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四级写作(四)
主讲老师: 张芷瑜 Ada
公众号: 阿达的英语角
微博/小红书: 阿达老师Ada
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题型 主题 考点 题干特征 主体段模板思路
一般论说文 (做)社区服务 正面话题 the benefits of ...... and the service you can provide 好处 + 建议
一般论说文 网课 中立话题 advantages and disadvantages ___________ + 建议u 本节课学习目标 ⭐
1. 负面主题模板思路
2. 图画作文审题练习ü 真题演练
Direc&ons: ... to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief
descrip&on of the picture and then comment on this kind of modern life. (2015.6. 卷一）
ü 图画作文审题方法:
1. 先看 _____________ , 后看 _________________
2. 看题干找 _________________________________
3. 看图找 ___________________________________Direc&ons: ... to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief
descrip&on of the picture and then comment on this kind of modern life. (2015.6. 卷一）
§ 审题
(1) 主题:
(2) 方向：
(3) 任务：Directions: ... to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of
the picture and then comment on this kind of modern life. (2015.6 卷一）
n 全文提纲
开头段： 描述图画 + 概括图画主题 + 表明立场
主体段： comment on this kind of modern life
结尾段： 重申立场
“人们沉迷电脑”这个负面现象n 开头段: ① (简要)描述图画 + ②概括图画主题 + ③个人立场
如图生动所示， _________________ 。
As is vividly described in the picture, ____________________ .n 开头段: ① (简要)描述图画 + ②概括图画主题 + ③个人立场
如图生动所示，一个人一整天都坐在电脑前。
As is vividly described in the picture, ____________________ .n 开头段: ① (简要)描述图画 + ②概括图画主题 + ③个人立场
如图生动所示，一个人一整天都坐在电脑前。
As is vividly described in the picture, a person is sitting in front of the computer all day long.n 开头段: ① (简要)描述图画 + ② 概括图画主题 + ③ 个人立场
如图生动所示，一个人一整天都坐在电脑前。即使在睡觉的时候, 在电脑上玩游戏的场景出现在梦中。
As is vividly described in the picture, a person is sitting in front of the computer all day long. Even
when he or she is sleeping, the scene of playing computer games emerges in dreams.n 开头段: ① (简要)描述图画 + ② 概括图画主题 + ③ 个人立场
如图生动所示，一个人一整天都坐在电脑前。即使在睡觉的时候, 在电脑上玩游戏的场景出现在梦中。显
然，这幅图揭示了现代人沉迷于电脑。
As is vividly described in the picture, a person is sitting in front of the computer all day long. Even when
he or she is sleeping, the scene of playing computer games emerges in dreams. Obviously, the
drawing reveals that _________________________.n 开头段: ① (简要)描述图画 + ② 概括图画主题 + ③ 个人立场
如图生动所示，一个人一整天都坐在电脑前。即使在睡觉的时候, 在电脑上玩游戏的场景出现在梦中。显
然，这幅图揭示了现代人沉迷于电脑。
As is vividly described in the picture, a person is sitting in front of the computer all day long. Even when
he or she is sleeping, the scene of playing computer games emerges in dreams. Obviously, the drawing
reveals that modern people indulge in computers.n 开头段: ① (简要)描述图画 + ② 概括图画主题 + ③ 个人立场
如图生动所示，一个人一整天都坐在电脑前。即使在睡觉的时候, 在电脑上玩游戏的场景出现在梦中。显
然，这幅图揭示了现代人沉迷于电脑。在我看来, 这一现象会导致有害的结果且我们需要寻求有效方法去解
决这一问题。n 开头段: ① (简要)描述图画 + ② 概括图画主题 + ③ 个人立场
如图生动所示，一个人一整天都坐在电脑前。即使在睡觉的时候, 在电脑上玩游戏的场景出现在梦中。显
然，这幅图揭示了现代人沉迷于电脑。在我看来, 这一现象会导致有害的结果且我们需要寻求有效方法去解
决这一问题。
As is vividly described in the picture, a person is sitting in front of the computer all day long. Even when
he or she is sleeping, the scene of playing computer games emerges in dreams. Obviously, the drawing
reveals that modern people indulge in computers. From my perspective, this phenomenon can lead to
harmful consequences and we need to seek effective methods to solve the problem.主体段: 点评负面现象 【人们沉迷电脑】
⭐思路地图
弊端
建议主体段: 点评负面现象 【人们沉迷电脑】
弊端 + 建议
___________ 负面影响可以从两个方面来说明。首先，人们普遍认为， ____________ 对身体健康有害。
一些研究人员发现 ______________ 的人会出现身体症状，如 _______________________ 。此外，
___________ 会对人们的 _______________ 产生不利影响。主体段: 点评负面现象 【人们沉迷电脑】
弊端 + 建议
电脑成瘾的负面影响可以从两个方面来说明。首先，人们普遍认为，过度使用电脑对身体健康有害。一些研究人员发现
长时间玩电脑的人会出现身体症状，如头痛和上背部疼痛。此外，对电脑成瘾会对人们的心理健康产生不利影响。主体段: 点评负面现象 【人们沉迷电脑】
弊端 + 建议
电脑成瘾的负面影响可以从两个方面来说明。首先，人们普遍认为，过度使用电脑对身体健康有害。一些研究人员发现
长时间玩电脑的人会出现身体症状，如头痛和上背部疼痛。此外，对电脑成瘾会对人们的心理健康产生不利影响。
The negative consequences of computer addiction can be illustrated from two aspects. First, it would be universally
acknowledged that overusing computers is detrimental to physical health. Some researchers found that people who
spend a lot of time playing computers would suffer from physical symptoms, such as headaches and upper back
pain. Besides, becoming addicted to computers can exert an adverse influence on people’ s mental well-being.主体段: 点评负面现象 【人们沉迷电脑】
弊端 + 建议
那么如何 ____________________ 呢? 也许第一步是 ______________________________。主体段: 点评负面现象 【人们沉迷电脑】
弊端 + 建议
那么如何扭转这种局面呢? 也许第一步是大众媒体应该宣传合理使用电脑的重要性。主体段: 点评负面现象 【人们沉迷电脑】
弊端 + 建议
The negative consequences of computer addiction can be illustrated from two aspects. First, it would be
universally acknowledged that overusing computers is detrimental to physical health. Some researchers found
that people who spend a lot of time sitting at computer desks would suffer from physical symptoms, such as
headaches and upper back pain. Besides, becoming addicted to computers can exert an adverse influence on
people’ s mental well-being. Then how to reverse the situation? Perhaps the first step is that the public media
should publicize the importance of using computers in a reasonable way.u 结尾段: 重申立场
改写上节课内容
总之, 在线课程可以带来好处和缺点, 我强烈建议每个人, 尤其是学生权衡利弊去做出明智的选择。u 结尾段: 重申立场
总之, 电脑可以带来好处和问题，我强烈建议人们, 尤其是年轻人, 权衡利弊去做出明智的选择。
In conclusion, computers can bring both benefits and problems and I highly suggest that
people, especially young people, balance the pros and cons to make informed choices.u 范文词组随堂测本节课小结 📒
n 考点 3: 负面话题 → 主题围绕 _______________ 展开
主体段模版组合: _____________ + ________________ü 前四节课总结
题型 主题 考点 题干特征 主体段模板思路
一般论说文 (做)社区服务 正面话题 the benefits of ...... and the service you can provide 好处 + 建议
名言作文 倾听 正面话题 the importance of .......... 重要性(好处) + 建议
一般论说文 网课 中立话题 advantages and disadvantages _______ + 建议
图画作文 负面话题 ________ + 建议ü 课后评价, 分享收获, 完成作业
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