minute，a fantastic smell filled the kitchen—the
smell of cookie success!
I was going to prove that I was responsible.No more eye-rolling from my brother.No more
“You’re too young” from my parents.I was grown up and in control.
I stared into the oven，and my heart sank.The neat，little balls had melted(融化) and
overflowed to the edges of the cookie sheet.I pulled the pan out just as Caleb wandered back into
the kitchen.
“What in the world？” He started to laugh.“Cookie soup？”
“You just be quiet，” I whispered，trying not to cry.“Just leave me alone.”
“How’s it going in there？” Dad called from the living room.
Caleb raised his eyebrows and bit his lip.I responded that everything was fine，pouring the
melted batter into the bowl quickly.
注意：续写词数应为150个左右。
I picked up the directions，wondering what had gone wrong.
I brought a plate of cookies into the living room for my parents.
答案精析
Ⅰ.参考范文
Dear David ，
How is everything going? With great excitement and delight，I am writing to invite you toattend our graduation ceremony，which is scheduled to be held at 9：00 am on June 10 in the
school gym.
There are many significant activities ， which will never fail to impress you.At the
beginning，the headmaster will deliver a speech to express his sincere congratulations on our
graduation.After that，to recall our unforgettable experiences in high school，some elaborate
shows will be performed.What’s more，don’t miss the golden moment when we will gather
together to take photos.
We would be particularly honored by your distinguished presence at the ceremony and we are
looking forward to your coming.Please reply to me at your convenience.
Yours sincerely ，
Li Hua
Ⅱ.参考范文
I picked up the directions，wondering what had gone wrong.It was then that I realized I had
forgotten to add the flour! The batter had been too runny，causing the cookies to spread out.I
quickly mixed in the flour and spooned the batter onto a new cookie sheet.This time，I watched
carefully as they rose and browned in the oven.The sweet aroma filled the kitchen，and my heart
beat with excitement.I couldn’t wait to show my family what I had accomplished.Caleb sneaked
in and raised his eyebrows，but this time，I just smiled confidently.
I brought a plate of cookies into the living room for my parents.They looked surprised and
delighted.“These are...yours ？ ” Mom asked ， taking a cautious
bite.“They’re...amazing！” She smiled，and Dad nodded in agreement.Caleb sat on the
couch，a cookie in his hand，and his face betrayed a hint of pride.“I told you she could do it，”
he said with a grin.I beamed，feeling a sense of accomplishment wash over me.I had proved
myself，not just to my family but to myself.From that day on，no one doubted my baking skills
again.步步高 大二轮专题复习 英语
