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【写作备考】2026年高中英语读后续写专练6

【写作备考】2026年高中英语读后续写专练6

浙江省浙江四校(含精诚联盟)2025-2026学年第二学期高一年级3月四校联考

阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was our first winter in Chicago. Just as the animals were hibernating (冬眠), it seemed that so were our new neighbors. As newcomers, we felt alone. 
Then something happened. It all began with a simple request from our eight-year-old daughter. “Mommy, let's put up a Christmas tree at home. ”
At first, we didn't pay too much attention to this request, for we had never put up a Christmas tree. But my daughter's repeated request made us go ahead with this first step: loaded with layers of clothing to fight the unfamiliar cold, we tasked ourselves with finding a tree for our daughter. 
When we finally selected our tree, we realized we didn't have a car big enough to get it home. Of course, we had not considered that. It was our first time. We had no choice but to carry it home. We had walked only a few steps when a gentleman in our neighborhood stopped his truck and offered us a ride home. Our first friend. 
The Christmas tree was propped up (支起) in our living area but it was too dark. We needed Christmas lights! So the next evening, we went to a store and asked for lights. The storekeeper, who, after getting over the surprise of our seemingly silly questions, explained to us that we needed multi-colored lights. Thanking the kind soul, we left with our lights and his warmth. Our second friend. 
That night, we carefully wound the lights around the tree and excitedly held our breaths for the beauty of the first glow. Still, it looked like something was missing: small ornaments (装 饰) . Where would we get them? One lady across the street had a breathtaking tree carefully placed in a window for all to see. Every night, I stood behind the curtain, spending unnatural amounts of time studying the bells and whistles in her tree. 
注意:
1. 续写词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One evening, seeing the lady clearing snow off her sidewalk, I made a decision. 
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【参考答案】
I walked over and offered to help. As we worked, I mentioned our Christmas tree and how much I admired her ornaments. She smiled warmly and invited me into her home. To my surprise, she had a box filled with extra ornaments that she no longer used. She handed it to me with a kind smile, saying, "Here, take these. I hope they'll make your tree just as beautiful as mine." With tears in my eyes, I thanked her profusely. That evening, our tree was finally complete, and it was truly a sight to behold. Our third friend had helped us create a Christmas we would never forget.
【解析】
【导语】本文讲述了作者一家在芝加哥度过的第一个冬天的故事。八岁的女儿希望家里有棵圣诞树,于是他们尝试装饰。尽管遇到了困难,如没有大车运树和缺少装饰品,但他们得到了邻居的帮助,不仅运回了树,还得到了美丽的装饰品。通过这个过程,他们不仅感受到了节日的温暖,也结交了新朋友,找到了归属感。
【详解】1. 段落续写:根据首句内容“一天晚上,看到那位女士正在清理人行道上的积雪,我做出了一个决定。”可知,这段应该描述作者主动帮助女士并请教如何装饰圣诞树的过程。
2. 续写线索:提供帮助——聊装饰———得到帮助——完成装饰——感谢
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①递:hand/pass/send
②提供帮助:offer to help/give a hand to her/do her a favour
情绪类
①惊讶:to my surprise/surprisingly/to my amazement
②感谢:thank her profusely/be grateful/show my gratitude
③欣赏:admire/appreciate/enjoy
【点睛】【高分句型1】As we worked, I mentioned our Christmas tree and how much I admired her ornaments.(由as引导的时间状语从句)【高分句型2】To my surprise, she had a box filled with extra ornaments that she no longer used.(由关系代词that引导的限制性定语从句)
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