🌟 第一部分:开头句
⭐ 保底 1
Nowadays, ... plays an important part in our school life.
现如今…在我们的学校生活中扮演重要角色
⭐ 保底 2
As we all know, ... is very important for us students.
正如我们所知,…对于我们学生来说是很重要的
⭐⭐ 稳加分 1
Recently, our school has paid more attention to...
最近我们的学校一直关注于…
⭐⭐ 稳加分 2
Different students have different ways of...
Some like... Others prefer...
As for me, I prefer...
不同的学生对…有不同的看法
有些喜欢…其他人偏爱…
至于我,我更喜欢…
⭐⭐⭐ 冲刺用
There is no doubt that... has become a hot topic among us.
毫无疑问…在我们之间已经成为了热点话题
🅰️ 现象引入类(适合说明文、议论文)
⭐⭐⭐ With the development of society/technology ... is becoming more and more important.
在社会/科技的发展下,…正在变得越来越重要
科技、环保、社会现象
别写太长,写完赶紧接具体内容。
⭐⭐⭐ In modern times, ... plays a key role in our daily life.
在现代社会,……在我们的日常生活中扮演着关键角色。
手机、阅读、运动等生活习惯
⭐⭐ It's common to see that many students are interested in...
许多学生对…很感兴趣,这很常见
社团、课余活动、爱好
描述现状,引出下文。
⭐⭐ We are living in a world full of changes, and ... is one of them.
我们正生活在一个充满变化的世界里,…就是其中一个
新事物、新学习方法
⭐⭐ The topic of ... has been brought into focus recently.
……这一话题最近受到了关注
热点话题(如劳动教育)
🅱️ 观点陈述类
⭐⭐⭐ Different people hold different opinions on...
不同的人…对有不同的看法
二选一
万能金句,永远不会错。
⭐⭐⭐ When it comes to ..., I believe that ...
一说到/提及…我相信…
直接亮明观点
简单直接,阅卷老师最爱。
⭐⭐⭐ As a student, I think it is necessary for us to...
作为一名学生,我认为对于我们来说,做…很有必要的
提建议、谈做法
⭐⭐ Talking about ..., I have something to share with you.
说起…我有一些想跟你分享的…
分享经历、心得
适合记叙文开头。
⭐⭐ Some people say yes, while others say no. As for me, I agree with...
有些人说是的,有些人说不是,就我而言,我同意…
辩论型话题
把两边观点都照顾到。
🌙 第二部分:结尾句
使用策略:结尾通常写2句。一句总结,一句展望/祝愿。
🅰️ 总结归纳类(适合所有文体)
⭐⭐⭐ In short, ... is really meaningful to us.
总而言之,…对我们真的很有意义
活动、阅读、学习
⭐⭐⭐ All in all, if we try our best, we will surely get good results.
总之,只要我们尽最大努力,就一定能取得好成绩。
努力、成长类话题 万能结尾,涵盖“努力-结果”逻辑。
⭐⭐⭐ From my point of view, ... is a wise choice for us.
在我看来,这对我们来说是个明智的选择
选择类话题 呼应开头的选择。
⭐⭐ To sum up, only by doing ... can we make progress.
总之,只有通过……我们才能取得进步。
提建议、方法类
⭐⭐ As a result, I have learned that...
因此,我了解到…
记叙文、经历类 侧重“我学到了什么”。
🅱️ 展望呼吁类(适合演讲稿、投稿)
⭐⭐⭐ I hope more and more students can fall in love with...
我希望越来越多的学生可以爱上…
阅读、运动、英语
⭐⭐⭐ Let's take action now and make our school life better!
咱们现在就采取行动吧,让我们的学校生活更美好
倡议书、活动类
⭐⭐ I believe a bright future is waiting for us if we...
我相信,一个光明的未来正在等待我们如果…
励志、梦想类
⭐⭐ I'm looking forward to seeing a better me / you.
我期待看见更好的我自己/你
个人成长、给笔友的信
⭐⭐ Why not start from now on? Let's go!
为什么不从现在开始呢,咱们一起出发吧!
号召行动 反问句加强语气。
🌷第三部分:衔接句
一、 因果逻辑
⭐⭐⭐ That’s why I think it is a good way to...
这就是为什么我认为这是一个好方法…
说完理由后,得出结论
⭐⭐⭐ This is mainly because it helps me...
这主要是因为它帮助我…
解释为什么选这个
⭐⭐⭐ Thanks to this habit, I have improved my...
多亏了这个爱好,我提升了我的…
描述进步(阅读/运动带来的好处)
⭐⭐ For this reason, more and more students love …
由于这个原因,越来越多的学生喜欢…
⭐⭐ As a result, I have become more confident.
因此,我变得越来越自信
描述结果(成长/变化类)
二、 转折与对比
⭐⭐⭐ However, different students have different ideas.
然而,不同的学生有不同的观点
引出不同观点(二选一)
⭐⭐⭐ On the one hand, it is fun. On the other hand, it is hard.
一方面,它很有趣,另一方面,它很难
利弊分析
⭐⭐ Instead of giving up, I chose to keep trying.
我选择坚持尝试(努力),而不是放弃
励志/成长故事
⭐⭐ Although I was tired, I felt really happy.
尽管我很累,我真的觉得很开心
注意:英文中的关联词不能同时出现
有because 不能有 so
有 although 不能有 but
⭐⭐ In contrast, some students prefer to study alone.
相比而言,有些学生更愿意独自学习
对比两者差异
三、 递进与补充
⭐⭐⭐ What's more, it also teaches me to be responsible.
另外,它也教会了我要承担责任
补充第三个理由
⭐⭐⭐ Another advantage is that it saves time.
还有一个好处就是它节省时间
列举好处/坏处
⭐⭐ Besides, it allows me to make more friends.
除此以外,它允许我交更多的朋友
补充社交层面的好处
⭐⭐ Even worse, some students may lose interest.
更糟的是,有些学生也许会失去兴趣
说缺点/问题
⭐⭐ Most importantly, it helps me with my exams.
更重要的是,它帮助了我的考试
强调最重要的点
四、 举例与总结
⭐⭐⭐ For example, I can learn new words by reading.
举例来说,我通过阅读学会了新单词
举具体例子
⭐⭐⭐ To be honest, I used to hate it, but now I love it.
实话实说,我以前很讨厌它,但是现在我很爱它
诚实表达感受(书信/发言)
⭐⭐ In my opinion, this is the best choice for me.
在我看来,这是对我来说最好的选择
结尾前的个人观点
⭐⭐ In a word, we should try our best to do it.
总而言之,我们应该尽全力去做它
结尾总结 比 "In short" 更书面
⭐⭐ From my point of view, practice makes perfect.
在我看来,熟能生巧
引用道理(慎用谚语)
示例1:
First, it is good for our health. What's more, it is really fun to play basketball. For example, I can run with my best friend. Most importantly, thanks to this activity, I have become stronger. In a word, we should enjoy it.
示例2:First, reading helps me relax. Besides, it builds my vocabulary. For example, I often meet new words in stories and guess their meanings. However, I used to be lazy. Since then, I keep a reading log. In the end, it works.
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