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四级写作(二)
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1. 议论文审题 ____ 看
2. 开头段模板
众所周知我们生活在这样一个时代: 科技/经济/社会/教育/文化 正快速发展并改变我们生活的方方面面。与此
同时, (公众)对 ______________ 也有广泛的讨论。在我看来, ___________________________。
It is commonly known that we are living in an age where technology/economy/society/education/culture is
developing at a rapid rate and changing every aspect of our life. At the same time, there is widespread discussion
about ___________. From my point of view, ___________________________________ .本节课👇
Directions: Suppose the student union of your university is organizing an online discussion on college students doing
community service. You are to write an essay on its benefits and the service you can provide to the community.
(2023.6)
主题 / 方向/ 任务
开头段：引出 ________ + 个人立场
§ 审题 ➡ 列提纲 主体段： ________________ + _________________
结尾段：重申立场u 开头段: 背景句 + 引出主题(做社区服务） + 个人立场
ü 回顾第一节课的内容, 自己动笔试试
l 中文思路
众所周知我们生活在这样一个时代: ____________________________________________________ 。与此同时, 公众对
_______________ 也有广泛的讨论。在我看来，________________________________________________________。u 开头段: 背景句 + 引出主题(做社区服务） + 个人立场
l 中文思路
众所周知我们生活在这样一个时代: 社会正快速发展正快速发展并改变我们生活的方方面面。与此同时, 公众对
做社区服务也有广泛的讨论。在我看来, 我们应该高度重视这类活动, 并寻求有效的方法来为社区做贡献。u 主体段: 论述 benefits + 给出suggestions
⭐ 主体段思路地图
_______ 社交圈：
benefits ________ 人际交往能力：
未来的 __________：
u做社区服务
sugges)onsu 主体段: 论述 benefits + 给出suggestions
ü 中文
_____________ 如下。首先, 众所周知 __________ 利于 ___________ 。此外, 没有人能否认 ___________ 可以在 _____________
中发挥关键作用。最后, 毫无疑问, _____________ 可以为 _____________ 打下坚实的基础。
ü 英文
_________________________ are as follows. In the first place, it would be universally acknowledged that ________________
is beneficial to _______________ . In addition, no one could deny the fact that ____________________ can play a key role in
_________________. Lastly, there is no doubt ________________ can lay a solid foundation for _________________ .u 主体段: 论述 benefits + 给出suggestions
ü 中文
做社区服务带来的好处如下。首先, 得到普遍认同的是做社区服务利于扩大社交圈。此外, 没有人能否认参与社区服务
可以在提高人际交往能力中发挥关键作用。最后, 毫无疑问, 定期参加社区服务可以为未来的职业打下坚实的基础。u 主体段: 论述 benefits + 给出suggestions
做社区服务带来的好处如下。首先, 得到普遍认同的是做社区服务利于扩大社交圈。此外, 没有人能否认参与社区服务可以
在提高人际交往能力中发挥关键作用。最后, 毫无疑问, 定期参加社区服务可以为未来的职业打下坚实的基础。
The benefits brought by doing community service are as follows. In the first place, it would be universally acknowledged
that doing community service is beneficial to widening social circle. In addition, no one could deny the fact that engaging
in community service can play a key role in improving interpersonal skills. Lastly, there is no doubt that participating in
community service on a regular basis can lay a solid foundation for future career.u 主体段: 论述 benefits + 给出suggestions
社区服务带来的好处如下。首先, 得到普遍认同的是做社区服务利于扩大社交圈。此外, 没
有人能否认参与社区服务可以在提高人际交往能力中发挥关键作用。最后, 毫无疑问, 定期
参加社区服务可以为未来的职业打下坚实的基础。那么如何 __________________________ ?
也许第一步是 ____________________。另一个必要的步骤是 ___________________________。u 主体段: 论述 benefits + 给出suggestions
那么如何回馈我们的社区呢? 也许第一步是, 我可以帮助社区里的老人洗衣服和打扫房间。另一个必要的步骤是组
织社区环保活动。u 主体段: 论述 benefits + 具体的 service
那么如何回馈我们的社区呢? 也许第一步是, 我可以帮助社区里的老人洗衣服和打扫房间。另一个必要的步骤是
组织社区环保活动。
Then how to give back to our community? Perhaps the first step is that I can help the elderly in the
community do the laundry and clean the room. Another necessary step is organizing community
environmental activities.u 主体段: 论述 benefits + 给出suggestions
The benefits brought by doing community service are as follows. In the first place, it would be universally
acknowledged that doing community service is beneficial to widening social circle. In addition, no one could deny
the fact that engaging in community service can play a key role in improving interpersonal skills. Lastly, there is no
doubt that participating in community service on a regular basis can lay a solid foundation for future career. Then
how to give back to our community? Perhaps the first step is that I can help the elderly in the community do the
laundry and clean the room. Another necessary step is organizing community environmental activities.主体段思路回顾 🤔
做社区服务带来的 __________ 如下。首先, 得到普遍认同的是做社区服务利于 ______________ 。此外,
没有人能否认做志愿者工作可以在 ___________ 中发挥关键作用。最后, 毫无疑问, 定期参加社区服务
可以为未来的职业_________________。那么如何 __________________ 呢? 也许第一步是, 我可以帮助
社区的老人______________________ 。另一个必要的步骤是组织社区环保活动。u 结尾段: 重申立场
总的来说，_________________ 有很多有据可查的好处。我强烈建议每个人, 尤其是 _______________ ,
________________________________________________。
In conclusion, there are many well-documented benefits of __________________. I highly suggest that
everyone, especially _______________________, ____________________________________________ .u 结尾段: 重申立场
总的来说, 做社区服务有很多有据可查的好处。我强烈建议每个人, 尤其是年轻人投入精力参与这类活动。
In conclusion, there are many well-documented benefits of doing community services. I highly suggest that
everyone, especially young people invest effort to take part in this kind of activity.u 范文词组随堂测本节课小结 📒
n 考点1： 正面话题 → 主题围绕 一个 重要的能力/品质/习惯/意识/事情 展开
主体段模板组合: _____________ + ________________⭐ 思路模版 1: 论述 importance/benefits
__________ 如下。首先, 得到普遍认同的是 __________ 利于 ___________ 。此外, 没有人能否认 ___________
可以在 _____________ 中发挥关键作用。最后, 毫无疑问, __________ 可以为 _______ 打下坚实的基础。
_________________________ are as follows. In the first place, it would be universally acknowledged that
________________ is beneficial to _______________ . In addition, no one could deny the fact that
____________________ can play a key role in _________________. Lastly, there is no doubt that
________________ can lay a solid foundation for _____________ .⭐ 思路模板 2: 论述建议（suggestions)
① ② ③
那么如何做某事? 也许第一步是个人需要做某事。另一个必要的步骤是做某事。
Then how to do sth? Perhaps the first step is that individuals need to do
sth. Another necessary step is doing sth.u 拓展练习: 名言作文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying, “Listening is
more important than talking.” You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of paying attention to others’
opinions.（2015.12.卷三）
ü 审题 ➡ 列提纲
开头段:
主体段:
结尾段:ü 名言开头段模板
一句著名且启发人的谚语说:“ __________________________ 。”这句话试图告诉我们人们应该非常重视
_______________________________。在我看来, ___________________________________________。
A famous and enlightening saying goes that “____________________________.” The saying tries to tell
us that people should attach great importance to _______________________________. In my opinion,
________________________________________________________ .ü 课后评价, 分享收获, 完成作业
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