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人教版九全册Unit2 I think that mooncakes are delicious 写作主题：节日
一、话题分析
本单元的话题围绕“Festival（节日）”为主题，在写相关的作文时，要叙述清楚节日的时间、起源、相
关风俗等，要描写人们的庆祝活动，表达要清楚、简洁。命题者一般是围绕大家熟知的节日、假期或者庆
祝活动等来设置试题，要求考生根据已给出的提示或建议进行描写。话题主要涉及节日习俗、节假日活动、
庆祝方式等。此类题目通常采用要点提示的方式来考查。
二、写作方法
“总分总法”写介绍节日的文章
1．先总述节日的名称及庆祝的时间；
2．其次，重点介绍节日期间的活动；
3．最后总结自己对节日的感受。
三、词汇积累
节日介绍类作文常用词汇：
mooncakes, dumplings, noodles, desserts, fruits, chicken, fish, lanterns, visit relatives and friends, put on,
lay out, treat or trick, give presents, good luck, share...with, dress up, get together, exciting, interesting,
thankful, happy...
四、句型积累
【开头句】
1．The Mid－Autumn Festival falls on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month．
2．Every festival has its special meaning and represents our great traditional Chinese culture．
3．Chinese people regard the Spring Festival as the most important one of all．
4．Mid－Autumn Festival is a traditional Chinese festival with a long history．
5．The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China，and it is also my favorite festival．
【中间句】
1．On the eve of the Spring Festival，family members get together and have big meals．
2．We usually visit our relatives and friends during the Spring Festival，and send best wishes to one another．
3．Everyone goes home to get together with their family，though some of them are far away from home．
4．Dragon Boat Festival，also called Duanwu Festival，is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according
to the Chinese lunar calendar．
5．Zongzi is the most important food of the Dragon Boat Festival．After eating zongzi，people will watch the
dragon boat races．
6．Every time the Mid－Autumn Festival comes，people will send relatives and friends the mooncakes as gifts．
7．Thanksgiving Day is in honor of Indian people's great kindness．
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8．With the coming of National Day，I really expect it because I want to have a short trip during these days．
9．People can enjoy the moon while eating mooncakes which are the special food for this festival．
【结尾句】
1．What a beautiful and happy holiday!
2．I am sure it will be a wonderful journey．
3．In short，it's a time for family gathering and all of us enjoy it．
五、写作训练一
假如你是李华，打算邀请你们的外教Jack来你家共度端午佳节，并观看一年一度的龙舟赛。请根据以下要
点，用英语给他写一封电子邮件。
要点：
1．端午节的时间(农历五月五日)、来由(纪念屈原)；
2．活动安排：学包粽子、观看龙舟赛(时间：下午两点；地点：东坡湖；赛况)。
参考词汇：农历 lunar calendar
注意：
1．所写内容必须包含所有要点，并作适当发挥；
2．词数：80词左右(开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
3．文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调
体裁：应用文(电子邮件)；电子邮件的主体部分为说明文
时态：介绍节日用一般现在时
人称：第一人称
2.【审题思路】
1．审主题：介绍端午节
2．审人称：第一人称
3．审时态：一般将来时
4．审要点，列提纲
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提纲要点 关键词句
邀请你和我的家人一起共度节日 invit e yo u t o spen d th e
开头：写信的目的
festiva l wit h m y famil y
1．在农历五月初五 o n Ma y 5t h o f th e luna r calenda r
2．在某人的帮助下 wit h one' s hel p
正文：端午节的具体安排 3．观看龙舟比赛 watc h th e boa t race s
4．彼此竞争 compet e wit h eac h othe r
5．欢呼 chee r u p
结尾：希望 盼望你的回复。Looking forward to your reply．
Dear Jack，
The Dragon Boat Festival is coming in a few days．
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Yours，
Li Hua
六、写作训练二
假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Alex发来电子邮件想向你了解中秋节这一中国传统节日。请你根据下图
所示，给他回复一封电子邮件，介绍该节日。
要求：1. 内容应包括图示中的所有要点；2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；3. 词数不少于
100，电子邮件的格式、开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Alex,
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How’s everything going? Now let me tell you about the Mid-Autumn Festival.
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I hope you can come to China and enjoy this festival next year.
Yours,
Li Hua
七、写作训练三
明天是父亲节。假定你是王涛，请给你的美国笔友John写一封电子邮件，谈谈你将如何陪父亲一起度过这
个特别的日子。要点如下：
1．表述你与父亲间的情感；
2．为父亲做一些事情。
要求：1．词数：80-100；
3．请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
4．邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数。
Dear John,
It's Father's Day tomorrow. It's a special day, isn't it?
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____________________________________________________What's your plan for Father's Day? I'm
looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Wang Tao
八、真题演练
（2020浙江温州）年夜饭是中国文化中最重要的团圆饭。年夜饭菜肴丰富、美味，像年糕( New Year
cake)、鱼等都还带有美好的祝愿。
请以 The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve为题,写一篇约10词的短文,向外国朋友介绍自己家乡
的年夜饭,让他们更好地了解中国丰富多样的文化习俗。
注意:文中不可出现人名。标题已经给出,不计入总词数。
The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve
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人教版九全册Unit2 I think that mooncakes are delicious 写作主题：节日
写作训练一答案
【参考范文】
Dear Jack，
The Dragon Boat Festival is coming in a few days． I'm writing to invite you to spend the festival with my
family．To remember Qu Yuan，Chinese people have been celebrating it on May 5th of the lunar calendar for
centuries．On that day，we'll try to make zongzi with my grandma's help．In the afternoon，we are going to
watch the boat races held in Dongpo Lake at 2 o'clock every year．During the exciting races，the dragon boat
teams compete with each other while people on each bank cheer up．I'm sure you'll have a fantastic day．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua
写作训练二【参考范文】
Dear Alex,
How’s everything going? Now let me tell you about the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is one of the most important
traditional festivals in China. It falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month every year.
Usually, no matter how far away or how busy people are, they will try to go home to get together with their family
for the festival. At noon there is usually a big family dinner. In the evening, the whole family admire the full moon
and share delicious mooncakes. Grandparents tell the story about Chang’e flying to the moon to their
grandchildren. People believe that the full moon is a symbol of reunion and good luck, and they often give best
wishes to each other at this special time.
I hope you can come to China and enjoy this festival next year.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作训练三【参考范文】
Dear John,
It's Father's Day tomorrow. It’s a special day, isn't it? My father and I are good friends. Whenever I
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meet with difficulties, he is always there, ready to help me. I will do something to show my love for
my father on this special day.
Tomorrow I will make a beautiful card for him with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will
help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening. Besides, I'll take a walk
with him after dinner and then play chess with him, for he likes it very much. I'm sure that he'll be
very happy.
What's your plan for Father's Day? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Wang Tao
真题演练
【参考范文】
The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve
The family dinner on Spring Festival Eve is the most important dinner in traditional Chinese culture. On
Spring Festival Eve, family members get together to enjoy the dinner.
There are all kinds of delicious food and drinks. Many of them usually have great meanings. For example, in
Wenzhou, New Year cake is often the first dish, which means "having more luck and becoming better" in Chinese
pronunciation. Another dish is fish, which means "having more than we need". Children all like this family dinner.
At dinner they receive not only best wishes but also lucky money from their parents.
It is a Chinese tradition that we have kept for thousands of years.
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