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让更多的孩子得到更好的教育
【巩固练习】
I. 书面表达真题演练。
【2012山东东营】
你在求学的过程中肯定遇到过很多好老师，你最喜欢哪位呢？请你以The Teacher I Like
Best为题, 用英语写一篇短文，参加美国杂志Weekly Reader的征文活动。
内容可涉及：他（她）是谁、教什么学科；你喜欢他（她）的原因。可以适当发挥。
要求：
1．80-100词；
2．文中不得出现真实姓名及校名，老师姓名统一使用Mr./Mrs./Miss XX，例如：Mr. Ma。
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【2012陕西】
你年级决定本周日进行一次外出活动(have a school trip),请你负责将此消息传达给来自英
国的交换生。
提示语：walk to Fenghuang Mountain.
要求： 10 kilometers away. hard but exciting.
1. 参考提示语，可适当发挥； the whole day. keep safe. behave. things
to take(food, drinks…)…
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现真实地名和姓名；
4. 词数：60-80词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。)
Hello, everyone!
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That’s all.
【2012新疆阜康】
在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮，但这还不是全部，长大还应包括什么？是关心、帮助同学？
是体贴、理解父母？是感恩、回报亲朋师长？还是……，成长的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请
以I Am Not a Child Any More为题，记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事，表明你已经
不再是一个小孩子。
要求：1.请根据所给题目，用英语写一篇短文，不少于80词；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计算
I Am Not a Child Any More
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II. 书面表达综合演练。
作文一：
在和谐社会里，人与人之间的互帮互助已构成我们生活中的重要组成部分。下周英国友
好学校将来你校访问，你校英语俱乐部将举行一次以“Helping Each Other Makes the World
Wonderful”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如李智要参加演讲比赛，请你以“李智”的名义用英
语写一篇讲稿。内容要点提示：
1．帮助同学——友谊;
2．帮助老人——幸福;
3．帮助病人——快乐;
4．帮助别人体会……
要求：
1．词数：80词左右。正文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;
2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Zhi. It’s nice to speak about help here．___________________
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_______________________________________________________Thank you for your listening.
作文二：
在今年的“地球一小时(Earth Hour)”活动中，中国很多城市的人们都自觉熄灯一小时，
体现了低碳生活的新理念。假定你是CCTV9的记者，请你根据以下采访信息用英语写一篇
80词左右的新闻稿。
注意：部分内容已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Thank you for joining CCTV’s Around China show! Now it’s 8:45 p. m. during the famous
Earth Hour. People in many cities have turned off their lights and are having a very special time.
In Shanghai, ____________________________________________________________________
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Many people share with us their plans. ___________________________________________
作文三：
假如你是某学生杂志社的编辑Diana，收到了读者Steve的一封来信，心中倾诉了他的烦
恼。请根据提示内容，给Steve写一封回信。
提示：
与人交流 课上参与小组讨论，表达自己的想法；课间和同学们交流
表达善意 主动问候同学；对同学友好；帮助同学
参加活动 积极参加班级活动（如：运动会、歌咏比赛等）
参考词汇：小组讨论 group work 表达 express
要求：1．词数：80-100个。
2．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
3．要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear Diana,
I just came to a new school．And I can’t get on well with my new classmates…
What should I do?
Steve
Dear Steve,
I’ve learned about your problem．I think_______________________________
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Best wishes，
Diana
作文四：
某英语网站进行了一次中学生健康情况调查，发现很多中学生的健康状况令人担忧。主
要原因有：饮食结构不合理；体育锻炼不足；心理压力大，不能与人很好地沟通等等。为此，他
们发起了题为How to Keep Fit的征文活动，倡导中学生的健康生活方式。请你写一篇80词左
右的英语短文，说明如何保持身体健康。
How to Keep Fit
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作文五：
一说到考试，同学们总有讲不完的故事。在你的记忆中，那些发生在考场内外的故事，一
定有使你至今感慨、难忘的吧?请以考试为话题，写一篇题为“An Unforgettable (难忘的)
Experience”的短文。
以下提示词语可能对你有帮助 (可根据需要选用)：final exam, mid-term exam, nervous, warm
words, relax, confident, give the best performance (do well), fail .....
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要求：100词左右
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【答案与解析】
I. 书面表达真题演练。
【2012山东东营】
A possible version:
The Teacher I Like Best
Of all my teachers, I love Mrs. Li best. She taught us English in junior middle school.
She had many ways of making her classes interesting and exciting. She always taught us
something new in easy ways. She helped us use English by doing interesting activities, such as,
making surveys, playing games, etc.
Mrs. Li was a strict but kind teacher. She often asked us to be on time for class and do
homework by ourselves. When we had trouble, she often helped us out.
Thanks to Mrs. Li, I started to love English. I love Mrs. Li and her class.
【2012陕西】
One possible version
Hello, everyone!
Hello, everyone!
May I have your attention, please? Have you ever had a hard but exciting trip? Now I’ve got
good news to tell you. This Sunday, we are going to have a school trip like this. We’ll walk to
Fenghuang Mountain, It’s about 10 kilometers away from our school. As we’ll be away for the
whole day, please remember the following things, Take enough food acid drinks with you and
wear comfortable shoes. The most important thing is to keep safe and behave yourselves on the
way. I think we’ll have a nice trip.
That’s all.
Thank you!
【2012新疆阜康】
One possible version
I Am Not a Child Any More
I have changed a lot during the past three years. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am
strong and as tall as my father. The most important thing is that I have learned to care about
others.
It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I
didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the
meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. At bedtime, I fetched hot water for my mother to
wash feet. My mother said, “Dear, you are really grown up.”
It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child any more.
II. 书面表达综合演练。
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作文一：
〔解析〕
本题是命题作文，根据汉语提示，简述乐于助人的好处，号召大家要积极参与乐于助人活
动，从而使我们的世界更美好。
One possible version
Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Zhi. It’s nice to speak about help here. In our life we often help
others and also get help from others. When we help our classmates with their study and other
things, we can develop our friendship. If we give a hand to old people, we can understand the
meaning of pleasure. As we know, patient in our life. I think we can get much when we help the
people around us. As the saying goes, “Giving is much better than receiving.”
作文二：
〔解析〕
本题通过英文图表提示，要考生叙述地球一小时活动的情况，在关灯一小时，人们正在做
什么有意义的活动，以后打算做什么活动来节约能源，保护环境，使我们的地球家园更美好。
One possible version
Thank you for joining CCTV’s Around China show! Now it’s 8:45 p. m. during the famous
Earth Hour. People in many cities have turned off their lights and are having a very special time.
In shanghai, some people are taking a walk with their family. They feel very relaxed. In Beijing,
some people are having a nice talk with their friends. And in Ningbo, some young people are
holding a party in the park, singing and dancing. Without lights, people can also enjoy themselves.
Many people share with us their plans. Some say they will spend more time with their family
and friends. Others say they will try their best to protect the environment, like planting more trees,
saving water and so on. What’s more, some people tell me that they will use paper both sides
(drive less, ride bikes, use plastic bags less…) in their daily life.
Liu Peng
Yours,
Li Ming
作文三：
〔解析〕
本题要求写一封回信，帮Steve解决问题，要根据汉语提示要点去写，层次要清晰，句意不
要重复，注意语气诚挚，句式多样。
One possible version
Dear Steve,
I’ve learned your problem．I think you should be active in group work in class and be brave
enough to express your ideas．Try to talk with your classmates at break．If you want to get on well
with your classmates, don’t forget to say hello when you meet them．Being friendly and helpful is
also very important．You need to take part in all kinds of class activities, such as sports meeting,
football games and singing competitions．I’m sure you will soon be among friends.
Best wishes
Diana
作文四：
〔解析〕
本题要求就中学生健康问题进行简单阐述，中学生如何保持健康，具体采取的措施，内容
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要具体，层次要清晰，要具有可行性。分步措施衔接要自然，通过连接词自然过渡。
One possible version:
How to Keep Fit
As we all know，health is very important．But how to keep fit? Firstly, we should have a
good diet．That’s eating more fresh fruit and vegetables, but less junk food. Drink more water
instead of coke or other unhealthy drinks. Secondly, it’s good for us to take more exercise, such as
running, walking, ball games and so on. At last, we should learn to relax ourselves. We can listen
to some light music, chat with families or friends and have a good sleep. To keep fit is not difficult
if you care it a lot.
作文五：
〔解析〕
本题要求写有关你经历的无数次考试中的一次难忘的经历，这次考试经历给你的启示。
内容要具体真实，最好是亲身经历的，难忘的记忆。层次要清晰，语句要规范通顺。词数符合
要求。
Among many exam experiences, I still remember what happened in the final exam last term.
In the past I always felt nervous at the beginning of exams. And because of this, I never gave the
best performance. But in the last final exam, when I got the paper, I was surprised to see some
warm words on the paper, “Hi, everyone. Believe in yourself and you will do best. Good luck.”
Seeing these words, the feeling of nervousness soon disappeared and I became confident. I did
best that time.
Ever since then, whenever I have exams, these simple but warm words always encourage me
and make me feel confident.
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