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三、建议信
技法指导
建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议，以便让对方
接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自
己的看法或观点；也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。具体写
作结构为：
常用表达
1．开头表达写信目的常用语
(1)I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.
我写信给你一些建议/忠告。
(2)I am writing to express my views concerning...
我写信是要表达我关于……的看法。
(3)You have asked for my advice about...and I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
关于……你向我征求意见，在此我尽力提出一些有用的建议。
2．主体部分表达建议常用语
(1)I think the most suitable...for you is...
我认为对你来说最适合的……是……
(2)I would like to suggest that...
我想建议……
(3)You’d better.../It’s better to...
你最好……/最好是……
(4)As far as I am concerned/In my opinion，it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。
(5)For one thing...；for another...
一方面……，另一方面……
(6)If I were you，I would...
如果我是你，我会……
(7)I think it would be more beneficial if you could...我认为如果你能……将会更有益。
3．结尾表达希望常用语
(1)I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.
我希望你会认真考虑我的建议。
(2)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
我希望你会发现这些建议实用/有用/有帮助。
(3)I will be more than happy to see your improvements in this regard.
看到你在这一方面取得进步我会非常高兴。
典例展示
(2017·北京)
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之
行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1．你建议的线路；
2．你的理由；
3．你的祝愿。
注意：
1．词数不少于50；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
Yours，
Li Hua
满分佳作 名师点评
Dear Jim， 1.文章开头扼要地介绍了写信的目I’m happy to receive your letter and know
you’re coming to China.I am writing to offer you
的，使用了建议信的套语I am
some advice on which route to choose.
writing to offer you some advice...。
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount
2.书信的主体部分提出了自己的建
Tai，both are highly recommended.Personally，I
议，使用了过渡性词语：
prefer the one along the Yangtze，the longest river and
Personally，Moreover；高级词汇：
one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization.You can
highly, recommend，prefer，
learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese
civilization，amazing，wellknown,
people.Moreover，the scenery along the river is
sightseeing；还使用了复杂结构why
amazing，with many wellknown sightseeing
引导的表语从句。
spots.That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze
3.信的结尾使用了建议信的套语I
will be a better choice.
hope you will take my advice into
I hope you will take my advice into account/
account/consideration seriously and
consideration seriously and will have a good time in
will have a good time in China.表达
China.
了希望。
Yours，
Li Hua
实战演练
1
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Nancy将于2022年来中国参加冬奥会，她来信向你咨询
如何在短时期内提高汉语口语水平，请你用英语给她写一封回信，提出建议并说明理由。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy，
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Nancy ，
Learning that you will come to China for the 2022 Winter Olympic Games，I’m more than
delighted.As for how to improve your spoken Chinese in a short time，I’d like to give you some
suggestions.
To begin with，make more Chinese friends in your daily life，with whom you can practiceyour spoken Chinese.What’s more，listening to Chinese songs and watching Chinese movies are
also good ways，which can help you broaden your horizons and gain some Chinese.Last but not
least，reading and writing in Chinese can benefit your oral Chinese level.
I hope you’ll make great progress in oral Chinese.
Yours ，
Li Hua
2
假定你是李华，在你校学习的英国交换生 Frank 想参加中国诗词电视大赛(Chinese
Poetry TV Competition)，特地给你写邮件寻求建议。请你给他回一封邮件，要点如下：
1．乐意帮助；
2．具体建议；
3．表达祝愿。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Frank，
It’s amazing that you’re interested in the popular Chinese Poetry TV Competition and want
to take part.
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Frank ，
It ’ s amazing that you ’ re interested in the popular Chinese Poetry TV Competition and want
to take part.I’m delighted to offer you some tips.
First of all，you should surf the Internet to learn about the brief history of Chinese poetry to
get a better understanding of it.The resources are available on many relevant websites.Secondly，
you’d better recite as many poems as possible and seek help from teachers.Additionally ，
knowing how to enter your name for the competition and watching previous events will make you
well prepared.
Hope these suggestions above will help you get started.Good luck in the competition!
Yours ，
Li Hua
