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专题 12 话题写作（分话题）
考情 近三年中考英语话题作文紧密关联学生生活、社会发展和时代热点，从校园生活、家庭关系，到社会现
分析 象、科技发展，都有涉及。像2023年部分地区考到校园活动，2024年有关于网络学习利弊的讨论。
1. 词汇运用：考查基础词汇拼写与运用，也要求学生掌握高级词汇、短语提升作文亮点。
2. 语法知识：时态是重点，一般现在时、一般过去时、一般将来时等频繁考查；各类从句如宾语从句、
考点
定语从句、状语从句，以及被动语态也是常见考点。
分布
3. 逻辑结构：要求学生合理分段，开头引出主题，中间展开论述，结尾总结观点，使文章层次清晰、条
理分明。
考法 考法上，命题作文给出明确题目和要求；半命题作文让学生补充部分内容；材料作文提供文字、图表等
与比 素材；看图作文根据图片信息写作。各地比重不同，在总分 120分的试卷中，书面表达一般占15 - 20分
重 。
1. 生活实际紧密结合：围绕学生日常经历、校园生活、家庭关系等出题，如写一次难忘的家庭旅行，便
于学生有真实素材可写。
命题 2. 紧跟时代热点：关注社会现象和科技发展，像人工智能、环保问题、双减政策等，引导学生关注社
规律 会，思考时代变化，如谈人工智能对未来学习的影响。
3. 侧重思维能力：不仅考查语言表达，更注重逻辑思维、批判性思维，要求学生能清晰阐述观点、分析
问题、提出解决办法。
1. 词汇语法积累：每天背诵一定量单词，学习常见语法规则，通过练习、阅读巩固。
备考 2. 勤加练习写作：按照不同话题、体裁每周写1 - 2篇作文，写完请老师或同学批改，总结问题。
建议 3. 学习优秀范文：分析范文结构、思路、亮点表达，积累好词好句，学习如何布局谋篇。
4. 提升思维能力：平时多思考社会热点、生活问题，训练逻辑思维，写作时能有条理地表达观点 。
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考点一 叙事描写类
（2024·广东广州·中考真题）你校将在英语周举办英语征文比赛，主题是“An unforgettable school trip”。
请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文。
注意：
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 词数80词左右；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
An unforgettable school trip
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An unforgettable school trip
Our school organized a trip to the Science Museum last Saturday. I went there with all the students and
teachers of Grade 9 together.
We got together at 8:00 a.m. at the school gate and left for the museum by bus. We took a lecture by the
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guide as soon as we got there. After that, we took a visit around the different halls of the museum. A variety of
advanced inventions had been displayed, from the appliance to industry, education and life. What impressed me
most was the experience of the usage of them, which made me have a better understanding of the knowledge of
AI. We also enjoyed the delicious food cooked by an AI robot. How amazing!
At the end of the visit, we said goodbye to the AI guide. It is a meaningful trip which not only broadens our
horizon of the creation world, but also builds up our national confidence. I made up my mind to study hard and
make a contribution to my motherland.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：一般过去时；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生需要按照要点写出相应的内容，不得遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题，介绍学校旅行的时间、地点和人物；
第二步，具体介绍这次旅行中你们都做了什么；
第三步，表达对于此次经历的感想以及收获。
[亮点词汇]
①take a lecture听讲座
②A variety of各种各样的
③have a better understanding of更好地理解……
④make a contribution to对……做出贡献
[高分句型]
①We took a lecture by the guide as soon as we got there. (as soon as引导的时间状语从句)
②What impressed me most was the experience of the usage of them, which made me have a better
understanding of the knowledge of AI. (which引导的定语从句)
题型特点
叙事类文章一般要描述事件发生的时间、地点、人物、起因、经过、结果，试题可能会以写日记、信件、
看图写话等形式进行考查，但其本质仍是写一篇记叙文。
解题步骤
一、认真审题，确定体裁、时态、人称。
叙事类文章为典型的记叙文体，通常使用一般过去时，人称依据写作要求使用，如日记一般使用第一人称；
看图写话，一般使用第三人称。
二、构思提纲，列出写作要点。
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通常来说叙事类文章的写作思路就是首先概括性介绍事件发生的时间、地点、人物，以时间为线索，按事
件的起因，发展，结果进行写作，最后表达情感和感悟。考生可以在大纲确定的前提下，根据写作要求提供的
信息，按照事件发展的顺序把相应的要点概括出来，
叙事类文章
解
内容 经典句式
题
第一段 概括介绍事件：时 It was the first day of my new term when a horrible accident happened in
技
间、地点、人物 front of our school gate.
巧
1.
第二段 描述事件发生过程： At the very beginning/ At first/ ……
头
起因、经过、结果
绪 Suddenly, an apple fell off into the river.
分
To our surprise, nobody liked the movie at all.
明 ，
Finally, all the pupils in the river were saved.
脉
络 第三段 抒发情感、感悟 I will never forget the day when ……
清
It is the happiest day in my life.
楚
From the experience, I learned that ……
写好书面表达，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或 人物进行分析，弄
清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程 ，然后再收集选取素材。这些素 材都要围绕五个＂W ＂和一个＂H
＂来展开，分别是 why, what, when, where, who 及 how。
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2. 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的一步。选材要注意取舍，应 该从表现文章主题
的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要 情节，略写或粗述那些非关键的次要
情节。面面俱到反而会使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。
这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。
3. 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的叙事描写类书面
表达的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事物描写得具体生动。
1．（2025·湖南·一模）初中生活即将结束，回顾过去的三年，总有一些人让你印象深刻。请以“An
Unforgettable Person”为题，写一篇英语短文。
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要求：
1. 内容包括思维导图中的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现考生人名和校名等真实信息；
3. 词数不少于80词。
An Unforgettable Person
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An Unforgettable Person
In my three years of junior high school, there is one person who stands out the most in my mind. She is my
English teacher, Ms. Li.
Ms. Li is tall and has short hair. She is nice and kind, always encouraging us to do our best. I think she is the
warmest and most caring teacher. She always goes out of her way to help us with our studies and personal
problems. I remember once when I was struggling with English, she helped me with English and encouraged me
to understand the grammar and vocabulary. Her patience and determination to see us succeed is something that
has stayed with me.
For Ms. Li, my feeling is one of deep gratitude. She has not only taught me English but also taught me how
to be a kind and caring person. She is truly an unforgettable person in my life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本题是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文用一般现在时和一般过去时；
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③提示：介绍自己初中生活中最难忘的人，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明自己最难忘的人是英语老师，引出下文；
第二步，介绍李老师的外貌，性格，以及让你难忘原因，注意细节充分，三观正确；
第三步，表达自己对李老师的感情，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①encourage sb. to do 鼓励某人做某事
②struggle with 与……作斗争，在……方面努力、挣扎
③not only…but also… 不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①In my three years of junior high school, there is one person who stands out the most in my mind.（定语从句）
②I think she is the warmest and most caring teacher.（宾语从句）
2．（2025·黑龙江哈尔滨·一模）法国作家雨果说：“进步是目的，理想是标准。”回首四年的初中时光，你
一定取得了不小的进步吧！学校英文报正在征集关于“My Progress”的稿件。请根据以下思维导图的提示，写一
篇短文向校报投稿，谈谈你在学习和生活方面取得的进步，以及对未来的期望。
内容包括：
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。
5. 至少80词。
Looking back on the past four years, I have made great progress. _____________________________
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【答案】
My Progress
Looking back on the past three years, I have made great progress.
First, I have formed good learning habits, like taking notes in class, and going over lessons after class. I
have developed good learning methods too. With these, I have done better in study.
Second, in my life, I have learned to do housework with the help of my parents, such as cleaning my room,
cooking and so on. I can take care of myself well now. I have also learned to make friends and have many friends
now. I have become active and confident.
In the future, I will make greater efforts to achieve greater success!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“现在完成时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。以“过去三年取得的进步”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。主要介绍自己在生活和学习等方面取得的进步，以及对未来的展望；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己会更加努力取得更大的成功。
[亮点词汇]
①after class课后
②take notes做笔记
③look back on回忆
④make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
In the future, I will make greater efforts to achieve greater success! (动词不定式作目的状语)
3．（2025·广东深圳·二模）在学习生活中，我们经常需要与人合作。假如你是学生李华，你的英国好友
Mike想了解你们学校的学生如何合作学习，请你写一封邮件和他分享一次你与同学合作的经历，并谈谈你的感
想与收获。
参考词汇：团队合作 teamwork
注意：
1.词数为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
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Knowing that you are interested in teamwork in my school life, I am glad to________________________________
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mike,
Knowing that you are interested in teamwork in my school life, I am glad to share with you one of my
experiences.
Last month, I cooperated with my classmates to give a report on an English novel. First, we had a
discussion to decide on the book. We chose The Adventure of Tom Sawyer which features attractive characters
and interesting plots. Then, we were separated into different teams. We met after class every day to exchange
ideas. Sometimes we had different opinions, but we always listened to each other patiently and tried to reach an
agreement.
Through this task, I have improved my communication skills and learned how to work well in a team. It was
a valuable experience for me. Have you ever worked with others?
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：主要为“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”；
③提示：需包含内容提示的要点，通过详细描述合作过程、遇到的情况及自身收获突出了合作这一重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述写作意图，开篇点明知道对方对自己学校生活中的团队合作感兴趣，很高兴与之分享一次经历；
第二步，详细介绍经历过程，包括选择书籍、分组以及课后交流想法、处理分歧等细节；
第三步，通过总结此次经历的收获，再次强调这次团队合作经历的价值。
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[亮点词汇]
①cooperate with与……合作
②separate into分成
③exchange ideas交流想法
[高分句型]
①We chose The Adventure of Tom Sawyer which features attractive characters and interesting plots.(which引导
的定语从句)
4．（2025·河北邯郸·模拟预测）时光如白驹过隙，转眼你们踏入中学校园已两年有余。回想初入校园时
的青涩模样，再看如今蜕变后的自己，你一定感慨万千。请你结合下面思维导图的内容，写一篇短文。
写作要求：
1. 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
2. 内容须包含提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
3. 词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear teachers and students,
Time flies! It’s been more than two years since I became a middle school student.__________________________
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Dear teachers and students,
Time flies! It’s been more than two years since I became a middle school student. I used to be short and a
little shy. But now I’m much taller and I’ve become more outgoing. In the past, I used to play computer games.
But now I spend more time doing what I love. I fall in love with reading. The biggest change is that I have made
great progress in English, especially my spoken English. Thanks to my teachers and classmates, I’ve changed so
much. I expect to be better in the future and I believe I can make it with the help of my teachers and classmates.
【详解】[总体分析]
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①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干思维导图的要点，介绍自己的改变和成长；
第三步，介绍未来的期待，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①in the past过去
②fall in love with爱上
[高分句型]
I expect to be better in the future and I believe I can make it with the help of my teachers and classmates.（宾语
从句）
5．（2025·吉林长春·一模）成长的路上总有一些事情让我们感觉到自己是最棒的，请以“I Am the Best”为
题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。
要求：
(1) 讲述一个自己的故事；
(2) 说明你感到自己很棒的理由；
(3) 适当增加细节，行文连贯；
(4) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
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【答案】
I Am the Best
Last year, I joined my school’s English speech contest. At first, I was nervous and practiced every day after
school. I recorded my voice to improve my pronunciation and asked my teacher for advice. During the
competition, my legs shook but I took a deep breath and spoke confidently. When I finished, everyone clapped
loudly. Surprisingly, I won first place! I felt proud because I overcame my fear and tried my best.
This experience taught me that hard work can make ordinary people achieve extraordinary things. Now I
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believe challenges are chances to grow. Whenever I face difficulties, I tell myself, “I am the best!”
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当增加细节，注意行文连贯，表述清晰并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍关于自己很棒的一个故事；
第二步，说明自己感到很棒的理由；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①at first起初
②take a deep breath深呼吸
③try one’s best尽某人最大努力
[高分句型]
①I felt proud because I overcame my fear and tried my best. (because引导原因状语从句)
②This experience taught me that hard work can make ordinary people achieve extraordinary things. (that引导宾
语从句)
考点二 观点看法类
（2023·四川泸州·中考真题）随着《泸州市生活垃圾分类管理条例》的颁布施行，学校决定开展一次主题
征文活动，号召大家践行垃圾分类，倡导绿色生活。请根据以下要点提示，以“Rubbish Sorting Starts with Me”为
题，用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示：1. 意义：可以减少垃圾产生、循环使用垃圾等。
2. 做法：通过书籍和网络学习垃圾分类知识，参与志愿服务等；将各种垃圾分类投放在不同颜色垃圾桶等；旧
衣服做成购物袋，废品做成艺术品，减少使用塑料袋等。
3. 个人观点……
要求：1. 词数110词左右（首句已给出，不计入总词数）；2. 要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加内容；3. 不用
真实姓名、校名、地名。
参考词语：reduce，recycle，throw，rubbish bins， plastic bag
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Rubbish Sorting Starts with Me
Nowadays, more and more people have realized the importance of rubbish sorting. _____________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Rubbish Sorting Starts with Me
Nowadays, more and more people have realized the importance of rubbish sorting. It is important for us
to create an environmentally friendly society. Rubbish sorting has made a great contribution to environmental
protection. At the same time, it can reduce rubbish generation and recycle rubbish.
Here are some suggestions for rubbish sorting.
First of all, we can learn the knowledge of rubbish sorting through books and the Internet. Besides, we can
participate in volunteer service to help people sort their rubbish. Second, we put all kinds of rubbish into different
colored trash cans. Third, we can make old clothes into shopping bags and waste into art. The most important
thing is to reduce the use of plastic bags.
If all of us try our best to sort rubbish, we’ll lead a better life. All of us can do our part to protect the
environment and encourage others to sort their rubbish. Let’s pull together and take action from now on.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明垃圾分类的意义；
第二步，具体阐述垃圾分类的做法；
第三步，最后表达自己的个人观点。
[亮点词汇]
① at the same time同时
② first of all首先
③ pull together齐心协力
[高分句型]
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①Besides, we can participate in volunteer service to help people sort their rubbish. （动词不定式作目的状语）
②If all of us try our best to sort rubbish, we’ll lead a better life.（if引导的条件状语从句）
题型特点
观点类文章一般来说可以有以下几种类型：A.针对某一问题提出观点和看法,论证这一观点;B.针对某一现
象，分析原因，提出你的观点；C.针对某一现象，阐述正反方观点，提出你的观点。
解题步骤
一、 认真审题，确定时态、人称
观点类文章的主体时态是一般现在时，表达自己观点时使用第一人称，描述现象、用论据进行论证时使用
第三人称。
二、构思提纲。
Ａ.针对某一主题提出观点,论证这一观点。
这类文章，可以按总分总的思路进行写作，注意第一部分要开篇点题，即开门见山地表明作者的观点；第
二部分要条理清晰地阐述论据；第三部分要简洁准确地进行总结。
针对某一主题提出观点类文章
内容 经典句式
第一段 针对某一 In my opinion/view, ……
主题表明
According to me, ……
观点
As far as I am concerned, ……
[来源:学|科|网Z|X|X|K]
I think it is good/bad to ……
As for me, ……
Personally, ……
第二段 提供论据 First of all, Secondly, Thirdly, What’s more, Besides, Finally
论证观点
For one thing, For another thing, Besides
第三段 总结观点 In a word, …… To sum up ,……
All in all, …… In short, ……
Ｂ.针对某一现象，分析原因，提出你的观点
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针对现象，分析原因， 提出观点类文章
内容 经典句式
第一段 描述 Nowadays, the computer is playing an important role in our daily life.
现象
With the development of technology, more and more students are using smart phones.
As we all know, most middle school students spend little time doing sports.
It is known to all that many students have to take various classes in their spare time.
第二段 分析 First of all, Secondly, Thirdly, What’s more, Besides, Finally
原因
For one thing, For another thing, Besides
On the one hand, On the other hand
第三段 提出 In my opinion/view, ……
观点
According to me, ……
As far as I am concerned, ……
I think it is good/bad to ……
As for me, ……
Personally, ……
Ｃ. 针对某一现象，阐述正反方观点，提出你的观点
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提出建议类文章
内容 经典句式
第一段 描述现 …… Different people have different opinions about it.
象，说
We have discussed whether students should take mobile phones to school.
明人们
有不同 We have debated whether teachers should punish students.
观点。
…… Opinions vary from person to person.
第二段 阐述正 On the one hand, …… On the other hand，……
方观点
Almost half of the students suggest that ……
Some students believe/ think that ……
[来源:学§科§网]
第三段 阐述正
The rest of the students agree that ……
方观点 [来源:学科网]
[来
源:学科网]
第四段 提出你 In my opinion/view, ……
的观点
According to me, ……
As far as I am concerned, ……
I think it is good/bad to ……
As for me, ……
Personally, ……
解题技巧
1.谋篇布局，掌握十句作文法
第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，提出问题并通过问题点明全文主题;第二句为扩展句，进一步
说明和支持主题句。另外，也可调整两句的顺序，由第一句说明情况，第二句提出问题。
第二段为正文，共七句。第一句为主题句，提出本段的主题，它应与第一段的主题相一致。第二句至第七
句为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡词语，以使行文流畅。
第三段为结尾，简化为一句，是对全文的总结，并说明作者自己的观点。
三段之间的衔接要灵活运用“启、承、转、合”的过渡手段。
2.临危不乱，打开锦囊包
遇到要点不会表达怎么办？词数不达标怎么办？不要急，“一代，五加，一扩”帮你轻松解决问题。“一代，
五加，一扩”具体说来就是：
一代：以实代虚——写实;五加： 增加限定语——定语、状语等;增加例子——for example， such as; 增
加原因; 加套语（词块）;加格言、谚语等进一步说明;一扩：扩充建议——自主发挥，点到即可。
3. 注意事项，稳中求胜
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（1） 观点鲜明，文章一定要有一个明确的中心论点——主题。
（2） 层次分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，层次要分明，过渡要自然。
（3） 最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。
（4）通常采用一般现在时。
（5）语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。
1．（2025·四川乐山·一模）2025年春节期间，DeepSeek掀起了中国人工智能科技热潮，受到了大众的欢
迎，而我校学生也对AI tool (工具) 进行了激烈的讨论，有些学生认为非常实用，但是有些学生认为它带来许多
负面的影响。请根据以下提示，可适当发挥，写一篇不少于80词的文章，并发表自己的观点。
（1）有助于学习 (提供学习建议，提升学习效率) ；
（2）有利于生活 (帮助人们管理健康，提供个性化服务) ；
（3）负面影响 (失去工作，过度依赖Al tool) 。
参考词汇：效率 efficiency；个性化 personalized
During the Spring Festival, with the birth of DeepSeek, it drew much attention of the public. So far, it has
been very popular with us, which has been put into use in different industries, at the same time it has also led to a
heated discussion online. __________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________
【答案】
During the Spring Festival, with the birth of DeepSeek, it drew much attention of the public. So far, it has
been very popular with us, which has been put into use in different industries, at the same time it has also led to
a heated discussion online. Some think they are quite useful. They can offer learning suggestions and improve
learning efficiency, helping us study better. Also, they are beneficial in daily life, such as managing health and
providing personalized services.
However, others hold different views. They worry that AI tools may cause people to lose jobs and make us
overly dependent on them.
In my opinion, AI tools are like double-edged swords. We should make good use of their advantages while
being aware of their disadvantages and using them properly.
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【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，围绕AI tool展开讨论；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，因为是在陈述当下对AI tool的看法及现状；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于AI tool有助于学习、有利于生活以及带来负
面影响等要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点，即表达自己对AI tool的观点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借助“DeepSeek掀起中国人工智能科技热潮，受到大众欢迎并引发学生激烈讨论”这一
背景，引出对AI tool不同观点的阐述；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“有助于学习（提供学习建议，提升学习效率）、有利于生活（帮助人们管理健
康，提供个性化服务）、负面影响（失去工作，过度依赖AI tool）”几个方面详细介绍对AI tool的不同看法；
第三步，书写结语。发表自己对AI tool的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①offer learning suggestions 提供学习建议
②improve learning efficiency 提高学习效率
③be beneficial in 在……方面有益
④manage health 管理健康
⑤provide personalized services 提供个性化服务
⑥hold different views 持有不同观点
[高分句型]
①They can offer learning suggestions and improve learning efficiency, helping us study better. (现在分词短语作
结果状语)
②They worry that AI tools may cause people to lose jobs and make us overly dependent on them.(宾语从句)
2．（2025·安徽滁州·一模）三年的初中生活让你收获满满。假如你校英语报邀请你写一篇英语短文，给
即将升入九年级的学弟学妹提一些建议。请你根据以下表格提示和写作要求，并以“My School Life”为题，结合
自己的学习经历写一篇短文，阐述你的观点。
提示：
Your advice
●keep healthy
●join clubs
●develop your study
skills
●…
要求：
1. 习作必须包括表格内容，可适当发挥；
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2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 100词左右。
My School Life
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
My School Life
How time flies! Now you’re students of Grade 9. Here I’d like to tell you something to make your school life
more pleasant and wonderful.
First of all, keeping healthy is of great importance for you, so don’t forget to exercise every day. Moreover,
you’d better join some clubs so that you can learn better and make more friends. In addition, you’ll be able to
make great progress if you develop your study skills. Last, many ways can make you relaxed, such as listening to
music, hanging out with friends and watching movies.
I hope you’ll enjoy your school life and achieve your dreams.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点提示已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明写作目的，介绍一些让学校生活更美好的建议；
第二步，详细阐述建议内容；
第三步，表达美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①wonderful精彩的
②moreover此外
③in addition另外
④achieve实现
[高分句型]
①Moreover, you’d better join some clubs so that you can learn better and make more friends. (so that引导的目
的状语从句)
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②I hope you’ll enjoy your school life and achieve your dreams. (省略that的宾语从句)
3．（2025·浙江金华·一模）近期，DeepSeek这个软件非常受欢迎，很多学生认为这个APP非常实用，可
以用于查找资料、搜索难题、写作文等。但是，有些学生认为会影响学生的思考能力，产生依赖性。
Opinions Reasons
Be helpful
Some Solve different kinds of problems
Yes
students Write compositions
…
Be useless
Do something without thinking
others No
Be lack of creativity
…
…
注意：
1. 短文中必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；
2. 词数：80~100；
3. 最后阐述你的观点和理由。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________
【答案】
Recently, the software “DeepSeek” has become very popular among students in our school. Some students
believe it is very useful because it helps them find information, solve difficult problems, and even write
compositions. They think it is a convenient tool that can assist them in various academic tasks.
However, other students argue that relying on DeepSeek too much can negatively affect their thinking
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abilities. They believe it encourages them to do things without thinking, leading to a lack of creativity and
independence.
In my opinion, DeepSeek can be a helpful tool if used properly. It can save time and provide useful
resources, but students should not rely on it entirely. It is important to use it as a supplement to learning, rather
than a replacement for critical thinking. By balancing its use with independent thought, students can benefit from
DeepSeek without losing their creativity or problem-solving skills.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏表格中给出的信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，说明学生们的两种不同的观点；
第三步，陈述自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
②rely on依赖
③rather than而不是
[高分句型]
①Some students believe it is very useful because it helps them find information, solve difficult problems, and
even write compositions. (宾语从句和原因状语从句)
②They believe it encourages them to do things without thinking, leading to a lack of creativity and
independence. (宾语从句)
4．（2025·辽宁·模拟预测）假定你是学生李辉。你的外国朋友 Nathan来信询问你有关“校园霸凌”的情况，
请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
(1)引入话题；(2)表达观点；(3)提出倡议。
注意：
(1)词数80—100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；(3)文中不能出现真
实姓名及学校名称等。
Dear Nathan,
I am so happy to receive your letter.
_________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】
Dear Nathan,
I am so happy to receive your letter. It’s true that school bullying has become a hot topic recently. Many
students are suffering from it.
First of all, we should be brave enough to say no to this kind of bad behavior if you have ever experienced
school bullying or are experiencing it. What’s more, we can ask teachers and parents for help when we can’t deal
with it by ourselves. Finally, we can make use of laws to fight against this unhealthy behavior.
It’s everyone’s duty to make school safe. I hope all of us should be friendly to others and say no to school
bullying.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要求已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“校园霸凌”这个话题；
第二步，表达自己的观点；
第三步，就此问题提出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①suffer from遭受
②first of all首先
③ask sb for help向某人寻求帮助
④deal with解决
⑤make use of利用
[高分句型]
First of all, we should be brave enough to say no to this kind of bad behavior if you have ever experienced school
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bullying or are experiencing it.（if引导的条件状语从句）
5．（2024·江苏常州·模拟预测）假如你是Sam，你在英文报的Teens Voice栏目中看到了关于青少年需要
具备的生活技能(life skills)大讨论并想写信给英文报社发表自己的观点，谈谈你觉得青少年应该提高哪些生活技
能（比如烹饪、沟通、自救、时间管理等等），并给出你的理由以及提高途径。
要求：
1.不得出现真实姓名和学校名。
2.100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear sir/madam,
I’m a big fan of Teens Voice and I’d like to share my opinions about life skills. As teenagers, life skills are
necessary for us. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
Yours,
Sam
【答案】
Dear sir/madam,
I’m a big fan of Teens Voice and I’d like to share my opinions about life skills. As teenagers, life skills are
necessary for us.
I believe cooking, communication, self-rescue, and time management are crucial. Firstly, cooking helps us
become independent and appreciate healthy food. We can learn by watching cooking shows or helping parents
in the kitchen. Secondly, communicating with others is important. Sometimes we need to work as a team. When
we communicate with others, try to understand them. Joining debate clubs or practicing conversations can
improve this. Self-rescue skills, like first aid, keep us safe in emergencies. Online courses and workshops are great
resources. Lastly, time management ensures we balance studies and fun. Using planners and setting goals can be
very helpful.
By enhancing these skills, we prepare ourselves better for the future.
Yours,
Sam
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
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③提示：文章的写作要点和开头已经给出，需要注意每个要点需要展开描述，并加上自己的观点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：详细阐述各生活技能的重要性、理由及提高途径。
第二步：总结并强调生活技能的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with和……沟通
②set goals设定目标
③prepare...for...使……为……准备好
[高分句型]
①When we communicate with others, try to understand them. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Joining debate clubs or practicing conversations can improve this. (现在分词短语作主语)
考点三 咨询建议类
（2023·江苏淮安·中考真题）假如你是李华，你们学校的英语社团将开展以“体育锻炼，健康你我”为主题
的英语演讲比赛。请以“Better Exercise, Better Life”为题，根据以下要点，写一篇英语演讲稿。
1. 最喜欢的锻炼方式
我的日常锻炼 2. 锻炼时长
3. 带来益处（不少于两点)
1. 校内锻炼方式（不少于两点）
给同学的建议
2. 校外锻炼方式（不少于两点）
1. 希望大家多锻炼
号召
2. …
参考词汇：做早操do morning exercises
上体育课 have PE lessons
压力减轻 feel less stressed
合理锻炼 exercise properly
注意：
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1. 词数在80—100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数；
2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Better Exercise, Better Life
Dear classmates,
I’m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “Better Exercise, Better Life”._______________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening.
【答案】
Dear classmates,
I’m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “Better Exercise, Better Life”.
My favorite exercise is playing basketball. I often play basketball for about ten hours a week. Because I
think it is interesting and relaxing and it also enables me to make friends with others.
I think we should do morning exercises every day to start our day. What’s more, when we have PE lessons,
we can take part in different kinds of activities. We can also run for half an hour every day to build up our body. If
we have time, we can ride bikes on weekends with our friends.
I hope everyone can exercise more and have a better life.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据表格中的提示信息进行写作，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己的日常锻炼；
第三步，介绍给同学的建议；
第四步，发出号召。
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[亮点词汇]
①make friends with sb.和某人交朋友
②take part in参与
③on weekends在周末
[高分句型]
①when we have PE lessons, we can take part in different kinds of activities.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②I hope everyone can exercise more and have a better life.(省略that的宾语从句)
题型特点
咨询建议类文章一般来说可以有以下两类型：A.针对某一主题提出建议。B.针对某一现象，分析原因，
提出你的建议。
解题步骤
一、 认真审题，确定体裁、人称和时态。
建议类文章是针对某一问题，提出作者的建议，应使用第一人称或第三人称，一般现在时态。
二、构思提纲。
A. 针对某一主题提出建议。
这类文章，可以按总分总的思路进行写作，注意第一部分要开篇点题，即开门见山地表明本篇文章的主题是针
对某问题提出建议；第二部分要条理清晰地阐述建议；第三部分要简洁准确地进行总结
提出建议类文章
内容 经典句式
[来源:Zxxk.Com]
第一段 针 对 某 Here are some suggestions on how to learn English.
一 主 题
How can we keep healthy?
提 出 建
议 What should we do to keep fit?
[来源:学_科_网]
The following are my suggestions( on ……)
第二段 阐 述 具 You should/ ought to ……
体 的 建
You had better do/not do……
议
Why not……
Why don’t you ……
It is good/ wise to ……
You mustn't ……
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Don’t ……
第三段 号 召 按 Let’s take actions from now on to ……
建 议 采
If you following the suggestions above, you will……
取行动
Only in this way, can we ……
If you do so/ keep on doing that, you will ……
Thus, I suggest sb (should )do sth .
B 针对某一现象，分析原因，提出你的建
针对现象，分析原因， 提出建议类文章
内容 经典句式
第一段 描述现象 Nowadays, the computer is playing an important role in our daily life.
With the development of technology, more and more students are using smart phones.
As we all know, most middle school students spend little time doing sports.
It is known to all that many students have to take various classes in their spare time.
第二段 分析原因 First of all, Secondly, Thirdly, What’s more, Besides, Finally
For one thing, For another thing, Besides
On the one hand, On the other hand
第三段 提出建议 You should/ ought to ……
You had better do/not do……
Why not……
Why don’t you ……
It is good/ wise to ……
[来源:Z|xx|k.Com]
You mustn't ……
Don’t ……
解题技巧
1、认真审题把握信息。
经过审题，我们要知道，这篇文章要写几个要点？用哪些词语句型？用哪种时态，语态比较好？并且要注意使
用哪些过渡词或者是过渡句。
2、明确主题，列提纲。
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我们在列提纲的时候，要认真的思考题目要求，理清脉络，思路清晰，把握文章所需要的全部要点。
3、组织语言。
大家在写文章的时候一定要注意，要用自己熟悉的英语词汇和句型，对于没有把握的句子或者单词，我们要灵
活，可以变一种说法。同时要注意句式要多样，简单句和复合句结合使用。句子和句子之间要使用过渡词，段
落与段落之间要使用恰当的过渡句，一定要用英语思维。
4、认真检查。
我们要检查语法是否正确，还有标点符号，单词拼写是否正确。
1．（2023·江苏淮安·中考真题）假如你是李华，你们学校的英语社团将开展以“体育锻炼，健康你我”为主
题的英语演讲比赛。请以“Better Exercise, Better Life”为题，根据以下要点，写一篇英语演讲稿。
1. 最喜欢的锻炼方式
我的日常锻炼 2. 锻炼时长
3. 带来益处（不少于两点)
1. 校内锻炼方式（不少于两点）
给同学的建议
2. 校外锻炼方式（不少于两点）
号召 1. 希望大家多锻炼
2. …
参考词汇：做早操do morning exercises
上体育课 have PE lessons
压力减轻 feel less stressed
合理锻炼 exercise properly
注意：
1. 词数在80—100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数；
2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Better Exercise, Better Life
Dear classmates,
I’m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “Better Exercise, Better Life”.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening.
【答案】例文
Dear classmates,
I’m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “Better Exercise, Better Life”.
My favorite exercise is playing basketball. I often play basketball for about ten hours a week. Because I
think it is interesting and relaxing and it also enables me to make friends with others.
I think we should do morning exercises every day to start our day. What’s more, when we have PE lessons,
we can take part in different kinds of activities. We can also run for half an hour every day to build up our body. If
we have time, we can ride bikes on weekends with our friends.
I hope everyone can exercise more and have a better life.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据表格中的提示信息进行写作，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己的日常锻炼；
第三步，介绍给同学的建议；
第四步，发出号召。
[亮点词汇]
①make friends with sb.和某人交朋友
②take part in参与
③on weekends在周末
[高分句型]
①when we have PE lessons, we can take part in different kinds of activities.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②I hope everyone can exercise more and have a better life.(省略that的宾语从句)
2．（2025·江苏淮安·一模）随着年龄的增长，青少年需要在生活中不断提高自我管理能力，才能不断提
升自我，请以“Learning to Manage Our Own Lives”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
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内容包括：
（1）结合实际，谈谈在生活中提高自我管理能力的作用；
（2）列举自身生活中自我管理能力薄弱的现象并提出合理化建议(至少两点)；
（3）发出在生活中提高自我管理能力的号召。
作文要求：
（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，词数100左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。
Learning to Manage Our Own Lives
These days, we Chinese teenagers often depend on our parents in our daily
lives.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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In short, the earlier we manage our own lives, the better it is for our future.
【答案】例文
Learning to Manage Our Own Lives
These days, we Chinese teenagers often depend on our parents in our daily lives. I don’t think it’s good for
us. In fact, it’s important for us to learn to manage our own lives. It can make us live better.
Take myself as an example. My room is often in a mess without my parents’ help. Besides, I can’t manage
the time of studying and playing. As a result, I sometimes don’t finish my homework until midnight.
I think I should do something to improve myself. First, I should learn to do some housework so that I can
not only keep my room clean and tidy but also be more independent. Second, I’d better have a timetable and
stick to it. In this way I can study well and play well, too.
Let’s learn to manage our own lives from now on.
In short, the earlier we manage our own lives, the better it is for our future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”，适当使用其他相关时态；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，可以适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写作开头已经给出，写作时可以承接文章首句引出自我管理的重要性。
第二步，表达体现自我管理能力薄弱的个人经历，体现自我管理的重要性。并且写出具体提升自我管理的一些
步骤或方法。
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第三步，发出号召，接应后文结语。
[亮点词汇]
①Take sb as an example以某人为例
②not only…but also…不仅……而且……
③not…until…直到……才……
④improve oneself自我提升
⑤had better do…最好做……
⑥stick to坚持……
[高分句型]
①It’s important for us to learn to manage our own lives.(it作形式主语)
②I think I should do something to improve myself.(宾语从句)
③I should learn to do some housework so that I can not only keep my room clean and tidy but also be more
independent.(结果状语从句)
3．（2025·江苏常州·模拟预测）假定你是李华，是某校的初中生。为了提高同学们的主人翁意识和丰富
民主治校渠道，学校在英语校报上开辟了“My Voice”(我有话说)专栏。请你根据以下内容要点，进行投稿：
1.学校某个现象(好坏皆可)；
2.现象的原因(至少两点)；
3.你的建议(至少两点)。
要求：
1.不得出现真实姓名和学校名。
2.100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Voice
A lot of things happen at school every day. But one phenomenon (现象) catches my attention.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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I hope our school can pay attention to this phenomenon and develop better in the future.
【答案】My Voice
A lot of things happen at school every day. But one phenomenon catches my attention. After every meal,
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there is a lot of food left. The leftovers are a huge waste of money and resources. From my point of view, reasons
for this are as follows.
First, some students are very particular about canteen food. If the food they order is not to their taste, they
choose to have little or none of it. Second, the canteen is not well managed. The food items are very limited.
Worse still, the food is not delicious. So, the canteen managers are also to blame for such wastage.
Here I have some suggestions. To students, you should know food as a resource is limited and that wasting
is shameful. After all, many people are still starving. To canteen managers, you should develop more food items
and get all the food well cooked. It’s time for us all to stop wasting food! Let’s make a difference!
I hope our school can pay attention to this phenomenon and develop better in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，特别注意不要遗漏原因和建议部分的内容，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己注意到的学校的浪费食物现象；
第二步，解释这种现象发生的原因；
第三步，针对浪费食物的现象提出自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①from my point of view在我看来
②after all毕竟
③be to blame应受到责备
[高分句型]
①If the food they order is not to their taste, they choose to have little or none of it.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②To students, you should know food as a resource is limited and that wasting is shameful.（宾语从句）
4．（2025·北京·二模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter要来中国做交换生，并寄宿在当地一位同学家
中。他给你发来邮件，询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍一些你认为
Peter应该了解的社交礼仪，并就他在拜访寄宿家庭前需做哪些准备给出建议。
提示词语：shake hands, polite, respect, gift, learn Chinese
提示问题：●What social manners in China should Peter know?
●What should he prepare before visiting the host family?
Dear Peter,
I’m excited to learn that you are coming to China.
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_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________
Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
I’m excited to learn that you are coming to China.
As you’ll be staying with a host family, understanding some basic Chinese social manners is important.
Here are some tips for you. Firstly, when you meet someone for the first time, it’s polite to shake hands. This is a
common greeting in China. Secondly, showing respect is crucial. You can use both hands when you give or
receive something. Also, it is highly appreciated that you use respectful language when talking to older people.
Before visiting your host family, consider bringing a small gift. It could be something from your country. This is a
nice way to show your gratitude. What’s more, learning a few easy Chinese words and sentences will be really
useful. It shows you are trying to fit in and respect the culture.
Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。
②时态：主要用一般现在时。
③提示：写作要点和开头结尾已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，不遗漏要点，充实细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点明写信目的，引出下文要介绍中国社交礼仪；
第二步：详细阐述各个社交礼仪要点；
第三步：结尾鼓励Peter有更多问题随时询问，保持交流。
[亮点词汇]
①manners礼貌，礼仪
②crucial至关重要的
③appreciate欣赏，赏识
④gratitude感谢
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[高分句型]
①As you’ll be staying with a host family, understanding some basic Chinese social manners is important. ( as引
导的原因状语从句)
②Firstly, when you meet someone for the first time, it’s polite to shake hands. (when引导的时间状语从句)
5．（2025·湖北武汉·模拟预测）白驹过隙，你即将告别初中生活。毕业典礼上，作为学长(姐)的你将给初
一的学弟学妹们提出一些建议。请围绕学校规则礼仪、与父母相处和社会责任感等方面，写一篇英语演讲稿。
What should we do to behave well at school?
How can we keep a good relationship with our parents?
What can we do to make the society better?
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100左右；开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear students,
I am really glad to share some of my advice with all of you.__________________________________
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【答案】
Dear students,
I am really glad to share some of my advice with all of you.
Firstly, follow school rules and show good manners. Always arrive on time, listen carefully in class, and
respect teachers and classmates. Keeping our campus clean is also important. Secondly, communicate actively
with parents. Share your daily life with them and say “thank you” for their care. Helping with housework can make
them feel proud of you. Thirdly, take social responsibility. Join volunteer activities like cleaning up communities.
Save water and protect the environment. Helping others in need can make society better.
Let’s work together to create a brighter future!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：结合所给话题，向初一的学弟学妹们提出一些建议，可适当增加细节，注意行文逻辑和连贯性。
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[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，表明自己很乐意分享建议；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从学校规则礼仪、与父母相处和社会责任感等方面阐述给学弟学妹们的建议；
第三步，总结全文，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate actively with parents积极和父母沟通
②share with分享
③help others in need帮助需要帮助的人
[高分句型]
①Always arrive on time, listen carefully in class, and respect teachers and classmates.（并列句）
②Share your daily life with them and say “thank you” for their care.（祈使句）
考点四 计划安排类
（2024·黑龙江齐齐哈尔·中考真题）时光飞逝，难忘的初中生活即将结束，你们将迎来一个轻松、愉快的
假期。如何能让你的假期更加丰富多彩？请根据下面的思维导图，以“How to spend a meaningful summer
vacation”为题目写一篇短文，合理规划一下你的假期生活。
How to spend a meaningful summer vacation
Relax yourself Improve yourself Plan your new term
Travel Exercise … Read Learn … …
要求：
1. 字迹工整，段落清晰，表达清楚，语法正确，行文连贯；
2. 要点必须包含所有相关信息，并适当发挥；
3. 首段已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 词数：80—100词。
How to spend a meaningful summer vacation
I will graduate from junior high school. During the vacation, I’ll do something meaningful and prepare well
for the future. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
How to spend a meaningful summer vacation
I will graduate from junior high school. During the vacation, I’ll do something meaningful and prepare well
for the future.
I want to travel around so that I know more about the culture in our country. To keep healthy, I’ll exercise
for at least one hour a day. Exercise makes me full of energy. I’ll listen to music to relax myself. Also, in order to
improve myself, I’ll read some books I like. I’ll learn to cook for my parents. Besides, I’ll help out around the
community. For the coming new term, I’ll make a perfect plan to live a happy life.
I hope everyone will spend a wonderful vacation.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引入文章主题，即怎样度过一个有意义的暑假；
第二步，具体介绍自己的暑假计划，从放松自我以及提升自我两方面展开；
第三步，介绍自己新学期的计划；
最后，结束语，表达个人感想或愿望等。
[亮点词汇]
①prepare for准备
②at least至少
③in order to为了
④help out帮助
[高分句型]
①I want to travel around so that I know more about the culture in our country.（so that引导目的状语从句）
②To keep healthy, I’ll exercise for at least one hour a day.（动词不定式作目的状语）
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题型特点
计划安排类文章一般来说会要求考生对某个学期、假期、未来的高中、长大成人的生活进行计划和安排。
解题步骤
一、认真审题，确定体裁、时态、人称。
计划安排类文章一般来说会要求考生对某个学期、假期、未来的高中、长大成人的生活进行计划和安排，
应使用第一人称，一般将来时态。
二、构思提纲，列出写作要点。
计划安排类文章一般可以按总－分－总结构进行写作。即开篇先交待要对哪个阶段的生活进行计划和安排；
然后具体介绍计划的内容；最后部分可以表达自己的决心。
计划安排类文章
[来源:学科网]
内容 经典句式
第一段 说明对哪 The summer holiday is around the corner. For the holiday, I have some new plans.
一阶段的
Here are my plans for the long exciting holiday.
生活、学
习或工作 I have so many things to do in the long holiday.
进 行 计
I hope I can enjoy a meaningful holiday by working hard.
划和安排
When I grow up, I would like to be a good doctor who can save many people.
After graduation, I am going to work as a computer engineer.
第二段 介 绍 计 First,Second, Besides,……, Finally ……
划/安排
I’d like to travel to Beijing with my parents.
的内容
I will try my best to ……
To improve my English, I am going to ……
I am determined to read at least 20 books in the coming holiday.
第三段 表达决心 Ｉbelieve I am sure to achieve my goal with great efforts.
或期望
I do believe that as long as I stick to it, I can realize my dream.
Where there is a will, there is a way.
No pains, no gains. By working hard , I will make my dream true.
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1．（2025·江苏泰州·二模）今年有一位中学校长在全国政协会议上提出：教育应该培养终身运动者、责
任担当者、问题解决者和优雅生活者。某英文网站以“How to be a better person”为题开展征文活动，请从中学
生的角度写一篇100词左右的短文谈谈你的做法。
提示词：responsibility 职责 responsible 负责的
注意事项：
（1）短文必须包括思维导图所有要点，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）词数：100左右；开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
How to be a better person
As a middle school student, I quite agree with the headteacher’s opinions. To be a better person, I think I
should do the following things.____________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
How to be a better person
As a middle school student, I quite agree with the headteacher’s opinions. To be a better person, I think I
should do the following things.
First of all, it’s important to live healthily. I will eat more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food. I will also
take exercise every day and get enough sleep to stay energetic. What’s more, I’ll not be afraid to face challenges
any more and try my best to solve the problems in life and study. Besides, it is necessary to have a good
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relationship with family and friends. Helping others can make people closer. Last but not least, it’s our duty to
take care of our parents. When I have the ability to give back to the society, I’ll do what I can to help the weak.
I think the most important thing is to be a useful person. If I start to develop these good habits, I will
become better and make a difference to the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：写作主题已给出，写作时注意从中学生的角度出发，包含所有要点，可适当发挥使行文更连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表示赞同，引出主题；
第二步，具体阐述做法；
第三步，书写结语，表达决心。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of而不是
②try one’s best尽某人最大的努力
③take care of照顾
④make a difference起作用
[高分句型]
①When I have the ability to give back to the society, I’ll do what I can to help the weak.（时间状语从句）
②If I start to develop these good habits, I will become better and make a difference to the world.（条件状语从
句）
2．（2025·江苏镇江·一模）转眼我们即将毕业，愉快的暑假也将要到来。有的同学打算去旅游放松，也有
的同学打算充实自己，你有什么计划来度过这个多彩的暑假呢？以“My summer holiday plan”为主题写一篇暑假
计划。计划包括：
1.自我提高的至少2种安排（比如读书，做志愿者……）及原因；
2.放松活动的安排及原因。
要求：
1.所写内容必须包含自我提高和放松活动两方面的计划和理由，并适当发挥；
2.文章不少于90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文章不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
My summer holiday plan
Summer holiday is a golden time for self-development and relaxation. During this break, I plan to
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________
【答案】
Summer holiday is a golden time for self-development and relaxation. During this break, I plan to balance
my time between learning and entertainment.
Firstly, I will read a lot every day. Because reading books can help us learn a lot of knowledge. Reading can
make a man progress. It also helps me prepare for senior high school. Besides, I will learn some new skills. We
can help our parents do housework, such as washing, cleaning and cooking. Because doing these things can help
us not depend on our parents, but on ourselves.
What’s more, I have scheduled some entertainment activities such as visiting museums, enjoying the
beauty of nature, and spending time with friends and family. These activities not only provide me with an
opportunity to open up my eyes but also enrich my life experiences. The most important is that I can try different
kinds of local food.
I am looking forward to the coming of this colourful and meaningful summer holiday.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点信息，可适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头，引出暑假计划；
第二步，根据提示，具体阐述计划内容，并介绍原因；
第三步，书写结语：期望暑假的到来。
[亮点词汇]
①balance ... between A and B在A和B之间平衡……
②prepare for为……做准备
③depend on依靠
④looking forward to期盼
[高分句型]
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①Because doing these things can help us not depend on our parents, but on ourselves. (动名词短语作主语)
②These activities not only provide me with an opportunity to open up my eyes but also enrich my life
experiences. (not only ... but also连接两个对等成分)
③The most important is that I can try different kinds of local food. (that引导的表语从句)
3．（2025·湖北襄阳·二模）三年的初中学习生活就要结束了，暑假即将来临，你有什么计划吗？学校英
语广播站正在面向九年级举行以“My summer vacation plan”为题的征文比赛活动，请你积极参加此项活动，根据
要求写一篇英语短文。
Notice
Summer vacation is coming, every one of you must be very excited. During the
summer vacation, what will you do to keep healthy? What hobbies will you take up to
relax? What housework will you do to help your parents? What subjects do you want
to study by yourself before entering high school?
Look forward to your sharing.
School English Club
要求：
1. 你的计划要包含黑体部分的内容，可适当发挥。
2. 90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
My summer vacation plan
The summer vacation is coming, Here are my plans for it. ___________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
My summer vacation plan
The summer vacation is coming. Here are my plans for it.
First, it’s important to have healthy eating habits. I’ll eat more fruit and vegetables, and try to eat less junk
food. At the same time, I’ll keep exercising and get enough sleep every day. Second, I plan to take up some
hobbies, like taking photos or playing the guitar. Besides, I’ll spend more time reading books to improve myself.
If possible, I’ll travel with my friends. Lastly, I’m going to help my parents with housework, such as doing the
dishes and sweeping the floor.
All in all, I’m looking forward to spending a happy summer vacation.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
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③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；
第二步，具体介绍自己的暑假计划；
第二步，书写结语。表达希望有个快乐的暑假的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①take up开始从事，喜欢上
②improve 改善
③such as例如
[高分句型]
①Besides, I’ll spend more time reading books to improve myself. (动词不定式表目的)
4．（2025·河北石家庄·一模）假如你叫李华，初中生活即将结束，你的英语王老师为每位同学写了一段
毕业留言。请你根据老师给你的留言内容进行回复。
Dear Li Hua,
You will graduate from our school. I remember you always asked me questions after class, I remember you
worked hard for each test. Are you happy with your school life? How have you changed since you started junior
high school? What will you do after you graduate?
Good luck and have a bright future!
Mr. Wang
注意：
（1）回复中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（2）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Mr. Wang,
Thank you very much for your words.________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________
I hope you will be healthy and happy.
Yours,
Li Hua
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【答案】
Dear Mr. Wang.
Thank you very much for your words. I’m really glad to have you as my English teacher.
I’m very happy with my school life. It’s full of fun and challenges. Those moments when I asked you
questions after class are some of my favorite memories. Your answers helped me learn better. I worked hard for
each test so that I could make great progress.
Since I started junior high school, I’ve changed a lot. I used to be a little lazy and didn’t like reading much.
But now, I love reading all kinds of books and I’ve become more hard-working. Also, I was too shy to ask
questions. You encouraged me and gave me a lot of chances. Thanks to your help, I became more confident.
After I graduate, I will go to Beijing and visit Peking University. Being a student there is my dream. I believe
I can go to a good senior high school and study hard. I will try my best to achieve my dream and make you
proud of me.
I hope you will be healthy and happy.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中给老师留言的回复内容的介绍要点，适当添加细
节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“你的英语王老师为每位同学写了一段毕业留言。请你根据老师给你的留言内容进
行回复。”来引出中重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“你对你的学校生活是否满意，你上初中以来的变化，你毕业后的打算等”几个
方面重点介绍给老师留言的回复内容的具体情况。
第三步，书写结语，表达“我希望你健康快乐”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of充满；
②make progress取得进步；
③all kinds of各种各样的；
④thanks to幸亏，由于。
[高分句型]
①Those moments when I asked you questions after class are some of my favorite memories. (when引导的定语
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从句)
②Being a student there is my dream. (动名词作主语)
5．（2025·湖南娄底·一模）我们用汗水和努力走过了2024，这当中有成功，有失败，也有遗憾。现学校
举办以“Reflecting on the Past Year and Wish for the New Year（回顾过去一年，祝福新的一年）”为主题的英语
写作比赛。请你根据以下提示及要求，写一篇英语短文参赛。
1. 用一个词概括你的2024年（如：growth成长/ hard-working/...）
2. 举出具体事例。
3. 基于对前一年的回顾，说说2025年你对未来的期许。
要求：
1. 紧扣主题，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数80—100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Reflecting on the Past Year and Wish for the New Year
When recalling (回想) 2024, the word “______” comes to my mind. ______________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Reflecting on the Past Year and Wish for the New Year
When recalling 2024, the word “growth” comes to my mind. This year, I challenged myself to join the
school English speech contest. At first, I felt nervous and made mistakes, but I practiced every day by recording
my voice and watching videos. Finally, I won third prize! It taught me that effort brings progress. However, I
sometimes procrastinated on homework, which caused stress.
In 2025, I hope to be more organized. I will use a study plan to balance schoolwork and hobbies. I also
wish to read more books to broaden my horizons. May the new year be filled with courage and joy for everyone!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态综合使用“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，概括2024年，介绍具体事例；
第二步，表达对2025年的期望。
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[亮点词汇]
①At first 起初
②made mistakes 犯错
③balance schoolwork and hobbies 平衡学业和爱好
④broaden my horizons 开阔我的视野
[高分句型]
①At first, I felt nervous and made mistakes, but I practiced every day by recording my voice and watching videos.
（并列句）
②However, I sometimes procrastinated on homework, which caused stress.（定语从句）
6．（2025·陕西西安·三模）初中即将毕业，同学们想举办一场聚会来告别。假如你是九年级一班的班长，
请你策划这次聚会并写一篇短文详细阐述本次活动的具体安排。
参考词语：sing, dance, think of some games, exchange cards, meaningful…
提示问题：
1. When and where will you have the party?
2. What activities will you have?
3. What should the classmates bring to the party?
要求：
1. 选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整、规范；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名，校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70。
Time flies! We are going to graduate and say goodbye to our dear teachers and classmates.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Time flies! We are going to graduate and say goodbye to our dear teachers and classmates. To make this
moment more meaningful, we will have a party to celebrate our graduation.
The party will be held on June 15th in the school hall. We will start at 3:00 pm and end at 6:00 pm. There
will be many fun activities, such as singing, dancing, and playing games. I have also thought of some interesting
games for everyone to enjoy. Additionally, we will exchange cards to express our best wishes to each other.
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For the party, I suggest everyone bring some snacks or drinks to share. It will make the party more
enjoyable. I believe this will be a meaningful and unforgettable event for all of us. Let’s make it a great memory!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明聚会的背景和目的；
第二步，具体阐述聚会的时间、地点和活动安排；
第三步，说明同学们需要准备的东西，并表达对聚会的期待。
[亮点词汇]
① such as比如
② Additionally另外
③ each other互相
[高分句型]
① We will have a party to celebrate our graduation and say goodbye to our dear teachers and classmates.（不
定式作目的状语）
② I believe this will be a meaningful and unforgettable event for all of us.（宾语从句）
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