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中考英语书面表达（二轮）选练附参考范文
【中考先睹为快】
Passage A
中考 面表达
书
面表达（共15分 ）
书
三年的初中生活就要 束， 新的高中学 即将到来。展望未来，你肯定有美好的憧憬和
结 崭 习 实实
在在的打算。 怎 完善自己， 你以“How to be an excellent student” ，写一篇英
应该 样 请 为题 语
短文。
内容要点 1.遵守校 校 （按 到校、不吸烟等）；
纪 规 时
2.养成良好的学 （上 真听 、多 、学会放松等）；
习习惯 课认 讲 读书
3.与人沟通、互相帮助；
4.在家帮父母做家 （如洗碗、打 生等） ；
务 扫卫
5.参加志愿者工作（volunteer work）， 困地区学校(the school in the poor area)捐 学 用
为贫 赠 习
品(school things)等。
参考 ：
词汇
2. have good study
habits
4.communicate with
1.obey the school
rules 3. help do
参考词汇 housework
5. take part in ; give
away to toschoolthings
要 求：1.短文的开 已 出,不 入 数。
头 给 计 总词
2.包括所有内容要点，用上所 参考 ，不要逐句翻 ，可以适当 。
给 词 译 发挥
3. 句通 、 法正确，80个 左右。
语 顺 语 词
4.文中不得出 考生真 的姓名、地点和所在的学校名称。
现 实
How to be an excellent student
I am going to be a senior high school student .【参考范文】 面表达（15分）
书
分 准（按五档 分）
评 标 给
第一档（13—15分）：内容完整， 言基本无 ；行文 ，表达清楚； 写 范，卷面整 。
语 误 连贯 书 规 洁
第二档（9—12分）：内容完整， 言有少量 ；行文 ，表达基本清楚。
语 错误 连贯
第三档（5—8分）： 内容完整， 言有一些 ；行文不 ，表达不 清楚。
语 错误 够连贯 够
第四档（3—4分）： 内容不完整， 言 多；只有个 句子可 。
语 错误较 别 读
第五档（0—2分）： 只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些 。
单词
中考 面表达（32）
书
最近你的同学就“中学生目前存在的 ”展开了 。 在 你以此
问题 讨论 现 请 为话
， 参照表内提供的信息，写一篇短文。
题
Problems Causes Advice
1．argue with parents ----------- have a talk with parents，
understand each other
2．can't sleep well anxious about grades -----------
before exams
3．feel lonely ------------ -------------
Recently I've had a discussion with my classmates about our problems．
注意：l、开 部分已写好，你只需接着写。
头2、所写内容必 包括表格中Jack的想法和你的至少三个想法。
须
3、 数要求80．120。
词
【参考范文】One possible version：
Recently I’ve had a discussion with my classmates about our problems．Some of my
classmates say they often argue with their parents．That is because their parents always ask
them to study and they feel they have no free time to do what they like．If they have a talk with
their parents，they can understand each other．
Some say they can't sleep well before exams because they are anxious about the grades·
They should take a long walk to relax before going to bed
Some also say they feel lonely because they don’t know how to make friends．As the only
kid in the family，students should take part in some after—school activities and learn to
communicate with others.
Passage B
假设你是无锡日报英文周刊English Weekly的特约小记者，请在答题卡指定的位置上，以“A
New Town”为题，写一则80词左右的简讯，介绍我市的太湖新城（Taihu New Town）。内容提示
见下表。
简介 位于无锡南部，近五年来变化巨大
过去 有很多大型工厂
现在 政府已迁走所月工厂，空气清新，没有污染
问题 尚存一些，其中之一是公交线路太少
展望 ……
注意：
1.简讯须包括表格内所有信息，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2.表格中“展望”一栏，请用自己的2-3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3.简讯的标题已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数。
【参考范文】One possible version:
A New Town
Taihu New Town is in the south of Wuxi. It has changed a lot in the past five years
.There used to he many big factures here. The government has moved them all away. S theair is fresh and there is no pollution. There are still a few problems. One of them is there
are too few bus lines. But I believe all these problems will be solved soon. The new town
will become a wonderful place to live.
(80 words)
Passage C
书面表达（满分15分）
上周日在秦淮河边发生了张明救落水小男孩的事情，请根据以下四幅画所描述的事情
经过，为校刊的英语园地写一篇题为“A Brave Young Man”的英文稿件。
注意：
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3.词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
A Brave Young Man
It was a nice day last Sunday. ▲
▲
▲
▲
▲
▲
【参考范文】
A Brave Man
It was a nice day last Sunday . Zhang Ming was fishing by the Qinhuai River when a litter
boy went to play nearby. Suddenly, Zhang Ming heard someone shouting for help. Helooked around and found that the little boy was falling into the water. It was very
dangerous. Zhang Ming jumped into the river immediately. He tried his best to pull the boy
out of the river. At that time other people came to offer help. Finally, the boy was saved
and he was very grateful. People all said Zhang Ming was very brave and helpful. We
should learn from him.
Passage D
中考书面表达
书面表达（共15分）
假如你们学校正在开展研究性学习(exploring learning
strategies)，请你根据下表提供的信息，写一篇短文，让
更多的学生了解你校开展研究性学习的一些情况。
参考词汇：
1. keep on explaining the language points
2. have enough time to think about problems
3. show the problems to
4. discuss them for a while in pairs or groups.
5. learn how to work/ study with others
要 求：1.短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2.包括所有内容要点，用上所给参考词，不要逐句翻译，可以适当发
挥。
3.语句通顺、语法正确，80个词左右。
4.文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在的学校名称。
过去 现在老师讲解知识点，学生听 老师提出问题，学生相互讨论，并
课堂 讲，记笔记，没有足够的时 学会与他人合作,从而找出解决问题
间独立思考问题。 的方法。
丰富多彩的课外活动，如：读自己
课后 做大量的作业。 喜欢的书，去图书馆或上网查资料
等。
个人
……
感受
Great changes have taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on
exploring learning strategies.
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【参考范文】书面表达:One possible passage ：
Great changes have taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on
exploring learning strategies. In the past, teachers kept on explaining the language
points in class. We students just listened and took some notes. So we didn’t have
enough time to think about problems by ourselves. We had to do much homework
after class. But now teachers show the problems to us first, then we discuss them for a
while in pairs or groups. We try to find out the ways of solving problems, in this way
we’ve learnt how to work/ study with others. After class, we can have different
activities. For example, we can read books we like, go to the library or surf the
Internet for useful information and so on.
In a word, now we are the owners of our study and we’re happy.中考书面表达（8）
父亲节即将来临，学校广播室正在开展有关“父子(女)亲情”的征文活动。
假如你叫李华(Li Hua)，下列三幅图片描述的是你和父亲之间发生的一件往事，
请你根据图片及所给文字提示，展开合理想象，写一篇短文，并谈谈你现在对此
事的感想。
要求：1. 语句通顺，行文连贯，书写整洁；
2. 词数约70～80；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：ask sb. for sth. , tell sb. to do sth. , net bar, think of, feel sorry
Father’s Day is coming. I’m going to tell a story between my father and me. One
day ________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Father’s Day is coming. I’m going to tell a story between my father and me. One
day I asked my father for some money. He asked me what I wanted to do. I said I
wanted to buy some books. Then he gave me some. He told me to read more books
and study hard at school. But I didn’t buy any books at all. Instead I went to the
Youth Net Bar and played computer games there. My father got very angry with mewhen he heard this. And I felt very sorry about it. From then on I haven’t been to the
Youth Net Bar any more.
