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六级写译|2025年6月第三套(AI与创造力)

六级写译|2025年6月第三套(AI与创造力)
2025年6月第三套|四天周期第3天(最后一套)。今天处理第三套完整作文与翻译。紫色为下次换题仍可套用的功能句,橙色为必须根据本题替换的主题内容。明天(第4天)做前三套全文总结。

一、作文原题(完整,含 Directions 与指定开头句)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay that begins with the sentence “With the increasing application of AI technology, there is a growing concern that it may negatively impact human creativity. You can make comments, cite examples or use your personal experiences to develop your essay. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. You should copy the sentence given in quotes at the beginning of your essay.

二、三篇完整三段式范文(150—200词)

范文A|工具定位—独立练习—评价标准(约185词)

With the increasing application of AI technology, there is a growing concern that it may negatively impact human creativity. Whether this concern becomes reality depends less on the tools themselves than on the habits of the people who use them.

What matters most is the way we treat AI as a starting point rather than a final answer. A student who asks a model for three possible openings and then rewrites them in her own voice keeps her judgement active. Equally important is the discipline of practising original work without assistance. Musicians, designers and writers all need unassisted hours to build the instincts that no recommendation system can supply. Beyond the individual level, teachers and employers should reward the quality of the final idea rather than the speed of its production, because whatever is measured is what people will learn to imitate.

In short, AI is more likely to sharpen creativity than to replace it, provided that humans remain the ones who choose, revise and take responsibility. Only when the tool serves a purpose we have defined ourselves can it enlarge our imagination instead of quietly shrinking it.

范文B|历史类比—便利代价—稀缺技能(约190词)

With the increasing application of AI technology, there is a growing concern that it may negatively impact human creativity. History suggests that new tools rarely delete a human capacity outright; they redistribute where our effort is spent.

The first safeguard is to notice that convenience can quietly replace struggle. Learning to write badly, revise and fail is how judgement is built, and skipping that stage saves time at the cost of skill. Another source of value lies in collaboration between human intention and machine suggestion: a designer may generate fifty sketches in a minute and still need taste to choose the one worth building. What this shift finally reveals is that the scarce skill is no longer producing content but deciding what deserves to exist. Schools that teach evaluation, context and ethics will prepare students better than those that ban or worship the technology.

Therefore, the danger is not the technology itself but an uncritical dependence on it. Responsible action becomes visible when we keep asking what we are trying to express before asking how quickly it can be generated.

范文C|医学生学习场景论证(约185词)

With the increasing application of AI technology, there is a growing concern that it may negatively impact human creativity. For a medical student, the question is practical rather than philosophical.

Consider what happens when a diagnostic suggestion arrives before the student has read the case carefully. Accepting it saves effort, yet the habit of reasoning from symptoms to mechanism quietly weakens. What the same example shows is that AI is most useful after independent thinking, not instead of it: a preliminary conclusion is far easier to judge once a hypothesis already exists. No less necessary is the willingness to document how a conclusion was reached, because clinical responsibility cannot be delegated to a system that will not attend the next appointment.

To conclude, protecting creativity means using AI to widen our options while keeping judgement and accountability in human hands. When technology enlarges our questions instead of answering them for us, it becomes an ally of imagination rather than a substitute for it.

三、第二段三论点结构分析(三篇句式各不相同)

范文论点1句式论点2句式论点3句式
AWhat matters most is...Equally important is...Beyond the individual level, ... should...
BThe first safeguard is to notice that...Another source of value lies in...What this shift finally reveals is that...
CConsider what happens when...What the same example shows is that...No less necessary is...
为什么不允许用 First / Second / Third:这三词只交代“顺序”,不交代“关系”。上面九种句式分别表达了“最重要”“同等重要”“扩大尺度”“需要注意的风险”“价值来源”“深层含义”“场景切入”“例证含义”“同等必要”,读者读到句子开头就能预判逻辑走向,文章才不像模板填空。

四、可迁移功能句表(紫色,换题仍可用)

功能功能句可迁移到
给定句后接中心判断Whether this concern becomes reality depends less on ... than on ...任何“担忧类”命题
提出最重要一点What matters most is ...建议、品质、方法类
同等重要(表语前置倒装)Equally important is ... / No less necessary is ...并列递进第二、三点
扩大论述尺度Beyond the individual level, ... / What this shift finally reveals is that ...从个人写到社会、制度
借场景开论证Consider what happens when ...需具体例子的题目
点出真正稀缺之物The scarce skill is no longer ... but ...科技、能力、竞争类
结论与升华Only when ... can ... / Responsible action becomes visible when ...第三段收束
让步式收尾... provided that humans remain the ones who ... / more likely to ... than to ...需表明态度的结尾

挖空模板:背功能,不背整篇

[照抄题目给定句] Whether this concern becomes reality depends less on ... than on ...

What matters most is [论点1]. [一个具体场景或例子]. Equally important is the discipline of [论点2]; [为什么重要]. Beyond the individual level, ... should [论点3], because [被衡量的东西会影响行为].

In short, ... is more likely to ... than to ..., provided that ... Only when ... can ...

新题迁移练习(请用上面的功能句,不抄本题内容)

① 题目:“With the growing popularity of short videos, there is a concern that young people are losing the ability to concentrate.” 请写出第一段(给定句+中心判断)与第二段三个论点句(只写论点句,不展开)。
② 题目:“With the rapid development of online education, there is a growing debate about whether it can replace traditional classrooms.” 请把范文B的“第一道防线—价值来源—深层揭示”三段式迁移过去。
③ 自检:三个论点句是否各不相同?是否都用了紫色功能句?橙色主题词是否已按新题全部替换?

五、翻译原文(完整)

自古以来,中国的水资源北缺南丰,分布极不均衡。为了有效解决北方严重缺水问题,中国政府实施了南水北调工程(the South-to-North Water Diversion Project)。这是一项跨区域配置水资源的宏大水利工程。历经数十年的规划与筹备,工程于2002年开工建设,分为东、中、西三条线路,总长4350公里,惠及人口将超过4亿。自2014年通水以来,工程向北方调水累计已超500亿立方米,为北方地区的人民提供了可靠的水资源,同时也极大地改善了这一地区的生态环境,促进了经济的可持续健康发展。

六、逐句拆解:信息骨架、两种译法、可替换表达与时态

1. 自古以来,中国的水资源北缺南丰,分布极不均衡。
原文信息骨架:两件事:一是“北缺南丰”的水情特点,二是“分布极不均衡”的结论。“自古以来”必须有时间信息,不能省略。
稳妥逐点对应译法:稳妥:Since ancient times, China’s water resources have been scarce in the north and abundant in the south, and their distribution has been extremely uneven.
更自然译法:自然:China has long faced a lopsided distribution of water, scarce in the north and plentiful in the south.
可替换词/词组:自古以来=since ancient times / has long;北缺南丰=scarce in the north and abundant in the south;极不均衡=extremely uneven / lopsided。
2. 为了有效解决北方严重缺水问题,中国政府实施了南水北调工程。
原文信息骨架:目的状语(为了有效解决……)+主体动作(实施了……工程);“有效”和“严重”都是实词,不能丢。
稳妥逐点对应译法:稳妥:In order to effectively solve the serious water shortage in the north, the Chinese government launched the South-to-North Water Diversion Project.
更自然译法:自然:To tackle the severe water shortage in northern China, the government initiated the South-to-North Water Diversion Project.
可替换词/词组:为了有效解决=in order to effectively solve / to tackle;严重缺水=serious/severe water shortage;实施=launch/initiate/implement。
3. 这是一项跨区域配置水资源的宏大水利工程。
原文信息骨架:判断句“这是……”+两个修饰(跨区域配置水资源、宏大水利)。注意工程名已给出英文,本句无须重复。
稳妥逐点对应译法:稳妥:This is a massive water conservancy project that allocates water resources across regions.
更自然译法:自然:It is a large-scale hydraulic project designed to redistribute water between regions.
可替换词/词组:跨区域配置=allocate/redistribute across regions;宏大=massive/large-scale;水利工程=water conservancy / hydraulic project。
4. 历经数十年的规划与筹备,工程于2002年开工建设,分为东、中、西三条线路,总长4350公里,惠及人口将超过4亿。
原文信息骨架:一句话含五个信息点:数十年规划筹备、2002年开工、三条线路、总长4350公里、惠及超4亿人。任何一项都不能压缩掉。
稳妥逐点对应译法:稳妥:After decades of planning and preparation, construction began in 2002. The project consists of three routes — eastern, central and western — with a total length of 4,350 kilometres, and will benefit more than 400 million people.
更自然译法:自然:Following decades of planning, work started in 2002. Stretching 4,350 kilometres along three routes, east, central and west, it is expected to serve over 400 million people.
可替换词/词组:历经数十年=after decades of;开工=construction began/work started;分为三条线路=consists of three routes;总长=a total length of;惠及=benefit/serve;将超过=will exceed / is expected to serve over。
5. 自2014年通水以来,工程向北方调水累计已超500亿立方米,为北方地区的人民提供了可靠的水资源,同时也极大地改善了这一地区的生态环境,促进了经济的可持续健康发展。
原文信息骨架:“自……以来”决定时态;“累计已超”要体现总量;“提供”“改善”“促进”三个并列结果都要落地,尤其“极大地”不能丢。
稳妥逐点对应译法:稳妥:Since water began flowing in 2014, the project has transferred more than 50 billion cubic metres to the north. It has provided reliable water for people in the region, greatly improved the local ecological environment, and promoted sustainable and healthy economic development.
更自然译法:自然:Since it began operating in 2014, the project has diverted over 50 billion cubic metres northward, supplying dependable water, restoring the region’s ecology and supporting sustainable economic growth.
可替换词/词组:自……以来=since...(现在完成时);通水=water began flowing / began operating;累计已超=has transferred more than;500亿立方米=50 billion cubic metres;极大地改善=greatly improve;可持续健康发展=sustainable and healthy development。

七、两版完整译文

译文A|稳妥逐点对应版

Since ancient times, China’s water resources have been scarce in the north and abundant in the south, and their distribution has been extremely uneven. In order to effectively solve the serious water shortage in the north, the Chinese government launched the South-to-North Water Diversion Project. This is a massive water conservancy project that allocates water resources across regions. After decades of planning and preparation, construction began in 2002. The project consists of three routes — eastern, central and western — with a total length of 4,350 kilometres, and will benefit more than 400 million people. Since water began flowing in 2014, the project has transferred more than 50 billion cubic metres to the north. It has provided reliable water for people in the region, greatly improved the local ecological environment, and promoted sustainable and healthy economic development.

译文B|自然重组版

China has long faced a lopsided distribution of water, scarce in the north and plentiful in the south. To tackle the severe water shortage in northern China, the government initiated the South-to-North Water Diversion Project, a large-scale hydraulic project designed to redistribute water between regions. Following decades of planning, work started in 2002. Stretching 4,350 kilometres along three routes, east, central and west, it is expected to serve over 400 million people. Since it began operating in 2014, the project has diverted over 50 billion cubic metres northward, supplying dependable water, restoring the region’s ecology and supporting sustainable economic growth.

八、词汇、句型、时态与信息遗漏清单

主题词(12个):water resources;distribution;water shortage;South-to-North Water Diversion Project;water conservancy / hydraulic project;allocate / redistribute;route;total length;benefit / serve;cubic metre;ecological environment;sustainable development。
高频词组(7个):since ancient times;be scarce in ... and abundant in ...;in order to effectively solve;consists of;with a total length of;benefit more than ... people;greatly improve。
经典句型(4个):① Since ancient times, S has been ...;② In order to effectively solve ..., S launched ...;③ After decades of planning and preparation, construction began in ...;④ Since water began flowing in ..., S has transferred more than ...。
时态规律:“自古以来……北缺南丰”用现在完成时(has been ...,强调延续至今);“实施了工程”“于2002年开工”属过去事实,用一般过去时;“分为三条线路、总长4350公里”是客观属性,用一般现在时;“将超过4亿”是将来,用 will benefit;“自2014年通水以来……累计已超”用现在完成时(has transferred),与 since 呼应。
信息遗漏检查(逐项打勾):自古以来 □ 北缺南丰 □ 分布极不均衡 □ 有效解决 □ 严重缺水 □ 中国政府 □ 实施工程 □ 跨区域配置 □ 宏大水利工程 □ 数十年规划与筹备 □ 2002年开工 □ 东中西三条线路 □ 总长4350公里 □ 惠及超4亿人 □ 2014年通水以来 □ 累计超500亿立方米 □ 可靠的水资源 □ 极大改善生态环境 □ 可持续健康发展 □。
最容易漏的三处:①“自古以来”的时间信息;②“进一步/极大地”这类程度副词;③“工作、购物、旅游”式并列细节被压缩成模糊概括。本例中“北缺南丰”“三条线路”“4350公里”“4亿”“500亿立方米”都是硬信息,压缩任何一项都算漏译。
今日打卡:作文原题完整抄录 □ 三篇范文均150—200词、严格三段式 □ 第二段三论点句式各不相同 □ 紫色功能句≥8个 □ 挖空模板完成 □ 新题迁移练习完成 □ 翻译逐句拆解完成 □ 两版完整译文完成 □ 信息清单逐项核对 □

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