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专题 28 书面表达通知演讲稿类
2021年
Writing 1
【2021年全国乙卷】
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1. 分析优势与不足；
2. 提出学习建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
【答案】one possible version:
Be smart online learners
Network learning has increasingly become an important means for people to acquire knowledge and
solve problems.But being smart online learners has its advantages and disadvantages.
First of all, as smart online learners, we can make full use of the most extensive educational resources to
broaden the horizon. Besides, We can take the initiative in our study by ourselves without time and space
limit.
Of course, these disadvantages are as follows.Faced with all kinds of information on the internet, We
can't tell the difference between the true and the false, which may be harmful to our study and life. On the
other hand, online learning itself has some imperfections, making it difficult for us not to be affected.
In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a
proper way to make our study more efficient.
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以 Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛。
1. 词汇积累
充分利用：make full use of→ make the most of
扩宽,丰富：broaden→ enrich
各种各样： all kinds of→ varieties of
不完美：imperfection→ defect
2. 句式拓展合并简单句
原句：In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and
find a proper way to make our study more efficient.
拓展句：In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages ，
finding a proper way to make our study more efficient.
Writing 2
【2021年浙江卷1月】假定你是李华，下周有新西兰学生访问你校，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此
写一篇 发言稿，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 介绍活动安排；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Distinguished guests:
On behalf of our school, I would like to convey my sincere welcome for your visiting.
At first, it is of significance to fully understand the school. As scheduled, all of you will visit the museum,
which contains the splendid history of our school. Furthermore, our classes are worthy of being attended, because
you can appreciate the differences between Chinese and western teaching methods. After that, it is at canteen that
you can have a special lunch with our students.
As mentioned above, I extremely expect your coming. May you have an unforgettable experience.
【分析】
本文是一篇应用文，要求考生写一篇发言稿，向即将到校的新西兰学生致欢迎辞。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1．表示欢迎；
2．介绍活动安排；
3．表达祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
on behalf of; would like to; convey; sincere welcome; be of significance; splendid; be worthy of; appreciate;
teaching methods; canteen; extremely expect; unforgettable
2018年
Writing 1
【2018年全国Ⅱ卷】你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片
Growing Together，内容包括：
(1)短片内容：学校的发展；
(2)放映时间、地点；
(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【试题分析】
2018年高考英语书面表达体裁为通知，替学校的“英语天地”邀请学生看英文短片Growing
together。继2015年，2016年，2017年连续三年考查信件认识人写信之后，全国二卷考查了应用文中
的另一典型体裁，内容为邀请电影相关的时间，地点的通知。学生对该题材和内容熟悉，对词汇的要求也
相对基础。
纵观全国II卷英语书面表达，从题材上来讲，除了2014年考查了记叙文，十年中九年均考查了应用
文，应用文占90%。所以考生在高考的英语写作的准备中应当把重心放在应用文上，熟练掌握英语应用文
写作的几个相关专项，并且熟识高考英语基础词汇。2009——2018年高考英语新课标卷II书面表达
年份 命题形式 文体 内容
2009 文字提纲 信件——回信 写信介绍改建后前门大街的情况
2010 文字提纲 信件——去信 给笔友写信告知招聘广告信息
2011 文字提纲 信件——祝贺信 写信向学校辅导中心求助
2012 文字提纲 信件——申请信 申请参加国际中学生新加坡夏令营
2013 文字提纲 信件——去信 请笔友代卖自己制作的中国结
2014 文字提纲 短文 十年后的我
2015 文字提纲 信件——邀请信 邀请外教一起去敬老院陪老人过重阳节
2016 文字提纲 信件——邀请信 邀请英国朋友Peter参加摄影比赛并提供摄影作品
2017 文字提纲 信件——邀请信 写信邀请外教参加剪纸展览
2018 文字提纲 通知 通知观看英语短片
【写作点拨】
英语书面通知的时态应该以一般将来时为主，多使用被动语态、简单句。在通知中不应当过度的使用
较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子。
第二个注意点：层次一定要清晰，一个层次要表达一件事情，使人看起来一目了然。
【满分范文】
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention, please? Recently, an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus.
Welcome to join us end enjoy it! Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing together, which is about the development of our
beloved school; as a result, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, it will be in the
library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th . What’s more, everyone of you will be welcome
to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own
comments.
Hopefully, you would make it to our activity. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.
The Student Unio
2016年
【2016年天津卷】假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为
期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。
(1)回顾双方的交流活动（如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面）；(2)谈谈收获或感想；
(3)表达祝愿与期望。
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
How time flies!
Thank you.
【参考范文】
Dear friends,
How time flies! Two weeks have passed since you came to our school for the exchange program, which we all
have benefited from.
During these two weeks, we have studied and lived together, which gives us the opportunity to promote our
friendship. Doing sports as a team has enabled us to know each other better. Your art skills are excellent and
admirable, which leaves me a deep impression. I think all our classmates have learned a lot from our
communication and the various activities.
Now, on behalf of my schoolmates, I wish you a safe return. I also hope that there will be more events of this
kind in the future.
Thank you.
【解析】这是一篇发言稿，要点都已经给出，关键在于要点要全面涵盖，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只
是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接
词连接全文，并选择高级的词汇和语法句型使文章更出彩。审题时注意本文时态主要是一般过去时和一般
现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样
文章显得更连贯。
2014年
Writing 1
【2014年江西卷】假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in
senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份
英语发言稿。
1.学会学习：方法，习惯等；
2.学会做人：真诚，友善；
3.学会其他：考生自拟。
注意：1.词数120左右；
2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不须抄在答题卡上，不计入总次数。
Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn
in senior high school.
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Thank you!【思路导引】
首先， 思考出要学会学习，要有个符合自己的方法，要养成良好的学习习惯，要有个正确的学习态
度等；思考出要学会做人，要与人和善，要和睦相处，要正气真诚等；当然还要学会锻炼，学会娱乐，学
会自我管理等。
In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with
classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.
Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up
my body and enrich my school life.No pains no gains. I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.
Thank you!
Writing 2
【2014年陕西卷】假定你是中学生李华。美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项
活动。请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎词。
写作要点：
[来源:学*科*网]
1.表示对客人的欢迎；
2.介绍此项活动（如活动目的、内容等）；
3.表达对客人的祝愿。
写作要求：
1.词数不少于100；
2.称呼已经给出，请写欢迎词正文；
3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear American guests,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
One possible version：
Dear American Guest,On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are lucky to have you here in the
middle of our English Week Activities.
As scheduled, we have English Talent Show today. The purpose of this program is to develop our interest in
English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking. The programme consists of the following
activities: recitation, singing, word spelling, story telling and so on. The Show will begin at two o’clock this
afternoon at the Student Centre. Dear guests, you are welcome to take part in some activities. I hope we students
will benefit from your presence.
I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us. Thank you.
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如on behalf of，As scheduled， consist
of， benefit from等等；还运用了不定式to have作状语，to develop作表语等，动名词listening等作宾语，
hope后宾语从句等等。
考点：考查应用文写作。
