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专题 04 人物外貌、性格描写 （高分定律）
【考情分析】
在读后续写过程中，沿用原文语言特点，围绕原文主旨大意，在续写部分中可以利用恰当的词语描
述人物来丰富续写的情节。对人物进行恰到好处的肖像描写能够生动地反映出人物的角色身份、社会地
位、性格特点、情感变化等，将人物栩栩如生地呈现在读者面前，让读者在阅读的过程中如见其人，提升
续写语篇的可读性。
【写作指导】
在进行外貌描写时，可以写对一个人的总体印象，也可以抓住人物重要的外貌特征或性格特点进行描
述。可以具体描述人物的五官、着装，外貌、体态、性格等对人物印象最深刻的点来进行描述和评价，可
以使人物形象栩栩如生，跃然纸上。
（2022年浙江卷）As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile. I wanted to
make them know that I was really anxious to help them. To my relief, they smiled politely back at me when they
saw my smile, and I could see their exhaustion in their eyes.
【素材宝库】
词汇积累之性格特点
幽默的humorous 健谈的talkative 坏脾气的bad-tempered
心不在焉的absent-minded 热心的warm-hearted 有耐心的patient
有魅力的charming 独立的independent 勤奋的diligent
勤劳的diligent 和蔼的kind 诚实的honest
有幽默感have a sense of humor 真诚的sincere 受人尊敬的respected
努力工作型hard working type 正直的upright 保守的 conservative personalities
务实的 be down-to-earth 懒惰goof off 缺乏责任感lack of responsibility
有抱负的 ambitious 果断的 of a determined character 乐观的 optimistic
有教养的女子a cultured woman 突出的个性 striking personalities 心肠冷酷的人a hard-hearted man更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
词汇积累之外貌描写（五官）
；puffy浮肿的；憔悴的面容 haggard ；
round 圆的; thin 瘦的; long 长的; square方的
布满皱纹的 wrinkled；长满粉刺的 pimpled；泪珠布满的 tear-stained；长满雀斑
脸型face
freckled；麻脸 pock-marked face；眉清目秀的 finely-cut；黝黑的 swarthy；晒黑
的 sunburned；秀丽的sweet；
红润的双颊 rosy cheeks；丰满的双颊chubby cheeks；苍白的双颊 pale cheeks；
脸颊 粉红的双颊 pink cheeks；红光满面的双颊 ruddy cheeks；涂脂抹粉的脸颊
cheeks rouged cheeks；
深陷的双颊hollow (sunken) cheeks；刮得精光的脸颊clean-shaven cheeks；
胡须满面的双颊stubby cheeks； 布满皱纹的双颊wrinkled cheeks；
deep-set深陷的; sunken凹陷的; bulging凸出的; eyelashes睫毛; eyebrows眉毛；
眼睛eye 睁得圆圆的/鼓起来的/深陷的/凹陷的眼睛/充满血丝的 wide-open/bulging /deep-
set/sunken/bloodshot eyes
long长的; straight 挺直的; big大的; small小的; flat 扁平的; hooked 钩状的；
鹰钩鼻an aquiline (hooked) nose；扁鼻子flat nose；翘鼻子snub nose；
鼻子nose
笔直的鼻子 straight nose
嘴部 tooth 牙齿; even整齐的; uneven不整齐的; chi下巴；
mouth
下巴chin 双下巴（形容胖）a double chin;尖尖的下巴 a pointed chin;
圆圆的下巴a round chin; 翘起的下巴 a protruding chin
额头 宽大的额头 a broad forehead； 突起的额头 a domed forehead；高高的额头 a high
forehead；宽阔的额头an open forehead；窄小的额头 a narrow forehead；
forehead
头发hair 发型（hair style）: straight 直的; curly 卷发的; pigtails 辫子; crew cut平头; bald秃头
的；
发色 jet-black乌黑的; fair金色的; blonde淡黄色的; golden金黄色的; dyed 染色的; brunette 浅
黑色的; mousey灰褐色的; chestnut 栗色的；
hair color
词汇积累之外貌描写（身材）
肥胖的 fat；瘦的 thin；苗条的 slim；块头大的 big；矮小的 short；强壮的
strong；
身材
高的tall；小巧的small；超重overweight；中等身材的of medium build；
；丰满的身材 plump figure；瘦小的身材 slight
消瘦的身材 a skinny figure
figure；身材魁梧well-built；矮壮的身材stocky figure；优美的身段a graceful
figure；
身高 中等身高的of medium height；低于平均身高below average;更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
身高中等的middle-sized;
句式积累
1. She had a little thin face and a little thin body, thin light hair and a sour expression.
她有着瘦削的脸、瘦弱的身体、单薄浅色的头发还有尖酸的外表。
2. He’s tall and handsome but with a pair of thick glassed.
他高大又英俊，但是戴着一副厚眼镜。
3. They (代指 eyes) were large and scared and lifted imploringly to the fair boy officer’s face.
那双大眼睛变得惊恐，乞求地盯着那个白肤律师男孩的脸。
4. David was a little boy with impudent blue eyes and a turn -up nose,and Mary hated him.
大伟是有一双无耻的蓝色眼睛和一只朝天鼻的小男孩，并且玛丽讨厌他。
5. James frowned and condescended to look at her.
詹姆斯皱着眉头，故意表示和蔼可亲的看着她。
6. Her hair was like curly silk and she had a delicate little nose which seemed to be disdaining things,and she
had large laughing eyes.
她的头发像是微卷的丝绸，她有着精致小巧的鼻子似乎在蔑视着一切，她还有着一双大大的笑眼。
7. His sun-burnt face and arms and his slim, strong body are just like those of millions of Chinese
farmers, for whom he has struggled for the past five decades.
他那晒黑的脸，手臂和瘦长结实的身体，就像过去50年里他为之奋斗的数百万中国农民一样。
8. His face looked dreadful, white and red and swollen, and he was gasping and choking
他的脸看上去很可怕，又白又红又肿，他喘不过气来。
9.She even looked rather pale.
她甚至看上去相当苍白。
10.“I don’t like it,” she said to herself. “I don’t like it,” and she pinched her thin lips more tightly together. "
我不喜欢它，"她捏她瘦弱的嘴唇更紧密地在一起。
11.She looked so stony and stubbornly uninterested that they did not know what to think about her.
她看起来是如此的无情和顽固地冷淡以至于他们不知道该怎么去考虑她。
12.She was a stout woman, with very red cheeks and sharp black eyes.
她是个矮胖的女人，有着很红的脸颊和锋利的黑色眼睛。
13.Her black dress made her look yellower than ever, and her limp light hair straggled from under her black更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
crepe hat.
她的黑衣服使她看起来比以前更柔软了，她柔软的浅色头发从她的黑色绉布帽子下散乱的披落下来。
14.he was a wizened old man with wrinkled face and a sad expression. Over his shoulder was thrown a rough
brown coat, all torn and full of holes,his thick boots were old and patched .
他是一个干瘪的老人，脸上布满皱纹，表情悲伤。肩上披着一件粗糙的棕色外套，全是破的，满是洞，厚
靴子是旧的，打了补丁。
15.His eyes are deep-set because he has worked till midnight for a long time.
他的眼睛深陷，因为他这段时间经常工作到深夜。
16.This pretty girl has dimples on her cheeks.
这美丽的姑娘两颊都有酒窝。
17. The inn-keeper’s wife, her feet bare, her hair untidy, her blouse dirty, came herself to meet her guests.
旅店老板的妻子光着脚，穿着肮脏的罩衣，头发乱蓬蓬的，亲自迎接她的客人。
18.The middle-aged man already has double chins and receding hairline.
这个中年人已有了双下巴，头发也日渐稀少。
19.she was young, with a fair,calm face that showed a certain strength.
她是一个年轻人，满脸的恬静，表现出一种与众不同的力量
20. She eats too much these days , so her face is getting round .
她最近吃得太多了，所以她的脸变圆了。
谚语积累
1. Appearance is easy to recognize, but heart is the hardest to guess.Judge not from appearances.
外貌容易认,内心最难猜。
2. Outside of the gold and jade, there are many failures.金玉其外,败絮其中。
3. Water radish skin red heart not red.水萝卜皮红心不红。
4. Judge not from appearances.人不可貌相，海不可斗量。
5. an eye for an eye 以眼还眼，报复
6. catch someone’s eye 引某人注目，令人瞩目更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
7. give someone a black eye 打得某人鼻青脸肿
8. be all eyes 极注意地看着，非常留神
9. see eye to eye（with）意见一致，立场相同
10. see with half an eye 一看就明白
11. shut one’s eye to 置之不理
12. have an eye for 对……有判断力
13. keep an eye on 照看，密切注意
14. in the eyes of 在……的心目中，在……看来
15. make eyes at sb 向某人送秋波
16. make sb open his eyes 使某人瞠目结舌，吃惊
17. go in at one ear and out at the other 左耳进右耳出，当耳旁风
18. pick up one’s ears 竖起耳朵听
19. up to the（one’s）ears 深陷在（债务等中），债台高筑
20. wet behind the ears 乳臭未干
21. be all ears 全神贯注地倾听
22. give ear to 听，倾听，注意更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
23. give one’s ears 不惜任何代价（要）
24. have an （no）ear for 对……听觉灵敏（不灵敏）
25. sleep on both ears 酣睡，熟睡
26. turn a deaf ear to 对……置之不理，对……充耳不闻
27. down in (at) the mouth 垂头丧气
28. from mouth to mouth 口口相传，广泛流传
29. put words in（to）someone’s mouth 教人怎么说，诬指某人说过某话
30. stop someone’s mouth 使某人缄默
31. take the words out of someone’s mouth 抢先说某人想说的话
32. from the horse’s mouth （消息等）第一手的，直接得来的，来源可靠的
33. in the mouth of 出于……之口
34. open one’s mouth wide 狮子大开口（指索高价）；信口开河
35. lead someone by the nose 控制某人，牵着某人的鼻子走
36. pay through the nose 花大价钱，被敲竹杠
37. as plain as the nose on your face 显而易见，一清二楚
38. bite sb.’s nose off 气势汹汹地回答某人更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
39. follow one’s nose 笔直走；凭本能行事
40. look down one’s nose at 瞧不起
万能写作模板
根据下列含有写句子。
1. 她有着一头棕色而卷曲的头发。
Her hair is _________________________.
【答案】Her hair is brown and curly.
2. 她是一个金发美女。
She is _________________ with __________________.
【答案】She is a beautiful girl with fair hair.
3. 她有一双我从未见过的漂亮蓝眼睛。
He had _________________eyes _________________ .
【答案】He had the most beautiful blue eyes I had ever seen.
4. 她时常灿烂地微笑，闪烁着她的大眼睛。
She has a _________________smile and she always has _________________in her eye.
【答案】She has a very pleasant smile and she always has a twinkle in her eye.
5. 她总是穿着优雅整洁。
She always dresses _________________.
【答案】She always dresses very elegant and tidy.
6. 由于她皮肤白很善良，我们都很喜欢她。
Because of her _________________ and _________________, we all like her very much.
【答案】Because of her fair skin and kindness, we all like her very much.
7. 这个年轻的女人很高，体态优美。
The young woman was tall, _________________.
【答案】The young woman was tall, with a figure of perfect elegance.
8. 她微微一笑，露出了洁白整齐的牙齿。
When she smiled, she showed _________________.更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
【答案】When she smiled, she showed her white even teeth.
9. 这个女孩子非常可爱有趣。
The girl is very _________________.
【答案】The girl is very lovely and interesting.
10. 她是一个贪婪的女人。
She is a _________________.
【答案】She is a greedy woman.
11. 她脸上总是挂着心满意足的微笑。
There is always ____________________.
【答案】There is always a smile of contentment on her face.
12. 她属于那种极难讨好的人。
She belongs to those who____________________.
【答案】She belongs to those who are very difficult to satisfy.
13. 她的美貌令我神魂颠倒。
Her appearance fairly _________________.
【答案】Her appearance fairly took my breath away.
14. Lily望着他那可怜的、疲倦的小脸和红肿的眼睛，心都软了下来。
Lily looked at his _________________face and _________________eyes and her heart relented.
【答案】Lily looked at his poor little tired face and swollen eyes and her heart relented.
15. 他是一位枯瘦、驼背的老人，一个无牙的微笑和一缕长到肚脐的白胡子。
He was a_________________old man with _________________beard that dropped to his navel.
【答案】He was a gaunt, stooping old man with a toothless smile and a white beard that dropped to his navel.
16. 他的容颜饱经风霜，而雪白浓眉下那双乌黑的眼睛，就像可以瞬间燃起烈火的煤炭。
In his _____________ face _____________brows his dark eyes were set like coals that could leap suddenly
into fire.
【答案】In his aged face under great snowy brows his dark eyes were set like coals that could leap suddenly into
fire.
17. 我看着他走上舞台。中等身材、健壮结实、浅黄色的头发垂在前额。
I watch him as he makes his way toward the stage. _________________hair that fall in waves over his forehead.
【答案】I watch him as he makes his way toward the stage. Medium height, stocky build, ashy blond hair that fall
in waves over his forehead.更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
18. 她们的指甲很长，抛光成粉红色或橙色，她们的嘴唇像郁金香一样红。
Their nails were _________________, their lips_________________.
【答案】Their nails were long, polished pink or orange, their lips red as tulips.
19. 亨利有一张消瘦的面孔、膝盖骨突出的膝盖、乌黑的头发和一对翠绿的眼睛。
Henry had a ____________face, _____________ knees,_______________hair, and ______________eyes.
【答案】Henry had a thin face, knobbly knees, black hair, and bright green eyes.
20.米莉安是一位长着灰色大眼睛和满头金发的姑娘。
Miriam is a girl _________________ eyes and _________________ hair.
【答案】Miriam is a girl with big gray eyes and golden hair.
21. 她面色白皙，体态轻盈，有一双大而圣洁的蓝眼睛和一头浓密的金发。
She was a _________________ creature, with _________________ eyes and _________________ hair.
【答案】She was a pale, ethereal creature, with wide, spiritual blue eyes and a wealth of golden hair.
22. 那个生硬、结巴的粗汉子消失了。但那不合身的衣服，布满伤疤的双手和晒黑的脸膛却依然如故。
The ______________ was gone. The _____________ clothes, _____________hands, and _____________
face remained.
【答案】The raw, stumbling lout was gone. The ill-fitting clothes, battered hands, and sunburned face remained.
23.马丽身材修长，满头金发，苗条美丽，雍容华贵。
Mary is a ______________woman, ______________.
【答案】Mary is a tall, blonde woman, slender, and stately and beautiful.
24. 她长着奶油般的皮肤，修长的肩和一头黑色的卷发。
She has ______________ skin and ______________.
【答案】She has creamy skin and shoulder-length, dark ringlets.
25.他长得又怪又粗糙，一脸的雀斑，一个蓬乱的红胡子。
He was a ______________,with ______________ bear.
【答案】He was a strange,rough fellow,with a freckled face and red,rough bear
【 高考真题】
(2022年全国高考新高考I卷)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整
的短文。
It was the day of the big cross-country run. Students from seven different primary schools in and around the
small town were warming up and walking the route（路线）through thick evergreen forest.更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence. He was
small for ten years old. His usual big toothy smile was absent today. I walked over and asked him why he wasn't
with the other children. He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run.
What was wrong? He had worked so hard for this event!
I quickly searched the crowd for the school's coach and asked him what had happened. "I was afraid that kids
from other schools would laugh at him," he explained uncomfortably. "I gave him the choice to run or not, and let
him decide."
I bit back my frustration（懊恼）. I knew the coach meant well — he thought he was doing the right thing.
After making sure that David could run if he wanted, I turned to find him coming towards me, his small body
rocking from side to side as he swung his feet forward.
David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children, but at school his
classmates thought of him as a regular kid. He always participated to the best of his ability in whatever they were
doing. That was why none of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the cross-country team.
It just took him longer — that’s all. David had not missed a single practice, and although he always finished his run
long after the other children, he did always finish. As a special education teacher at the school, I was familiar with
the challenges David faced and was proud of his strong determination.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.
We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me.
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.
【范文赏析】
We sat down together on some steps, but David wouldn’t look at me.I turned him around and looked him in
the eye sincerely. I quietly said, “David, if you’re not running because you’re afraid someone is going to laugh,
that’s not a good enough reason. Are you going to let them get in your way? If you really want to run, David, run!”
I held my breath as David took this in. Then he looked at the field and said with a fierce but quiet determination,
“I’m gonna run.”
I watched as David moved up to the starting line.The starter’s gun sounded. But he had only gone a few metres
before he tripped and fell flat on the ground. My heart sank. As I started to shout encouragement, other voices
around me took up the call. “Come on David, you can do it!” David picked himself up and started again until he更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
crossed the finish line to wild cheers and applause.
最后几句结尾有三种：
第一种：（首选结尾）
That day, David got a special award for his courage. He also got respect of all students. To him, that was worth a
whole lot more than an award. (169 words)
第二种：（原文结尾）
Then, when David’s coach slapped him on the back and said proudly, “Good job, David!” he caught my eye,
flashed me a toothy grin and said, “That was easy!” （169 words）
第三种：
That day, David got a special award for his courage. He was shining on the winner’s podium. David, with so many
birth problems, was a hero to all of us and most importantly, to himself! (175 words)
【 名校模拟题提升练】
1．（2023秋·湖北·高三校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构
成一篇完整的短文。
When I was four, my seven-year-old brother received a baseball mitt (手套) for his birth-day, which was also
what I desperately wanted. But, back then, girls didn’t play sports; they played with dolls.
26 years later, I happened to see a notice in my local paper: “Women’s Slow-Pitch Soft-ball League opens
soon. Anyone interested, sign up at the recreation center.” I cut it out and set it on the kitchen counter. Was it even
possible to play baseball, a game I’d never actually played but had dreamed of playing in my entire life?
Looking at that notice on my counter, I thought of a thousand reasons I couldn’t play. But the idea of playing
baseball stuck in my head and wouldn’t go away. Finally, I screwed up my courage and signed up. Days later, word
came that I could begin practice in James Park on Monday night.
On Monday, heart pounding, I walked through the park filled with women of all high-school girls practicing at
different diamonds. I waited a couple of minutes before approaching the coach, who seemed unhappy to see me. He
had just put together top athletes for his team, and didn’t want some old lady messing things up. He looked me
over, who had no mitt but wore an old T-shirt and gym shoes. However, I didn’t care.
That very first day was quite bitter. He had me run bases all night and never gave me a chance to bat or play
the field, with the attempt to make me shrink from difficulty. But he had no idea how determined I was. I still
showed up to play in the following Mondays, which clearly surprised him.
Finally, he gave in. During the last inning of the last game of the season, the coach told me to go to center
field. I had to borrow a mitt from a member of our team and used it to catch an impossibly high ball, winning the更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
game for us. Again, the coach looked surprised. It never hit him that I might be able to play.
注意：
1．续写词数应为 150左右；
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After the game, I received an unexpected invitation from another coach.
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It turned out I didn’t let my coach down.
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After the game, I received an unexpected invitation from another coach. The moment he approached me I
recognized him, the very prestigious coach in America. He had been searching the other teams for potential players
to play for his team. He’d seen the catch I’d made and the way I “moved like an athlete” on the field and thought I
might make a good pitcher. What a surprise! No one could imagine how thrilled I was at such exciting moment. Too
astonished to say the word “yes”, I just nodded my head vigorously without a second thought. To celebrate my new
baseball life, the next day, I went to the sporting goods store to buy a mitt which I had been longing for. Excited as
a kid, I took my new mitt to join the new team, where the teammates loved the game the way I did.
It turned out I didn’t let my coach down. My participation injected tremendous vigor into those young girls,
who were always touched by my endurance, persistence and enthusiasm for baseball and life. It was not until I was
retired at 40 that I played with them. And we went undefeated six of those years, and I was named MVP five times.
Playing the game with these women enriched my life and the lives of my family in countless ways. To this day,
memories of those years gladden all our hearts. And none of it would have happened if I hadn’t cut out that little
article, nervously signed up to play ball, and dared to take a chance on fulfilling my childhood dream.更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在三十岁时，偶然看到了当地报纸的一则关于女子棒球团开
团报名的通知，她儿时因“女子不能从事体育运动”的旧观念而被遏制的对棒球运动的渴望重新被点燃，
她勇敢地报了名，和年轻的女孩们一起练习。一开始她因年龄大，被教练嫌弃，慢慢地，她用自己的坚持
改变了教练的看法，在赛场上表现出了优异的技术，最终被知名教练邀请，正式加入了一家棒球队，并和
队友们一起创造了六年不败的佳绩，改变了自己的生活，实现了儿时梦想的故事。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“比赛结束后，我意外地收到了另一位教练的邀请。”可知，第一段可描写这位教练
对作者的赞赏，和作者收到邀请后的激动表现。
②由第二段首句内容“事实证明，我没有让教练失望。”可知，第二段可描写作者加入棒球队后的优秀表
现和成绩，实现了儿时的梦想。
2. 续写线索：收到邀请——教练的评价——接受邀请——激动的表现和行为——没有让教练失望——对棒
球队的影响——棒球队的战绩——对自己的影响和改变——实现了梦想
3. 词汇激活：
行为类：
①寻找：search for/look for
②购买：buy/purchase
③发生：happen/take place
④注册、登记：sign up/register
情绪类：
①激动的：thrilled/excited
②吃惊的：astonished/shocked
【点睛】【高分句型1】 He’d seen the catch I’d made and the way I “moved like an athlete” on the field and
thought I might make a good pitcher. （运用了catch后省略了关系词that/which的定语从句、the way后省略
了关系词that的定语从句和thought后省略了连接词that的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】 And none of it would have happened if I hadn’t cut out that little article, nervously signed up to
play ball, and dared to take a chance on fulfilling my childhood dream.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句和虚拟语
气）
2．（2023秋·贵州·高三统考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成
一篇完整的短文。
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news from far away. “ Baby,it might be a mistake. Sometimes they accidentally send these things out to the wrong
people.” She spoke slowly and with sympathy in her voice. I was only in the first grade; I didn’t understand the big
deal and didn’t really care about a mistake.
I was embarrassed by the process of learning. On the first day of school my mom talked to my teacher for a
long time while l sat at one of the little tables and met people who would be my friends for years, including Katie. I
was so absorbed in my friend-making that I did not care what my mom was saying to my new teacher, and I
certainly could not have known that she was expressing her concern about me possibly having a learning disability.
My academic progress was never a topic of conversation. I did not know anything about grades or scholarly
competition. I didn’t care. I just liked my beautiful teachers. I loved my friends. I enjoyed doing all the worksheets
and activities. My grades did not mean anything to me.
At the awards dinner, we sat by my best friend Katie and her family. She and I talked and laughed all through
the meal. But Mom looked like she was still expecting bad news. She reached across the table and held my hand
right before the principal started handing out awards. “Remember, sweetie, we’re just here to enjoy the dinner.”
The awards were given out by subject. Within each subject, the grade winners were announced and received a
certificate, Math. No Rebecca, Science. No Rebecca. Reading. Katie got that one. She smiled broadly. I caught my
mom’s face. She was near tears. She looked at me as if I were hurt. But I was fine. She was the one who was hurt,
watching all the other children get awards while her own was passed over again and again.
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All the subject awards were given out, and my name was not called.
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A few seconds later, “Okay, the overall achievement medal for the first grade — Rebecca Youngblood.”
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【答案】
All the subject awards were given out, and my name was not called. Mom’s face fell, and her eyes were filled
with tears. She squeezed my hand tightly, her knuckles white. I looked at her, feeling a sense of helplessness. It
seemed that the principal was about to finish his announcement. However, I still prayed for a miracle. Suddenly, the
principal looked at my direction with a smile.
A few seconds later, “Okay, the overall achievement medal for the first grade — Rebecca Youngblood.”. The
principal’s voice boomed through the room. I couldn’t believe it. I had been awarded the overall achievement medal
for my grade. Mom’s face lit up in a smile as she wiped away tears and hugged me tightly. It was a moment that we
both cherished, one that let me know that my hard work had paid off. It was a lesson in resilience and perseverance
that I would carry with me always.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了小女孩丽贝卡和妈妈受邀参加学校的颁奖晚宴。因为女孩有学习
障碍，所以妈妈觉得可能是晚宴邀请函发错了，但她们还是如约参加了颁奖晚宴。在晚宴上，校长一个一
个念着获奖学生的名字，但丽贝卡的名字一直未出现。妈妈看到其他孩子获奖而自己的孩子被忽略，感到
非常伤心。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“所有的学科奖项都颁发了，我的名字没有被点名。”可知，第一段可描写妈妈的失
望和丽贝卡的希望。
②由第二段首句内容“几秒钟后，‘好了，一年级的总成就奖章——丽贝卡·扬布拉德。’”可知，第二段
可描写丽贝卡获奖后母女俩的喜悦。
2.续写线索：妈妈感到无助——祈祷奇迹出现——获奖后的喜悦——永远铭记这一刻
3.词汇激活
行为类
①充满：be filled with/be full of
②紧握：squeeze/grasp
③结束：finish/conclude/end
情绪类
①紧紧地抱着我：hug me tightly/embrace me tightly/hold me tight
②珍视：cherish/treasure
【点睛】[高分句型1] It seemed that the principal was about to finish his announcement.(运用了that引导表语从更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
句)
[高分句型2] Mom’s face lit up in a smile as she wiped away tears and hugged me tightly.(运用了as引导时间状
语从句)
[高分句型3] It was a lesson in resilience and perseverance that I would carry with me always.(运用了关系代词
that引导限制性定语从句)
3．（2023秋·山西·高三太原十二中校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两
段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
At the end of the fifth grade, there was a burst of excitement in the classroom. The school year was almost
over, and we would be moving on to a new school for the sixth grade. All the girls made autograph books (签名册)
and collected signatures.
As I signed my classmates’ books, I noticed their moms had written in them, too. Such sweet thoughts were
expressed, “I couldn’t be prouder of you. Can’t wait to see how you like junior high!” “You’re graduating.
Congratulations! We love you and know you have a bright future!” ...
I asked my mother to sign mine, too. She was busy, but she said she’d sign it. Several days later, when I asked
about it, she told me she just forgot. Anyway, she handed it back to me later. I was anxious to see what encouraging
words she had written. And this is what I found on the page:
When a thing is first begun,
Never leave it till it’s done.
Be the labor great or small,
Do it well or not at all.
Mom
My heart sank. That was it? I was disappointed that there were no words of pride or encouragement. It was just
a stupid poem-another indication to me that if I couldn’t be perfect, I wasn’t good enough.
I held back my tears, not expressing my disappointment.
That page in that handmade book bothered me for years,
I battled perfectionism and low self-respect and never felt good enough for most of my life. Many times, I
gave up on things after I barely got started. All I could hear was "You’re not good enough."
When my mother was in her eighties and in a nursing home, I gave her a book to fill out so we could know
more about her. It had hints (暗示) at the top of each page and then blank space to respond. I wanted her to write
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sections of her life.
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In the beginning, she was very excited.
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One day I went to the nursing home to see her, only to find her sleeping, with the book lying beside her.
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【答案】
In the beginning, she was very excited. She’d call me to tell me that she was working on it. After several
weeks, though, she stopped mentioning the book, so I asked about it. Then she said, “Oh, I was busy chatting with
my friends in the nursing home, forgetting about it. But I will work on it again.” I guessed it got boring for her and
that she just didn’t like writing anything to me, especially something encouraging or what she had experienced.
One day I went to the nursing home to see her, only to find her sleeping, with the book lying beside her. I picked
it up and satdown to read through it. Once again, I felt disappointment—she’d only filled out ten pages. I was about
to shut the book when I saw something reading, “What’s the best advice you got from your mom?” Her response
was what she’d written in my autograph book. Iread it slowly, seeing it in a new light. Then I came to realize Mom
just encouraged me to do things well in her own way!
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者从自己的妈妈那儿得到了一个建议，可是作者却从未把它当
回事，觉得这根本不算什么建议。而多年后，作者却意识到这个建议其实非常好。
【详解】1.段落续写：更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
①由第一段首句内容“一开始，她很兴奋。”以及第二段首句内容“有一天，我去养老院看她，却发现她
睡着了，书躺在她身边。”可知，第一段可描写作者的妈妈确实开始填写这本书。
②由第二段首句内容“有一天，我去养老院看她，却发现她睡着了，书躺在她身边。”可知，第二段可描
写作者的妈妈在书中所写的内容。
2.续写线索：即将去一所新学校念六年级——所有的女孩都制作了签名簿，并收集他人的签名——无意发
现其他同学的妈妈都为自己的女儿写上了祝福的话语——发现自己的妈妈写了一首愚蠢的诗——作者很失
望——多年过去了，作者一直在努力做到最好——作者的妈妈年老后住到了养老院——作者给了妈妈一本
书让她写写东西——作者一次无意中发现原来这首诗是自己妈妈的妈妈留下了的建议——作者这才意识到
妈妈对自己的爱
3.词汇激活
行为类
①忙于做某事：be busy doing sth/be occupied doing sth.
②经历：experience/go through
③正要做某事：be about to do sth/be on the point of doing sth.
情绪类
①失望：disappointment/disenchantment/letdown
②鼓励：encourage/inspire
【点睛】【高分句型1】I was about to shut the book when I saw something reading, “What’s the best advice you
got from your mom?”（运用了句型be about to do...when...）句型（运用了）
【高分句型2】Her response was what she’d written in my autograph book.（运用了what引导的表语从句）
4．（2023·江苏·统考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完
整的短文。
I spent 15 years trying to make it in the music industry. When I was a teenager, I did any odd job to afford time
in a recording studio. I knocked at managers’ doors and sent out demo (录音样带) after demo, but I got nowhere.
In 2010, aged 27, I was doing a job in a restaurant when I wrote a song called Dream Goes On. It was a song about
never giving up. I just let out all of my frustrations at the keyboard.
Over the next five years, the music career never materialized but I persisted. Then, in 2019, I uploaded Dream
Goes On to a music-sharing website. I just wanted someone to notice my music.
Later that year, I received an email out of the blue from Music World from South Korea, requesting a license
for the song. They had chosen my song from the millions on the music-sharing website for a theme tune for one of更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
their shows. I was amazed and negotiated a contract for $5,000 for the use of the song and signed up straight away.
I was pretty excited, but didn’t think anything more would come of it, so I focused on my job in the restaurant.
This February, Music World organized a musical festival in Seoul and my song Dream Goes On was also
chosen as the theme tune for the festival. I watched on YouTube as my song was being played to a huge crowd of
people. It was amazing.
After three days of the festival, I was contacted by Music World and they asked if I’d like to go to Seoul to
sing Dream Goes On in a concert. They flew me out there the next day. I was welcomed like a celebrity—
everyone I met thought I was a big name in England. I had to break the news to them that I wasn’t a pop star.
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I had never performed the song live, and hadn’t been on stage for years.
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After the concert, I had photographers and journalists battling to interview me.
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【答案】
I had never performed the song live, and hadn’t been on stage for years. Seized by a strong sense of tension, I
stood on the stage, seeing the huge cheers and a sea of lights below the stage. I was lost at the moment, holding the
microphone tightly. I tried my best to collect myself and began to sing my own song which I had practiced
hundreds of times. Looking back the years I had experienced as I sang on the stage, I realized that it is the
opportunity that I had been waiting for the whole life. I kept myself full of enthusiasm as I was singing on the stage,
showing the best to the audience.更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
After the concert, I had photographers and journalists battling to interview me. With them around me, a long
queue of fans were waiting to have their photograph taken with me. I was like a superstar and that night was like a
real dream for me. I had knocked on doors for years, yet my moment came when the opportunity called me. Life
can surprise you. It has reinspired my passion for music. This has made all the odd jobs and weekends spent in
recording studios all worthwhile.
【导语】本文以作者自创的歌Dream Goes On为线索，讲述了作者成为一名音乐家的经历。作者之前的音
乐追梦之旅并不顺畅，当时在餐馆工作的作者写了一首歌，五年后发布在网上，意外走红，回顾一路走
来，虽然吃了很多苦头，但是这一回报的时刻让作者觉得之前的苦头都是值得的。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我从来没有现场演奏过这首歌，我也已经很多年没有登上舞台了。”可知，本段可
以写作者在舞台上感到很紧张，努力让自己平静下来后，作者开始演唱自己的歌。演唱时，作者不禁回忆
起了这些年来的辛苦，顿时觉得此时就是自己等待多年的机会。
②由第二段首句内容“演唱会过后，记者和摄影师相拥采访我。”可知，本段可以写演唱会结束后，被粉
丝、记者围绕的感觉让作者觉得自己就像是做梦一样以及作者的感悟，觉得这么多年的努力终究是值得
的。
2.续写线索：在舞台上无比紧张——努力平静下来，开始表演——边唱歌便回忆起多年来的辛苦——觉得
此刻就是自己等待多年的机会——演唱会结束后，作者被相拥采访——作者觉得就像做梦一样——作者的
感悟。
3.词类激活：
行为类：
①握住：hold/take hold of
②经历：experience/go through
③某人意识到：sb. realize that.../sb. be aware that...
情绪类：
①紧张：tension/nervousness
②冷静：collect oneself/calm…down
【点睛】【高分句型1】Seized by a strong sense of tension, I stood on the stage, seeing the huge cheers and a sea
of lights below the stage.(运用了过去分词短语和现在分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】I tried my best to collect myself and began to sing my own song which I had practiced hundreds of
times.(运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
5．（2023秋·河南三门峡·高三统考期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构
成一篇完整的短文。
I remember the first time I met Roy. He was standing in the center of a group of boys, talking and laughing.
He was a cute boy known in the class for his kindness and generosity. My name is Daniel, a new boy in the class.
Our whole family had moved from the north of England because of my father being offered a job here. I lost all my
old friends and felt lonely at my new school.
Most students in my new class weren’t very interested in a shy new boy. Roy was one of the few people who
were kind to me. He often invited me to join his particular group, and as a result, I started getting to know people.
Roy and I became good friends. We trusted each other and we could talk about personal matters, things that were
important to us.
But just under a year ago, Roy’s father was knocked over by a car, who died a few days later. His family had
to move to a much smaller house in order to manage financially. Roy changed completely, becoming silent and
moody, who seemed to lose all interest in his work. These days, Roy and I saw each other from time to time, but we
were no longer close.
Last week our school had a big fair in order to raise money for a charity. It was very successful and by the end
of the day, we had made about f500.Our class teacher, Mr. White, came and chatted to a group of us that included
Roy, and held up a box for us to see. There’s￡500 in here,” he said with a smile.
Having left something in the classroom, I went inside to get it, and found Roy holding a wallet in his hand.
Seeing me, he walked out without saying a word. The next morning, we were told that the money had been stolen.
Mr. White had left the box in the classroom for a few minutes, but when he came back it had disappeared.
This weekend morning, having thought about the situation for a while, I decided to ask Roy about the the theft
and went to see him.
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Roy was out and I went upstairs to his bedroom to wait for him.
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At that moment, the door swung open, and Roy walked in.
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【答案】
Roy was out and I went upstairs to his bedroom to wait for him. Sitting in his room, I wondered whether Roy
had stolen the money, but I really hoped it wasn’t him. To pass the time, I picked out a book to read. Surprisingly, a
lot of paper notes dropped out of the book. It looked as if there was about £500 there. I was so shocked that I just
stood there, holding the notes in my hands.
At that moment, the door swung open, and Roy walked in. My mouth fell open and I just looked at him with
confusion. Seeing the notes in my hand, he froze with shock, as if rooted on the ground. Then he explained that he
didn’t steal but earned the money by spending every weekend doing part-time jobs. Breathing a sigh of relief, I
trusted him and offered him a heartfelt hug. The next day, the teacher declared that he was mistaken to forget
locking the money into his locker. Roy and I smiled at each other with joy.
【导语】本文以故事情节的发展为线索展开，讲述了作者因父亲工作调动转到了一所新的学校，比较的害
羞和内向，是活泼外向的Roy帮助了他并且成为了好朋友，但后来，Roy的父亲在一次车祸中丧生，从那
以后，Roy完全变成另外一个人，作者与Roy也不再亲密，在学校为给慈善机构筹钱而组织的一次大型义
卖会上，班主任老师Mr. White告诉大家筹集到的500英镑，作者回到教室时发现Roy手里拿着个钱包什
么也没说就离开了，后来Mr. White说筹集的500英镑丢失了，作者决定去找Roy问一下盗窃的事情。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“罗伊出去了，我上楼到他的卧室等他。”可知，第一段可描写作者在等待Roy时想
了些什么，以及发现了什么。
②由第二段首句内容“正在这时，门开了，罗伊走了进来。”可知，第二段可描写作者发现Roy后的反应
和Roy发现作者后是怎么做的以及最后的结局。
2.续写线索：等待Roy——发现500英镑——Roy进门——Roy的解释——Mr. White宣告筹款找到——作
者与Roy和好
3.词汇激活更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
行为类
①挑出：picked out/sort out
②消磨时间：pass the time/kill the time
③掉出：drop out/fall out
情绪类
①迷惑：with confusion/confusedly/puzzled/with puzzle
②高兴：with joy/delightedly/happily/joyfully
【点睛】[高分句型1] Sitting in his room, I wondered whether Roy had stolen the money, but I really hoped it
wasn’t him.（现在分词短语作状语和whether引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2] I was so shocked that I just stood there, holding the notes in my hands.（运用了“so…that…”句型
以及现在分词短语作状语）
[高分句型3] Seeing the notes in my hand, he froze with shock, as if rooted on the ground.（运用了现在分词短语
作状语和状语从句的省略结构）
6．（2023秋·山西大同·高三统考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之
构成一篇完整的短文。
Rick, a ten-year-old boy, was constantly angry at everything around him. He always fought in school with the
other kids. Once he had an outburst in school. Upset by something a classmate said to him, he pushed the other boy,
and a fight happened. When the teacher stepped in to break it up, Rick went crazy, throwing papers and books
around the classroom and rushing out of the classroom. His teachers couldn’t say anything that would comfort the
kid. And the parents of his schoolmates were getting concerned. The boy was earning quite the reputation. After
talking with school officials, Rick’s mom tried everything she could to calm Rick down.
She tried different methods until one day she came home with a canvas (画布) and paint. “What’s this?” Rick
asked. Rick’s mom handed over the painting equipment and said, “Whenever you feel angry, paint whatever it is
you’re angry about instead of bursting out.” Rick wasn’t that happy about it but he gave it a shot anyway. Over the
next few weeks, the young boy created several artworks. They mostly showed disturbing images though. So his
mom took all of the paintings and called Rick over so that they could talk about them. “Tell me, Rick. What are
these paintings about?”
“Well, the first painting is about how some of the kids show off their new clothes and pencil cases. The next
painting is about my teacher who keeps on telling me about how I’m doing things wrong. And the last painting is
about how one of my schoolmate’s father suggested that I change my attitude. All of them make me so angry.”更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
Rick’s mom, in a calm voice, took Rick by her side and told him: “Don’t you see it, Rick?” “See what?” Rick
asked. “You’re so angry at all of these things but not once did you try to understand why you’re getting so angry.
What have all these people done to you, really?” Mum explained.
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Rick thought about it.
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Rick thought about it. It slowly dawned on him that people he was angry at didn’t do anything wrong. His
classmates were showing off their good fortune but never laughed at him. It wasn’t their fault that they were richer
than he was. His teacher might have blamed him but he was, admittedly, being a problem because of his attitude.
And his schoolmate’s father was only trying to help him correct his mistakes.
Rick knew that his mom came to the point. “I see it now, mom. I was controlled by bad temper.” Rick said.
“That’s right, son. You should do a better job of controlling anger before it consumes you. You’re not a little boy
anymore. You should know better by now.” Mum responded happily. It took a while but eventually, Rick became
less excited over the simplest things. He even started to feel happiness when around other children.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Rick是一个十岁的男孩，总是对他周围的一切感到愤怒，Rick的更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
妈妈想尽一切办法让Rick冷静下来，她尝试了不同的方法，直到有一天她带着画布和颜料回家，叫Rick
把让他生气的东西画出来，在接下来的几个星期里，Rick创作了几件艺术品，不过，它们大多展示了令人
不安的画面，Rick的妈妈告诉Rick他没有去理解为什么这么生气。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Rick想了想。”可知，第一段可描写Rick反思的内容。
②由第二段首句内容“Rick知道他妈妈说到了点子上。”可知，第二段可描写Rick认识到了自己的问题，
妈妈给Rick建议以及Rick的改变。
2.续写线索：Rick明白了一些事情————Rick知道自己被坏脾气控制了——妈妈建议——Rick改变
3.词汇激活
行为类
①明白：sth. dawn on sb./sb. catch on sth.
②控制：control/command
③开始做某事：start to do/begin to do
情绪类
①愤怒：anger/rage
②激动：excited/thrilled
【点睛】[高分句型1] It slowly dawned on him that people he was angry at didn’t do anything wrong. (由it作形
式主语，that从句是主语从句)
[高分句型2] You should do a better job of controlling anger before it consumes you. (由before引导的时间状语
从句)
7．（2023秋·浙江绍兴·高三校考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之
构成一篇完整的短文
Nature, while beautiful, could also be unpredictable and merciless. But most importantly we bear in mind that
in the darkest times, there’s always a light at the end of the tunnel, just like Mrs. Evans‘ cabin light.
One bright summer day, my friend Peter and I decided to venture into the unexplored trails of the Great Smoky
Mountains. Blessed with rich biodiversity and fascinating landscapes, the national park seemed a perfect getaway.
Little did we know that our casual hike would soon turn into an unexpected personal incident, forever engraved in
our memories.
We set off early in the morning, equipped with our backpacks and a map that was supposed to guide us
through the winding trails. The sun was up, casting long shadows on the forest floor as we set off on our journey.更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
We trekked (艰难行走), laughed, and marveled at the beauty of nature around us.
As we trekked through the dense forests, taking in the natural wonders around us, we couldn’t help but feel a
sense of adventure coursing through our veins. The trail was rugged and uneven, but we persevered through the
challenging landscape.
Midway through our expedition, we stumbled upon a breathtaking waterfall, its glistening waters cascading
down the rocks in a quiet and peaceful melody. We sat down by the water’s edge, taking a moment to get lost in the
beauty of nature. The cool mist from the waterfall enveloped us, and we felt refreshed and energetic.
As the day wore on, we ventured deeper into the wilderness, eager to explore every corner of this natural
paradise. We were so absorbed in the beauty of nature that just didn't notice our way and it seemed that we could
not find the way back to the familiar part of the forest. Panicking, we scrambled to find our way back but the dense
vegetation and winding trails only served to confuse us further. We tried to remember any possible signs that might
lead us back, No sooner had we celebrated our return to the clear trails than something worse happened.
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Para.1:Suddenly, the weather took an abrupt turn.
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【答案】
Suddenly, the weather took an abrupt turn. Dark clouds shrouded the sky, and a heavy downpour ensued. The
comforting forest sounds quickly proved a terrifying symphony of thunder and wind. The trail that was once so
clear became a muddy mess, making it impossible to go on. We tried to consult our map, but it was too late; we got
lost in the wildness. Hours passing, our attempts to find the trail turned out to be in vain. With the cold creeping in,更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
despair started to set in.
Just when we were about to give up, a faint light flickered in the distance. Curiosity overpowered our fear, and
we decided to follow it. When we drew nearer, we saw a small log cabin, lights shining from its windows.
Knocking on the door, an elderly woman, Mrs. Evans, welcomed us with a warm smile. She was a retired ranger
who had chosen to live her twilight years in the heart of the mountains. She offered us shelter for the night, and the
next morning, guided us back to the main trail. This incident strengthened our friendship and taught us the
importance of resilience and hope. The experience was beyond expectation, terrifying, but enlightening all the
same.
【导语】本篇书面表达是读后续写。本文以人物为线索展开。作者和朋友去远足，被山里的美景吸引，但
是突然发现迷路了。
【详解】1.段落续写
①由第一段句首内容“突然，天气急转直下。”可知，第一段可以描写暴风雨来临后，人们更加艰难，此
时人们的心理活动和行动。
②由第二段句首内容“就在我们快要放弃的时候，一道微弱的灯光在远处闪烁。”可知，第二段可以描写
人们朝着灯光的方向行进时的心情，灯光的源头是什么，人们怎么找到回家的路，以及韧性和希望的重要
性。
2.续写线索：雨中行走—寒冷无助—看到灯光—朝光行走—被接待—找到路—感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①向前走：go on/go ahead
②参照：consult/refer to
③迷路：get lost/lose one’s way/miss one’s way
情绪类
①绝望：despair/hopelessness
②害怕：fear/scare/anxiety
【点睛】【高分句型1】The trail that was once so clear became a muddy mess, making it impossible to go on.(
运用了that引导的定语从句和现在分词making做结果状语)
【高分句型2】 Hours passing, our attempt s to find the trail turned out to be in vain. ( 运用了Hours passing做
独立主格)
【高分句型3】She was a retired ranger who had chosen to live her twilight years in the heart of t he更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
mountains. (运用了who引导的定语从句)
8．（2023秋·河南·高三校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构
成一篇完整的短文。
When I was four, my seven-year-old brother received a baseball mitt (手套) for his birthday. Every night, as
we went to sleep, I’d listen to him throwing a ball into the mitt over and over to soften the leather. I wanted a mitt
so much that I almost cried. But, back then, girls didn’t play sports; they played with dolls.
Fast-forward twenty-six years. Now a thirty-year-old mother of three happened to see a notice in my local
paper: “Women’s Slow-Pitch Softball League opens soon. Anyone interested, sign up at the recreation center.” I cut
it out and set it on the kitchen counter. Could I ? After all these years? Was it even possible to think about playing
baseball, a game I’d never actually played but had dreamed of playing my entire life? And I’d certainly watched
enough Chicago Cubs games to know how the game was played.
I looked at that notice on my counter every day. I thought of a thousand reasons why I couldn’t play. But the
idea of playing baseball stuck in my head and wouldn’t go away. Finally, I got up my courage and signed up at the
recreation center. On the way home, I bought myself a mitt.
On Monday, heart pounding, I walked through the park filled with women of all ages practicing. It took me a
while to find my team. They were all high-school girls, seventeen and eighteen years old!
The coach was not at all happy to see me. He had put together top athletes for his team, and he didn’t want
some old lady messing things up.
That first day, he had me run bases. What that meant was I’d stand near home plate(本垒板)while one of the
girls batted, and then I’d run as hard as I could to first base, trying to get there before they threw me out. I did this
over and over and over. I never got a chance to bat or play the field. I just ran bases all night. The next morning, I
could barely stand.
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I was still feeling pain when I showed up to play the next week.
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Having seen my determination, the coach changed his attitude toward me.
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I was still feeling pain when I showed up to play the next week. The coach was clearly surprised to see me. He
had no idea how determined I was. I could bear whatever abuse he dished out. As long as I could be part of this
game I’d loved and longed to play for so many years. If I stayed at home, I would never get a chance. At least, by
showing up, I was around women playing ball. From then on, I showed up for practice every week. Every game, I
spent the night sitting on the bench.
Having seen my determination, the coach changed his attitude toward me. Then he told me to go to center
field. Again, the coach looked surprised. It never occurred to him that I might be able to play. What made him more
surprised was the catch I’d made and the way I “moved like an athlete” on the field. Later, he recommended me to a
professional team and sent me a new mitt . If I hadn’t nervously signed up to play ball and dared to take a chance
on fulfilling my childhood dream, none of it would have happened.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者小时候想打棒球，但是那时候，女孩不参加体育运动，直到
30岁的时候，她报名参加女子慢速垒球联赛的机会，但是因为年龄的问题，她并不被教练看好，于是她刻
苦训练、积极准备的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当我在下周参加比赛时，我仍然感到疼痛。”可知，第一段可描写教练看到作者
后，感到很惊讶，作者一直参加比赛，但是一直坐在后补席上。
②由第二段首句内容“看到我的决心后，教练改变了对我的态度。”可知，第二段可描写教练开始让作者
参赛，并积极帮助作者打棒球的过程。
2.续写线索：教练很惊讶——忍受教练的责备——坚持训练——教练改变态度——让作者参加比赛——感
悟
3.词汇激活（一个词汇要写出相近的表达）
行为类
①忍受：bear/stand
②出现：show up/turn up更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
③实现：fulfill/realise
情绪类
①惊讶的：surprised /amazed
②坚定的：determined/ steadfast
【点睛】[高分句型1] If I stayed at home, I would never get a chance. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
[高分句型2] I could bear whatever abuse he dished out. (运用了whatever引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型3] What made him more surprised was the catch I’d made and the way I “moved like an athlete” on the
field. (运用了what引导的主语从句和省略关系代词的定语从句)
