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专题 28 书面表达通知演讲稿类
2024年
Writing 1
【2024全国甲卷】 英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Development of Transport in China为题
写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
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【答案】Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has seen enormous development.
Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of
travelling.
Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green
alternative for short trips. Secondly, the introduction of high- speed trains has dramatically shortened travel times,
making intercity travel faster and more comfortable. Lastly, the proliferation of new energy vehicles underscores
China’s dedication to environmental sustainability, reducing reliance on fossil fuels. These developments illustrate
China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with
environmental responsibility.In short, China’s transport system is embracing innovation and eco-friendliness.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给图片，以 Development of Transport in China为题写
一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇激活
提供：offer→provide
极大地：dramatically→tremendously
减少：reduce→decrease
总之：in short→in a nutshell
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green
alternative for short trips.
拓展句：Firstly, shared bicycles, which offer an affordable and green alternative for short trips have emerged as a
symbol of urban mobility.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people
access to different ways of travelling.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型 2】These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation
network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
2021年
Writing 1
【2021年全国乙卷】
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1. 分析优势与不足；
2. 提出学习建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
【答案】one possible version:
Be smart online learners
Network learning has increasingly become an important means for people to acquire knowledge andsolve problems.But being smart online learners has its advantages and disadvantages.
First of all, as smart online learners, we can make full use of the most extensive educational resources to
broaden the horizon. Besides, We can take the initiative in our study by ourselves without time and space
limit.
Of course, these disadvantages are as follows.Faced with all kinds of information on the internet, We
can't tell the difference between the true and the false, which may be harmful to our study and life. On the
other hand, online learning itself has some imperfections, making it difficult for us not to be affected.
In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a
proper way to make our study more efficient.
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以 Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛。
1. 词汇积累
充分利用：make full use of→ make the most of
扩宽,丰富：broaden→ enrich
各种各样： all kinds of→ varieties of
不完美：imperfection→ defect
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and
find a proper way to make our study more efficient.
拓展句：In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages ，
finding a proper way to make our study more efficient.
Writing 2
【2021年浙江卷1月】假定你是李华，下周有新西兰学生访问你校，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此
写一篇 发言稿，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 介绍活动安排；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Distinguished guests:
On behalf of our school, I would like to convey my sincere welcome for your visiting.
At first, it is of significance to fully understand the school. As scheduled, all of you will visit the museum,
which contains the splendid history of our school. Furthermore, our classes are worthy of being attended, because
you can appreciate the differences between Chinese and western teaching methods. After that, it is at canteen that
you can have a special lunch with our students.
As mentioned above, I extremely expect your coming. May you have an unforgettable experience.
【分析】
本文是一篇应用文，要求考生写一篇发言稿，向即将到校的新西兰学生致欢迎辞。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1．表示欢迎；
2．介绍活动安排；
3．表达祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
on behalf of; would like to; convey; sincere welcome; be of significance; splendid; be worthy of; appreciate;
teaching methods; canteen; extremely expect; unforgettable
2018年
Writing 1
【2018年全国Ⅱ卷】你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片
Growing Together，内容包括：
(1)短片内容：学校的发展；
(2)放映时间、地点；(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【试题分析】
2018年高考英语书面表达体裁为通知，替学校的“英语天地”邀请学生看英文短片Growing
together。继2015年，2016年，2017年连续三年考查信件认识人写信之后，全国二卷考查了应用文中
的另一典型体裁，内容为邀请电影相关的时间，地点的通知。学生对该题材和内容熟悉，对词汇的要求也
相对基础。
纵观全国II卷英语书面表达，从题材上来讲，除了2014年考查了记叙文，十年中九年均考查了应用
文，应用文占90%。所以考生在高考的英语写作的准备中应当把重心放在应用文上，熟练掌握英语应用文
写作的几个相关专项，并且熟识高考英语基础词汇。
2009——2018年高考英语新课标卷II书面表达
年份 命题形式 文体 内容
2009 文字提纲 信件——回信 写信介绍改建后前门大街的情况
2010 文字提纲 信件——去信 给笔友写信告知招聘广告信息
2011 文字提纲 信件——祝贺信 写信向学校辅导中心求助
2012 文字提纲 信件——申请信 申请参加国际中学生新加坡夏令营
2013 文字提纲 信件——去信 请笔友代卖自己制作的中国结
2014 文字提纲 短文 十年后的我
2015 文字提纲 信件——邀请信 邀请外教一起去敬老院陪老人过重阳节
2016 文字提纲 信件——邀请信 邀请英国朋友Peter参加摄影比赛并提供摄影作品
2017 文字提纲 信件——邀请信 写信邀请外教参加剪纸展览
2018 文字提纲 通知 通知观看英语短片
【写作点拨】
英语书面通知的时态应该以一般将来时为主，多使用被动语态、简单句。在通知中不应当过度的使用较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子。
第二个注意点：层次一定要清晰，一个层次要表达一件事情，使人看起来一目了然。
【满分范文】
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention, please? Recently, an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus.
Welcome to join us end enjoy it! Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing together, which is about the development of our
beloved school; as a result, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, it will be in the
library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th . What’s more, everyone of you will be welcome
to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own
comments.
Hopefully, you would make it to our activity. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.
The Student Unio
2016年
【2016年天津卷】假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为
期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。
(1)回顾双方的交流活动（如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面）；
(2)谈谈收获或感想；
(3)表达祝愿与期望。
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
How time flies!
Thank you.【参考范文】
Dear friends,
How time flies! Two weeks have passed since you came to our school for the exchange program, which we all
have benefited from.
During these two weeks, we have studied and lived together, which gives us the opportunity to promote our
friendship. Doing sports as a team has enabled us to know each other better. Your art skills are excellent and
admirable, which leaves me a deep impression. I think all our classmates have learned a lot from our
communication and the various activities.
Now, on behalf of my schoolmates, I wish you a safe return. I also hope that there will be more events of this
kind in the future.
Thank you.
【解析】这是一篇发言稿，要点都已经给出，关键在于要点要全面涵盖，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只
是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接
词连接全文，并选择高级的词汇和语法句型使文章更出彩。审题时注意本文时态主要是一般过去时和一般
现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。难点在于选
择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样
文章显得更连贯。
