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九年级期末题型突破 20 材料作文
材料作文
1今年的新型冠状病毒（COVID-19），让我们体验到了健康的重要性，明白了对
抗病毒最有效的药就是自己的抵抗力。只要我们提前做好预防，就可以在很大程度上
避免疾病的侵扰。请根据以下提示，写一篇如何预防疾病的作文。
提示：
1. 养成良好的生活习惯，如：健康饮食，适度运动等。
2. 要乐观（optimistic），有积极的心态。
3. 劳逸结合。
4. 补充自己的观点。
要求：
1. 书写规范,行文流畅，表达连贯,可根据内容适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实的地区、学校及姓名。
3. 不少于100词。
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【答案】例文
This year's COVID-19 has brought us to the importance of health. What can we do to
avoid this disease?
First of all, develop good living habits, such as: healthy diet, proper exercise and so on.
Secondly, be optimistic and have a positive attitude. An optimistic attitude helps the body to
be in the best condition and not easy to get sick. Thirdly, have a proper balance between work
and rest. Long term fatigue will reduce resistance. The most important thing is that you don't
have to be afraid. If you get sick, you should see a doctor as soon as you can.
【详解】
题干解读：本文是材料作文，认真阅读材料，确定本文时态文章结构。本文时态是一
般现在时。所给材料要全部用上，根据内容适当发挥。注意写作的顺序。书写要规范，
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行文要流畅，表达要连贯。注意语法、拼写和标点符号等。
例文点评：本文采用总分写法，第1段总写预防新冠需要采取一些措施。第2段写预
防新冠采取的具体措施。所给材料全部用上，并适当发挥。书写规范，行文流畅，表
达连贯，没有语法、拼写和标点符号错误，是一篇优秀例文。
高分亮点：
短语：bring sth. to sb.；first of all；such as；and so on；be in the best condition；between
… and …；as soon as you can等。
（1）动词不定式做目的状语：What can we do to avoid this disease?（2）祈使句表示建
议：develop good living habits/ be optimistic and have a positive attitude/ have a proper
balance between work and rest（3）表语从句：The most important thing is that you don't
have to be afraid. （4）条件状语从句：If you get sick, you should see a doctor as soon as
you can.
2．本学期，我省中小学采取网上授课的教学方式。有些同学取得很大进步，也有
些同学成绩下滑。对此，你有什么看法呢？ 请以“What do you think of learning
online? ”为题，谈谈你的切身感受。
提示信息：
1）网络直播课是学校避免疾病传播的一种教学方式：（spread 传播 v.）
2）作业形式丰富多样：（all kinds of）
3）课后可以观看回放：（playback 回放n.）
4）一些同学对自己要求不严格、不认真听讲、不按时完成作业；
5）Wi-Fi不好，导致网课不能顺利进行：（go on well）
……
注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
What do you think of learning online?
At the beginning of this term, we started having online lessons. Some students made
great progress, while others found themselves far behind their classmates.
As for me, I think…
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【答案】例文
What do you think of learning online?
At the beginning of this term, we started having online lessons. Some students made
great progress, while others found themselves far behind their classmates.
As for me, I think learning online is a teaching method to avoid the spread of disease in
schools, and the homework is of various forms. We can record videos and share them with
our classmates online.
One of the advantages of online teaching is that the video lesson can be played back
after class. It means you can re-read what you don't understand, which is of course very
beneficial to students.
However, every coin has two sides. Some students are not strict with themselves. They
do not listen carefully or finish their homework on time. If a student is managed by a teacher
in class, of course he may be more serious. But if teaching online, the teacher can't see what
they are doing, the probability of a student wandering is probably much higher than before.
What’s more, If Wi-Fi is not good, it will cause the online lessons not to go on well.
I think students should communicate with teachers on the network teaching platform.
Through communication, students can get answers to questions. Teachers can also understand
the students and encourage students to learn.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文要求根据所给信息，以“What do you think of learning online? ”为题，
谈谈你的切身感受。首先认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能
要用到的表达；我们需要用正确的英语把所给出的要点表达出来，然后紧扣要点，动
笔写作。
2.例文点评：文章在介绍的时候时态用一般现在时，人称用第三人称，文章紧扣题目
要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：share… with；the advantages of；What’s more；communicate with；encourage
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students to learn.
句型：which引导非限制性定语从句。It means you can re-read what you don't understand,
which is of course very beneficial to students.
宾语从句I think students should communicate with teachers on the network teaching
platform.
3．假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Linda的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分，请
你阅读后回复，词数80左右。
Subject:
From: Linda
To: Li Ping
…
I’m really looking forward to meeting your brother when he comes to Rome in the
summer. I can show him around the city! Please tell me something about him! How old
is he? What does he look like? What kind of person is he and what’s he interested in?
Hope to hear from you soon.
Love,
Linda
Subject:
From: Li Ping
To: Linda
Dear Linda,
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Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】Dear Linda,
Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome. Now let me tell you
something about my brother. He is thirteen years old, easy-going and humorous-we get along
really well. He loves different cultures. He is interested in museums and likes trying local
food.
My brother is also cute. He’s of medium height with short straight black hair. He is good
at Chinese kungfu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans.
Thanks again for your help!
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们对Linda的电子邮件进行回复。写作前，应先阅读Linda的来信，了
解信中她想知道的事情，然后有针对性地给她进行介绍。审题可知，Linda在信中提到
她想要了解你哥哥的一些情况，她提出了三个问题，“他多大了”；“他是什么样子
的”；“他是怎样的人以及他的兴趣”，回信中应对Linda的这些提问进行回答，并
根据表达的需要，补充一些细节内容，使文章更加充实、丰富。短文应使用一般现在
时、第三人称来叙述，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意：首先内容应符合题
目要求，并且叙述要注意层次和结构；其次应注意英语的表达问题，应符合英文句式
的特点以及表达习惯，不能写汉语式的英语。可以简单句结构为主，穿插并列句、复
合句以及其他复杂句式和结构，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，
使文意连贯、自然。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者以李平的身份给Linda写了回信，介绍了哥哥的一
些情况。首先短文内容符合题目要求，按照Linda在来信中的提问，介绍了哥哥的年
龄、外貌、兴趣爱好等信息。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时、
第三人称单数来叙述，符合题目要求，尤其注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化，
这是学生们学习中的一个难点。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中主要使
用了简单句、并列句和复合句，还使用了非谓语动词，如动词不定式、现在分词等。
文章中较好的句型和短语有：Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around
Rome.、He is thirteen years old, easy-going and humorous-we get along really well. 、He is
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interested in museums and likes trying local food.、He’s of medium height with short straight
black hair.、 He is good at Chinese kungfu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans.等等。
4.下周一下午轮到你在英语课上做课堂报告, 你打算把你爸爸最近网购的音乐机器
人（music robot）介绍给同学们。下图是关于这个音乐机器人的广告, 请你根据所提供
的信息写一份发言稿。
我是能听会说的小音乐机器人,只要你对我说歌曲的名字, 我就能唱给你听。我还有其
他本领……
参考词汇:small, clever, ask it about weather, problems in study, remind you of
important dates, convenient
要求:1. 参考提示, 可适当发挥；
2. 语句涌顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现个人真实信息；
Good morning, everyone! Here, I’d like to introduce the music robot my father
bought online.
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【答案】Good morning, everyone! Here, I'd like to introduce the music robot my father
bought online. It is small, so you can even carry it in your backpack. After you connect it to
the Internet and speak to it, it can provide different kinds of services. For example, you just
say, "Ding Dong, I want to listen to SHE's songs" ,and it will play their songs immediately.
You can also ask it about weather or even your problems in study. Besides, it can remind you
of important dates and so on.
I am so amazed at my music robot because it makes my life more enjoyable and
convenient. I really love it!
【解析】
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【分析】
这篇书面表达主要描述爸爸最近给“我”买的音乐机器人。
【详解】
这是篇材料作文。内容上首先要介绍这个音乐机器人，其次表达为什么“我”要介绍
这个机器人，也就是对它的喜爱。在写作时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，
在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合
适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
5．近来，《朗读者》、《中国诗词大会》等电视节目播出后，全国掀起了全民阅读的
热潮。由此可见，阅读对于每个人的成长都有着举足轻重的作用。请你就此写一篇短
文，谈谈你的看法。内容包括：
1. 你或你同学的因阅读而受益的一次经历(详细过程)以及这次经历的对你的影响；
2. 你对阅读提些建议（不少于2点）；
3. 呼吁同学们多阅读不同有益的书籍。
作文要求：
1. 不能抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名；
2. 语句连贯，词数90个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
As we all know, books are our friends and through reading, we can learn many
useful things.
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【答案】As we all know, books are our friends and through reading, we can learn many
useful things. When I was in primary school. I had a lot of difficulty in writing compositions.
I just didn’t know what to write. Then my teacher advised me to read more books and
recommended me some good ones. After a term, I had made great progress. From then on, I
fell in love with reading.
I’d like to give you some advice about reading. First, you should choose books that are
good for you. Also, when you are reading, you’d better take some notes.
Reading is so good for us. So read more books that are helpful.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们对阅读的作用发表自己的看法。审题可知，这篇短文应使用一般现
在时和一般过去时、第一人称为主来叙述。短文应包括以下内容：首先介绍自己或同
学因阅读而受益的一段经历，并阐述其影响；接下来对阅读提出自己的建议；最后呼
吁同学们都多读书、读好书。题目中只给出了提纲，具体的内容需要学生们自己发挥
想象力，联系自己的日常生活进行写作，这是写作中的一个难点。写作时应注意，英
语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不要按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，
写完整的句子。如可以使用较常见的主谓宾或主系表结构，这种句式易于掌握。为提
升作文档次，应穿插并列句和复合句，以及其他复杂句式。同时注意语句之间使用恰
当的连接成分，使文意连贯。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求介绍了自己对阅读的看法。短文有以下
几个优点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中要求的三个要点。文章主要包括三部分
内容：首先作者介绍了自己小学时因阅读而提高了写作水平的经历，并阐述了这次经
历的影响；接下来作者对阅读提出了自己的建议，比较合理；最后作者呼吁同学们都
来读书。各部分内容结构清晰，叙述有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态、人称，
语法规范，用词准确；句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文以一般现在时和一
般过去时、第一人称为主来叙述，注意了谓语动词的正确形式。句式结构以简单句为
主，表达清楚。文章中使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如When I was in primary school.
I had a lot of difficulty in writing compositions.、Then my teacher advised me to read more
books and recommended me some good ones.、First, you should choose books that are good
for you.、Reading is so good for us等等。
6．10月28日上午，重庆市万州区一辆大巴车和小轿车发生碰撞，大巴车坠入江中造
成多人死亡。事故的原因是由于司机乘客激烈争执互殴导致车辆失控。事发后，坠江
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事件引发了很多人的思考。请你结合下表，选择其中一个对象，谈谈你认为乘车过程
中，司机和乘客究竟该如何做？阐述你的观点。
Advice for drivers Advice for passengers
drive carefully follow the rules
keep cool be friendly, make requests politely
call the police if ... not have a fight with...
. . . . . .
注意:(1)短文必须包括你所选择一方的所有要点，并适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(3)词数:80~100；
(4)短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。
As we know, one month ago, the accident that a Chongqing bus fell into the river was
caused by a fight between the driver and the passenger. So as a _________(driver/
passenger),
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【答案】As we know, one month ago, the accident that a Chongqing bus fell into the river
was caused by a fight between the driver and the passenger. So as a driver, you are supposed
to keep calm in this condition. Your every decision is concerned with the life of all the
passengers. You should drive carefully to ensure the safety of the passengers. If someone
becomes mad and loses control of himself, you mustn’t lose yours. You can call the police at
once and wait for the policeman to deal with it. Besides, you can also stop the car on the
roadside first, and then deal with the disagreement with him. I think if we keep calm and
think the safety first, we can prevent similar things from happening.
【解析】
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【详解】
这篇作文要求我们对10月28日发生的公交车坠江事件，阐述自己的观点。题目要求
学生们从司机和乘客中选择一个对象，谈一谈在乘车过程中，作为司机或乘客应该怎
样做。表格中分别列出了写作的提纲。因此写作之前，学生们应首先选择一个对象，
或者从司机的角度，或者从乘客的角度进行叙述；然后根据表格中的提示，丰富更多
的细节内容，使文章内容丰富、充实，然后用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知，短文
应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主、第二人称来叙述，注意谓语动词的正确形式。另
外，英语句子的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，写作时不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉
语式的英语，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。如可以简单句结构为主，穿
插并列句和复合句结构，或使用非谓语动词、被动语态等复杂结构或其他好的句型和
短语，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者从司机的角度，叙述了在这种情况下应该怎么做，保
证乘客们的安全，避免类似事情的发生。短文有如下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，
结构清晰，叙述清楚、明了。作者根据表格中的提示，并补充了更多的细节信息，使
文章内容更加充实。其次短文语法规范，使用了正确的时态和人称；用词准确，句式
结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、宾语从
句、状语从句等复合句。文章中还使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如So as a driver, you
are supposed to keep calm in this condition. 、Your every decision is concerned with the life
of all the passengers.、You can call the police at once and wait for the policeman to deal with
it. 、Besides, you can also stop the car on the roadside first, and then deal with the
disagreement with him.、I think if we keep calm and think the safety first, we can prevent
similar things from happening.等。
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