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专题 02 投稿征文
征文投稿，区别与书信，一般会给出特定的主题。如庆祝英文栏目创刊十周年，你最敬爱的人等等。
不要在开头和结尾生搬硬套如“I’ writing to...”等书信格式。基本上写一篇相关话题的小短文即可，小短
文以记叙文或者议论文为主。话题基本上围绕书信类，如推荐一个项目，那就和推荐信写作思路一致。如
最想感谢的人，那就和感谢信思路一致，不过在表达上可能人称需要换一下。基本上写一篇相关话题的小
短文即可，小短文以记叙文或者议论文为主。学生需要掌握相关词汇，句式用法等。
文章框架结构“引出话题-要点展开-总结全文”。主次分明，逻辑清晰。主题句要出现关键点，如现
状、原因、看法、影响、意义、措施、建议等。拓展句具体详细，有意识使用逻辑衔接词。
【2023 ▪全国甲卷】你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人
物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹；
2. 意义或启示。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
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【答案】
Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral
values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to
countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.
The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of
Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. Even
today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond.
Confucius’s life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit ofknowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of
the importance of integrity, compassion, and social responsibility.
【思路点拨】
首段 总体阐述所述问题或现象。
段落要点 正文 具体论述或描写相关情况；或者介绍主题人或事物细节。
尾段 得出结论、体会或呼吁
【写作模板】
when it comes to ___________________( 当 谈 到 ... 时 ） , it is widely acknowledged
that________________________（众所周知）.
For one thing ,_________________________ （ 主 题 特 色 一 ） . Not
only_________________________but also_________________________________(具体特点) For anther,
there is no doubt that________________________________(主题特色二)
I do hope that________________________.(表达期望). All in all , it is high time that ... .(sb did
sth)
【必背词语】
1. 同意，赞同subscribe to
2. 忠实的读者faithful readers
3. 表达自己的观点voice their opinions
4. 不遗余力地做某事 spare no efforts to do ...
5. 共同努力做某事 make joint effort to do...
6. 对...…有害 do harm to/be harmful to...
7. 谈到、提到 When it comes to...
8. 不可否认...... There is no denying that...
9. 随着新学期的临近 With the new term approaching
10.面临考试 be faced with challenge exams
11.人们普遍认为.... It is universally acknowledged that...12.很明显，明显地 It is obvious that.../obliviously
13.极为重要；强调...…的重要性...of great/crucial/vital significance/importance;
14.强调…的重要性emphasize the importance of...; highlight the significance of...; attach importance to......…
【必背开头段】
1. An article in the newspaper caught my attention. 报纸上一篇文章引起了我的注意
2. When it comes to protecting the ocean, it is well-known that ocean plays an important part in our life.
说到保护海洋，众所周知，海洋在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。
3. There are many people who I respect . As for me, my father is the one I respect. The reasons why I respect
him are as follows.
近来，随着智能手机和电脑的日益流行，越来越多的学生选择用它们在课外学习英语。
4. Nowadays, with the improvement of the standard of living, an increasing number of teenagers suffer from
obesity, which arouses social concerns.
如今，随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的青少年患有肥胖症，这引起了社会的关注。
5. In the long span of the Chinese history, the existence of the outstanding Confucius is like a shining pearl.
在中国漫长的历史上，杰出的孔子的存在就像一颗闪亮的珍珠。
6. Sb. is considered to be one of the most influential figures in history due to his/her
accomplishments/achievements/impact.某人被认为是历史上最具影响力的人物之一，因为他/她的[成就/影响
力/贡献]。
7. The long history of China has witnessed the flourishing of poetry and the brilliance of many exceptional
poets, among whom I admire Du Fu most.
中国悠久的历史见证了诗歌的繁荣和许多杰出诗人的才华，其中我最欣赏杜甫。
【必背主题段】
1. As a high school student, I noticed that many students had a series of health problems because of irregular diet.
作为一名高中生，我注意到很多学生都因为饮食不规律而出现了一系列健康问题。
2. My favourite sports is rope skipping, because not only can I do it at home conveniently but also it can help
to refresh me after I get tired from doing homework.
我最喜欢的运动是跳绳，因为跳绳不仅可以方便地在家里做，而且可以帮助我在做完作业累了之后提神。
3. Additionally, I take delight in various activities in the reading club every Friday, where I get immersed in
the sea of literature, greatly improving my literary competence.
此外，我喜欢每周五在阅读俱乐部的各种活动，在那里我沉浸在文学的海洋里，大大提高了我的文学能
力。
4. Only if we take action to exercise can we be healthier and healthier in the future .
只有当我们采取行动去锻炼时，我们才能在未来变得更健康。
5. For one thing , not only does the ocean offers us various of sea food to eat, but also it is home to many
kinds of animals.首先，海洋不仅为我们提供了各种各样的海鲜可以吃，而且它也是多种动物的家园。
6. Not only does playing basketball build up my body and relieve stress from study, but it also promotes
friendship with others.
打篮球球不仅增强了我的体质，减轻了学习的压力，而且增进了与他人的友谊。
7. Faced with the challenge of being destroyed, missing or even being stolen, traditional Chinese relics are
urgent to be protected.
面对被销毁、失踪甚至被盗的挑战，中国传统文物迫切需要得到保护。
【必背结尾段】
1．I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience.
如果您能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。
2．I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future.
我希望《青年》能出版更多的经典作品，并有一个光明的未来。
3．I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience.
如果您能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。
4．We hope that with all these measures taken, eyesight problems can be greatly reduced.
我们希望这些有效的措施能大大减少视力问题。
5．I sincerely hope Youth will achieve greater success and have a promising future.
我衷心希望Youth能取得更大的成就，更受欢迎。
6．I sincerely hope that through more understanding of Confucius and his Confucianism, we can make the
world filled with more love, justice and peace.
我真诚地希望，通过对孔子及其儒家思想的进一步理解，我们能让世界充满更多的爱、正义与和平。
7．Personally, it is high time that we spared no effort to preserve traditional cultural relics.
就我个人而言，我们是时候不遗余力地保护传统文物了。
（2024年浙江卷1月） 请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适
合课间开展的运动，内容包括：
1. 介绍这项运动；
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答：
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!____________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day? How about incorporating some physical activity into your
daily routine? One great option is the “Stand Up and Stretch” exercise. This simple routine involves standing up
from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It’s a quick and easy way to get
your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. This exercise is recommended for several reasons.
First, it helps to combat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Second, it
can improve your focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it promotes a healthy
and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being.
So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It’s a small change that
can make a big difference in your day.
Writing 1
（2024·山东泰安·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校正通过校英文报向同学们征集暑期社会实践活动的方案。
请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你的方案;
2. 你的理由。
注意：
1. 词数80词左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
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Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Editor,
To make our summer vacation fulfilling, I would like to propose a social practice activity called “Get Your
Hands Dirty in Hiking” in which students should combine hiking with cleaning up trails.
In this eco-friendly hike, students are encouraged to bring recycled bags to pick up trash along the hiking
trails, which can not only promote their physical health but also foster their sense of social responsibility. By
actively participating in the cleanup process, students recognize themselves as essential members of society and
strengthen an awareness of environmental conservation.
It is through these hands-on experiences that we students can be inspired to make a difference in nature and
beyond.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇关于暑期社会实践活动的方案投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
令人满意：fulfilling→satisfying
加强：strengthen→enhance
参加：participate in→take part in
重要的：essential→crucial
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：By actively participating in the cleanup process, students recognize themselves as essential members of
society and strengthen an awareness of environmental conservation.
拓展句：If students can actively participate in the cleanup process, they will recognize themselves as essential
members of society and strengthen an awareness of environmental conservation.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To make our summer vacation fulfilling, I would like to propose a social practice activity
called “Get Your Hands Dirty in Hiking” in which students should combine hiking with cleaning up trails.(运用了
介词+关系代词结构非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] By actively participating in the cleanup process, students recognize themselves as essential members
of society and strengthen an awareness of environmental conservation. (运用了动名词作宾语)
Writing 2
2．（2024·安徽·二模）某英文出版社正在以The Harmony Between Humanity and Nature为主题征文，请你
写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 强调其重要性；
2. 你的相关个人经历；
3. 提出号召。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Harmony Between Humanity and Nature
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【答案】One possible version:
The Harmony Between Humanity and Nature
The harmony between humanity and nature is crucial for our survival. As our environment worsens, it’s high
time we recognized the importance of coexisting peacefully with nature.
I once witnessed the beauty of this harmony while hiking in the mountains. The breathtaking landscape, the
chirping of birds, and the rustling of trees in the breeze taught me the value of preserving nature. However, the sight
of trash left by previous visitors reminded me how human actions can destroy this balance.
Let’s strive for harmony with nature by adopting eco-friendly practices. Every small step we take can
contribute to a healthier, more sustainable world for all.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以The Harmony Between Humanity and Nature 为主题给校英
文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要性：importance→significance
美不胜收的：breathtaking→beautiful然而：However→Nevertheless
摧毁：destroy→crush
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句：However, the sight of trash left by previous visitors reminded me how human actions can destroy this
balance.
同义句：The view of litter abandoned by earlier visitors served as a stark reminder of the detrimental impact
human behavior can have on disrupting the natural equilibrium.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As our environment worsens, it’s high time we recognized the importance of coexisting
peacefully with nature. (运用了As引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】However, the sight of trash left by previous visitors reminded me how human actions can destroy
this balance. (运用了However引导的让步状语从句)
Writing 3
3．（2024·四川成都·模拟预测）自 1996 年起，我国将每年的 6 月 6 日设为“全国爱眼日”。你校将以
六月六日全国爱眼日为主题，举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 简述当下青少年的视力状况；
2. 简析上述状况背后的原因；
3. 介绍护眼小妙招。
注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 题目已为你写好。
Protect Our Eyes
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【答案】
Protect Our Eyes
Nowadays, it is becoming increasingly common that more and more students wear glasses due to short
sightedness.
With the development of technology, students are provided with more electronic devices. Firstly, students
spend more time than ever on electronic devices for entertainment, including video games and social media.Secondly, online courses have become more popular and many students spend much time in front of the screen. As
a result, there has been a sharp visual impairment in their eyes.
So protecting our eyes is very important. To begin with, we should not use eyes for a long time. Secondly,
we should keep a distance of one foot when reading books. Thirdly, insist doing health care eyes very day. Finally,
The situation could be improved if students manage their time on the electronic devices and take regular breaks
while using them.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校将以六月六日全国爱眼日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，要求考生
按照要求写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
由于：due to→ because of
发展，进步：development→ advancement
娱乐：entertainment→ recreation
急剧的：sharp→ steep
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, students spend more time than ever on electronic devices for entertainment, including video games
and social media.
拓展句：Firstly, students spend more time than ever on electronic devices for entertainment, which include video
games and social media.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Nowadays, it is becoming increasingly common that more and more students wear
glasses due to short sightedness.（运用了it作形式主语、that引导的主语从句）
【高分句型2】Secondly, we should keep a distance of one foot when reading books.（运用了when引导的时间
状语从句的省略）
Writing 4
4．（2024·湖南郴州·模拟预测）你校英文报School Life专栏本期的主题为“Sleep and study”。请你用英语
写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.睡眠与学习的关系；
2.你的建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。____________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】参考范文
Sleep and study
Sleep is crucial for our physical and mental health, enabling us to function best both academically and
socially. Lack of sufficient sleep can lead to decreased concentration, memory problems, and even impact academic
performance.
To improve sleep quality, I suggest establishing a regular sleep schedule, avoiding caffeine late in the day
and screens before bedtime, and engaging in relaxing activities such as reading or listening to music. By
prioritizing sleep, we can enhance our academic performance and overall well-being.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语写一篇短文给英文报School Life专栏投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要：crucial→vital
导致：lead to→result in
影响：impact→affect
加强：enhance→strengthen
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Sleep is crucial for our physical and mental health, enabling us to function best both academically and
socially.
拓展句：Sleep is crucial for our physical and mental health because it enables us to function best both
academically and socially.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Sleep is crucial for our physical and mental health, enabling us to function best both
academically and socially. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] By prioritizing sleep, we can enhance our academic performance and overall well-being. (运用了动
名词作宾语)
Writing 5
（2024·吉林长春·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校将举办一场面向留学生的中国传统美食节。请你向学校英文报投稿，介绍并宣传此次活动，内容包括：
（1）活动内容；
（2）活动意义；
（3）邀请留学生参与。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Chinese Traditional Food Festival
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【答案】Possible version:
Chinese Traditional Food Festival
Our school is thrilled to announce the Chinese Traditional Food Festival, a cultural activity designed for
international students.
This event will showcase a diverse array of traditional Chinese dishes, each representing a unique culinary
style and region. From spicy Sichuan to delicate Cantonese, students will set off on a food journey, exploring the
rich flavors and historical significance of Chinese food. It’s an immersive experience that will broaden cultural
horizons and create unforgettable memories. We invite all international students to join us for this delicious
adventure.
For more details, contact the organizing committee. We look forward to your participation in this exciting
event!
Writing 1
（2023年全国乙卷）
请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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【答案】
When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. That
was the first time I watched a live musical performance. The fantastic players touched me deeply.
I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner. In the beginning, it was quite difficult
to read the notes on the stave. However, it did not demoralize me. I spent most of my leisure hours to practice
piano. Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece
completely.
Even though I will not pursue as my life career, I will still continue learning and playing piano as my hobby. It
is simply because music is the best medication for my soul.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，
及从中获得的体验和感受。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
机会：opportunity → chance
使沮丧：demoralize → discourage
满意的：satisfied → content
空闲的：leisure → spare
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The fantastic players touched me deeply. I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for
beginner.
拓展句：The fantastic players touched me deeply, so I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for
beginner.
点睛
【高分句型 1】When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in myschool. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music
piece completely. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句和if引导的条件状语从句)
Writing 2
（2022年全国乙卷）
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一
篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 学习活动状况描述；
2. 简单评论；
3. 你的建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
【答案】 Learning English Beyond the Classroom
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of
students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching
English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English
learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading
English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing
games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and
teachers to strengthen the guidance.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，对学生的英语学习活动状况进行描述并作简单的评论，提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
缺乏：lack→shortage
加强：strengthen→enhance
各种各样的：various→all kinds of
就我而言：as far as I’m concerned→from my perspective
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for
18% and 12%.
拓展句：However, those who choose reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account
for 18% and 12%.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English
songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. (运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句以
及who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books.(运用了what引导的主语
从句)
Writing 3
（2022年全国甲卷）你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1. 海洋的重要性；
2. 保护海洋的倡议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
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【答案】When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling on June
8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the
balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our
daily actions. For example, garbage can’t be thrown into ocean. What’s more, we can also hand out leaflets to call
on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.
All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect
ourselves.
【导语】本文是一篇应用文，就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿，阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建
议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
越来越：more and more→increasingly
重视：place importance on→attach importance to
重要的：key→significant
此外：what’s more→furthermore
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
拓展句：World Ocean Day, which falls on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature.(运
用了部分倒装结构)
[高分句型2]When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious.(使用了固定句型)
[高分句型3]First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.(使用了主语从句)
