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专题 31 应用文写作(新高考)
2023年
【2023年新高考全国Ⅰ& Ⅱ卷】 假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后
练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括;
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training
after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups.
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little
room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with
someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own
partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作,要求考生给外教写一封邮件,告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后
练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先:to begin with → first of all
提高:improve → progress
建议:suggestion → advice
选择:choose → select
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own
partners.
拓展句:My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let
students choose their own partners.
2022年
【2022年新高考全国Ⅰ &Ⅱ卷】假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教
Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1. 节目介绍;
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Caroline,
This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talkand Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students. Now, when
having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished
foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole
Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming. I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假定你是校广播站“Talk and Talk”的负贵人李华,请给外教Caroline
写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立:establish→set up
了不起的:amazing→fabulous
帮助:aid→assistance
许多:plenty of→a lot of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot.
拓展句:You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot.
2021年
【2021年新高考全国Ⅰ &Ⅱ卷】你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 读报的经历;2. 喜爱的栏目;3. 期望和祝福。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。
Youth and Me
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【答案】Youth and Me
It has been 10 years since Youth was founded. In my memory, it is Youth that accompanies me through my
whole high school. When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot ofimaginative stories. These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon. Besides, I even submitted my own
fiction to Youth. Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a
writer.
I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future.
【解析】
【分析】本文是一篇应用文,向校刊Youth表达自己的经历,并送上自己的祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立:found→establish
沮丧的:upset→depressed
得到:receive→obtain
赏析:enjoy→appreciate
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon.
拓展句:Not only can these stories relieve my stress, but also they can broaden my horizon.
2020年
Writing 1
【2020年新高考全国Ⅰ &Ⅱ卷(山东卷)】假定你是李华, 上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你
为校英文报写一篇报道, 内容包括:
1. 参加人员:
2. 跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下:
3. 活动反响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Cross-Country Running Race
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【答案】
A Cross-Country Running Race
Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every
student and teacher of our school.
The students selected from every class took part in the competition. The route measured five kilometers, from
our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their
classmates along the way giving them necessarily help as well as encouragement. At last, all the runners managed
to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.
The activity was highly spoken of, because not only did it provide chance for us to exercise, but also made us
more cohesive.
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生就上周日学校举行的5公里越野赛活动写一篇新闻报道。
【详解】
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应以一般过去时为主
结构:总分总
要求:
1. 参加人员
2. 跑步路线
3. 活动反响
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
attend/witness/ draw one’s attention/ manage to do sth./ measure/ speak highly of/ provide sth. for sb.
第三步:连词成句
1. Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every
student and teacher of our school.
2. The students selected from every class took part in the competition.
3. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain.
4. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help as
well as encouragement.5. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.
6. The activity is highly spoken of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but also makes us
more cohesive.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)