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人教版九全册Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry.
写作主题：Feelings(情感）
一、话题分析
本单元话题是“Feelings(情感）”，谈论身边的人或事给自己带来的情绪变化。与此相关的写作任务是
根据文字提示或实际情况简单描述某事物或人给自己带来的情绪变化，写此类文章时，可以先点明发生的
事件，然后具体描述事情发生的时间、地点、原因等，最后表达自己的喜、怒、哀、乐。也可以描写生活
或学习中的烦恼或焦虑。情感与情绪包括人际沟通与情感交际，既有家庭方面的，也有社会层面的。此话
题主要会从以下两个方面进行设题：⑴ 人际沟通方面存在的问题。包括以下两点：①家庭亲人之间的沟
通；②社会上与朋友或同学之间的交流。⑵对人际沟通存在的问题给出一些建议。
二、写作方法
“4W1H法”写“叙事类作文”
1. Who“人物” 2. where “地点” 3. when“时间” 4. what“事件” 5. how “感受”
三、素材积累
作文常用词汇和语块：
词汇(名词)
feeling感情；情感sense 感觉；意识 expression表情smile 笑；微笑 laughter笑声pleasure高兴；
愉快 memory记忆；回忆 regret懊悔 pride自豪；骄傲 surprise惊奇；惊讶
shame羞耻；羞愧love爱；喜爱 dream梦想；睡梦 luck幸运；运气
词汇(动词)
hope希望 wish愿望 fear害怕；惧怕 trouble问题；苦恼 pity遗憾；怜悯cry哭；叫喊
feel感受；觉得 cheer欢呼；喝彩 surprise使惊奇 regret感到遗憾 insist坚持；强调
dream做梦 expect预料；期待 seem似乎；好像 worry担心；担忧 trouble使苦恼
词汇(形容词)
nice令人愉快的 excited兴奋的 glad高兴；愿意 happy高兴的 proud自豪的 lucky幸运的
nervous焦虑的 angry生气的 sad (使人)悲伤的 afraid害怕的 crazy疯狂的 mad疯的
good好的 great伟大的 patient有耐心的lonely孤独的 tired疲劳的；疲倦的 bored烦闷的；厌倦的
短语
1. be proud of 为……骄傲
2. cheer up 振奋起来
3. to one’s surprise 使……惊讶的
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4. have trouble(in) doing sth. 做某事有困难
5. worry about 担心，烦恼
6. be tired of 对……感到厌倦
7. be angry with 对(某人)生气
8. drive sb. crazy 使某人发疯/狂
9. in surprise 吃惊，惊讶地
10. keep up 跟上;保持
11. keep one’s word(s) 守信
12. make a face/faces 做鬼脸
13. be strict with sb. 对某人要求严格
14. stop sb. From doing sth. 阻止某人做某事
15. allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事
16. ask sb. to do sth. 要求某人做某事
17. I believe that… 我确信……
18. deal with 处理
写作句型
1. It is known that being happy is good for people’s health.
2. When I’m in a low mood, I choose to stay alone.
3. I feel blue/sad because I can’t go to Jay Chou’s concert.
4. My teacher got very angry because I was late for class again.
5. What you said makes me sad.
6. That news is so surprising that we all feel surprised.
7. He is very nervous because he will take an important exam tomorrow.
8. We will be very happy if we can have a long journey with our families.
【开头句】
1. It’s important to learn how to get on well with others.
2. Friendship requires good communication.
3. As we know, we should learn how to get on well with others.
4. Let me tell some rules of my family.
【中间句】
1. He seems a little unhappy.
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2. Everyone gets these feelings at your age.
3. She feels very lonely because she has no friends to talk with.
4. You must be friendly to others.
5. Always say less than you think.
6. Keep your promise, no matter what it costs.
7. If we can’t communicate well, we can hardly get along with our friends.
【结尾句】
1. Only in these ways can we get along well with others.
2. I believe you can get on well with your parents if you put your heart into it.
3. We’ll learn to get along better with each other.
四、实例讲解
【写作任务】 (Section B 3a & 3b)
明天英语课上的duty report该你发言了。请你以“An Unforgettable Experience”为题写一篇英语短文，
给大家讲述你的一次难忘的经历。
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调 体裁：记叙文 时态：一般过去时 人称：第一人称和第三人称
2. 谋布局、写句子
3. 巧衔接
在记叙难忘经历发生的起因、经过及结果时，同学们可以使用表示时间的词语from then on和two days
before / on the day he left with his family ... 来连接上下文，这样文章的脉络会更清晰。
4. 添佳句
No one is perfect. (人无完人。)
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5. 成篇章
An Unforgettable Experience
五、写作训练一
3月5日是学雷锋纪念日，你校师生去敬老院开展志愿者活动。假如你是李华，请通过邮件将此活
动情况介绍给Mary.100词左右。
活动形式：
1.送鲜花、水果和美好的祝福。
2.帮老人整理房间、打扫卫生·......
3.陪老人聊天；为老人表演（唱歌、跳舞），读报．．．．．．
活动感想：此活动很有意义，从中学会了关爱老人、尊重老人......
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六、写作训练二
有些父母在该陪伴孩子的时候，却选择沉迷于网络世界，不和孩子交
流，这其实是一种“冷暴力”。今天英语课上老师给你们呈现了下面
这幅漫画，要求你们写一篇短文描述漫画，阐述你对此现象的看法并
给出建议。
七、写作训练三
假如你是任慧，你校校报Speak Out栏目正面向全校征集关于“Something that made you happy or
sad”的稿件，请你根据以下要点提示写一篇短文投稿。
要点提示：
1. What's the thing?
2. When,where and how did it happen?
3.How did it make you feel?
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4. What did you learn from it?
要求：不少于100词，可适当发挥。
八、中考典列
帮助他人，快乐自己，李华一家常在周末去社区参加志愿者活动。假如你是李华的同学，请根据提供的信
息介绍李华一家，描述他们上周六所做的事，谈谈你对他们的做法有何感想？你是否愿意参与类似的活动？
说明理由。
人物 职业爱好 具体活动
爸爸 电脑工程师 修理 为邻居检修电脑
妈妈 公司经理 DIY 为社区老人包粽子
李华 中学生 下棋 教小学生下棋
你 .....
提示词汇：manager 经理
要求：
1.所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.评价李华一家的傲法，表达你的意愿，并说明理由：
3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计人总词数：
4.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整：
5.文中不出现真实的姓名、校名及地点。
I am Li Hua's classmate and l've known that he and his parents often go to the community center to do some
voluntary work on weekends.
人教版九全册Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry.
写作主题：Feelings(情感）
实例讲解
【参考范文】
2. 谋布局、写句子
(1) An experience I think was unforgettable
(2) Li Hua and I had different opinions about a math problem
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(3) I knew that it was my fault
(4) I didn't realize we wouldn't see each other anymore
(5) This made me feel a sense of relief
(6) We shouldn't be afraid of making mistakes
5. 成篇章
An Unforgettable Experience
An experience I think was unforgettable was arguing with my best friend Li Hua.
One Saturday last term, Li Hua and I were studying together at his home. We had different opinions about a
math problem. Such a little thing caused an argument between us. From then on, we didn't talk to each other. I
knew that it was my fault,but I refused to admit it because I didn't want to lose face. I didn't realize we wouldn't see
each other anymore until I heard that Li Hua would move to another city with his parents. Two days before he left
with his family, I said sorry to Li Hua. We made peace with each other. This made me feel a sense of relief.
No one is perfect. Everyone makes mistakes. We shouldn't be afraid of making mistakes. When we realize our
mistakes, we should correct them at once.
五、写作训练一
【参考范文】
Dear Mary,
Thank you for your last e-mail. Let me tell you what we did on March 5th.
As a member of volunteers, 1 got up carly because I was loo ex- cited to sleep. ①' In the morning, we volunteers
bought some flowers and fresh fruit. As we arrived at the Happiness Nursing Home, we sent the old people our best
wishes.
Then we cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them, After that, some of us performed for them, such as''
singing songs and dancing. Some of us read newspapers for them. Some of us chalted with them. From this activity,
we realized thal we should care for the old and respect them. What a valuable and meaningful activity!
If you have the chance to come to China, I hope you can join us.
LiHua六、写作训练二
【参考范文】
六、写作训练二
In the picture, the parents are using their mobile phones. Their little boy is standing between them trying to get
their attention. Maybe he wants to know why his parents are always on their phones, and not spending their time
with him.
I think parents should set good examples for their children, so they should shut their phones off or spend less
time on them.
If so, parents will have more spare time to do lots of things with their children, like playing games, watching
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movies or playing sports, which can provide good chances to communicate with them. Good communication
between parents and children is really necessary.
It means children can share their happy things with their parents or talk about their problems so they can get some
help from their parents. I think parents should always be there to listen to their children. It can not only help
strengthen parent-child relationships but also help children's development.
七、写作训练三
【参考范文】
Something that made me happy was winning the piano competition. It was held on September 20th in
City Music Hall. On that day, I saw many people there. I was so nervous. I was worried I would make
mistakes during my performance. Then I remembered what my father told me-always believe in yourself
and you are the best. His words made me feel much better. When it was my turn,I walked up to the piano
with confidence and performed well. You wouldn't believe how much I wanted to know the result. When I
learned I won the first prize,I hugged my parents in excitement.This experience taught me that it is very
important to have confidence in yourself.
八、中考典列
I am L Hua's classmate and I've known that he and his parents often go he community center to do some
voluntary work on weekends His father is computer engineer, Hle's good at repairing things. His mother works as a
manager in a company. She likes DIY. Li Hua is a middle school student. He plays chess well. Last Saturday, his
family went there again and did something for others. His father volunteered to check and fix computers for
neighbors. His mother made rice dumplings for the elder people there. She O made these elder people feel very
happy. Li Hua taught some primary school students to play chess and I think what his family do is meaningful. I
also want to be a volunteer like Li Hua. It is necessary for us to help people in need.
As we know, helping others is helping ourselves. It can also bring happiness to us all.
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