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人教版九全册Unit 14 I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7.
写作主题：School days (学校生活）
一、话题分析
本单元话题是“School days (学校生活）”，让学生回顾初中三年的学习生活并展望未来，叙述对自
己有较大影响的某个人或某件事。以回忆自己或他人的学校生活为主线，以感恩为主题，主要描写人物或
记叙事件。这类文章通常是提示性作文，同时又兼有开放性。此类话题源于实际生活，注意从平时的生活
中提炼素材并写出自己的所感所想。学校活动通常从以下角度命题：学生学校生活，学校活动以及学校安
全教育等。
二、写作方法
“三步法”写“对自己影响最大的人或事类”作文
1.引出话题
2.人物／事件介绍
3.表达感激／感想
或者
第一段：对在学校的生活进行总体评价。
第二段：具体描述在学校参与的课程、活动以及与老师、同学的相处等内容。
第三段：表达自己的感想。
三、素材积累
作文常用词汇和语块：
“对自己影响最大的人或事类”作文常用词汇：
person, influence, encourage, overcome, thankful, caring, take on new challenges, have problems with, advice,
day by day, the importance of, help me with
课程
English英语 math数学 Chinese语文 physics 物理 chemistry化学 PE.体育 science 科 学
art美术 history历史 music音乐 biology生物 geography地理 polity 政治 computer 计算
机
文体活动
baseball 棒球basketball 篮球 bench 长凳chess 国际象棋 court 球场 football 足球jogging 慢跑
piano 钢琴 running 赛跑 swimming 游泳 tennis 网球 violin 小提琴volleyball 排球
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人际关系
harmonious 和谐的 friendly 友好的 civilized 文明的 honest 真诚的
credible 诚信的 help each other 互助帮助 care for each other 互相关心
learn from each other 互相学习 cherish 珍惜 take an active part in 积极参与
promote the friendship 增进友谊 improve the relationship 改善关系
communicate with 交流、沟通 trust each other 彼此信任
build a good relationship 建立良好的关系
“对自己影响最大的人或事类”作文常用句型：
1. The person who has influenced me most is...
2.He encouraged/helped me to do better in...
3. When I face difficulty in my daily life, his spirit...
4. I am sure I will grow up better with...
四．【实例讲解】
【写作任务】
某英文杂志社正在举办题为“The teacher I will never forget”的征文活动。请你结合自身经历，写一篇
英语短文向该杂志社投稿。
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调 体裁：记叙文 时态：以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 人称：第一人称和
第三人称
2. 谋布局、写句子
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3. 巧衔接
本文中体现了语义搭配这一通过词汇纽带来使上下文紧密连贯的衔接方式。如本文中的 ... years old,
of medium build, has ... hair, likes, is good at, patient, is never angry with, still remember, will never forget这些表
达都与描写人物相关联，从而使文章成为一个有机统一体。
4. 成篇章
The teacher I will never forget
_____________________
____________________ _____________________
__
五、写作训练一
你的初中生活即将结束。此时此刻，正是回顾过
去，展望未来之际。请写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对初中
三年学习生活的感受和对高中生活的向往。短文需包括如下要点，可适当拓展以使行文连贯：
1. 师生关系；
2. 学业成就；
3.生活乐趣；
4.感受初中；
5.向往高中。
注意：
1.词数：80左右。
2.文章的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
I'll graduate from my junior high school
___________________
__________________________________________________________________________
六、写作训练二
假如你是英语校报的编辑李平，请你根据以下信息，给新入学的学弟学妹们写一封信，欢迎他们来到新学
校，并对他们在学校如何做合格的中学生提出建议。
写作要点：
1. 欢迎他们来到新学校。
2. 介绍学校：(1)课程有趣；(2)有多名外教；(3)活动丰富。3. 请对他们在学校如何做合格的(qualified)中学
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生提出具体建议。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少90词。
思路点拨
体裁：应用文——书信；主体内容为说明文
时态：一般现在时和一般将来时
人称：以第一人称和第二人称为主
七、写作训练三
初中生活马上就要结束了，三年的时光一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的记忆，请你根据图表提示简要描
述这段时间的学习生活情况。
要求：1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。2. 语法正确，文理通顺、流畅。3. 文中不得出现真实
姓名、校名。
思路点拨
该书面表达是根据图表提示描述初中三年的学习生活情况。文章体裁是记叙文，时态以一般过去
时为主，人称用第一人称。要分别从校园、老师、朋友、运动四个方面描述初中生活。开头已经给出，总
结全文内容时，可以使用in a word, all in all或in short之类的表达引出对整个上文归纳的句子。
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八．实战中考1
习主席在全国教育大会上强调，中学生要做德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。假如你是李
华，请根据以下要点提示写一篇英语演讲稿，简单谈谈如何做一个新时代合格的中学生。
要点提示：1. 爱国爱家，诚实守信，善良感恩;
2. 努力学习，做个有创造力的人;
3. 多参加体育锻炼，保持身心健康;
4. 善于发现生活中的美, 热爱大自然, 守护家园;
5. 积极参加校内外的各种劳动。
写作要求：1. 词数90左右(开头已经给出，不计入总词数);
2. 根据要点提示，可以适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
参考词汇: keep one's promise 守信; be thankful to sb. 感恩某人；creative有创造力的; nature自然; protect保
护; beauty美; activity活动
Boys and girls，
My name is Li Hua. Today I'm glad to share my ideas about how to be good students.
九．实战中考2
假定你是李华，你校将举办校园音乐节( music festival)。请给你的好友Alan写封电子邮件，介绍音乐
节的相关内容和主要活动，并邀请他与你一起参加此次音乐节。邮件内容包括
Time 10 a m. next Sunday
Place school sports field
Activities for sell tickets, work at food stands...(all of the money will go to charity)
students
play the violin, piano...
sing songs, dance to music...
...
注意：1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
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2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
参考词汇：摊位 stand慈善 charity
Dear Alan,
How is it going? _____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours
Li Hua
人教版九全册Unit 14 I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7.
写作主题：School days (学校生活）
实例讲解
【参考范文】
2. 谋布局、写句子
(1) Mr. Wang is of medium build and has short hair
(2) Mr. Wang likes / loves (playing) sports
(3) Mr. Wang is very patient and is never angry with us
(4) one morning while I was copying my deskmate's math homework
(5) he said he could help me if I needed help
(6) I decided not to copy anyone's homework anymore
(7) And with Mr. Wang's help, I made great / much progress in math
4. 成篇章
The teacher I will never forget
The teacher I will never forget is Mr. Wang, my primary school math teacher.
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Mr. Wang is 30 years old. He is of medium build and has short hair. He likes sports and he is
good at playing basketball. He is very patient and is never angry with us.
I still remember one morning while I was copying my deskmate's math homework, Mr. Wang
came into the classroom. I was so afraid that I didn't know what to do at that time. To my surprise, he
wasn't angry with me. Instead, he told me copying homework wasn't good for me and then he said he
could help me if I needed help. I was so moved that I decided not to copy anyone's homework
anymore.From then on, I did my homework by myself. And with his help, I made great progress in
math.
I will never forget Mr. Wang. I hope he will be happy and healthy in the future.
五、写作训练一
【参考范文】
I'll graduate from my junior high school. At the moment of looking back at the three ycars and looking
forward to the senior high school,many words have come to my mind.
The first to come into my mind are my teachers.It's quite unbelievable that they've spent more than
1,000 days with us. In fact,we are more than teachers and students. With their help,I've made great progress
especially in English and math. What's more, I even got into the top three in our class once. Besides study,I
also enjoy myself in doing other things, including joining in clubs and doing sports with nice classmates.
In a word, my junior high school life is an unforgettable experience. And I believe my senior high school will
be more meaningful.
六、写作训练二
【参考范文】
Dear new friends,
It’s my pleasure to write you this letter.
First of all, I’ d like to say “welcome” to you all. Then I want to introduce our school. Here you will learn some
interesting lessons. You can learn English from some foreign teachers. Our school will also organise some
interesting after-school activities which can make your school life colourful.
Last but not least, do you want to be a qualified middle school student? If you do, I have some suggestions for
you. First, you must study hard. Second, you must follow school rules. Third, be friendly to your classmates and be
ready to help them.
Best wishes!
Yours,
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Li Ping
七、写作训练三
【参考范文】
My Life in Middle School
I have studied in my middle school for three years. My life in middle school was rich and I have learned a
lot. Our school is so nice. There are many flowers and trees in the school. They make me feel healthy. I made a lot
of friends in my school. They often helped me when I was in trouble. Our teachers were friendly and patient,
especially my English teacher.
She often helped me with my English. So my favorite subject was English. I liked sports, too. In my free time,
I often played basketball or football with friends. It was good for my health and it helped me relax when I was busy
studying.
In a word, my life in middle school was colorful and unforgettable.
八．实战中考1
【参考范文】
Boys and girls,
My name is Li Hua. Today I' m glad to share my ideas about how to be good students.
First of all, we must love our country and home. And we should also be honest and thankful to
the people who help us. Secondly, we should work hard and be creative in study. Next, exercise can
make us strong and confident. We should do more exercise to keep healthy. After that, we are
expected to enjoy the beauty in our 1ife. If we pay attention to the nature, we will find the beauty
everywhere. So we must protect the environment. Finally, in our free time, we should take an active
part in different actives like planting trees.
All in all, if we show our 1ove in our daily life, we can be anything we want.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
九．实战中考2
Dear Alan
How is it going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday on the school sports field.
Knowing that you are fond of music, I'm writing to invite you to join us.
The festival will start at 10: 00 am and last about two hours. Students from my school will give
fantastic performances, including playing the violin, piano, guitar and so on. Besides, we can sing
songs and dance to music. Meanwhile, some of my classmates will sell tickets and I will work at a
food stand. All of the money will go to charity
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
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