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2015 年 6 月大学英语六级考试必背范文
（2008.6——2012.6）
作者：蒋辰
以下筛选2008年 6月至2012年6月的 CET6写作范文共12 篇，从行文结构、句型用法、
短语词组搭配等方面进行分析，旨在从中提炼 CET6 写作模板，并为读者提供写作分析与语篇
精读的范例，还原应试英语的本来面目。
文中标注规范：
1、下划线表示是好句子或有重要的语法结构，可以把结构用到具体的语境中；加粗下划线是模
板用句，大部分具有框架的性质，可以直接用。下划线最好都写写背背，尤其是加粗下划线。
此项对记性和技术要求较高。
2、波浪线表示出彩或需要注释的短语或词组，重在积累，不完全针对考试。如果记住了且在考
试中碰到了类似的情境，可使用，此项对人品要求较高。
3、整个字体加粗表示结构性短语，作为模板用词，可供参考。此项对 copy能力要求较高。
注：本资料仅限内部使用，不得擅自外传。
版权所有，违者必究。http://home.xdf.cn/
2008 年 6月——Will E-books Replace Traditional Books?（现象说明型）
1. 随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多
2. 有人认为电子图书会取代传统图书，理由是…
3. 我的看法
【范文一】
Recent decades have seen the rapid development of information technology.As a result,many electric
inventions,including E-book,have found their way into our everyday life and have gained increasing
popularity among common people.
It’s no wonder that some people hold the idea that E-book will replace traditional books sooner or later
because E-book have various advantages over the traditional ones.To start with,all the E-book can be
downloaded from the Internet directly,most of which are free of charge ,while the traditional books in
bookstores are much more expensive .What’s more,E-book can be stored more easily in our
computers and are more convinient for people to carry around.Last but not the least,reading E-book
has become a fashion in our life,which is particularly appealing to our young people.
As far as I am concerned,nowadays traditional books are still the leading means of reading.
However,with further development of information technology and the popularity of computer and
Internet,E-books will surely take the place of traditional books in the near future.
一、结构：现象；原因；我的观点。
二、句型用法：
1、定语从句：......which is..... / ......, most of which.....
2、区分wonder和 doubt 的句型：It's no wonder that../ There's no doubt that....
3、with 引导的状语从句
三、短语与词组的用法
1、避免重复使用：replace与take the place ofhttp://home.xdf.cn/
2008 年 12月——How To Improve Students' Mental Health（对策类）
1. 大学生心理健康很重要
2. 为此，学校可以…
3. 我们自己应该…
【范文一（推荐熟读或背诵）】
Mental health is becoming an increasingly troublesome issue for undergraduates. We can easily get all
kinds of information about college students’ pressure or emotional problems on the Internet. Solving
the problem needs collaborative efforts between universities and students themselves.
On the one hand, authorities in universities play a critical role in the situation. To begin with,
schools, such as colleges or universities, can provide chances for the students to ease their
tension.What’s more, some are physically strong, but mentally weak in terms of coping with difficult
situations. Teachers may have a chance to find them in advance. Besides, specialists in this field are to
be required to make full preparation for cases in time.
On the other hand, students should try to face the reality and figure out the causes of depression so
that they can better understand it. They should also learn how to identify unhealthy behaviors or
thoughts and make changes accordingly.
一、结构：
1、大结构：现状；一方的对策；另一方的对策。
2、小结构（第二段）：三点并列
二、句型用法：
1、动名词做主语：(Solving the problem) needs collaborative efforts ....
2、插入语：To begin with, schools, such as colleges or universities, can provide......
3、be to do 结构：这里表示“应该”，另有“必须”、“将要”、“命中注定”之义。
三、短语与词组的用法
1、同义替换，尽量避免过多的低级词汇：
issue比problem 更正式，本例使用issue也是为了避免与本段第三行的 problem 重复。
2、副词+动词：
better understand it=understand it better，但前面的表达更自然，读起来比较简洁。http://home.xdf.cn/
【范文二】
There is no doubt that mental health is of great importance to college students. Nowadays, many
students in college suffer from mental illness, which severely affects their life and study.
In view of the seriousness of the situation, effective measures must be taken before things get worse.
Due attention has to be paid by colleges to students’ mental health. First, lectures on psychological
health should be frequently given to students to prevent problems from happening.Secondly,
psychological clinics should be set up to provide troubled students with timely help.
As college students, we should keep the channel of communication open among ourselves and
between us and our teachers and parents. Besides, in case of mental illness, we should not hesitate to
go to psychological counselors for help. Only with these measures taken can we expect sound growth
of college students.
一、结构：现状；一方的对策；另一方的对策。
二、句型用法：
1、There be结构：There is no doubt that....用于全文开头有点不自然。
2、be of +名词：be of great importance=important，更正式
3、被动结构：Due attention has to be paid.....将pay的宾语 attention 提前，强调attention.
4、倒装结构：Only with these measures taken can we expect sound growth of college students.
三、短语与词组的用法
1、常用短语：
1）provide sb. with sth. provide sth to sb
2）prevent...from...
附一：对比两篇范文
个人认为，结构清晰是应试佳作的最重要特点，这一点上，范文一显然优于范文二。在句子上，
两篇范均有美中不足之处，范文一句型虽主被动的变化，但句子不够漂亮，内容不充实，而范
文二，同样有倒装和被动结构变化，但 should 用得太多，比较单一。
附二：其它范文佳句
1. the authorties concerned should enhance the awareness that mental fitness is very important to
college students.—— 后 置 定 语 concerned ； enhance the awareness ； important 可 改 为
significant,salient,vital.
2. Students should also take an active part in helping themselves.http://home.xdf.cn/
2009 年 6月——On the Importance of a Name（观点对比类）
1. 有人认为名字很重要
2. 有人认为名字不重要
3. 你的看法
【范文一】
Is a name important? To some people, yes. They strongly believe that a name is responsible for a
person’s life. Therefore, they take all the trouble, trying various ways to search wonderful names for
themselves or their children, expecting the names would work magic for a glorious future.
To others, however, the answer is "NO". According to them, the name is a nothing but a lifeless code.
Being lifeless, a code is powerless, not to mention it is so called 'magic' of bringing a person success.
To achieve success, they say, opportunity may count, and one's own efforts definitely count, but a
name that simply function as the way of distinguishing one from another, obviously don't.
As far as I am concerned, a name is important in a sense. After all, the first thing that people learn
about a person is usually his name, and a name that sounds beautiful may give and leave people a
great first impression. However, it is not that important or powerful as to promise a person his bright
future. For a bright future, we need intelligence, honesty, sincerity and efforts more than just a
beautiful name.
一、结构：简介针对点；一方立场与原因；另一方立场与原因；我的观点。
二、句型用法：
1、伴随状语：
.........., trying various ways to search wonderful names for themselves or their children,
expecting the names would work magic for a glorious future.
2、According to them..... 句的分析（建议背诵）：
1）according to：常用的结构，本例在文中是个很好的过渡
2）nothing but：等于 only，仅仅
3）being lifeless：-ing结构放句首，表原因
4）not to mention：更别提，等同于 not to speak
3、不定式作状语，插入语：to achieve success,they say, opportunity may count........
三、短语与词组的用法
1、various：many很好的替换词
2、distinguish A from B：区别，辨别
3、in a sense：在某种程度上，等同于 in some respects 或to some extent.
4、as to：涉及到，等同于 when it comes/refers to.....
5、副词+动词：strongly believe，simply functionhttp://home.xdf.cn/
【范文二】
It is universally acknowledged that names play a significant part for both individuals and
organizations.Nowadays,a lot of attentions is being drawn to the change of names.Many people
change their names owing to the instruction of fortune tellers,expecting the names would work magic
for a glorious future.However,people's ideas vary on this issue.
To start with,some people hold the view that names may contribute to their fame or fortune,others
even maintain that the mental health and physical fitness will be influenced or even determined by
their names.In the second place,a great many people insist that the name is just a symbol,which is of
little significance.They even go so far as listing some famous figures with common names.
As far as I am concerned,for the sake of success,more significance should be attached to
intelligence,persisitence and diligence rather than one's names.therefore,it's time that we put an end to
this debate and put our heart into learning and working so that we may succeed and embrace a better
tomorrow.
一、结构：现象；阐述两种对立观点；我的观点。
二、句型用法：
1、It 作为形式主语引导的从句：
It is universally acknowledged that......这个句子是所有相似例句中最好的，此外还有 it is
widely believed/accepted that.....等等，均不如此句高级。
2、两个经典的被动用法：
1）a lot of attentions is being drawn to..... 2）more significance should be attached to....
3、虚拟语气：
It's (high) time that we put an end to this debate. （put 是动词过去式）
It's (high) time that we should put an end to this debate.（put 是动词原形）
三、短语与词组的用法
1、常用短语：
1）owing to：由于。可作表语和状语，之前可加逗号与前句隔开；近似等同于because of
（不加逗号，不作表语），due to（之前不用逗号），on account of （较正式）和 thanks
to（用于肯定句）
2）contribute to：有助于，促成（好的方面）；等于 make a contribution to...；近似等同于
result in, lead to.
3）表示“认为”：hold the view that,be convinced that, insist, argue, maintain, claim, believe...
当然还有低级的 think,say.....
附一：这一年的题目属于观点对比类，由题干来看，写作条理不容易混乱，最难的在于如何为
每个观点准备合适的理由，这里涉及到的是两方面问题：想出理由、分配理由。不论是同http://home.xdf.cn/
意一方还是中立于两方，总需要把同一倾向的理由分成两部分，分别用于阐述一方立场和
个人观点。
附二：可以注意到，虽然两篇范文中我的观点在最后表达了一个倾向性，但略有区别，范文一
让步的态度更加明显，而范文二基本看不到让步。在看范文一的时候，我立刻把“让步”
与every coin has two sides 联系起来，但仔细想想这是无法建立联系的。every coin has two
sides 是讲的是从 coin 这个主体的本身出发，而 name 的问题是将其当成客体，由充当主
体的人们去评价。所以，它们观察的方向是相反的，所以 coin 一句不能适用于本例。由
此总结：1）我的观点只需顺着一方观点进一步阐述就好，避免让步带来的困惑； 2）谚
语有其适用场合，运用需谨慎。http://home.xdf.cn/
2009 年 12月——Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art Classes?（观点对比类）
现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班：
1. 对这种做法有人表示支持；
2. 有人并不赞成
3. 我认为
【范文一】
There is no denying the fact that it has become a prevailing trend for parents to send the children to art
training classes of all kinds. To this phenomenon,people’s attitudes differ sharply.
Some hold the positive view. They claim that attending art classes can help nurture children’s interest
and tap their potentials in such art as music, painting and dancing. This, they believe, will contribute to
a child’s all-sided development. Besides, they argue that mastering skills of one art or two can add to a
child’s edge of competition in the modern world.
Others, however, hold the opposite view. They point out that not all children are interested or
talented in art, or a child may not be fond of all forms of art. Forcing them to go to art classes may
only restrict their freedom and affect their healthy growth.
Personally, I believe that both sides have something right, so we should not go to extremes. On the
one hand, it must be admitted that going to art classes is an effective means to find out and give full
play to children’s talent in art and it is conducive to their sound development. On the other hand, it is
not advisable for parents to deprive their children of the right to choose to learn what they truly like.
Remember, the fittest is the best.
一、结构：简述现象（针对点）；阐述两种对立观点；我的观点。
二、句型用法：
1、some hold the positive view....others hold the opposite view...同样结构在2012年6 月出现
2、it 作形式主语的被动表达：it must be admitted that.....
3、重点关注：It is not advisable for parents to deprive their children of the right to choose to learn
what they truly like.
1）advisable：常用词。明智的，可取的。不是“可建议的、可规劝的”之义。
2）deprive sb of sth：剥夺sb的sth。同义词可用 not allow,prevent from 等等，显然略矬。
3）learn what they truly like：
A. wh-引导的宾语从句；
B. 第二，副词+动词（truly like）；
C. 这里的 like显然比下面提到的 be fond of更好，因为 like更为简洁.。总结一下可
以发现，在使用同义词汇时，若在句子的重要位置（如主句的谓语），使用高级词
汇；若在句子的次要位置（如从句的谓语），不是说一定不能用高级词汇，而是要
以自然、简洁为第一考量标准，底线（bottom line）是：从句的谓语不能比主句
的谓语更高级、更复杂，否则本末倒置，不合英语用语习惯。
4、熟语、谚语的使用：the fittest is the best.
三、短语与词组的用法
1、add to a child’s edge of competition：
1）add to：可用 promote,improve等替换，但 add to 更简洁更准确http://home.xdf.cn/
2）edge：等同于 advantage；合理运用单词的生义，另辟蹊径，表现语言的驾驭能力
2、be fond of：等同于 be keen on,be interested in，可替换，避免 like,love,enjoy等低级词汇
3、go to extremes：走向极端。在现象说明与对比类的文章中常用。
4、同义替换：an effective means.——The word "means"(单复数同形）outweigh "method",not
to mention "way".http://home.xdf.cn/
2010 年 6月——Due Attention Should Be Given To the Study of Chinese（现象说明类）
1. 近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象
2. 出现这种现象的原因和后果
3. 针对这种现象，我认为....
【范文一（推荐熟读或背诵）】
In recent years, the ignorance of Chinese has been prevailing among students.Some refuse to go to
Chinese classes, and some read few Chinese classics.In contrast, more and more students attach more
importance to foreign language study.
There are three premier factors that can account for such phenomenon.First and foremost, the
globalization greatly stimulates the students’ craze for learning English, which in turn affect students’
passion for studying Chinese.Moreover, fewer and fewer universities motivate students to study
Chinese.Last but not least, the increasing emphasis on such “practical projects” as foreign language
closely related to hunting jobs also cut into students’ time and energy. Therefore, students’ weakness
in Chinese would undoubtedly not only lead to their ignorance of Chinese culture but also hinder the
study of other projects.
In my view, effective measures are called for to solve the problem.First, it should be made clear to the
whole society that Chinese is one indispensable part of our culture and race.Second, schools should
attach more importance to the teaching of Chinese.Third, students should enhance their awareness of
the importance of mastering their mother tongue.
一、这篇文章我不做分析，只是作了一些标记。我想你需要自己分析一下它的牛叉之处。我就
谈一下我的体会吧，总的来说，看完之后有种"Oppa, Gangnam Style"的感觉。
1、这篇文章最接近佳作标准，当然是我的标准，两个方面镇得我哑口无言：第一，条理非
常清晰，一目了然；第二，高级词汇、短语一打一个准，很精彩，同样也很准确；第三，
基本没有一个句子是在打酱油的，都是给分点！
2、当然，它也是有美中不足之处的。第一，文中出现了两个 attach the importance to 的用
法，重复使用这么“亮”的短语，给人江郎才尽的感觉，幸好本文亮点实在太多，重复使
用不致于很明显；第二，最后一段三个句子很水地连续用了三个 should，难道范文作者
也有写作时间的限制？——针对以上两个问题，你是否可以改写？
3、瑕不掩瑜。
二、其它范文佳句
1、the whole society should emphasize the importance of Chinese language in order to make it
clear that it is one indispensable part of Chinese culture and Chinese race.
2、To conclude, we should pay great attention to Chinese language, since the importance of it is
never too great to be exaggerated. (形似 It is never too old to learn)
3、A good command of at least one foreign language has increasingly been an essential skill for
us.
4、They pay great attention to learning foreign language, with their mother tongue neglected.http://home.xdf.cn/http://home.xdf.cn/
2010 年 12月——My View on University Ranking（观点对比类）
1. 当今社会，高校排名很流行
2. 个人看法不同
3. 我自己的观点
【范文一】
Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that university ranking has gained increasing popularity ---
institutions home and abroad are always interested in it; newspapers and magazines are fond of
carrying the news.Unfortunately, it has also given rise to some problems never thought of. Confronted
with the dilemma, should we carry on the practice? When it comes to this question, people’s views
vary from one to another.
People who support ranking have their reasons.They are convinced that it can stimulate people,
teachers and students alike, to work harder so that they can climb on the ladder or at least maintain
their position.In this way, universities can produce more talents and knowledge demanded by our
society.Also, supporters of university ranking maintain that it can act as a guide for employers when
they decide where to find right employees.
But others may not agree. These people would argue that university ranking might force universities
to care more about their position in the ranking but not about research that they are expected to do.For
instance, it is often reported that some professors spend more time in bribing than in labs in order to
have an edge in the fierce competition.Another good case in point is that some scholars even
sacrifice their integrity to plagiarize under the pressure of “publish or perish”.
Who is right? Of course both sides have their reasons.As far as I am concerned, we might as well stop
the practice for the good of universities and society.Universities are a place for free academic
study.Only when scholars are free in their pursuits, can they make contribution to society.
一、结构：简介现象与针对点；一方立场与原因；另一方立场与原因；我的观点。
二、句型用法：
1、双重否定句：Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that..... 本例是最常见也是最自然
的双重否定句型，格式为“No- + 带否定义的实词（如：doubt, exclude, fail,neglect, refuse）
2、后置定语：institutions home and abroad（国内外的机构），problems never thought of 等等。
3、伴随状语：Confronted with the dilemma, should we carry on the practice?—confronted with
等同于faced with，显然词汇更高级。
4、分析（建议背诵此句）：Another good case in point is that some scholars even sacrifice their
integrity to plagiarize under the pressure of “publish or perish”.
1）表语从句：.......is that.......
2）good case in point：恰当的好例子
3）注意句中几个高级词汇，整句翻译：另一个恰当的例子是，在“不发表（论文）就灭
亡的压力下，许多学者甚至牺牲他们正直的品格去抄袭。
5、倒装结构：Only when scholars are free in their pursuits,can they make contribution to society.
6、自然的衔接与过渡：与其它同类文章不同，本文的末段第一句是 Who is right? Of course
both sides have their reasons.后接通常置于段首的 as far as I am concerned.http://home.xdf.cn/
三、短语与词组的用法
1、might as well：不妨。同 may as well。
2、表示“认为”的词：本文中变化较多，先后出现了 be convinced that,maintain,argue 等。
四、其它范文摘录（不算佳句，但作为无话可说时的总结句，权且可以救人一命）
In a word, we should inspire the advantages of university and abandon its disadvantages.http://home.xdf.cn/
2011 年 6月——Certificate Craze（观点对比类）
1. 现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试
2. 其目的各不相同
3. 在我看来
【范文一】
The pursuit for certificate is a time-honored phenomenon in the colleges and universities,however,
faced with the tough job market, the certificate craze has swept people from all walks of life in recent
years. People vary from one another in their purposes for acquiring certificates.
Some of them hold that professional certificates are important supplement for their school work
because the employer values professional competence, while the school courses lay particular stress
on the imparting of knowledge.Besides, diplomas and vocational credentials can effectively enhance
the competitiveness of university graduates. Professional certificates will improve the chances of
employment, without a doubt. But there is no lack of people, who hold down quite a good job, taking
professional certificates to enhance their self-worth.
In my opinion, people should avoid blindness in their pursuit for professional certificates because the
capabilities outweigh the certificates when the enterprises recruit staff.Therefore, choosing certificates
in accordance with ones career development is a wise move.
一、结构：简介现象；不同观点（有侧重）；我的观点。
二、句型用法：
1、while表转折：第二段第一句；while在表达更流畅
2、there is no lack of people, who hold down quite a good job, taking professional certificates to
enhance their self-worth.——（分析，建议背诵）
1）there be.....doing 结构：注意，这里的 taking....不是伴随状语
2）双重否定结构：no- + 含否定义的实词，no lack of
3）插入语：........,who hold down quite a good job,.........
三、短语与词组的用法
1、高级词汇：
1）time-honored：由来已久的
2）swept：sweep 过去式，可译为席卷
3）all walks of life：各行各业
4）imparting of knowledge：传授知识
5）outweigh：胜过，比.....更重要，比.....更有价值
6）in accordance with：根据...；同义短语有 on the basis of,according to,in line with 等
2、表示“获得”的词和用法：本例为 acquiring certificates：获得证书；
下面对比achieve,acquire,attain,obtain,gain,win,earn 的用法：
1）achieve：常指克服困难之后，达到目的、取得成功，强调结果，如 achieve the goal
2）acquire：常指通过努力，逐渐获得知识、能力、荣誉等，多强调过程，如Essential skills
can be acquired by constant practice.
3）attain：常指通过努力获得珍贵的东西，也用于表达完美的境界，如 it's something thathttp://home.xdf.cn/
we may aspire to but can never attain（可望而不可及的东西）
4）obtain：不强调努力与否。
5）gain：第一，通过巨大的努力，如 no pain,no gain.第二，常表示获得某种经验、优势、
利益、好处，如 gain sth from..（从....中获益）
6）win：第一，竞争、比赛、争论中击败对手而赢得胜利；第二，获得人们的爱戴〔好
感〕等。
7）earn：常指通过努力，获得理应得到的东西，如金钱、荣誉等，如 earn the money,earn
a reputation,earn a living
四、其它范文佳句
1、Recently the phenomenon of certificate craze has become a big concern of the public. It is also a
new craze in the university, which seems like a routine activity on campus, for certificates do play
a vital role when students look for a decent job.
2、From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates,since certificates
do not necessarily prove one’s ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is nothing but
wasting time.http://home.xdf.cn/
2011 年 12月——The Way to Success（议论文）
Write a short essay entitled The Way to Success by commenting on Abraham Lincoln's famous
remark,"Give me six hours to chop down tree, and I will spend,the first four sharpening the axe."
【范文一】
Just as the old saying goes “Good beginning is half done”，illustrating the importance and necessity of
the preparation work on the condition that you have the longing for the success.A great proportion of
individuals hold the view that preparation makes an essential part in the process of achievement; on
the contrary, the other parts of persons are in favor of the idea that the previous arrangement is a
minor factor for success.
The essentiality of the preparation work is able to be accounted by the following example.As a matter
of fact, the method accounts more than the results for the majority of situations, For instance, a student
who wants to win outstanding academic performance ought to learn the effective and reasonable
methods and approaches for memory and comprehension of the subjects such as physics, chemistry,
mathematics and so on. The workers in the factories should learn to master the technique of operating
the machines beforehand and in this way can they produce the qualified goods and merchandises.
Generally speaking,Lincoln’s remark “give me six hours to chop down a tree and I will spend the first
four hours sharpening the axe ”reveals the imperative of make preparation.Undoubtedly, only by
arranging beforehand can we achieve success whenever we face the perplexing and tough situations.
一、结构：
1、立论："Good beginning is half done"
2、举例子：students And workers
3、总结：Generally speaking.
二、句型用法：
1、伴随状语：Just as the saying goes........, illustrating that ......
2、倒装结构：
1) in this way can they produce the qualified goods and merchandises.
2) only by arranging beforehand can we achieve success whenever we face the perplexing
and tough situations.
三、短语与词组的用法
1、on the condition that：严格翻译为“在....的条件下”，其实可以等同于 when或if
2、have the longing for：渴望，等同于long for, hope for, be eager to 等等
3、be in favor of：支持赞同，等同于 approve of，agree with,support 等
4、account：本文出现了很多次
1）be accounted by：可以被....解释说明
2）account for：解释，说明
5、master：have a command of
6、perplexing：迷惑的，等同于 confusing,
7、tough：困难的，棘手的，等同于 difficult,hardhttp://home.xdf.cn/
四、议论文需要掌握的一些标签（可直接用）
(just) as the saying goes；illustrate；account for；be accounted by；for instance；generally
speaking；reveal；undoubtedly
The essentiality of the preparation work is able to be accounted by the following example.
五、其它范文佳句与标签
1、There is no consensus of any certain way to success.
或者可以改写得更漂亮一点：
There is no unanimous consensus on what the certain way to success is.
2、No matter wh- 引导的让步状语从句：
No matter what kind of person one is, he needs to set a goal initially,and then schedule an
elaborate plan, finally taste the joy of success when he completes this check-to-do list.
3、超级经典的双重否定句：
Without the insistence on the initial goal, one can never fulfill his dream.
4、They won’t be imprisoned by any constraints 他们不受任何限制的影响
5、be the prerequisite to：......是.....的前提条件
Just as the old saying goes “Good beginning is half done”，illustrating the importance and necessity of
the preparation work on the condition that you have the longing for the success.A great proportion of
individuals hold the view that preparation makes an essential part in the process of achievement; on
the contrary, the other parts of persons are in favor of the idea that the previous arrangement is a
minor factor for success.http://home.xdf.cn/
2012 年6月
不能确定原题，似乎从 6月开始，不同省不用题，不知道福建是什么题，我选了两题。
Should College Students Be Allowed to Get Married（观点对比类）
【范文一】
There is no denying the fact that it is a hotly debated topic today whether college students should be
allowed to get married. Some time ago, the ban was lifted by some universities on students getting
married.To this,people’s attitudes differ sharply. Some hold the positive view. They say that most
college students are adults and that it is a basic right for those who have reached the appropriate ages
to get married.
Many others, however, hold the opposite view. They claim that the university or college is a place to
study instead of a community to lead a family life. Allowing college students to get married would
adversely affect their study. For instance, they would spend too much time attending their family and
love, unable to concentrate on their school work.
As far as I am concerned, I believe that it is OK to allow college students to get married. Anyway, this
is their freedom. Actually, we don’t have to worry too much because facts have shown that most
college students would choose not to get married in the face of such fierce competition and heavy
school work.
(或 As far as I am concerned, I believe that college students should not be allowed to get married.
Though mostly adults, they are actually immature psychologically. Their wish to get married is, more
often than not, impulses. Besides, as students, they are not ready to support a family financially.
一、结构：简介针对点；一方立场与原因；另一方立场与原因；我的观点。
二、句型用法：
1、宾语从句：......for those who.....
2、动名词做主语：(Allowing.....) would .....
3、伴随状语：......, unable to concentrate on their school work.
4、插入语：......, more often than not（多半，往往）, ........
5、facts have shown that 若写成facts have indicated that会更书面化、更正式。
三、短语与词组的用法
1、同义替换，尽量避免过多的低级词汇：claim(argue,insist,hold,maintain...)比think 要好
2、instead of处用 rather than 亦可
3、避免使用缩写：OK用在作文里出现应该是不规范的，尽量避免，这里可以用 fine.http://home.xdf.cn/
The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication（现象说明类）
【范文一】
Today I saw an interesting cartoon, in which a father asked his daughter about her school performance
of the day, and the daughter replied that he could go to her blog to check it. This small cartoon
indicates a big change in our life, especially the way people communicate.
Internet enables people to break though the limitations of distance, strengthening social network.
Unlike post offices, Internet service with its convenience helps people engage and converse real time
with their parents, soul mates, friends though emails, IRC, micro blog anytime, anywhere with a
network terminal, without suffering the long and painful wait for a reply.
Besides, such online communities as Twitter, Facebook are well under way and becoming the most
dominating platforms for on-line social activities. These communities offer great opportunities for us
to follow and interact with those we like and even those celebrities. It is also a platform for us to share
and update information of each other, and learn the outside world.
Internet today and tomorrow is a virtual space where we live, where we learn, where we speak, and
where we communicate.
写到最后一篇，应该是一个总结。但这篇文章与之前的所有文章不同，它提供了一种新的
思路。
这是一篇高分作文。的确，这篇文章读起来很舒服，没有任何障碍。
但是，“高分”却让我疑惑不解。分析了上述 11篇文章之后，我们都可以发现，我的评论越
来越多，我也怀疑这是不是因为我慢慢熟悉了评论的套路，于是一发不可收拾，但仔细回看了
一下，真正的原因应该是六级写作对于词汇、句型的要求逐年增加，并具体反映在范文之上，
复杂的文章导致了复杂的评论。于是，我便形成了一种暂时无法改变的思维模式——高分作文
应有以下三个特点：清晰的结构、多样的句型、高级的词汇。
显然，这篇文章在三个方面都不是最突出的，但却是比较恰当的。比如：
1、词汇：reply替用 answer；indicate替用 show；offer替用 give；dominating替用important；
——原文中的词都不算顶级词汇。
2、句型：1）.....,in which......介词加关系代词，引导定语从句。
2）enable 替用make或help：这是常见的使用方法，又如 shorten the path to success
就比 make the path to success short 要漂亮很多。
3、结构：本文按照描述图片、引出现象、详述现象、总结现象的思路写作，没有死板的模
式化的结构词，但却用恰当的分段使结构清晰明了。
总的来说，这是一篇很自然的文章，没有刻板的堆积。我想，虽然我们在整理应试模板，http://home.xdf.cn/
但写作的最高境界还是将句子写得自然，把词汇用得恰当，这才是语言驾驭能力的最好体现。
共勉。
