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专题 26 书面表达书信类
2024年
Writing 1
【2024新课标Ⅰ&II卷】假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友 Chris写
一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）你完成的作品；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided
to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.
The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity
but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace as
I painted.
In a word, It was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给Chris写一封信, 分享在公园上美术课的经历。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
决定：decide→determine
整个的：entire→whole
提供：offer→provide
总之：in a word→in short
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the
park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.
拓展句：Because I was inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small
bridge over the park’s pond, which was surrounded by blooming flowers.
【点睛】[高分句型1]We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. (that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.(as引导的时间状语从句)
Writing 2
【2024北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投
稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文
给他回复，内容包括：
(1)建议投稿内容；
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary
of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article.
To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights
in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it
showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’s
role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view.
Looking forward to reading your article!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中
国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，要求考生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很好的：great →wonderful
成就：achievement→ accomplishment
建议：suggestion →advice
此外：In addition → what’s more
2.句式拓展
句式变换
原句：It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th
anniversary of the founding of this country.
拓展句：It’s great to hear what you’re planning to write about is China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th
anniversary of the founding of this country.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements,
which are the highlights in the past few decades.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases
China’s determination to build a shared future with the world.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
2023年Writing 1
【2023 ▪新高考I&II卷】
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在
问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议 。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken
English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the
groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation,
leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less
motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own
partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English
together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后
练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先：to begin with → first of all
提高：improve → progress
建议：suggestion → advice
选择：choose → select
.
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own
partners.
拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let
students choose their own partners.
Writing 2
【2023年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主
题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
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Yours，
Li Hua,
【答案】Dear Jim
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am
writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can
participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by
themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will
all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→tip
提供：offer→provide
开展：carry out→conduct
主题：theme→topic
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am
writing to offer you my suggestions.
拓展句：Since you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing
to offer you my suggestions.
2022年
Writing 1
【2022新高考I&II卷】
假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访
谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
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__________________________________________________Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Caroline,
This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since
Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.
Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it.
As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday,
I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming.
I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是校广播站“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline
写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立：establish→set up
了不起的：amazing→fabulous
帮助：aid→assistance
许多：plenty of→a lot of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot.
拓展句：You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot.
Writing 2
【2022年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写
作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因；
2．交流时间和其他相关事项。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Jim,
How’s everything?
I’m writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing. Our classmates seem to be weak in
organisation. Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a
paragraph, and how to structure an essay?
The talk will last about an hour, and you can decide on a date at your convenience. Please let me know which
platform you’ll use. It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your
talk.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解题导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一份电子邮件，邀请英国好友Jim为班级做一次关于
英语写作的线上经验交流
Writing 3
【2022年浙江1月】假定你是李华， 在“中国-爱尔兰文化节” 活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友 Chris，
现在他已回国， 请你给他 写
一封邮件， 内容包括：
1. 回忆活动经历； 2. 分享个人收获； 3. 希望保持联系。
注意：
1 . 词数 80 左右；2. 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。
答案：
Dear Chris,
How are you doing these days? It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much. I still
remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago. It was at that festival that
you shared so many interesting things about your country together, through which I learned a lot about your food,
culture and history. We really enjoyed ourselves there. What’s far more important is that we became good friends
then. Though I felt a little sorry that you left China last year, I am pleased to know you are leading a happy life in
your hometown.
I hope we can keep in touch often.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在文化节上结识的外国朋友写一封信叙旧。
【详解】1.词汇积累
返回：come back to → return to
思念：miss→ yearn
分享：share → exchange
玩得开心：enjoy oneself→ have a good time → have fun
开心的：pleased→ happy →delight→ content
过着快乐的生活：lead a happy life→ live a happy life
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句： It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much.
拓展句： It has been a year since you came back to Ireland and I miss you so much.
Writing 4
【2022年浙江卷6月】假定你是李华，你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，请你给你的留学生同学
Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验，内容包括：
1.位置与开放时间； 2.室内设施和功能。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________
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【范文】
Dear Michael,
Good news ! Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open
to us students in our school library.
Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout
the weekdays. Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the Internet.
It’s really convenient for us to do some group projects. Why not ask our group members to go and experience it?
Early reply and we can reserve one room for our project.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解题导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是李华，你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，请你给你
的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
由……组成：consist of→ be made up of
位于：be located on→ be situated on
与……相连接： be linked to →be connected to
预定：reserve→book
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us
students in our school library.
拓展句：Recently, a newly-furnished section, which consists of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open
2021年
Writing 1
【2021年全国甲卷】假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给
外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
1.阐明写信事由；
2.征求建议；
3.表示感谢。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Chris,
Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional
customs. Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some
advice.
As far as we know, there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries. In order
to get more clicks, you’d better tell me which Chinese culture you westerners prefer. What’s more, if I want
to decorate my website with some Chinese elements, what should I do? Knowing you are interested in China,
I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles.
If possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible. I will take your advice into consideration. I really
appreciate your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 2
【2021年北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意并说明原因；
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend. I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit
my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. I hope the change won’t cause
you too much trouble.
How about going out next Saturday morning? If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at the school gate at 9: 00.
Please let me know what time suits you best. I should be available anytime next weekend.
In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowers
together.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友 Jim写一封电子邮件，就因故不能赴约而致歉并
建议再约。【详解】1.词汇积累
通知：tell→inform
麻烦：problem→trouble
怎么样：what about→how about
适合：fit→suit
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I should be available anytime next weekend.
拓展句：I should be available anytime next weekend so that I can go out with you and have a good time.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend. (运用了that引导的宾
语从句)
[高分句型 2] I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was
suddenly admitted to the hospital. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] Please let me know what time suits you best.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
2020年
Writing 1
【2020·新课标Ⅲ】
假定你shi 李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指
导。邮件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介；
2. 指导内容；
3. 商定时间地点。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 结束语已为你写好。
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【答案】
Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to
the textbook.
We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English
play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is
going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script,
we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft
script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office
next Tuesday to give you more details?
Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look
forward to your early reply. Best regards!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教 Miss Evans对于《the Steamboat》改编短
剧的支持。第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。
结构：总分总法
第一段说明写这封邮件的目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表
达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
write to；according to ；combine ； adaption ；challenge；attached to ；convenient
第三步：连词成句
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
Writing 2【2020年北京卷】
第一节
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学
在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：
1. 条件及要求；
2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
How are you doing? I hope everything's OK with you.
Our school's drama club plans to start practising. Since you're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be
in your place. Would you please recommend one for us?
He or she should be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in both directing and
teaching.
Thank you for your help. Please take care of yourself. Remember to wear a mask when necessary.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教
师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给 Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指
导教师，内容包括：1. 条件及要求；2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：drama club (戏剧俱乐部)；plan to do sth.(计划做某事)；in
one's place(代替某人)；recommend(推荐)；a native English speaker(以英语为母语的人)；currently (目前)；experienced(熟练的)；both…and…(两者都……)；take care of(照顾)；wear a mask(戴口罩)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在
时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美
观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如
Since you're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place.运用原因状语从句。全文中没有中国
式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然。
2019年
Writing 1
【2019年全国卷 Ⅰ】假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请
做志愿者，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.个人优势；
3.能做的事情。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.结束语已为你写好。
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【答案】
I'm Li Hua, an outgoing boy, who is studying in London. I am writing to apply to be a volunteer of your team,
having heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city. I have some advantages for the job.
First of all, having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child , I have a
good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings. Besides, having a
good knowledge of Chinese paintings because of my familiarity with Chinese painting culture, I can get foreigners
and the locals to know more about it. Last but not least，through my introduction and efforts, I believe, I canstrengthen the friendship between China and England. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into
consideration.
【语篇解读】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。
【详解】1.审题立意
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在式。
2.谋篇布局
书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。
3.关键词
根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇有：volunteer，a Chinese Painting
Exhibition，local city，advantages，a good command of，beneficial for，familiarity with，appreciate ，take
my application into consideration。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存
在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如First of all, Besides, to begin with，moreover，as
for me，Last but not least，等，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。
Writing 2
【2019年全国卷Ⅱ】假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内
容包括:
1.比赛信息；
2.赛前准备；
3.表达期待。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month. The match will take place in our
school gym on the afternoon of July 4th. We will play against the team from HongXing High School. In order to winthe match, we should get fully prepared and practice hard. So from tomorrow, we need to train for two hours after
school every day. Please come to the school gym at 6:30 pm from Monday to Friday.
You’re an excellent player. With you on the team, we are confident that we can win the game. Let’s try hard
together!
Cheers,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
今年的书面表达沿袭近几年的体裁，仍旧是应用文。本次书面表达要求考生写一封邮件告知队友有关比赛
的信息。
【详解】本篇书面表达是一封告知信。首先要告知写信目的；然后简明扼要地告知排球比赛的时间、地点
以及赛前的准备事项，注意事件信息的三要素：时间、地点、人物，要交代清楚；第三则要表达对队友的
期待和鼓励。
Writing 3
【2019年全国卷III】假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容
包括:
1.时间；
2.活动安排；
3.欢迎他表演节目。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【范文】
Dear Allen,
Dear Allen,
How’s everything going? I’m writing to invite you to take part in the Music Festival, which will be
held in the Art Center of our school .
With the aim of enrich our campus life, the Music Festival will start from July 5 to July 7,lasting 3 days. In order to make us know more about Chinese traditional music, the performances will
focus on some classical Chinese musical forms, such as folk songs, Beijing operas as well as playing
some traditional instruments.
As you can imagine, what great fun there will be. Would you like to come and enjoy the excitement
with me? Please do some practice and get ready to play your favorite music at the festival.
Looking forward to your early reply .
Yours,
Li Hua
I am writing to tell you that a music festival will be held in our school We can take part in the music festival
in the school hall next Friday afternoon. In the music festival，we invite some famous singers and pianist to
perform，who will also give some lessons to the students. In addition，some students can have a chance to
cooperate with this musicians. As a music fan，you are bound to participate in the festival. If possible，you are
we I come to perform in the festival，which will be a great experience. Hopefully，you can take part in it and
don't miss the chance.
【解析】
今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。
【详解】首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的，之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息，最后欢迎他表
演节目。
第二，根据提纲，确定关键词语，如：How is everything going? a music festival，in the school hall，The
opening ceremony等。
第三，注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。
Writing 4
【2019年浙江卷6月】假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写
一封邮件，内容包括:
1.表示感谢；
2.回顾Alex对你的帮助；3.临别祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80左右；
2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【写作指导】
这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，
理解要点要表达的含义，不能选漏要点，跑题偏题.本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达，写作
时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使
用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.平时除了加强词汇积累，
写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.
【范文】
Dear Chris,
I am so regretful to know that you are going to return to your home before long. We get along well during
your stay in China and you offered me lots of help. I would like to express my gratitude to you for your help with
my English. While studying in China, you always spent your free time in helping me polish up my oral English. It
is you who shared me with rich knowledge of English and English culture. Never will I forget you and your
kindness. It is my hope that you can remember me as often as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 5
【2019年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海
旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括:
1.交通出行；
2.必备衣物。
注意:1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m pleased that you’re coming to tour in China.
I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and I’ll show you around. Tianjin will be your next stop. After that, you
can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high-speed trains to both cities. Summer in these
cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you.
Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本文是一篇应用文，要求给朋友写回信。
【详解】红星中学高三学生李华的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相
关信息。要求给他回复邮件，内容包括: 1.交通出行； 2.必备衣物。本文时态应采用一般现在时和一般将
来时，用第一人称和第二人称来写。文章可以分为三部分来写：首先表达欢迎 Jim来中国；然后交代交通
出行和必备衣物；最后盼望朋友的到来。注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、
衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。
Writing 6
．【2018年浙江卷11月】假定你是李华，乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一
封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：
1. 行程信息；
2. 钱包特征；3. 联系方式。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to report the loss of my wallet. On 1st November, 2018 I flew business class on your flight 753
from China to London.
I clearly remember it was with me immediately I boarded the plane. However, on arrival in London Heathrow
Airport, I found it gone. I guess it must have slipped out of my pocket during the flight. It is a black leather one
with around 200 dollars, my ID card, and 2 credit cards in it. Along with the items mentioned above, the wallet
contains a family photo, my precious memory. As you can imagine, these matter a lot to me.
Has anybody happened to find it? Please email me at xxx@googlemail.com
Thank you for your time and support.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇考查的写作类型是求助信
【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，本文是一封求助信。李华乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失，要
求给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：1.行程信息；2. 钱包特征；3. 联系方式。
第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：I am writing to report the loss of my wallet. boarded the plane,
on arrival…, I found it gone. it must have……Has anybody happened to find it? Thank you for your time and
support.
第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。时态以一般现在时为主，一
般过去时为辅。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美
观的卷面是非常重要的。
Writing7
【2019年天津卷】假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以
下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
（3）希望从中有何收获。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100：
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris，
I'm Li Jim，a student at Chenguang High School.
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Thank you for your time.
Yours，
Li Jin
【写作指导】
这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，
理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。写
作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意
使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积
累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.
【范文】
Dear Chris，
I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. I got the news that your school will send teachers to my
school for a week-long summer exchange. During the activity，you will give a lecture on Western art. You want
to seek for advice on what topic the lecture will be about. From my personal note，music is my priority.
I am interested in all kinds of music，among which Jazz is my favorite. I want to know about the history ofjazz，and some famous jazz singers. I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions of enjoying jazz.
Thank you for your time.
Yours，
Li Jin
2018年
Writing 1
【2018年全国Ⅰ卷】假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关
习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1．到达时间；
2．合适的礼物；
3．餐桌礼仪。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【解析】本文是一篇书信类应用文写作。餐桌礼仪也是考生比较熟悉的话题。成文时注意以下几点：
一、内容要点要齐全1．到达时间；2．合适的礼物；3．餐桌礼仪。二、时态：主要用一般现在时和将来
时；三、人称：二、三人称。四、注意使用恰当的高级词汇、短语或句型，以提高作文的水平；五、适
当使用一些连接词和插入语，使文章表达自然、流畅。
【参考范文】
Dear Terry,
How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the
Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.
Firstly, I would like to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional
culture. Secondly, if I were you, I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own
country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For example, you are not supposed to
stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.
If you have any other problems, please don’t hesitate to contact me.
YoursLi Hua
Writing 2
【2018年全国Ⅲ卷】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，
内容包括：
1. 学校的体育场馆；
2. 主要的运动项目；
3. 你喜欢的项目。学科￥网
注意：1. 词数100左右：
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Peter,
I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in
our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.
To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school.
Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football
as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been
giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.
All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本题作文为提纲式作文，形式依然是书信，即给英国朋友Peter介绍学校体育运动情况，属于学
校生活话题。这一话题贴合学生生活的实际，学生并不陌生，有话可说。Writing 3
【2018年浙江卷6月】假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，
内容包括：
1. 口语能力：
2. 相关经验；
3. 应聘目的。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写应聘信。
第一步：根据提示可知，学校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。要求写封应聘信，内容包括：
1. 口语能力：2. 相关经验；3. 应聘目的。
第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组）。
第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美
观的卷面是非常重要的。
本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭
英语的能力。
Writing 4
【2018年北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中
国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
(1) 表示欢迎；
(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；
(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：(1). 词数不少于50；(2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my
warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in
Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best
universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in
Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story
of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language
environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day
comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 5
【2018年天津卷】假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际
学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界
青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。
（1）比赛的时间、地点；
（2）邀请他的原因；
（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。注意：（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. ______________________________________________________________
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】略
【解析】试题分析：本篇书面要求写一封邀请信。写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前，一定要认真
分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：1. 代表兴趣小组发出邀请
2. 介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；3. 说明邀请他的原因，包括Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖；4. 告诉
他训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。二、写作时注意准确运用时态，对于本文来说，以一般将来时
为主，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高
级句型使文章显得更有档次。
点睛：书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，
一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，
故需要准确表达。考生写完之后要检查是否有语法错误，看能否运用所学的知识将简单句变为复杂句，当
然，没有把握的句子不要写。
2017年
Writing 1【2017年新课标Ⅰ卷】假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件
告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：
（1）时间和地点；
（2）内容：学习唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Leslie,
I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in
Chinese culture. Now I’ll tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems
of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it is difficult
for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore, before class, you can read
some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.
Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事，这种
形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1. 要点要齐全：（1）时间和地点；
（2）内容：学习唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：
第二人称为主；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高
作文档次。
Writing 2
【2017年新课标Ⅱ卷】假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。
请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.展览时间、地点；
2.展览内容。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Henry，
I'm Li Hua, one of your students in your cultural class. I know you're interested in one of Chinese traditionalart forms—papercutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it.
It'll be held from June 10 to July 10 this year and the opening time is from 9：00 am to 7：00 pm from
Monday to Saturday and the place of the exhibition is at the City Gallery, which is located at 118, Jian Guo Road,
Hai Dian District. Shall we go there together this Friday afternoon? I will meet you at 2：00 pm at the teaching
building gate if you like.
You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which papercutting is one of the most popular. In
the exhibition, you will enjoy many special kinds of papercuttings. Maybe you can learn one or two skills of the
cutting.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Regards,
Li Hua
【解析】题目要求写封邮件邀请外教参观中国剪纸艺术展。写作情境设置真实，任务要求符合学生能力水
平，自然地融入了我国优秀传统文化(剪纸papercutting)的内容，能够引导学生在使用外语了解世界的同时，
注重传承发扬中华民族优秀文明成果，运用中国元素讲中国故事，增强文化自信。该写作贴近学生生活，
学生有话可说。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构采用三段成文：第一段自我介绍并引出话题；第二段具体交代
活动时间、地点；第三段较为详细地交代展览内容。2. 时态：以一般将来时和一般现在时为主。3. 人称：
第一人称。4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级词汇和句型以提高作文
档次。
Writing 3
【2017年新课标Ⅲ卷】假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友
Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：
1. 球队活动；
2. 报名方式及截止日期。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【话题解读】
该篇书面表达是书信类文体，但是与体育有关，要求考生按照所给提示进行写作，可增加细节以使行
文连贯。在写作本文时考生需注意以下几点：1. 确定文章的结构：书信的开头、正文和结尾。2. 确定文
章的要点：写信的目的；表示感谢。3. 确定文章的布局。4. 确定文章的时态，在本文中根据要求判断应
该用一般现在时和一般将来时。5. 正确使用较高级词汇和多种句式，如定语从句、状语从句、主语从句等。
6. 准确使用一些恰当的连接成分以使语意更连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Eric,
I am Li Hua. I am writing to invite you to join the table tennis team in our school. It is known that we can
benefit a lot from playing table tennis. It can prevent us from getting shortsighted and it can keep us physically
healthy. As to the activities, we plan to invite experienced players to give training to us every Friday afternoon. At
the same time, we will divide the members into several groups to practice at 5:00pm after school.
If you are interested, sign up on our school website before August 10.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 4
【2017年浙江卷】假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。
内容包括：
1. 参加者；
2. 时间、地点；
3. 活动：登山、野餐等。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【范文】
Dear Chris,
How are you now? ①The purpose of my writing is to tell you that there will be an outgoing for us these days.I would be honored to have you there with us, enjoying the colorful days.
The occasion will start on the next Sunday morning. ②We will go to Siming Mountain, where we can have a
climb. What’s more, we can also hold a picnic party with the local people.
I really hope you can make it. And I do look forward to receiving your reply letter as soon as possible.
【写作思路】本试题是一篇半开放的作文，写作文体是电子邮件，写一封邀请信给Chris。要点提示中
只列出了大概内容,包括3点(参加者，时间、地点和活动)，具体细节需要考生自己发挥。邀请信一般分为
以下几部分：首先，要列出写信的目的，并发出诚挚邀请；其次，要就邀请的具体内容给予明确的说明，
什么时间，什么地点,做什么事情等；最后，要再次表示邀请，希望对方参加。
Writing 5
【2017年北京卷】你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：＂长
江之行＂或者＂泰山之旅＂。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1. 你建议的线路；
2. 你的理由；
3. 你的祝愿。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____ _
_____ _
_____ _
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_____ _
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I
prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization.
You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river
is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze willbe a better choice.
Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
本文为提纲类作文。首先，学生要仔细阅读提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。 其
次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，
按照一定逻辑关系来写。 最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态,语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
本文是一封信，按照内容要求可以确定文章的框架结构，三段式，其中第一段写你所建议的路线，第二部
分是本文的主体，要阐述你所建议的路线的原因，好让他们有很好的掌握，最后一段，提出你的祝愿。写
作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也
要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】
本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。表语从句的使用：
That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.高级词汇的使用：highly
recommended。连接词的合理使用：Personally，moreover。
Writing 6
【2017年天津卷】假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近
况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。
（1）简要介绍自己的学习和生活；
（2）告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备（如深入了
解天津等）；
（3）希望她有机会重访天津。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：第十三届全运会 the 13th National Games
Dear Mrs. Green,
I’m glad to hear from you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Mrs. Green,
I’m so glad to hear from you. While it has been more than a year since you taught us English, I’ve missed you
a lot, thinking about those happy moments when we stayed with you. Actually, I’ve been doing pretty well in my
studies as well as in my life. Apart from my academic studies, I always manage to find time for what I’m interested
in. For example, I have successfully got admitted as a volunteer for the 13th National Games, which is scheduled to
be held at the end of this August. To get admitted, I have made good preparations beforehand, trying to know as
much as I could about my city, Tianjin.
By the way, it’s my sincere hope that you can spare some time for a visit to Tianjin again, which has changed
greatly since you left.
Please let me know if you come to Tianjin.
Yours,
Li Jin
【解析】这是一封邮件，要点都已经给出，关键在于要点要全面，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，
考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时要注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接
全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文时态主要是一般现在时和现在完
成时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。难点在于选择
词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文
章显得更连贯。2016年
Writing 1
【2016 年新课标Ⅰ卷】假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历
（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want
you to do me a favor.
In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I
have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an
application and the personal resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m
writing you the letter, hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.
Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 2
【2016年新课标Ⅱ卷】假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。
请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信，请他提供作品。信的内容包括：
1．主题：环境保护；
2．展览时间；3．投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show. The
theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last for three weeks. Any student
who is interested is welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you’ve always wanted to do
something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you
visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your
photos to intlphotoshow@gm.school.com.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：本文属于半开放作文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友 Peter写信，建议他参加你校摄影俱
乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展。文章要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1. 校摄影俱乐部举
办的国际中学生摄影展，主题为环境保护；2.展览时间6月15日，持续三周；3.知道对方对摄影很感兴趣，
也恰好有环保方面的图片，希望对方能够参加本次展览。4.投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com。在写
作时，注意书信的格式以及过渡用语的正确使用；同时尽量使用熟悉的词汇及短语，尤其注意不要出现中
国式英语，恰当使用一些复合句或者谚语以增加获得高分的可能性。
Writing 3
【2016年新课标Ⅲ卷】假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写
封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示歉意；
2. 说明原因；
3. 另约时间。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to
attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books.
If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I
should be available any time after school next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：题目要求写一封道歉信，李华因不能和Bob一起去书店而向Bob道歉，文章应使用第一人
称和一般现在时进行写作。写作内容包括：表示歉意；说明原因；另约时间。注意使用连接词，使作文内
容连贯。
Writing 4
【2016年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史
很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：
1. 该人物是谁；
2. 该人物的主要贡献；
3. 该人物对你的影响。
注意：
1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.
As for my favourite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty.
He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Maps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to
China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge
between China and the world.
Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know.
Cheers!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
题材新颖，要求介绍中国历史人物，内容包括喜欢的历史人物、他的贡献和对你的影响。不少于50词，
使用一般现在时和一般过去时以及第一人称和第三人称进行写作。
题材偏向于信息介绍类的开放式写作，对于应用文格式的要求并不高，但对于语言组织和词汇积累的
要求极高。本次应用文并没有限定考生必须写某一位历史人物，但是谈及人物的贡献和对自己的影响时，
考生有可能会遇到大量的词汇障碍，故难度较去年明显提升。
2015年
Writing 1
【2015年新课标Ⅱ卷】假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们国重阳节（the
Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教Lucy写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：
1. 出发及返回时间；2. 活动：包饺子、表演节目等。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 结语已为你写好。
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Lucy,
I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth
Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people
there. We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them
happy. We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know
and we’ll wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就
本文而言应该用一般将来时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。
Writing 2【2015年重庆卷】Bookcrossing. Com 是一个面向全球的图书分享网站。该网站组织的分享活动有两
种参与方式：一是自由分享（wild release），即把书放在指定地点，由其他参与者自由获取；二是定向分
享（controlled release），即直接传递给另一位参与者。假设你是李华，请用英文写信申请参加。内容应包
括：
· 表明写信目的
· 选择一种分享方式
· 简述作出该选择的理由
· 希望了解更多信息
注意：（1）词数不少于80；
（2）在答题卡上做答
（3）书信格式及开头已给出（不计入总词数）
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply for it for the
simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.
You’ve introduced two ways to share books: wild release and controlled release. Of the two, the latter wins my
favor. By the means of controlled release, I only need to deliver books to other participants, not only are books
shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.
If you could provide more specific information, I would be well grateful. Looking forward to your reply.【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，不拖拉，使用短语：apply for 申请；Looking forward to 盼望着；
Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply for it for the simple
reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.这句话运用learning做伴随状语，reason后面跟着
一个同位语从句；not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of
the world as well.这个句子not only but also连接两个句子，第一个句子需要用部分倒装；
【考点定位】考查提纲作文。
【名师点睛】本题的解题思路，一、表明写信目的：申请参加该活动（添加得知消息）；二、选择一种分
享方式：二者选一；三、阐述理由 ；四、书信结尾（添加希望）；注意表达句式1. Between them, I would
like to choose…2. Of the two, I prefer the latter to the former.表示希望的表达句式1. I am looking forward to
more information.2. I would appreciate it if you would offer more information.
Writing 3
【2015年北京卷】假如你是红星中学高三李华，请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封信，告诉他你打算参加龙舟
训练营，希望他一起参加，邮件的内容包括：
1. 介绍训练营的相关内容（例如；时间，地点，参加者等）；
2. 说明你打算参加的原因；
3. 询问对方的意向。
注意： 1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数。
提示词：龙舟训练营 Dragon Boat Training Camp
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp. I
wonder if you’d like to go with me.
This camp will open on July 20th, It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about
Chinese culture. If you are interested in it, let me know and I’ll send you more information.
Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.
【亮点说明】
本文结构紧凑，层次分明，运用了一些邀请信里常用的句型。如：I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for
the summer holiday；I wonder if you’d like to go with me.
文中注意使用了一般将来时、一般现在时等不同的时态来叙述不同的事情，对时态有较好的把握。
【考点定位】应用文类书面表达
Writing 4
三节 书面表达（满分30分）
【2015年陕西卷】假定你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事，请阅
读启事，并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student
volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are
interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms. Chen at
chenlaoshi@aef.com.
写作要点：
1.表达写信意图；
2.陈述应征目的；
3.说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。
写作要求：
1.邮件词数不少于100；
2.开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数；
3.可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯；4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear Ms Chen,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 2, Grade 3.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear MS Chen ,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my
organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.
As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I
am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English
activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be gratefull if you could give me a kind
consideration.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如 I have such a good command of
English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.运用了so…that…句型，以及定语从句I have lent a
helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and
classmates.。此外，文章还使用了大量短语，如 apply for the position, as well as, in public, get along wellwith,,have such a good command of, lent a helping hand to, live up to 等。插入语 Besides，以及副词
Successfully的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。
【考点定位】考查提纲作文
【名师点睛】这篇作文类似于读写类作文。首先要读懂招募启事，抓住重要信息。再结合提纲写作。内容
贴近学生的生活，学生有话讲。也富有实用性。对学生的交际能力也会有所帮助。
Writing 5
【2015年四川卷】假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发贴，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话
（Mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电于邮件。
1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿；
2.说明你能胜任辅导的理由；
3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议；
4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。
注意：1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称。
Hi Sharon,
This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarm
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Li Xia
【参考答案】
Hi Sharon,
This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am quite interested
in it . I think I’m fit for it. As a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many years. In addition ,I
am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. So
I’m quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin.
Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well ,you should spend much time
practicing Mandarin everyday. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Besides, you can also read
some books in Chinese、see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes. Speaking
and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.
In your post, you say you can teach English as a reward. It is just what I want. I’m eager to
improve my English. So, if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve myEnglish. We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an
hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking.
[来源:学科网]
Hope for you early reply!
Yours Sincerely
Li Xia
【亮点说明】本文要点齐全，结构完整。使用多种句式，如定语从句：I am Chinese, which means
Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life.、表语从句：It is just what I
want.等。还使用了大量短语等。
Writing 6
【2015年天津卷】假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。
请根据以下提示，写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系，并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带
去赠书。
（1）自我介绍；
（2）拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等；
（3）询问对方的其他需求。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）请适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇： 学生会 the Student Union
Dear Chris,【参考答案】略
【考点定位】考查提纲作文。
【名师点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动
笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比
较具体，故需要准确表达。考生写完之后要检查是否有语法错误，看能否运用所学的知识将简单句变为复
杂句，当然，没有把握的句子不要写。
