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专题 02 人物正面情绪描写 （高兴、感动等）
【考情分析】
在读后续写过程中，对人物心理情绪的描写，可以帮助读者更深入的了解人物的性格和心理状
态。并具备丰富人物形象、增强情感共鸣、推动情节发展、展现人物的复杂性、深化人物形象的作
用。通过描写人物在特定情境下的喜、怒、哀、乐，可以感受到人物的动机、行为和决策。这样的描
写使得故事更加引人入胜，使人物更加真实和立体。
【写作指导】
在进行心理描写时，常常使用下列方法：
1. 细腻的形容词来表达人物的内心。
2. 运用比喻和暗示来帮助读者感受到人物的挣扎和犹豫等复杂情感。
3. 构建心理冲突与矛盾。借助一些词汇或短语展示这些技巧。
句式：
1. 形容词+形容词，主语+谓语，ving....
2. A burst/flood/surge/sense of...+v.(seize/grasp/swallow/well up/surge/overwhelm)+主语，
3. so+adj./adv.+部分倒装+主语...
4. with+宾语+宾语补足语，主语+谓语...
5. -ving/-ved..., 主语+谓语...
【素材宝库】
词汇积累之高兴
’s hands摊开双手
高兴地跳了起来jumped with joy spread one
感到鼓舞的feel inspired/encouraged 既兴奋又开心a mixture of excitement and delight
乐得大叫yell with delight 激发某人的激情kindle sb.with/to passion
精神高涨be in high spirit 显示出极大的意愿show a greater readiness
心情愉快in cheerful spirits
振作精神keep up one’s spirits
满意的表情a satisfied look 对……很高兴be delighted at
对……感到满意be content with 为成功而欣喜: be excited with joy at the success更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
grin with delight高兴的咧嘴一笑 被她的美貌所吸引be fascinated with her beauty
tears of joy开心的泪水 light up with pleasure容光焕发
高兴有关句式积累
1. Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds.她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。
2. He felt the warmth surging through his body.他感到身体里涌动着一股暖流。
3. It was a welcome relief once again, Stanley felt that destiny was on his side.
这又是一次令人欣慰的解脱，斯坦利感到命运站在他一边。
4. A bright smile appeared on/spread across his face.
他脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。
5. Her face lit up/brightened/glowed when I gave her the present.
我给她礼物时，她的脸上焕发出光彩。
6. Everyone was in a good mood. 每个人的心情都很好。
7. I’m in good mood at the moment, just like the white clouds in the blue shy.
我此刻心情舒畅，就像蓝天白云那样自在。
8. My heart is as sweet as honey.我的心情像吃了蜜一样甜。
9. She was overflowing with happiness.她内心洋溢着幸福。
10.He was grinning from ear to ear.他笑的合不拢嘴。
11.I couldn’t restrain my joy and jumped into the house.
我抑制不住内心的喜悦，蹦蹦跳跳地进了家门。
12.When his mother kissed him on the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were on the top of the world.
当妈妈亲吻他的脸颊时，小婴儿开心极了。
13. The instant she was informed of the result of the test, a surge of excitement seized her.
当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。
词汇积累之鼓励和感动
sb. tightly/firmly紧紧拥抱 his gratitude不停表达感激
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pat sb.拍了拍某人 with grateful tears hanging in his eyes带着感激的眼泪
鼓励和感动有关句式积累
1. I ran over to my father, reached out my hands and hugged/embraced him tightly/firmly.
我跑向父亲，伸出手，紧紧抱住他。
2. With grateful tears hanging in his eyes, he kept extending（表达）his gratitude(感激）， “Thank you so
much!”
他眼中满是感激的泪水，不停地说：“非常感谢！”
3.Taking a deep breath, I managed to calm myself down and walked up to the platform confidently.
深吸一口气，我成功地让自己镇定，然后自信地走上了讲台。
4.I walked over to him, and patted him on the shoulder, encouraging: “Come on!”
我走向他，拍拍他的肩膀，鼓励道：“加油！”
5. It was her mother, with a loving and encouraging smile. All the fear and nervousness drained away like water.
She felt instantly more confident and ready to show her best.
那是她的母亲，带着一种慈爱而又鼓励的微笑。所有的恐惧和紧张都像水一样消失了。她立刻感到更加
自信了，并准备好展示她最好的一面。
6. Lucy smiled and nodded. The following morning, when Doris came to visit Martin he handed a card to her I
made a card for you, “Martin said shyly.” You’re so sweet! Doris smiled.
露西笑着点了点头。第二天早上，当多丽丝来拜访马丁时，他递给她一张卡片，我给你做了一张卡片。”
马丁害羞地说。你真是太可爱了！多丽丝笑了。
万能写作模板
1.看着他自信的微笑，我的心中也涌起了喜悦。
At the sight of his confident smile, ________________________________________.
2. 她看向我们，面带灿烂/温暖的笑容。
He cast us a look/glance,with his face ________________________________________.
3. 她心中充满了喜悦。
A thrill of joy ________________________________________.
4. 听到这个好消息，他开心地跳起来，眼睛像星星一样闪烁。更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
Hearing this good news, he________________________________________, with his eyes
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5.每当他想起去年冬天的时候，就喜上眉梢。
His ________________________________________ every time he remembers last winter.
6. 微笑在他的眼睛里跳舞。/她的眼睛里充满了喜悦幸福。
Smiles ________________________________________.
7.沐浴在阳光下，我们欢呼雀跃。
Bathed in sunshine, we all ________________________________________.
8.Learning the children’s idea, Lily was so __________(高兴的) that she __________（笑得很开心）. Then,
the children got down to preparing apple pie__________(高兴地). With a basket of apples, they left for the
Tom’s __________ (高兴地) to share with Tom the good plan. Hearing what they said, Tom __________ (高
兴地雀跃), with tears filling his eyes. At the sight of the basket of apples, his parents were also __________ (非
常高兴). Later, __________ (另他非常高兴的是), the apple pie was so tasty that it soon sold out. He soon
returned, his whole face __________（高兴得满脸通红）. ___________________. (笑声在房间里萦绕）
【 高考真题】
（2023年新高考I卷） I was so happy to hear the news that I immediately shared it with my teacher. “I
knew you’d win! I am proud of you. You made it!” he said excitedly.
听到这个消息，我立刻把它分享给了我的老师。“我就知道你会赢的！”我为你感到骄傲。你做到了！”
他兴奋地说。
（2023年浙江卷）
It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. Leaving the house, I
couldn’t help wondering how it was getting on now. Had it managed to find its way back home, or was it still out
there somewhere struggling to survive?
窗户上原来的洞无处可寻，这是一种极大的安慰。离开家后，我不禁想知道现在事情过得怎么样了。是它
设法找到了回家的路，还是它还在那里挣扎求生？
（2022年新高考卷）
The starter’s gun sounded. But he had only gone a few metres before he tripped and fell flat on the ground. My
heart sank. As I started to shout encouragement, other voices around me took up the call. “Come on David, you can
do it!” David picked himself up and started again until he crossed the finish line to wild cheers and applause.
起动器的枪响了。但他只走了几米就绊倒了，倒在地上。我的心沉了下来。当我开始大声喊鼓励时，我周更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
围的其他声音接起了电话。“来吧，大卫，你能做到的！”大卫振作起来，再次起跑，直到他在疯狂的欢
呼声和掌声下冲过终点线。
【 名校模拟题提升练】
1．（2023·高三重庆一中校考阶段练习）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成
一篇完整的短文。
“Helen! Are you coming?” a voice from downstairs. “Yes!” Helen replied, quickly putting on her slightly tight
dress. “Where are we going, Dad?” she asked, surprised by this rare opportunity to spend time with her father. He
had been working tirelessly to support the family.
“We’re off to collect the rent,” he responded. “Oh,” she understood. The rent was their lifeline during the
Great Depression, and going without it was unthinkable.
Their first stop was Mrs. Miller’s, who quickly handed them the rent in dollar bills, but the second tenant(租
客)Mr. Schmidt was still searching his home for coins when they arrived. Apologizing, he gave them a bag of
coins.
But the third tenants, the Katzes, worried Helen and her father. Their financial struggles had worsened, even
though her father had reduced their rent. Her father said it was important to be especially good to this family
because Mr. Katz had served in the army in the Great War and deserved their gratitude.
Mrs. Katz greeted them at the door, her eyes red from crying. Despite their financial difficulties, the inside of
the apartment was always beautifully clean. Mr. Katz and the two children were sitting at a table, waiting for Mr.
Resnick. They all had such thin faces! Helen was embarrassed, suddenly, by her own round cheeks and strong body.
They felt like marks of her guilt when she saw the little girl’s narrow, sad face and the boy’s big eyes.
Mr. Katz gave Helen’s father the money he was holding, and her father thanked him. Just as they were about to
leave, Mrs. Katz’s trembling voice stopped them. She said, “Mr. Resnick, we haven’t eaten in two days.” Helen
couldn’t imagine such a thing. Her stomach ached just to think of it.
They returned to the table, and Helen’s father silently placed the Katzes’ rent money back on it and counted
out two dollars in coins. “Helen,” he said, “I want you to go to the grocer’s with this money, buy food, and bring it
back here.”
注意:
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2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
Helen nodded, took the money, and rushed off to the grocer’s.
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Everyone’s eyes turned to her as she entered the Katzes’ house, and her father smiled.
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2．（2023秋·湖北武汉·高三校联考开学考试）阅读下而材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使
之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Hearty Welcome
Chase counted his new year gifts one more time as he put a robot-shaped eraser into each envelope. “Twenty,
twenty-one, twenty-two.”
“Do you have one for everyone in your class?” Mom asked.
“Yep!” Chase said. “I’m ready for the party tomorrow!”
When Chase got to school the next day, he saw a new girl in his classroom. She stood near Ms. Robins and
looked around shyly.
“This is Eva,” said Ms. Robins. “Will someone volunteer to show her around today? “Chase raised his hand
since he liked showing the new kids around and helping them feel welcome.
“Thanks, Chase, “Ms. Robins said. “Now let’s get down to our work.”
That’s when Chase realized he didn’t have a new year gift for Eva. No one else would have one either. Chase
pictured his classmates’ desks covered with gifts while Eva’s desk was empty. He felt sad about that.
At a break, he was careful not to mention the party as he showed Eva around the playground. At lunchtime, he
walked Eva to the lunchroom, still worried about what would happen at the party. Eva had brought a packed lunch.
so Chase showed her where she was supposed to sit and introduced her to some of the kids at her table.
While eating, Chase suddenly remembered that kids often included candy hearts with the new year gifts they更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
exchanged. This won’t be a New Year’s Day for Eva with no gifts. But as he sat down at his table, an idea flooded
into his head. He whispered it to the kids around him. Soon everyone at the table was nodding and whispering.
When they were back in the classroom after lunch, Chase told Ms. Robins about their plan. Ms. Robins
smiled. “That’s very thoughtful, “she said. “Let’s go for it.”
It was math time, so Chase invited Eva to study with him. He made sure Eva sat with her back to the room so
she wouldn’t notice.
1. 续写词数应为150左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位登作答。
Meanwhile, her new classmates were busying working on something.
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“Here’s your new year gift, Eva. It’s from everyone,” said Chase.
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3．（2023·湖北·高三校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成
一篇完整的短文。
Oh, this was terrible. “Thank you for volunteering to coach soccer... the letter began. Coach? Soccer? Me?
That was crazy. My knowledge of the sport began and ended with you-can’t-use-your-hands.
I have just graduated from high school. There was a summer holiday long enough to do something unusual.
Father advised me to pick up a part-time job in our community, like teaching kids to swim or helping them with
their subjects. “You’ll learn a lot,” he said. So, when Community Sports asked for volunteers, I signed up for data
entry, which, I thought was helping to put data into a computer. Keyboards, I knew. Coaching? Impossible!
Realizing there must be something wrong, I quickly called the head coach about the misunderstanding. It did
not go well. He had been away from home and would not be coaching at all panicked, I called the other assistant更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
coach. He said, “It isn’t difficult to teach a bunch of first graders about soccer. Be confident.”
“Are you kidding me?” I hang up the phone, smiling bitterly.
I phoned a Community Sports officer about our dilemma. “I am sorry,” he said. “Not enough people are
willing to volunteer. If you cannot coach, we will call your team and let them know they will not be playing this
season.” Seriously, that was his solution? I hang up the phone, saying I would call back to let him know my choice.
I couldn’t imagine the kids’ disappointed face when they were told their team wouldn’t play because they couldn’t
find them a coach.
That afternoon, when father came back, I told everything to him, complaining how careless and ridiculous the
community workers were. They should have suggested my “pretending” to be a coach.
Father stared at me, “Hey, listen! I remember you like watching soccer games.”
“Watching is one thing but coaching is another,” I protested.
“Why not learn the game with the kids? To those first graders, it’s just a game. Just make it fun. Besides,
you’ll gain more than them.”
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.
Para. 1 The next morning, I called back.
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Para. 2 Then came the day when I would meet those kids for the first time.
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4．（2023·广东广州·高三统考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给的段落开头语续写两段，使之
构成一篇完整的短文。更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君
For courage, my fingers cling to the harness (绳套)on my guide dog Cho’s broad back as we pass my
neighbor’s fence. Walking by Mr. Smith’s yard is the best part of our morning walk. …and also the worst. The best
part is the roses talking to us with the fragrance that bursts bold as firecrackers.
Now comes the worst part—the unfriendly figure nearby that shades us: Mr. Smith. As usual, friendly Cho
wags (摇摆) her tail in excitement. But Cho doesn’t know this neighbor does not like me at all. “Hello, Mr. Smith.”
I greet him as I do every morning but he never answers me. I know he’s behind his fence. He sounds out of breath,
and the creaky gate swings nervously in his hand.
Maybe he’s afraid of me because I am blind. Disabilities scare grown-ups sometimes. Then I remember:
Yesterday I heard him playing checkers with my friend Jimmy who’s in a wheelchair. Cho and I march on, and my
thoughts keep step. Why does Mr. Smith ignore me? Why can’t two people who like roses like each other? It’s a
mystery to me.
Cho and I stop for a moment near the rose bushes while I think. Dad has told me that some folks do not like
people from faraway places. Maybe Mr. Smith does not like foreigners. Then, the sidewalk hums beneath my feet.
A skateboard zooms by. “Hello, Mai and Cho!” my friend Jana shouts, “Hi, Mr. Smith.”
I wait. Jana is from Mexico. If Mr. Smith ignores Jana, then my mystery is solved. But his voice calls out,
“Hello, Jana!” The sound of it twists my heart. Now I know that unfriendly Mr. Smith likes everyone but not me
and Cho…
Me and Cho! An idea brightens my mystery. Maybe I do know why Mr. Smith doesn’t talk to me!
“Down!” I command Cho to sit on the ground.
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I lead him back to Cho, and tell Mr. Smith how gentle Cho is.
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5．（2023·广东湛江·高三统考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构
成一篇完整的短文。
Thomas and John have a lot in common. They are both talented high school seniors. They both love
basketball. They are both captains of their respective high school basketball teams. But on one Saturday night in
February, they were forever linked in the minds of all who were present for a mutual act of courage,
sportsmanship(体育精神)and respect.
The remarkable moment came during a game between Thomas's small town Illinois team and John's big city
team in Wisconsin—a game that almost wasn't played. Just days before the game, John's mother lost her five-year
battle with cancer. Her death was sudden and painful for all who knew her.
John's coach wanted to cancel the game, but John insisted that the game should be played. So with heavy
hearts, his teammates prepared to honor their captain's wishes and play without him.
What they weren't prepared for was John's appearance in the gym mid-way through the first half. As soon as
the coach saw John, he called a time out, and players and fans surrounded the young man to offer love and support.
The coach asked him if he wanted to sit on the bench with the team. “No,” John said. “I want to play.” Of
course his team was excited to have him. But because John wasn't on the pre-game roster(候选名单), putting him
in the game at that point would result in a technical foul(犯规)and two free throws for the opposing team.
However, John's coach agreed with that. He could see that this was the teenager's way of coping with his loss.
He thought the points didn't matter. The opposing team understood the situation and told the referees to let John
play and forget the technical foul. The referees argued that a rule is a rule, and the free throws would have to be
taken before the game could proceed. For possibly the first time in basketball history, referees had to force a team
to accept and take the technical free throws.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As team captain, Thomas volunteered to take the free throws.
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John and his teammates stood and applauded the gesture of sportsmanship.
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6．（2023·河北保定·高三统考期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一
篇完整的短文。
As Alina sat quietly in the patient room, her rive-year-old son, Tony, was lying on her chest. He was suffering
from a serious disease and they were staying in the hospital for several days.
Alina’s mind was working overtime. She was worrying about money. She worked as a manager for a retail
chain， and it was the busiest time of the year. Alina had already taken almost all her vacation time and knew she
would not be paid for the days she was now taking off. Worse still, she had only a couple of hundred dollars in the
bank.
But Alina’s main concern washers on. She didn’t know how she would be able to manage, working full-time
and looking after him. She was depressed and felt the tears well up and spillover.
And that’s when Lorna arrived. She had been Alina’s assistant. Quickly blinking back the tears, Alina
welcomed her in. Lorna came to offer some support and brought a card signed by the office staff. Alina was
touched, for she didn’t expect they were thinking of her during a completely crazy workweek. Full of grate fullness,
she took the card and discovered there was more. Inside the card was a note, which said, “Dear Alina, we want to
help. Each person who has signed this card has donated one vacation day into your account. We know you need to
spend some time with your son and we don’t want you to worry about having to take time off without pay.”
So moved by their kindness, Alina was speechless and got quite choked up, tears held back earlier now rolling
down her cheeks.
After Lorna left, Alina calmed down. She looked at her son, lost in thought. “Tomorrow is Christmas Day.
What shall I do?” Because of several days of bad sleep, drowsily Alina fell asleep.
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1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
The next day morning, when Alina woke up, she was amazed at what she saw.
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A week later, Tony left hospital and Alina went back to work.
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