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专题 29 书面表达记叙文/短文投稿/报道类
2023年
Writing 1
【2023 ▪全国甲卷】
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文
投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹；
2. 意义或启示。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
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【答案】
Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral
values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his
wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.
The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical
foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of
knowledge. Even today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond.
Confucius’s life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the
pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His
teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, compassion, and social responsibility.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动写
一篇短文投稿。【详解】1. 词汇积累
著名的：well-known → famous
人物：figure → person
强调：emphasize → stress
基础：foundation → basis
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority,
harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge.
拓展句：His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, which fostered respect for
authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge.
Writing 2
【2023 ▪全国乙卷】
请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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【答案】
When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school.
That was the first time I had watched a live musical performance. The fantastic players touched me deeply.
I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginners. In the beginning, it was quite
difficult to read the notes on the stave. However, it did not demoralize me. I spent most of my leisure hours to
practice piano. Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a
music piece completely.
Even though I will not pursue as my life career, I will still continue learning and playing piano as my
hobby. It is simply because music is the best medication for my soul.【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，
及从中获得的体验和感受。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
机会：opportunity → chance
使沮丧：demoralize → discourage
满意的：satisfied → content
空闲的：leisure → spare
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The fantastic players touched me deeply. I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for
beginner.
拓展句：The fantastic players touched me deeply, so I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for
beginner.
2022年
Writing1
【2022年全国甲卷】
你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1. 海洋的重要性；
2. 保护海洋的倡议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
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【答案】
When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling onJune 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains
the balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place
importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage can’t be thrown into ocean. What’s more, we can also
hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the
ocean environment is.
All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect
ourselves.
【解析】
【导语】本文是一篇应用文，就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿，阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建
议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
越来越：more and more→increasingly
重视：place importance on→attach importance to
重要的：key→significant
此外：what’s more→furthermore
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
拓展句：World Ocean Day, which falls on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature.
(运用了部分倒装结构)
[高分句型2]When it comes to ocean, its pollution becoming more and more serious.(使用了固定句型)
[高分句型3]First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.(使用了主语从句)
Writing 2
【2022年天津卷第二次】假设你是晨光中学英语口语社的成员李津。为招募新成员，口语社请你用英语为
社团纳新活动录制一段短视频。请按照以下提示，撰写视频的文字稿：
(1)向同学们发出入社邀请；
(2)介绍口语社的主要活动(如英语演讲比赛、观看英语电影等活动)；
(3)分享本人入社以来的收获。
注意：(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
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【答案】One possible version
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Jin, a member of the Spoken English Club of our school. I’m here to invite you to join
us. This will be a good chance for all English lovers.
The club offers various interesting activities. We can participate in English speech contests, watch classic
English movies, sing English songs and attend inspiring lectures. All of them help to stimulate our interest in
learning English and make our school life much more enjoyable.
The club activities have benefited me a lot. I have not only improved my spoken English, but also made a lot
of friends.
Now, it’s your turn to join us. We are looking forward to having you in the club!
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为英语口语社的纳新视频写一段文字稿，向同学们发出邀请，
并介绍口语社的主要活动，分享入社以来的收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会：chance →opportunity
参加：participate in →take part in →join in
愉快的：enjoyable →joyful
激发：stimulate →motivate →activate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The club activities have benefited me a lot.
拓展句：The club activities which I have joined in have benefited me a lot.
2021年
Writing 1
【2021年天津卷】
假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：
(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等)；
(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)；
(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意：(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
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【答案】
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of
interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.
Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most
impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. What’s more , walking in the nature reserve,
you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare
plants protected here. Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It dates from over 2,000
years ago. However, it is still playing an important part in irrigation today.
I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the construction
Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求给英文网站《最美中华》栏目投稿，介绍介绍一个国内你喜
欢或去过的地方。
【解析】第一步：审题体裁：说明文
时态： 一般现在时
结构：总分法
第一段是文章的总起段，说明四川省有很多著名的景点；第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程，
第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。
要求：
1. 说明四川省有很多著名的景点
①四川的地理位置：中国西南部
②著名景点：九寨沟、都江堰灌溉工程
2. 介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程
① 九寨沟是自然保护区
②给人印象最深的层层叠叠的瀑布和五颜六色的湖泊，有很多珍稀动植物
③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前，现在仍然起着灌溉的作用
3. 你对该地方的印象和感受：九寨沟的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造会让你惊叹
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be located in；world-famous；places of interest；a nature reserve ；impressive；multi-level
waterfalls；have a chance to do…；rare animals；scenic spot；date from；play an important part in；be
amazed by
第三步：连词成句
(1) Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China.
(2) It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation
project.
(3)Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province.
(4) What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.
(5) Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden
monkeys.
(6) There are many species of rare plants protected here.
(7) Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
(8) It dates from over 2,000 years ago.
(9) It is still playing an important part in irrigation today.
(10) I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by its construction.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表递进关系：what is more
2.表转折关系：however
3.表示列举：such as, like
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.（what引导的主语从
句）
[高分句型2]
Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden
monkeys.（现在分词作状语）
2020年
Writing 1
【2020·新课标Ⅰ】
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括:
1. 人物简介；
2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:
1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。
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【答案】
The person I respect
We have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders.
As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his studentsvery much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share
many funny things with me about his work.
When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and
encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students.
So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。第一步：审
题
体裁：应用文。
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法。
要求：
1.人物简介：
2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。
第二步：列提纲（重点短语）
As for me；spare some time；listen to me patiently;
第三步：连词成句
1.As for me, my father is the person I respect mostly.
2.He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many
funny things with me about his work.
3.My father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍人物；阐述原因
2.表示并列补充关系：As for; and; but; So
第五步：润色修改
Writing 2
【2020·新课标Ⅱ】
上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括:
1. 农场情况；
2. 采摘过程；3. 个人感受
注意:
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
题目:My Weekend
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【答案】
My Weekend
Last weekend，we took part in a picking activity. We drove from the school, and the farm was about 2
kilometers away from our school. When we arrived at the farm, there are all kinds of animals, green fresh
vegetables and fruit trees in the farm. We were divided into two groups. One group was responsible for
picking fruits, the other packed up the fruits. Time flying quickly, the activity was over. But it was a
meaningful day, when we learn a lot form it. Through this activity, we know how hard the farmers are and
how precious the food is. We should treasure the food planted by the farmers.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生为英语角写一篇关于和同学一起参加采摘活动的短文。第一步：
审题
体裁：应用文。
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法。
要求：
1.农场情况；
2.采摘过程；
3.个人感受
第二步：列提纲（重点短语）took part in；was responsible for ；a meaningful day；should treasure
第三步：连词成句
1. Last weekend, we took part in a picking activity.
,
2. One group was responsible for picking fruits the other packed up the fruits.
3. But it was a meaningful day, when we learn a lot form it
4. We should treasure the food planted by the farmers.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍农场；描述采摘过程；个人感受
2.表示并列补充关系：and ;But; Through
第五步：润色修改
2018年
【2018年江苏卷】请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。
【写作内容】
1. 用约30个词概括上述利用排名（ratings）进行消费的现象；
2. 谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。
【写作要求】
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；学科￥网2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
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【答案】Possible version one:
As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping
in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.
I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality
of the product, or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my beloved backpack, saw interesting films and
tasted delicious foods. Secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping. For example, there are huge
amounts of reference books which I am often confused to choose from. In that case, it is both convenient and
economical to buy books according to the ratings.
There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The advantages and
disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.
Possible version two:
Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These ratings, easy to access,
are playing an increasingly important role in customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes
unsatisfactory.
There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and
unreliable. As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others’ judgment on the product or service concerned.
Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others'
advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome
of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice for some to payfor good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales.
Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.
【解析】今年作文仍然是读写作文，即先用30词概括阅读材料，然后针对材料中的话题写一篇议论文谈看
法。首先要认真阅读两段有关消费排名现象及观点的纯文字材料，然后进行比较和分析，表明态度，作出
价值判断。
文章首段要简要介绍两段材料，第一段材料为一对母子买旅行箱看了网上的评论，结果买回来的旅行
箱质量很好。第二段材料为一帮人去餐馆吃饭，看了on-line rating，结果饭菜很不好吃，从而凸显出online
rating的不靠谱。
然后写你对online rating的看法，表明观点，注意用2-3个论据来支撑自己的看法。
文章属于议论文，要注意主题句的使用，论点之间要注意有条理。文章可主要采用一般现在时，第三
人称来写。
2016年
Writing 1
【2016年浙江卷】“Planning is good, but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题用英语写一篇
100~120词的短文。
要求如下：
1. 简述你对这句名言的理解；
2. 用一个具体事例加以说明；
3. 给出恰当的结尾。
注意：1. 文章的标题已给出（不计词数）：
2. 文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。
Planning Is Good, But Doing Is Better
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【答案】One Possible Version
Planning Is Good, But Doing Is Better
Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do what we want to do. However, a plan can bear no fruit
without being actually carried out.
My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point. A month before the event, Ispent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out to read widely for
an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech
skills. I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.
I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.
【解析】
本文为一篇开放式作文。题目给出标题和提纲。结合题目可判断出主要是介绍将计划付诸实施的重要性。
围绕这个主旨去写，不能跑题。提纲部分还要求三个方面：1.简述你对这句名言的理解；2.用一个具体事
例加以说明；3.给出恰当的结尾。这就确定了作文的结构框架。在主旨和结构确定下来后，还要注意文章
应用第一人称和一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时发挥自己的想象，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达
方式将文章完整地表述出来。注意要主次分明、详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁，同时应选用合适的连接
词或过渡词，使文章自然连贯。最后要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
考点：考查开放式作文
Writing 2
【2016年四川卷】某中学生英文报正举办“The Season I Like Best”的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文
投稿，内容包括：
1. 你最喜欢的季节；
2. 你喜欢该季节的两条理由（如：气候、景色、活动、感受……）。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好；
3. 行文连贯，语篇完整；
4. 文中不得透露个人真实信息。
【参考范文】
The Season I Like Best
Each of us knows that there are four seasons a year. Different people like different seasons; my favourite
season is spring. I love to smell the fragrance of flowers, see the new green trees and hear the singing of small
birds. There are many busy butterflies and bees over the flowers. Sometimes it rains, but usually rains quietly. The
rain moistens the trees and the flowers. And I can play outside too! Whether we like riding bikes, jogging or going
on long walks, spring allows us to enjoy outdoor activities that we had to put on the back burner during winter. Of
course, there are many other reasons to explain why I’m so excited about the spring. Thank you, spring!2015年
Writing 1
【2015年新课标Ⅰ卷】假定你是李华，你校英文报＂外国文化＂栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学
生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：
1. 栏目介绍；
2. 稿件内容；
3. 稿件长度：约 400 词；
4. 交稿日期：6月28 日前。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper. __________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written
by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in
your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their
holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’sinteresting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如 It carries articles written by
foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.运用了过去分词作后置定语， And we would
especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high
school students.运用了宾语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如be popular among, so long as,
look forward to , hear from等。
Writing 2
【2015年浙江卷】在班级活动中，当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时，你是坚持自己的观点并说服
别人，还是尊重大多数同学的意见？请你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”为题，用英文写一篇100～
120个词“短文。要求如下：
1.从以上两种做法中选择一种；
2.以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。
注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则，按考试作弊行为认
定。
When I Have a Different Opinion
【参考答案】
When I Have a Different OpinionWe may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a
situation. When I have a better idea, I would choose to stick to it . By doing so, I can not only share good ideas
with others but also learn to express myself clearly.
Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had
an idea of going to a nicer peace. I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea. We did have a
good time that day . Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.
An alternative student version:
When I Have a Different Opinion
We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a different opinion, I may choose to
give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.
The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism; I tend to
sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit. Once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or
go to a museum. I would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic. Without
hesitation, I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean
getting more.
2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一
定逻辑关系来写。
3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。但是在以具体事例阐述
的时候使用过去时
4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如 not only …but also…不仅而
且。运用连词while 表对比观点。运用because 表达原因。
运用了表语从句表达原因The main reason for my choice is that …。
运用了宾语从句 decide whether do have a … ；discuss where to go for an outing
运用了介词短语 By doing so, Without hesitation.
运用了强调句 we did have a lots of fun that day.
此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如be worth doing sth; stick to sth.; have a good time; have lots of fun ,
tend to do 等。
Writing 3
【2015年重庆卷】请就以下话题，按要求用英文写作。
If you could give your younger self one piece of advice, what would you say?
要求：
（1）作出回答并说出理由；
（2）词数不少于60；
（3）在答题卡上做答。
【参考答案】
Were I three years younger than I am now, I would strongly recommend that I set more practical and specific
goals. As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass. Compared
with many abstract objectives, practical ones can bring us more courage and confidence whenever we make one
step forward. If only I could go back and reset my goals.
【解析】
试题分析：本文属于考查开放性作文写作，给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，
要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语
或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择
合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，使用了多种句式和结构。比如 I would strongly recommend that I
set more practical and specific goals.宾语从句；Compared with many abstract objectives, practical ones can bring
us more courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward.这个句子还运用到非谓语动词；If only I
could go back and reset my goals.还运用到虚拟语气。
Writing 4
【2015年安徽卷】某英文杂志正在举办以 "Fancy yourself as an interviewer" 为主题的征文活动，请你以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview" 为题, 写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
1. 采访的对象；
2. 采访的原因；
3. 想提的问题。
注意：
1. 词数120左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4. 短文的标题已给出，不计入总词数。
A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview
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【参考答案】
A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview
The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.
I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space butalso one of the greatest astronauts in the world. I have long been interested in space exploration and I
believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.
If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I
would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read.
Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.
【亮点说明】范文使用了一些重点句型：定语从句 I would like to interview is Yang Liwei；原因状语从
句because he is not only the first Chinese...；宾语从句①I could learn a great deal from him about it，
②what made him an astronaut and how he was trained；条件状语从句If I could interview him；非限制
性定语从句which must be very interesting等，显示了扎实的语法功底，也使作文的句式变得多样；
范文还使用了一些固定搭配和固定短语：not only...but also...；one of the...；the first to do sth；be
interested in；a great deal；such...as等，使作文的内容变得更加丰富；
范文注意使用not only...but also, and, also和finally等来衔接句子，使范文显得语意连贯、衔接紧凑。
Writing 5
【2015年湖北卷】请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，有英语写一篇短文。
Questioning is a bridge to learning. When you begin to doubt something and search for an answer,you
will learn.
注意：1.无须写标题；
2.除诗歌外，文体不限；
3.内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；
4.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
5.词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。
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Questioning can lead to searching for an answer. If we are in the habit of raising doubts as to whether what we
are told is true, we can find the correct answer and learn more.
Two years ago, our teacher offered us an answer to a difficult math problem in class. Although the answer
seemed a little strange, nobody but I doubted it. Thinking that his solution might be wrong, I carefully analyzed the
problem and tried to work it out in a different way. Half an hour later, I managed to find the correct answer. When I
showed my answer to him, the teacher praised me for my independent thinking.
From this experience I have learnt that questioning can serve as a bridge that helps us to seek the truth.
【亮点说明】首句“Questioning can lead to searching for an answer.”鲜明地亮出了作者的观点。文章使用了
状语从句“If we are in the habit of raising doubts as to whether what we are told is true, we can find the correct
answer and learn more.”及分词做状语“Thinking that his solution might be wrong,…”等句型，为文章增色不少。
此外，一些短语的使用也恰到好处，如offer sb. sth.，work sth. out，manage to do sth.，praise sb. for sth.，
serve as等。
Writing 6
Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below.
【2015年湖南卷】请以老师当众表扬你为话题，用下面所给的句子开头，续写一篇英语短文。
As a student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before
my classmates.
注意：
1. 将所有句子写在答题卡上；
2. 续写词数不少于120个；
3. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
【答案】
One possible version：
As_a_student,_I_can_tell_you_that_there_is_nothing_better_than_being_praised_by_my_teacher_before_my
_classmates.
Yesterday afternoon, Li Ming and I went home together after school. Suddenly we saw an old lady knocked
down by a car. The driver ran away in his car. Li Ming and I ran over to find that the old lady's head was bleeding.She had already lost consciousness. Immediately I took out my handkerchief and covered the wound with it. Li
Ming stopped a taxi quickly. Together we put the old lady into the taxi and drove her to the nearest hospital.
The old lady was saved and we also felt very pleased. What's more, I remembered the number of the car, and
the traffic police caught the driver later.
2014年
Writing 1
【2014年新课标Ⅱ卷】一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”，请根据下列要点和你的畅想
完成短文。
1.家庭：
2．工作：
3.业余生活。
注意：1.词数100左右：
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：
3.开头语已为你写好。
One possible version:
I often imagine what my life would be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years .I will be
twenty -eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child . I hope I will work in a
computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues I’ll do a
good job in whatever I do. In my free time , I will continue to take regular exercise , such as swimming, running
and various ball games . On my holidays , I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer
and more colorful.
Writing 2【2014年广东卷】你接受一项写作任务，要为当地英语晚报写一篇报道。
［写作内容］
请根据以下信息写一篇英文报道，内容包括：
人物：英国人查理德·阿维斯（Richard Avis）
出生日期：1974年12月1日
时间：2011年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日生的人
目的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含义
相关信息：
· 借助当地媒体寻找
· 迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，来自13个国家
· 职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等
· 计划40岁生日前找到40位同年同月同日生的人
· 打算根据此经历写一本书
＊ 同年同月同日生的人：time twin
［写作要求］
只能用5个句子表达全部内容
［评分标准］
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
Richard Avis, a British, was born on December 1st,1974. In order to understand the meaning of
successful life in different cultures, Richard, from 2011, began to seek time twins around the world. With
the help of the local media he has already found 32 time twins from 13 countries, of whom there are 17
males and 15 females. Their positions include government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and
so on. Richard intends to find 40 time twins before his birthday and he is going to write a book based
on this experience.
[解析] 根据写作要求可知要考生为当地英语晚学科报写一篇关于英国人查理德·阿维斯的报道，报道中查
理德，阿维斯以前做过的事情，句子的时态应该用一般过去式，他通过调查而得来的有关其他人现在的情
况，叙述这些人的目前的情况应该用一般现在时。学科根据要求必须用学科网 5 句话，表示出要表达的
那么多的信息量的句子，考生必须有扎买的语法知识的功底，能够正确使用复合句来表达所写的信息。
Writing 3
【2014年大纲卷（广西卷）】一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”，请根据下列要点和你
的畅想完成短文。1.家庭：
2．工作：
3.业余生活。
注意：1.词数100左右：
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：
3.开头语已为你写好。
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.
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Writing 4
【2014年福建卷】如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语( quotation)，按
要求用英语写一篇短文。
“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm."
- Sir Winston, Churchill
内容要求：
1．你对该引语的理解：2．你的相关经历：
3．恰当的结尾。
注意：
1．短文开头已给出，不计人总词数：
2．文中不能出现考生的具体信息：
3．词数：120左右。
This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that __________________________________________
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【答案】
This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn't get discouraged right after failures. Rather, we
should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.
At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand
at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I
took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With
more practice, I did better and better. Looking back, I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.ZXXK
Actually, we can't succeed in everything we try. What's important is that we should stick at it.
【解析】
试题分析：如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语( quotation)，按要求用英
语写一篇短文。这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构上：采用三
段成文，第一段引出话题，自己对于该引语的理解；第二段写出自己的相关经历；第三段恰当地结尾。2.
时态：自己的相关经历用一般过去时；3. 人称：第一人称；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流
畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。【亮点说明】I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.这里含有一个时间
状语从句。What's important is that we should stick at it.这里含有一个主语从句和一个表语从句。
考点：话题类书面表达
Writing 5
【2014年湖北卷】请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。
Small things make a big difference. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.
注意：①无须写标题； ②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；
④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
⑤词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。
【答案】
It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible member of society.
I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the
bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a
passing car, which drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in
without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital. Compared with
the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.
As a member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.
【亮点说明】文章第一句It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible member of society就鲜明概括并亮出了
作者的观点。文中使用了定语从句 I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday
afternoon以及非限制性定语从句which drove off quickly都为文章增色不少，一些短语和短句的使用也恰
到好处比如knock down，drive off，be proud of, rush to sb to do sth，compare with等并注意了句子的
衔接如： when， luckily 等等。
Writing 6
【2014年湖南卷】学校正在组织科技创新大赛，你想为日常生活中某件物品（如钢笔、书包、鞋子……)设计添加新功能来参赛。请以“My Magic_______”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你的创意。
内容：
1.说明设计理由
2.介绍新功能。
注意;:
1.词数不少于120个字
2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
【答案】略
Writing 7
【2014年山东卷】某英文报社组织题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动，你有意参加。请从下面两句
谚语中任选一 句作为标题写一篇英语作文，内容须包括：1.该谚语的含义；2.体现该谚语含义的个人经历。
① A friend in need is a friend indeed.
②Where there’s a will, there’s a way.
[来源:Zxxk.Com]
注意：1.词数：120-150；
2.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇：谚语 proverb
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Writing 8
【2014年重庆卷】请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。
“My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry.”
要求：1. 就此材料发表你的看法；
2. 紧扣材料，有明确的观点；
3. 词数不少于60；
4. 在答题卡上作答。
【答案】
One possible version
This happens frequently in a teenager’s world which depends on cell phones too much. In the eyes
of the youngsters’, friendship is important. But when it comes to the balance of friends and phones, kids
tends to regard the latter as their bigger share.
I don’t think it is wise to neglect a devoted human friend but favor the phone, because human
friends can push us on in the fierce struggle in life while phones are only our tools. So next time, when
your friend falls, don’t laugh at him or her but help him or her stand up.Writing 9
【2014年重庆卷】青少年研究专家Susan Beacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏，邀请大家分享心目
中的＂最好礼物＂。她认为，礼物贵在心意，应为之付出时间和精力。假设你是李华，请用英文发帖，内
容应包括：
●赞同Susan的看法
●你收到或送出的最好的礼物是什么
●该礼物的意义
●期待大家回复
注意：1. 词数不少于80；
2. 符合语言规范；
3. 在答题卡上作答；
4. 开头已给出（不计入总词数）。
I am a high school student from China. __________________________________________________ _
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【答案】
I am a high school student from China and I am quite for your opinion about best gifts: the value of
gifts lies in its intension so we should devote more to them.The best gift I’ve ever received is a book from my English teacher, Debbie, which she b rought to
me when she returned from her holiday in USA. The book’s name is Chicken Soup for the Teenage
Soul: The Real Deal: Friends. I value this book because it shows me how to keep the balance of
friendship in a positive way. And I must thank my favorite teacher for her care about me because she
found me at loss dealing with friends at one time. Reading it, I have been inspired and balanced myself
in life and study.
I strongly recommend you to read it and share what you gain with me in your reply.
Yours ever,
Li Hua
写作技巧：一般情况下应分三段来完成改写任务：阐释Susan的观点并表示认同。收到或送出的礼物的具
体描写及其意义。该部分是本写作任务的重点，应多费笔墨完成。表期待应另外起段完成，以便阅卷老师
发现和评判内容要点。遣词造句尽量使用自己熟悉的词句。优秀学生一定要在保持正确的前提下尽量使用
较为复杂的句型，如状语从句，定语从句，倒装句和适量的非谓语动词。特别强调：一定要注意卷面整洁
并避免拼写错误。
