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人教版九全册Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to.
写作主题：音乐和电影
一、话题分析
本单元话题是“音乐和电影”，围绕这一话题谈论和表达喜好。而最能全面体现本单元话题及语言运
用能力的话题作文就是根据提示或表格信息，谈论自己的喜好或介绍他人的喜好。这也是单元测试和中考
试题中常考的话题作文之一。
二、写作方法
“总分总法”写喜欢的歌曲等作文：
1．总-点明所喜欢的歌曲等;
2. 分-介绍歌曲等对自己的帮助或影响、喜欢它的理由等;
3. 总-总结评价，表达期待。
三、素材积累
写喜欢的歌曲等作文常用词汇：
which, that, music, song, movie, book, cheer up,make my life more enjoyable and convenient, different kinds
of,amazed, with the help of,not only...but also...
写喜欢的歌曲等作文常用句型：
It's possible for us to ...
My favorite kind of music/movie/... is...
I like...because...It was...by...
When I listen to/watch/...it,I feel...
I think you should listen to/watch/...it too because...
四、实例讲解
【写作任务】(Section B 3a＆3b)
最近某中学生英文报的Movies专栏正在征稿，主题为“你最喜欢的一部电影”，请你写一篇短文给该
专栏投稿。
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调
体裁：说明文
时态：一般现在时
人称：以第三人称为主
2. 谋布局、写句子
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3. 巧衔接
(1) 在本文中，第一次提到“我最喜欢的电影”时用名词短语my favorite movie，再次提到时
用it代替。这种用代词指称前面事物的方法，也是使文章保持连贯的一种衔接手段。
(2) 通过词汇的重复(excited, exciting)，能达到突出主题的目的，也可以起到篇章纽带的作用。
(3) 本文中的 was directed by ..., is set in ..., tells the story of ... 等表达都与描述电影有关，这是
通过语义搭配使文章连贯的一种衔接手段。
4. 成篇章
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5. 化“平凡”为“非凡”
The movie was directed by Jon Watts. He is a famous American director. → The movie was directed
by Jon Watts who is a famous American director.
五、写作训练一
假如你叫张丹，你喜欢听轻柔而舒缓的音乐，而且还有其他的爱好。请根据提示给你的笔友Jack写
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一封电子邮件。
提示：1.你刚刚考完试，很高兴有时间给他写邮件并谈一下你的爱好；
2.你喜欢轻柔而舒缓的音乐并说一下理由；
3.你喜欢健身，每天都坚持做运动；
4.你喜欢读科普类的书籍并说一下理由。
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六、写作训练二
假如你是刘健，你很喜欢音乐，你的美国笔友Susan和你有相同的爱好，她想了解你的具体情况。请
根据电子邮件内容回复她。
Dear Liu Jian,
How are you doing? I'm glad you also like music.Can you tell me why you like music? What kind of music
do you prefer? And which song do you like best? Why?
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Susan
要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范；
2.80词左右。
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七、中考作文改编
【写作任务】(改编自2018云南曲靖书面表达)
提示：人的进步和发展缘于不断的变化，不论何时何地，总有某个人、某件事、某样东西……或大或小，
或多或少地改变了你的观念、你的态度和你的生活，让你的人生得到升华。请以“_____ Changed Me”为题，
写一篇英语短文。如 Sports / Music / A Book / A Movie / A Teacher ... Changed Me
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要求：1. 补全并抄写题目，短文词数80左右。2. 语言流畅，内容连贯，书写规范，卷面整洁。3. 文中
不能使用你的真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计。
【思路点拨】
定基调
体裁：说明文
时态：一般过去时和一般现在时
人称：以第一人称为主
谋布局、写句子
巧衔接
①文中在描述音乐带给我的益处时，使用了平行结构When I am ..., music / it ...，这样使得句子之间衔
接紧凑，在语义上有明显的统一性和连贯性。
②文章开头部分提到了“我认为音乐已经改变了我的生活” ，在结尾部分用Music really changed me a
lot印证了主题，这样使得文章前后呼应，结构完整。
化“平凡”为“非凡”
I can’t imagine what my life without music would be like. →My life without music would be like a
night sky without stars.
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人教版九全册Unit9 I like music that I can dance to.
写作主题：音乐和电影
实例讲解
答案
2. 谋布局、写句子
(1) The movie is set in Europe
(2) The movie tells the story of how Spider-Man Peter Parker saves the earth
(3) Peter puts on his Spider-Man suit
(4) Every time I watch the movie, I feel very excited
(5) it is the most exciting movie that I have ever watched
【参考范文】
Spider-Man: Far From Home is my favorite movie. It was directed by Jon Watts. He is a
famous American director. It is set in Europe and tells the story of how Spider-Man Peter Parker
saves the earth. When Peter enjoys his life as a teenager on a European vacation with his friends,
threats to the earth appear. Peter puts on his Spider-Man suit and uncovers the mystery of several
elemental creature attacks. Every time I watch the movie, I feel very excited. It shows us Peter’s
courage to fight against threats to the earth. I think you should watch it too because it is the
most exciting movie that I have ever watched.
写作训练一
Dear Jack,
I have just finished the exams. I am happy I have time lo write to you about my own favorites. I like to enjoy music
that is quiet and slow, which I think can make me feel easy and set me free. I do sports every day to build up my
body and keep healthy. Most of the time I prefer books that are on popular science. I think that popular science
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books are interesting and give me something to think about. I'm sure I can learn more from reading popular science
books.What kind of music do you like? Can you tell me?
Yours,
Zhang Dan
写作训练二
Dear Susan,
l'm happy that we have the same hobby and we can talk about music together. l like music because music relaxes
me and brings me pleasure. It also makes me forget things that make me sad.l prefer pop music because it is oien
about everyday life and it is easy to learn. Something Just Like This is my favorite song. I like it best because its
lyrics are very moving and educational. When I listen to it,I can feel its power. It makes me confident enough to
face challenges in my life.
Yours,
Liu Jian
中考作文改编
Music Changed Me
I can’t imagine what my life without music would be like. I believe that music has changed my life.
I used to fight over almost everything with my friends, so I had no friends and felt lonely. Once, while I was
traveling, I heard a song about friendship. It reminded me of my friends who I fought with. I realized that I
had hurt them and I learnt how to get on with my friends.
From then on, I fell in love with music. Now I often listen to music because it helps me a lot.
When I am in trouble, music gives me courage. When I am very tired, it relaxes me. When I am angry, it
makes me calm down. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it’s good for my health.
Music really changed me a lot and it has been a part of my life.
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