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专题 25 短文改错
2024年短文改错
Text 1
【2024全国甲卷】Last week, I saw a program about Chongqing hotpot on TV. I was curious but planned a
special one-day trip there with a friend of me. Our fast train was packing with passengers. A attendant gave us some
travel brochures about Chongqing. When we arrived, we went straight a famous restaurant and ordered dishes,
which tasted greatly. The atmosphere here made the meal all the more enjoyed. Hotpot is meant for families and
friends to sit together, dip everything they like this in one pot, and shared friendship and love.
2023年短文改错
Text 1
【2023年全国乙卷】Last Friday my mom decided to color his hair. She studied with all the hair products at
the drugstore. The color she choose came in a box which had a picture of a woman that hair color looked just
perfect. Mom was sure same color would look great on her. She put the new color on her hair or sat still for 30
minutes, just as the directions saying. However, instead of the brownish red hair she had hoped for, she final got
purple hair. She went right into the shower to washing it, but it was no use. At least one thing proved truth: the color
wouldn’t wash out.
Test 2
【2023年全国甲卷】I used to afraid of insects, but last Friday’ s biology class make a big change in me. In
that class, Miss Zhao, our biology teacher, showed we insects on stamps. The bees, butterfly and many other insects
looked lovely and beautifully on the stamps. Miss Zhao told us the names of the insects or described their living
habits. She even played some recordings of their singing, what was fun. Now, I’ve come to love those of small
living things. In the evening, when I take the walk in the school garden, the singing of insects become more
meaningful to me.
2022年短文改错
Test 1
【2022年全国乙卷】We all know that cycling is a greatly exercise. A doctor tells me people who lives the longestare dancers and cyclists. Maybe it is because the combination of fresh air, smooth movement and exercise. Whether
you ride a bicycle, you don’t use petrol. So they are not producing carbon dioxide and not cause air pollution. Just
see how cars have been taken over our cities. They often run at high speeds, what may put our lives in danger. And
there were traffic jams, too. Our cities will be better places if we replace cars with bicycle.
Test2
【2022年全国甲卷】My father often took me to his hospital when I was off my school. He showed me how
his medical instruments was used. I felt so closely to him. However, after I went to high school, somehow I become
distant from him. I was unwilling talk with him and often disobeyed his rule of not stay out with my friends too
late. The disagreement was too sharp that neither he nor I knew what to settle it. One day, he talked with me or
hoped to mend our relations. With the efforts made by all sides, we began to understand each other better.
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2021年短文改错
Test 1
【2021年全国甲卷】Last week our teacher asked us to fill in a questionnaire. One of the questions are：
Who will you go in times of trouble? Here are the results. Many students say they will talk to their friend or
classmates because they're of the same age and can understand each other. Some will turn out to their parents or
teachers for help. Only a little choose to deal with the problems on our own. Their answers also show that they
dislike talk to others. They kept very much to themselves. In my opinion, where in trouble, we should seek help
from those we trust mostly.
Test 2
【2021年全国乙卷】I love doing housework. I always assist my parents in doing the dish after meals. I also
water the flowers in the yard and tidying up my own bedroom whatever necessary. In my opinion, students can
benefit a lot doing some housework. Firstly, doing housework was helpful for us to be a responsible person. Also, it
gives our parents more time to do what they are like and it improves the family relationship. What’s most, doing
housework can be a form of mentally relaxation from study. That’s our view on housework. And hopes this can
inspire more thinking on the topic!
2020年短文改错Text 1
【2020年新课标Ⅰ】Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and
I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but
put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into
a pan and turned off the stove， I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten
eggs into pan together. ＂Not that way，＂ my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn’t tum out
as I had wished.
Test 2
【2020年新课标Ⅱ】Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve
come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m surely you’ll have a good time. Actually, I start to
learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two
weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on
every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.
Test 3【2020年新课标Ⅲ】My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to
make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad
has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I
tell my mom that if we’re forced eat things, we may become ill.
But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided
by Mom with appreciation.
2019年短文改错
Text 1
【2019年全国卷 Ⅰ】I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where
I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but
almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone`s surprising, the ball
went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From
now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.
Text 2
【2019年全国卷Ⅱ】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中
共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Since I was a kid, I`ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform
looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher
too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered mg goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two
reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after
seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.
Test 3
【2019年全国卷III】 On our way to the house，it was raining ___61___ hard that we couldn't helpwondering how long it would take ___62___ (get)there. It was in the middle of Pearl City.
We were first greeted with the barking by a pack ___63___ dogs，seven to be exact. They were well trained
by their masters ___64___ had great experience with caring for these animals. Our hosts shared many of their
experiences and ___65___(recommend)wonderful places to eat，shop，and visit. For breakfast，we were able to
eat papaya(木瓜)and other fruits from their trees in the backyard.
When they were free from work ，they invited us to local events and let us know of an interesting
___66___(compete)to watch ， together with the story behind it. They also shared with us many
___67___(tradition)stories about Hawaii that were ___68___ (huge)popular with tourists. On the last day of our
week-long stay，we ___69___(invite)to attend a private concert on a beautiful farm on the North Shore under the
stars，___70___ (listen)to musicians and meeting interesting locals.
Test 4
【2019年全国卷III】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中
共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I've had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it
required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe
have a special theme such as like "Tang Dynasty". In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical
environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes
in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.
2018年短文改错
Test 1
【2018 年全国Ⅰ卷】During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my
grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs,
ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens ofchicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by
sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of
our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.
Test 2
【2018年全国Ⅱ卷】 When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we would play
card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I
asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help
my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I
entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my
life.
Test 3
【2018年全国Ⅲ卷】It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to
see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take
part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework but I was shy. I was afraid
that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The
classroom is a place for learning and that include leaning from textbooks, and mistake as well." Immediate, I raised
my hand.
2017年短文改错
Test 1
【2017年新课标Ⅰ卷】In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still
remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so
once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating
the word, ＂Speed up!＂ ＂Slow down!＂ ＂Turning left!＂ I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell
which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a
suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.
Test 2
【2017年新课标Ⅱ卷】 Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes
them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables
in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together.They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet.
When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!
Test 3
【2017年新课标Ⅲ卷】When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not
only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my
second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the
things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying
difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often
brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.
2016年短文改错
Test 1
【2016年新课标Ⅰ卷】My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live .Though not very big, but the
restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait
outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or
high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of
time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.
Test 2
【2016年新课标Ⅱ卷】The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during
the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is
no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden
your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest
nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.
Test 3
Test 5【2016年新课标Ⅲ卷】The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They
were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by
yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one
time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I wasindependent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still
want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.
Test 4
【2016年浙江卷】 When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well
years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we’d greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and
pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they
would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the
fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us
there.
Test 5
【2016年四川卷】It is Mother’s Day today. Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now.
Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I
planned to do something on Mother’s Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went
on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room
and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritiest. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy
Mother’s Day！”Mom was grateful and moving.
2015年短文改错
Test 1
【2015年新课标Ⅰ卷】When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I
am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green.
Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have
been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting
dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to
do so, we’ll live to regret it.
Test 2【2015年新课标Ⅱ卷】One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded.
Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the
toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry.
A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom
said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never
happen again.
Test 3
【2015年浙江卷】
My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit
close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field.
In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.
Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not
enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the
drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I
was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.
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Test 4
【2015 年陕西卷】My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his
retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me
some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My
only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, "I might have
to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits."
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
Test 5
【2015年四川卷】Hi, Janice,
It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I
have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school.We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.
And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their
friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
