第六十三期 试题研究 2026年山西省中考英语试题研究——书面表达

书面表达（共15分）

 在成长的过程中，每一次突破往往始于“一小步”：是不会骑车的你开始学骑自行车；是擅长跑步的你再次刷新自己的最好记录；是内向的你主动参加志愿服务……迈出这“一小步”，你就突破了自我。你校英语社团将举办以“A small step, a big breakthrough(突破)”为主题的演讲活动，请结合自己的亲身经历，用英语写一篇演讲稿。

写作要点必须包含三点：

1. what small steps are in your eyes

2. one of your experiences of taking a small step

3. the influence that the experience has on you

考场硬性要求

1. 词数不少于80词，给定开头结尾不计入总词数；

2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名。

Hello, everyone! In my eyes, small steps are the effort to learn something new and the courage to put up my hand in class. These small steps bring out the best in me.

I still remember working out a problem quickly in a math class. However, afraid of making a mistake, I hid my hands under the desk. Just then, I caught the teacher’s encouraging look. Taking a deep breath, I slowly raised my hand. My voice shook at first, but as I explained the steps clearly, my fear gradually disappeared. It was through this small step that I made a breakthrough.

 Not only do I feel more confident now, but I can also face challenges bravely. Remember: take one small step today, and you will see yourself grow. That’s all. Thank you!

板块1：第一段——开篇点题，回答要点①：what small steps are in your eyes

原句：In my eyes, small steps are the effort to learn something new and the courage to put up my hand in class. These small steps bring out the best in me.

1. 高分短语积累

- in my eyes 在我看来（演讲稿万能开篇短语）

- bring out the best in sb 激发出某人最好的一面（中考书面表达黄金搭配）

2. 写作思路：不空洞喊口号，把“一小步”具象化为「学习新事物的努力+课堂举手的勇气」，贴合学生日常，真实不浮夸。

板块2：第二段——叙事主体，完成要点②：亲身经历（核心叙事段）

完整故事线：算出数学难题→害怕犯错不敢举手→看到老师鼓励的眼神→深呼吸举手发言→起初紧张，慢慢克服恐惧，完成自我突破

1. 细节描写加分词（阅卷老师最爱细节）

- afraid of making a mistake 害怕犯错（心理描写）

- caught the teacher’s encouraging look 撞见老师鼓励的目光（画面感）

- Taking a deep breath 深呼吸（动作细节）

- My voice shook at first 声音发抖（神态细节）

- fear gradually disappeared 恐惧慢慢消散（心理变化）

2. 满分强调句型（作文提分高级句式）

It was through this small step that I made a breakthrough.

翻译：正是这小小的一步，让我实现了突破。

考点：It is/was …that… 强调句，中考英语写作加分高级句型，普通学生很少主动使用，拉开分差。

板块3：第三段——升华感悟，对应要点③：这件事带给我的影响

原句：Not only do I feel more confident now, but I can also face challenges bravely. Remember: take one small step today, and you will see yourself grow.

1. 倒装高级句型（必背）

Not only do I… but I can also… 我不仅……还能……

语法亮点：否定词放句首，句子部分倒装，书面表达阅卷加分句型。

2. 结尾金句（演讲稿万能收尾）

take one small step today, and you will see yourself grow.

今日迈出一小步，你终将看见自己成长。适配所有成长类作文，可直接背诵套用。

素材1：学骑自行车替换版（叙事段改写）

I still remember I couldn’t ride a bike months ago. I fell down many times and wanted to give up. But I told myself to try one more time. Holding the handlebars tightly, I kept moving forward slowly. Finally, I rode alone without help. It was through this small step that I made a breakthrough.

素材2：参加志愿服务替换版（叙事段改写）

I used to be a quiet boy and dared not talk with strangers. Last month, I took part in volunteer work. At first I was nervous to greet people. But I forced myself to speak softly. Soon I communicated with visitors naturally. It was through this small step that I made a breakthrough.

素材3：长跑刷新记录替换版（叙事段改写）

I was weak in running before. I decided to run 10 minutes every morning. Every time I wanted to stop, I kept taking another step. Month by month, I broke my running record in the PE test. It was through this small step that I made a breakthrough.

1. 开篇观点句

In my eyes, small steps are the courage to try new things.

在我看来，一小步就是尝试新事物的勇气。

2. 心理描写句

Afraid of failing, I wanted to give up at once.

因为害怕失败，我一度想立刻放弃。

3. 动作细节句

Taking a deep breath, I decided to have a try.

深吸一口气，我决定试一试。

4. 高级强调句

It was this small step that changed me a lot.

正是这一小步，彻底改变了我。

5. 倒装升华句

Not only am I braver, but I also believe in myself now.

我不仅变得更勇敢，现在也更加相信自己。

6. 演讲稿万能金句

Take small steps every day, and you will achieve big progress.

每天迈出小小一步，你终将收获巨大进步。

1. 三大要点必须全部覆盖，缺一点直接扣3-4分：

①解释你眼里的small steps ②亲身经历叙事 ③这件事对你的影响

2. 字数底线：80词以上，低于80词降档扣分；开头结尾不计入词数，不用刻意删减。

3. 禁用真实人名、学校名，出现直接扣2分。

4. 演讲稿格式：开头Hello everyone! 结尾That’s all. Thank you! 固定格式不能丢。

5. 时态统一：叙事经历用一般过去时；观点、感悟用一般现在时，时态混用会大幅扣分。