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六级写作 3
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题型 主题 考点 题干特征 主体段模板思路
正面
一般论说文 创造力 why students should be encouraged to develop creativity 重要的原因 + 具体建议
话题
n 主题是 一个 重要的能力/品质/习惯/意识/事情Lesson 3
🚩 本节课学习目标: ____________________
____________________一. 审题训练
1. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Respect
others, and you will be respected.” You can cite examples to illustrate your views. (2017.12. 卷一)
(1) 主题:
(2) 方向：
(3) 任务：
(4) 范围：一. 审题训练
2. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Wealth of
the mind is the only true wealth.” You can cite examples to illustrate your views. (2020.09 卷二）
(1) 主题:
(2) 方向：
(3) 任务：
(4) 范围：名言作文
属于考点 1：正面话题 → 主题：某个重要的能力/品质/习惯/意识/事情
Q. 如果碰到读不懂的名言怎么办？二. 全文带练
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark: “Respect others,
and you will be respected.” You may cite examples to support your view. (2017.12. 卷一）
§ 审题
§ 写作提纲
(1) 主题: 尊重他人
开头段： ① 引出名言+ ②概括名言主题 + ③个人立场
(2) 方向：+
主体段： 论述尊重他人重要的原因
(3) 任务：论述尊重他人重要的原因
结尾段： 重申立场
(4) 范围：/开头段: ① 引出名言+ ②概括名言主题 + ③个人立场
一句有名且启迪人的话语说道: “ _____________________________。” 这句话语揭示了一个发人深省的道理: 人们应该重视
_______________________ , 因为__________________________________。在我看来____________________________________________________。
A famous and enlightening saying goes that “____________________________________ .” This remark conveys a thought-
provoking notion that people should attach great importance to _____________________, ____________________________
In my opinion, examples ________________________________________________________________ .
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark: “Respect others, and you will be
respected.” You may cite examples to support your view. (2017.12. 卷一）开头段: ① 引出名言+ ②概括名言主题 + ③个人立场
一句有名且启迪人的话语说道: “尊重别人，别人也会尊重你。” 这句话语揭示了一个发人深省的道理: 人们应该重视尊重他人, 因为
这一行为是获得周围人尊重的关键。在我看来，来自历史、科学和日常经验的例子可以证明上述观点。
A famous and enlightening saying goes that “____________________________________ .” This remark conveys a
thought-provoking notion that people should attach great importance to_____________________, as ________________
________________________. In my opinion, examples from history, science and everyday experience can attest the
notion mentioned above.主体段: 论述“尊重他人”重要的原因
⭐主题词拓展：主体段: 论述“尊重他人”重要的原因
主题词拓展: respect others
⭐
v 加戏“三连”主体段: 论述“尊重他人”重要的原因
⭐主题词拓展: respect others
Who
尊重谁主体段: 论述“尊重他人”重要的原因
⭐主题词拓展: respect others
family members competitors workmates teachers/ friends acquaintance
Who
professors
尊重谁
strangers主体段: 论述“尊重他人”重要的原因
⭐思路拓展👉 写作主题： respect others
family members competitors workmates teachers/ friends acquaintance
Who
professors
尊重谁
strangers
What
文化差异: culture difference; 个人选择: personal choice;
尊重什么
兴趣爱好: personal interest; 不同看法: different opinions
When when dealing with in the in the when in daily communication
场合/情境 family affairs competition workplace discussing
academic
questionsl 主体段: 论述“尊重他人”重要的原因
⭐ 思路地图
原因1 ( _______ ) : __________
原因2（_______ ) : __________
原因3（______ ) : __________主体段: 论述“尊重他人”重要的原因
① 预告原因
尊重他人很重要的原因如下。主体段: 论述“尊重他人”重要的原因
① 预告原因
尊重他人很重要的原因如下。
The reasons why respecting other people is of considerable importance are as follows.主体段: 论述“尊重他人”重要的原因
l 原因 1【找好处】
A
在工作场所尊重同事 ____________主体段: 论述“尊重他人”重要的原因
l 原因 1【找好处】
A C
在工作场所尊重同事 ___________ 团队成功主体段: 论述“尊重他人”重要的原因
l 原因 1【找好处】
B
A C
在工作场所尊重同事 创造积极愉快的工作氛围 团队成功主体段: 论述“尊重他人”重要的原因
l 原因 1【找好处】
B
A C
在工作场所尊重同事 创造积极愉快的工作氛围 团队成功
首先, 在工作场所尊重同事有利于创造一个积极愉快的工作氛围, 这可以为团队成功奠定坚实的基础。主体段: 论述“尊重他人”重要的原因
l 原因 1【找好处】
首先, 在工作场所尊重同事有利于创造一个积极愉快的工作氛围, 这可以为团队成功奠定坚实的基础。
In the first place, respecting workmates in the workplace is beneficial to creating a positive and
enjoyable working atmosphere, which can lay a solid foundation for team success.主体段: 论述“尊重他人”重要的原因
l 原因 1【找好处】
In the first place, respecting workmates in the workplace is beneficial to creating a positive and
enjoyable working atmosphere, which can lay a solid foundation for team success.
ü 举例子, 论证原因1
竞技体育领域的著名队伍的故事, 如 __________ , 可以让我们一窥 ________ 如何促进一个成功的团队。主体段: 论述“尊重他人”重要的原因
l 原因 1【找好处】
In the first place, respecting workmates in the workplace is beneficial to creating a positive and
enjoyable working atmosphere, which can lay a solid foundation for team success.
ü 举例子, 论证原因1
竞技体育领域的著名队伍的故事, 如中国女排, 可以让我们一窥球队成员间的相互尊重如何促进一个成功的团队。主体段: 论述“尊重他人”重要的原因
l 原因 1【找好处】
In the first place, respecting workmates in the workplace is beneficial to creating a positive and
enjoyable working atmosphere, which can lay a solid foundation for team success.
ü 举例子, 论证原因1
竞技体育领域的著名队伍的故事, 如中国女排, 可以让我们一窥球队成员间的相互尊重如何促进一个成功的团队。
The stories of famous teams in the field of competitive sports, such as Chinese Women Volleyball Team,
provide a glimpse into how mutual respect among team members can contribute to a successful team.主体段: 论述“尊重他人”重要的原因
①
②
The reasons why respecting other people is of considerable importance are as follows. In the first
place, respecting workmates in the workplace is beneficial to creating a positive and enjoyable working
③
atmosphere, which can lay a solid foundation for team success. The stories of famous teams in the field
of competitive sports, such as Chinese Women Volleyball Team, provide a glimpse into how mutual
④
respect among team members can contribute to a successful team. In addition, no one could deny the
⑤
fact that _______________________________________. Lastly, __________________________ .主体段: 论述“尊重他人”重要的原因
l 原因 2【找好处】
此外，没有人能否认在日常交往中尊重朋友、熟人和陌生人可以对 ____________ 产生积极的影响。主体段: 论述“尊重他人”重要的原因
l 原因 2【找好处】
此外，没有人能否认在日常交往中尊重朋友、熟人和陌生人可以对人际关系产生积极的影响。
In addition, no one could deny the fact that treating friends、acquaintances and strangers with respect
in daily communication can exert a positive influence on interpersonal relationships.主体段: 论述“尊重他人”重要的原因
l 原因3: 外因
最后, 随着竞争日益激烈, _______________ 越来越是确保获得更理想结果的必备条件。
Lastly, with competition growing fiercely, ______________ is increasingly a requirement of
ensuring more desirable results.主体段: 论述“尊重他人”重要的原因
l 原因3: 外因
最后, 随着竞争日益激烈, 实现相互尊重越来越是确保获得更理想结果的必备条件。
Lastly, with competition growing fiercely, achieving mutual respect is increasingly a requirement of
ensuring more desirable results.主体段: 论述“尊重他人”重要的原因
118词
① ②
The reasons why respecting other people is of considerable importance are as follows. In the first place,
respecting workmates in the workplace is beneficial to creating a positive and enjoyable working
③
atmosphere, which can lay a solid foundation for team success. The stories of famous teams in the field
of competitive sports, such as Chinese Women Volleyball Team, provide a glimpse into how mutual
④
respect among team members can contribute to a successful team. In addition, no one could deny the
fact that treating friends、acquaintances and strangers with respect in daily communication can exert a
⑤
positive influence on interpersonal relationships. Lastly, with competition growing fiercely, achieving
mutual respect is increasingly a requirement of ensuring more desirable results.v 主体段思路地图
论证
原因1( ___________ ) : __________
论述尊重他人重要的原因
原因2 (微观好处) : __________
原因3（_________ ) : __________l 结尾段: 重申立场
总的来说, ____________________ 有很多有据可查的好处, 并且我强烈建议每个人, 特别是年轻人
____________________________ 。
In conclusion, there are many well-documented benefits of ________ and I highly suggest that
everyone, especially ___________ invest effort to ____________________________.l 结尾段: 重申立场
总的来说, 尊重他人有很多有据可查的好处, 并且我强烈建议每个人, 特别是年轻人按照名言建议
的去做。
In conclusion, there are many well-documented benefits of respecting other people, and I highly
suggest that everyone, especially young people behave in the way the proverb suggests.u 范文词组随堂测ü 本节课小结
⭐ 名言作文属于: _________ 考点
主题是一个 重要的能力/品质/习惯/意识/事情 展开
主体段模板思路: _____________ + ________________课后评价, 分享收获, 完成这个主体段
尊重他人很重要的原因如下。首先，在工作场所尊重同事有利于创造一
个积极愉快的工作氛围, 这可以为团队成功奠定坚实的基础。竞技体育领
域著名队伍的故事，如中国女排, 可以让我们一窥球队成员间的相互尊重
如何促进一个成功的团队。此外，没有人能否认，在日常交往中尊重朋
友、熟人和陌生人对人际关系有积极的影响。最后, 随着竞争日益激烈,
实现相互尊重越来越是确保获得更理想结果的必备条件。课后评价, 分享收获, 快乐答题
拓展主题词的方法是: ______________u坚持打卡，我要进步 ⛽！u 正在进行 ➡ 听力打卡Thank You
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