中考英语写作---平凡和不平凡

       假如你是李明，你的好朋友王林最近常常抱怨平凡的生活千篇一律，又苦恼不知如何发现或创造不凡。请给他写一封信，结合你的自身经历或所见所闻，谈谈你对“平凡”和“不凡”的理解，并给他一些建议。

注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。

你可以这样开始：

Dear Wang Lin

I know you are bored with everyday life and don’t know how to find or create something great. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

写作分三步，审题-列提纲-写作

1. 本篇作文的文体是什么？

2. 话题是什么？

3. 作文的人称是什么？

4. 本篇作文的时态是什么？

5. 字数多少？

Dear Wang Lin,

       I know you are bored with everyday life and don’t know how to find or create something great. Actually, every ordinary day is filled with potential extraordinariness. Take my neighbor Uncle Zhang as an example. He’s an ordinary postman, but he always wears a bright smile and delivers mail with great care. He makes our lives smoother and happier, which makes him truly extraordinary.

    Being extraordinary is not about big changes, but putting our hearts into little things. For example, offering timely assistance to classmates in need can make a significant difference.

    Take action immediately—do what you can within your ability, and I believe you will find that every day can be meaningful and amazing.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

   本篇文章共115词，在中考写作中，是一个很理想的篇幅长度，太长或太短都不好。太短会让阅卷老师觉得词数不够；太长会让阅卷老师觉得太过啰嗦。因此，100-120这是一个很理想的区间。

   本篇文章，有宾语从句，非谓语动词等，长短结合，高级词汇，是一篇佳作，同学们可以积累一下里面的素材，变成自己的好词好句。

      I know you are bored with everyday life and don’t know how to find or create something great. Actually, every ordinary day is filled with potential extraordinariness. Take my neighbor Uncle Zhang as an example. He’s an ordinary postman, but he always wears a bright smile and delivers mail with great care. He makes our lives smoother and happier, which makes him truly extraordinary.

★★写作高分句型运用1: Actually, every ordinary day is filled with potential extraordinariness.

强调平凡的日子里蕴含着不平凡的人/事。

仿写1：事实上，每个平凡的日子里都充满着不平凡的事。

Actually/In fact, every ordinary day is filled with/is full of extraordinary things.

★★写作高分句型运用2: ..., which.....非限制性定语从句

仿写3：他让我们的校园生活更安心、更温暖，这也让他成为了校园里一个不平凡的存在。

He makes our campus life safer and warmer, which makes him a truly extraordinary person in the campus.

Being extraordinary is not about big changes, but putting our hearts into little things. For example, offering timely assistance to classmates in need can make a significant difference.

★★写作高分句型运用1: Being extraordinary is not about..., but...非凡不是...，而是...

仿写：我们自己的生活中活出不凡，从来不是要一次性改变所有事，而是在日常做的小事里，每天进步一点点。

Being extraordinary in our own lives isn’t about changing everything at once, but improving a little bit each day in the small things we do.

★★写作高分句型运用2: Doing...can make a significant difference to...做…能产生重大的影响

仿写：比如，当同学在学习上遇到困难时，及时帮他讲解难题就能给他带来重大影响。

For example, when a classmate meet difficulties in his study, helping him explain difficult problems in time can make a significant difference to him.

   Take action immediately—do what you can within your ability, and I believe you will find that every day can be meaningful and amazing.

★★写作高分句型运用:Take action immediately—do what you can within your ability, and I believe you will find that ....

仿写：立刻采取行动吧！做你日常生活中能做的小事，我相信你会发现校园生活可以变得生动有趣。

Take action right now—do small things you can in daily life, and I believe you will find that your school life can be lively and interesting.