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专题 13 看图写作
近三年，看图作文在中考英语中频繁出现，且形式多样。从画面内容来看，涵盖校园生活、家庭场景、
考情
社会现象、环保主题等多个方面。从分值设置上，大多在 10 - 15分区间，占英语作文总分的较大比
分析
重 ，是拉开分数差距的关键题型。
1. 词汇运用：要求学生精准运用与画面主题相关的词汇，如描述动作的动词、表示场景的名词等。
2. 语法结构：重点考查一般现在时、一般过去时、现在进行时等时态，以及 there be句型、定语从句
考点
等。在描述过去发生的事件时，正确使用一般过去时是得分关键。
分布
3. 逻辑连贯：考查学生能否用连接词（如and、but、however、therefore等）使文章段落、句子间过渡自
然，让故事或论述条理清晰。
1. 贴近生活：命题紧密联系学生日常生活，让学生有话可写，易于激发写作灵感与思路。
命题
2. 主题积极：多传达正能量，如鼓励互助、倡导环保、强调努力学习等，引导学生树立正确价值观。
规律
3. 图文结合：除图画外，常搭配简短文字提示，明确写作方向与要点，避免学生偏题。
1. 词汇积累：建立与常见主题相关的词汇库，定期背诵复习，提升词汇运用能力。
备考 2. 语法强化：系统复习重点语法知识，通过专项练习巩固，确保写作时语法准确无误。
建议 3. 多练多写：每周至少完成1 - 2篇看图作文，写完后找老师或同学帮忙批改，不断改进。
4. 分析范文：学习优秀范文的结构布局、逻辑思路、词汇语法运用，模仿并形成自己的写作风格 。
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（2024·安徽·中考真题）假设你是李辉，上周你在学校举行的 “消防安全日” 活动中学会了灭火器的使用方
法。请结合下图信息，写一篇英语短文，给校英文报投稿。
要点:
1. 活动目的；
2. 灭火器的使用方法；
3. 你的体会。
注意:
1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数80~100（首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）
Last week, our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities. __________________________________________________
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【答案】
Last week, our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities. The purpose was to draw our attention to fire
safety. Among the activities, how to use a fire extinguisher interested me most.
When we use a fire extinguisher, we should first shake it after picking it up, and then pull off the safety pin
quickly. As soon as we point the tube at the root of the fire, we are expected to press down on the handle until
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we put out the fire. During the period, we should be careful enough not to get hurt.
From the activities I’ve learned a lot and realized the importance of fire safety.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是看图作文；
②时态：一般过去时，一般现在时
③提示：结合图示信息，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍上周学校举行的 “消防安全日”，点明活动的目的；
第二步，具体介绍灭火器的使用方法；
最后，表达个人从这次活动中得到的感悟体会。
[亮点词汇]
①draw one’s attention 吸引某人的注意
②pick up 捡起
③pull off 拔出
④as soon as 一……就……
⑤put out 扑灭
[高分句型]
①When we use a fire extinguisher, we should first shake it after picking it up, and then pull off the safety pin
quickly.（when引导时间状语从句）
②As soon as we point the tube at the root of the fire, we are expected to press down on the handle until we put
out the fire.（as soon as引导时间状语从句）
题型特点
英语看图作文，顾名思义，就是根据所提供的一幅图画或多幅组合图，通过观察、想象、分析、提炼，用
英语，将画面内容准确、完整、连贯地表述出来。英语看图作文体裁多样，或记叙，或议论，或说明，是中考
英语书面表达题常考题型之一。那么如何写好英语看图作文呢？
解题技巧
一、细致审图，提炼要点
看图作文，最为关键的一环，就是要看懂图片内容，准确理解图片表达的含义，找出题意所在。这就要求
同学们要细致地观察每一幅图片，并根据每幅图之间的关系，提炼图片所要传达的有效信息，进而用一、两个
单词或短语罗列出每幅图片的要点，明确写作内容和中心。在审图过程中，同学们不可孤立地看图，要留意圖
片细节，结合时间背景、文字提示等信息，去分析、理解、揣摩，从而把握图意。
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二、抓住要点，连词成文
在提炼要点后，接下来就是按照题意要求去连词成文。在连词成文的过程中，同学们要注意如下几点：一
是根据图片呈现的内容，确定体裁格式、人称、时态以及语态等，并分清主次，突出重点，避免写一些与主题
无关的细枝末节；二是在将所列的要点扩展成英语句子时，要注意使用自己熟悉的、有把握的词汇、短语以及
句式，避免出现单词拼写、语法错误等；三是要注意紧扣要点，合理发挥想象，适当地对画面情节进行扩充，
从而使图画内容更加丰富，过程更加生动，人物更加鲜明；四是要注意图片间场景、人物和时间的转换与衔接，
适当地增加一些转折、因果、递进等过渡性词汇，只有这样才能使过渡更加自然，句子更加连贯，行文更加流
畅；五是在文章结尾时，可以恰当地使用一些表示情感的句式，以此增加文章的表现力和感染力。
三、检查修正，提高质量
检查修正，这是做英语书面表达题最易被忽视的环节。在写看图作文时，同学们在连词成文后，还要注意
对文章进行检查，先通读一遍，再细心地去检查错漏，并及时修正，从而提高写作质量。检查时，要注意如下
几点：一是语言的准确性。即用词是否得当，时态、语态是否错用，人称是否一致和主谓是否一致；单词拼写、
标点符号是否有误等；二是内容的完整性。即表达的内容要点是否全部包括在内，有没有出现遗漏，有没有离
题发挥等；三是逻辑的严谨性。即脉络是否清晰，叙述是否连贯，过渡是否自然，逻辑是否合理等。
解题策略
1. 第一步：仔细观察图片
全面浏览：拿到图片后，不要急于下笔，先对图片进行整体观察，确定图片的主题场景，比如是校园生活、家
庭聚会、户外游玩还是社会现象等。例如，一幅图片中出现了教室、学生和老师，那么主题场景大概率是校
园。
关注细节：留意图片中的人物、物品、动作、表情、环境等细节信息。人物的穿着能暗示时间、地点或身份，
如穿着校服表明可能是学生，穿着警服则是警察；人物的表情能反映情绪，微笑表示开心，皱眉表示烦恼；物
品和环境细节也很关键，图片中有足球和球门，可能是在足球场。
2. 第二步：确定写作要点
人物信息：明确图片中的主要人物，包括他们的数量、性别、年龄等。比如图片中有两个小男孩和一个小女
孩，年龄看起来在10岁左右。
事件内容：梳理图片所展示的事件，按照事件发展的顺序确定关键情节。如果是四格漫画，第一格可能是事件
的起因，如孩子们在公园里看到地上有垃圾；第二格是经过，孩子们开始讨论如何处理垃圾；第三格继续经
过，孩子们动手捡垃圾；第四格是结果，公园变得干净整洁。
主题思想：思考图片背后想要传达的主题，是倡导环保、宣扬友谊、鼓励互助还是其他。上述公园捡垃圾的图
片，主题就是倡导环保意识。
3. 第三步：组织文章结构
开头引入：用简洁的语言引出图片的主题场景，吸引读者的注意力。例如 “Last Sunday, I went to the park
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and witnessed an impressive scene.” 直接点明时间、地点和事件的性质。
中间叙述：按照事件发展顺序，详细描述图片中的内容，结合之前确定的要点，加入适当的细节描写和连接
词，使文章连贯流畅。比如 “At first, the three children noticed a lot of rubbish on the ground. Then,
they started to discuss what they could do. One of the boys said, 'Let's pick up the trash!' Immediately,
they took action. They found some plastic bags and began to collect the waste.” 使用 “at
first”“then”“immediately” 等连接词，让事件发展清晰明了。
结尾总结：对整个事件进行总结，升华主题，表达自己的看法或感受。如 “Their small actions made a big
difference to the park. It reminds us that everyone can do something to protect our environment, no
matter how small it is.” 强调环保行动的重要性。
4. 第四步：检查与修改
语法检查：查看句子的语法结构是否正确，包括主谓一致、时态运用、词性搭配等。比如 “He go to school
by bike.” 就存在主谓不一致的错误，应改为 “He goes to school by bike.”；如果事件发生在过去，却使用了
一般现在时，就需要把时态改为一般过去时。
词汇拼写：检查单词拼写是否有误，避免出现简单的拼写错误影响文章质量。
逻辑连贯：通读文章，检查句子之间、段落之间的逻辑是否连贯，连接词使用是否恰当。如果感觉某部分内容
过渡不自然，就需要调整语句或添加合适的连接词。
1．（2025·山西忻州·模拟预测）文化如水，润物无声。讲好中国故事可以以情动人、以文化人。一个主
题为“讲好中国故事”的活动正在你们学校进行，请你根据图片提示，用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：
·the importance of telling China’s stories well
·the story of the pictures
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·the lesson of the story
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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Telling China’s stories is crucial as it connects China with the world, helping others grasp our history, values
and traditions, and boosting cultural exchanges.
The pictures present the fable “Waiting for Rabbits by the Tree Stump”. A farmer in the field gets a dead
rabbit that hits a stump. Then he abandons farming, waiting by the stump for more.
The lesson is that success comes from hard work, not luck. Sharing such stories spreads China’s wisdom
and deepens global understanding of our culture. Let’s tell China’s tales actively.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，围绕讲好中国故事展开论述；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：结合“守株待兔”的图片故事，阐述讲好中国故事的重要性、故事内容及从中得到的教训。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头点明讲好中国故事的重要性，强调其对连接中外、促进文化交流的作用。
第二步，中间描述图片所呈现的“守株待兔”故事内容。
第三步，结尾总结故事的教训，说明分享此类故事的意义，并呼吁积极讲好中国故事。
[亮点词汇]
①crucial至关重要的
②grasp理解；领会
③abandon放弃
④boost促进；推动
[高分句型]
①Telling China’s stories is crucial as it connects China with the world...（使用“as”引导原因状语从句，清晰说明
讲好中国故事重要的原因。）
②The lesson is that success comes from hard work, not luck.（运用表语从句，简洁明确地总结故事的教训。）
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2．（2025·黑龙江·一模）图示作文：仔细观察下列图片，展开合理想象，写一篇英语短文。
提注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和师名，否则不得分示词：swallow燕子
要求：
（1）话题作文或图示作文任选其一。
（2）词数在80～100之间。
（3）字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
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One day, Meimei was playing in the yard when a little swallow fell to the ground. Meimei went up at once
and took it inside the house and put it in a cage. First she fed the bird and then she took good care of it. Several
days later, the bird was all right. Feeling very happy, Meimei took it outside and put the cage in a tree. But the
swallow didn’t seem very happy. It jumped up and down in the cage. The following day, Meimei was surprised to
find another swallow came. It was the bird’s mother. How excited they were to see each other! She opened the
cage and set the bird free.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据图中所给的信息完成写作，注意行文连贯，表述完整并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍事情发生的时间、地点、人物和具体时间；
第二步，具体按照图片的顺序，详细介绍主人公是如何照顾燕子的；
第三步，介绍事情的结果——放飞燕子。
[亮点词汇]
①at once立刻
②take good care of 照顾好
③jump up and down上下跳跃
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④set the bird free把鸟放了
[高分句型]
①One day, Meimei was playing in the yard when a little swallow fell to the ground.（when引导的时间状语从
句）
②How excited they were to see each other!（感叹句）
3．（2025·重庆·一模）一个寒冷的清晨，主人公因考试压力闷闷不乐，裹紧外套匆匆赶往学校。寒风刺
骨，心情愈发低落，却偶然发现街角聚集了一群陌生人……
发生了什么？请根据提示展开想象，结合图片写一个完整故事，体现从“焦虑到感动”的心情变化及感悟。
要求：
(1)80—120词；
(2)文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
sad, anxious, be volunteer activity: free hot drinks, feeling: warmth in small acts,
worried about handwritten notes…street connection with others,
grades, hopeless, performance: magic show, talent challenges melt (融化) like
hurry to… show… snow…
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【答案】
This morning, I felt sad and anxious because I was worried about my grades. The cold wind hurt my face as
I hurried to school.
Suddenly, I noticed a group of people standing at the street corner. They were volunteers offering free hot
drinks and giving out handwritten notes. Someone even performed a short magic show! Curious, I stopped to
watch. Their smiles and kindness warmed my heart like a hot drink on a snowy day.
My worries seemed to melt like snow, and I continued on my way with a lighter heart.
【详解】[总体分析]
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①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出故事发生的时间、地点、人物，以及主人公的心情；
第二步，具体介绍上学路上遇到的事情；
第三步，书写结语，表达感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①be worried about担心
②a group of一群
③give out分发
[高分句型]
The cold wind hurt my face as I hurried to school. (as引导的时间状语从句)
4．（2025·安徽合肥·一模）假设你是李辉，上学期你们学校举行了“我种一朵花，送给爱的人”的活动。请
结合下图的信息，写一篇英语短文，给校英文报投稿。
要点：1.活动目的；
2.你的参与；
3.你的体会。
参考词汇：种子seeds 土壤soil
注意：1.短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数80-100。
Plant a Flower for My Beloved
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Last semester, our school held a meaningful activity called “Plant a Flower for My Beloved.” This activity
encouraged students to express affection through flower planting.
I actively participated in this activity. I chose a beautiful flower seed and carefully planted it in the soil. Every
day, I watered it and made sure it received enough sunlight. Watching the seed grow into a blooming flower was
a rewarding experience.
Through this activity, I learned the importance of patience and care. It also reminded me to appreciate the
people who have supported me in my life. I gave the flower to my mother, and her smile made all the effort
worthwhile. This experience taught me that even small gestures can have a big impact.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇图片作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己参加的活动；
第二步，具体介绍如何选择种子、种植、浇水、照顾花朵，并最终将花朵送给母亲的过程。；
第三步，书写结尾，介绍自己在这次活动中的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①care about关心
make sure确保
[高分句型]
①Watching the seed grow into a blooming flower was a rewarding experience.（动名词作主语）
②This experience taught me that even small gestures can have a big impact.（宾语从句）
5．（2024·山东青岛·一模）
要求：
1. 词数80-100 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息。
Last Friday afternoon,
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Last Friday afternoon, Xiaoming and his friends took a boat to a small island to play. They played hide and
seek, but Xiaoming was too engrossed and his friends couldn’t find him. After Xiaoming came out, he found that
there was only him on the island. He began to feel sad for a while, but he had learned from television that he
needed to learn how to save himself. So he placed a very large “HELP” on the beach with a stone to seek help. At
the same time, he also prepared for long-term living on the island. He started building a simple shelter,
searching for food.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态用“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据图片进行合理联想，并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，介绍故事发生的时间背景；
第二步，根据题干图片，介绍事情的经过；
第三步，描述事情的结果。
[亮点词汇]
①come out 出来
②for a while 一会儿
[高分句型]
①After Xiaoming came out, he found that there was only him on the island.（宾语从句）
②He began to feel sad for a while, but he had learned from television that he needed to learn how to save
himself.（but连接并列句）
6．（2024·山东菏泽·三模）如今边走路边玩手机的“低头族”随处可见。请你根据下列图片的先后顺序，为
校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，谈谈使用手机的利弊及你的建议。
要求：1.词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
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2.必须包括上述图片信息，可适当发挥；
3.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
4.文中不得出现考生本人的姓名、校名等。
参考词汇：看新闻 read news；交通事故 traffic accidents；影响学习 affect study；对眼睛/脖子有害 be
bad for neck/eyes
Nowadays, mobile phones are very popular. They are playing an important role in our life._________________
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【答案】
Nowadays, mobile phones are very popular. They are playing an important role in our life. We can use
mobile phones to do many things such like reading news, listening music, watching video. But if we don’t use it in
a proper way, we will get truly hurt. Nowadays, many people play mobile phones while walking so that they don’t
pay attention to traffic condition. It will cause heavy traffic accidents. And if you spend a lot of time playing your
mobile phones, your study will get affected. Besides, it’s bad for your necks and eyes by playing mobile phones
for a long time. I think mobile phone will be a good tool as long as we make good use of it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生应该注意所给提示的图片，不要遗漏重要信息，注意大小写 和标点符号，适
当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
①表明写作意图。手机可以拿来做很多事并引出下文；
②具体阐述写作内容。通过介绍过度使用手机的坏处来表达作者观点；
③书写结语。只要我们好好利用手机，它会是一个很好的工具。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to 集中注意力于某物
②make good use of 好好利用
[高分句型]
And if you spend a lot of time playing your mobile phones, your study will get affected. (条件状语从句)
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7．（2024·四川成都·三模）每年的4月22号是世界地球日（Earth Day）。请以此为主题，根据下图写一篇短文
向学校英语专刊投稿。题目自拟。
要求：1.请补充图示空格所缺信息；
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数 100 左右。
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【答案】
Save Planet
As we all know, April 22nd is World Earth Day every year. Both people and the government should take
action to protect the earth.
Firstly, we should turn off the lights when we leave the room. Secondly, we should plant more trees in
spring. Because many trees are cut down every year. Many wild animals have lost their homes because of this.
Thirdly, the government should enact some laws to prevent people from doing things that are bad for the
environment. Last but not least, the government should organize the planting of trees to ensure the forest cover.
As long as each of us starts taking action, I believe our earth will be more and more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据图片提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关
系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍主题，要保护地球；
第二步，介绍保护地球的具体措施；
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第三步，最后总结文章，呼吁人们行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
① turn off关掉
② in spring在春天
③ because of因为
[高分句型]
① Firstly, we should turn off the lights when we leave the room.（when引导的时间状语从句）
② Thirdly, the government should enact some laws to prevent people from doing things that are bad for the
environment.（that引导的定语从句）
③ As long as each of us starts taking action, I believe our earth will be more and more beautiful.（as long as引
导的条件状语从句）
8．（2024·江苏南京·二模）你在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到 “Life in 2045” 的征稿启事。请根据图片
内容，选择至少2个方面来写，畅想未来生活，并用英语写一篇短文投稿。
注意：
1. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。
2. 不少于80词 (已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Life in 2045
Life in 2045 will be quite different. __________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Life in 2045
Life in 2045 will be quite different from today.
First of all, my house will become very amazing. Imagine waking up in the morning and my smart kitchen
has already prepared a tasty breakfast for me. The future house will know what I want and satisfy my needs.
Secondly, getting around will be easier and faster because of future transport. The future cars will take us
anywhere we want to go. Flying cars might even become a reality, making long-distance travel much quicker.
These are just some of the exciting changes I can expect in 2045. I can’t wait to see what will happen in the
future!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇图示作文；
②时态：时态为 “一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，说明2045年的生活有何不同；
第二步，具体阐述2045年的生活，从“房子、购物、交通”等方面介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①satisfy one’s need 满足某人的需求
②can’t wait to do sth. 迫不及待做某事
[高分句型]
The future house will know what I want and satisfy my needs.（what引导的宾语从句）
9．（2024·浙江杭州·二模）文明社会，从我做起，请就下图的不文明行为和所产生的后果用英语写一短
文，向校刊English Garden投稿，倡导做文明人。
注意：
(1) 短文必须包括所给图片的信息，合理想象并补全第3幅图片的内容。 (以第三人称描述图片故事)
(2) 必须谈谈你对此事的看法，并说明原因。
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(3) 文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(4) 字数100词左右。短文首句已给，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：果皮 skin；踩在……上摔倒 slip on sth (slipped, slipped)；救护车 ambulance；一些不文明行为
some uncivilized behaviour
To Be a Civilized Person
Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the park with my cousin.___________________________________________________
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To Be a Civilized Person
Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the park with my cousin. Everything was nice until I saw a man was eating
a banana. When he finished it, looking around, then he dropped the skin to the ground. We were surprised at
that moment, and my cousin wanted to pick it up right away. However, a girl ran so fast that she slipped on the
skin by accident. At that time, we not only picked up the skin, but also helped the girl.
From this experience. I sincerely realized the importance of environmental protection and behaving
politely. If the man took the skin to into the bin, the accident wouldn’t happen. It’s good for you and others.
In conclusion, to be a civilized person can not only lead to self-improvement, but also give the
convenience to people around. Action from now on!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应对题干图片进行描述并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述事件的背景，包括事件，地点，人物等信息；
第二步，结合题干图片，描述事件的经过并合理想象，补全第3幅图片的内容；
第三步，谈谈对此事的看法，并说明原因。
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[亮点词汇]
①so…that如此……以至于
②lead to导致
[高分句型]
①When he finished it, looking around, then he dropped the skin to the ground.（when引导时间状语从句）
②In conclusion, to be a civilized person can not only lead to self-improvement, but also give the convenience to
people around.（not only…but also）
10．（2024·河北邯郸·二模）李华是一名中学生，他在学习上遇到了困难，在老师的帮助下，最终取得了
进步。请你根据下面四幅图片及文字提示写一篇短文。
1. 2. 3. 4.
fail the exam cheer him up help him with his study get a good score
注意：（1）短文须包括每幅图片的主要信息，可适当发挥，提示词语供参考；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Li Hua is a middle school student. He had difficulty in learning math and he _____________________________
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Li Hua is a middle school student. He had difficulty in learning math and he failed the math exam. He cried
sadly. Just then, his teacher came and tried to cheer him up. He told Li Hua that the only way to succeed is
through hard work. Hearing the words, Li Hua decided to try his best to make progress. His teacher always
helped him patiently when he met any difficult math problems.
Where there is a will, there is a way. With his hard work and the teacher’s help, he finally got a good score
in the next exam. His teacher clapped for his great progress. He thanked his teacher and determined to keep
working hard to achieve more success.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
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③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写作意图开头已给出，写作时可直接描写在学习上遇到的困难。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“考试不及格”、“让他振作起来、帮助他学习”以及“取得好成绩”的过程展
开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，表达对老师的感激之情。
[亮点词汇]
①have difficulty in doing sth.在做某事上有困难
②fail未能，失败
③try to do sth.尝试做某事
④cheer sb. up使某人开心起来
⑤decide to do sth.决定做某事
⑥make one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大的努力做某事
⑦make progress取得进步
⑧clap for sb.为某人鼓掌
⑨determine to do sth.决定做某事
⑩keep doing sth.继续做某事
[高分句型]
①He told Li Hua that the only way to succeed is through hard work. (that引导的宾语从句)
②His teacher always helped him patiently when he met any difficult math problems. (when引导的时间状语从句)
11．（2024·浙江·一模）如今，青少年的娱乐方式与他们父母辈小时候的娱乐方式大有不同，某英文报观
点专栏就此向全国中小学生征稿。请你写一篇英语短文投稿，简要描述图片内容，谈谈你的看法并提出建议，
让青少年通过阅读这篇文章有所启发。
注意：（1）词数：110左右；
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等。
With the development of society, teenagers’ recreation has also changed. _______________________________
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【答案】例文：
With the development of society, teenagers’ recreation has also changed.
From picture 1, we can see some children playing outside in the past. In picture 2, a boy is playing
computer games. He’s surrounded by all kinds of electronics. In the past, children always had a good time, but
now the teenagers always feel lonely.
Nowadays, with the development of technology, there are many after-school entertainment activities. We
should choose some activities that are good for our health. We had better balance the time between exercising
and playing on the computer.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给图片完成写作，给出自己的建议，注意语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；
第二步，具体描述画面中的内容，并对比过去和现在的娱乐方式；
第三步，表达自己的看法和建议。
[亮点词汇]
①see sb doing sth看见某人正在做某事
②play computer games玩电脑游戏
③have a good time玩得开心
④had better最好
[高分句型]
①We should choose some activities that are good for our health.（that引导的定语从句）
12．（2024·湖南怀化·一模）（B）图示作文：根据所给图片，用英语写一篇短文。
要求：（1）话题作文或图示作文任选其一。
（2）词数在80~100之间。
（3）字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
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【答案】
One day, Tom and Mike were playing on the street with a stick in each other’s hands when a grandma with
a basket of vegetables came near. The two boys didn’t notice her and continued their game. All of a sudden,
Tom’s stick hit the basket and it dropped on the ground. The vegetables in it were here and there. They said
sorry to the grandma at once and helped put the vegetables back in the basket. Then Mike had an idea. They
made a decision to send her home. Then they carried the basket with one stick and followed the grandma to her
home. The grandma was very thankful.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
② 时态：一般过去时；
③ 提示：考生应根据所给图片梳理出写作要点，注意不要遗漏信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述故事起因。描述因没注意而不小心打翻了老奶奶的篮子；
第二步，描述故事经过。从“篮子被打翻、孩子们的处理方式等”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，描述故事结尾。表达老奶奶的感激之情。
[亮点词汇]
① playing with a stick 玩棍子
② a basket of 一篮子……
③ came near 靠近
④ All of a sudden 突然
⑤ dropped on the ground 掉在地上
⑥ here and there 到处
⑦ said sorry to 向……道歉
⑧ put ... back 把……放回原处
⑨ made a decision to 决定……
[高分句型]
① One day, Tom and Mike were playing on the street with a stick in each other’s hands when a grandma with a
basket of vegetables came near.（when引导时间状语从句）
② All of a sudden, Tom’s stick hit the basket and it dropped on the ground.（and引导并列句）
13．（2024·重庆九龙坡·一模） 环保，一个看似简单却意义重大的主题，已经逐渐成为全人类共同关注
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的焦点。现你校校刊英语专栏以 “保护环境” 为话题面向全体学生征集主题海报宣传稿，请你用英语向大家宣讲
环保的意义以及作为中学生应当如何保护环境。请你认真阅读海报，以“Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!” 为题，
用英语给专栏写一篇稿件。
要求：
（1）80—120词；
（2）文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!
The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It’s crying for our help now. _________________________________
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【答案】
Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!
The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It’s crying for our help now. As middle school students, we
have the power to make a difference and help save the earth!
To protect the earth, we can start by saving water, planting more trees and reducing pollution. We can also
save animals and recycle wastes whenever it is possible. We can also choose to ride a bike instead of driving a car
to help stop pollution. We should always throw trash into the proper bins.
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By doing our part, we can make a positive impact on the environment and create a better future for
ourselves.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态主要为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：根据图示，文章应该包括7个方面的要点，可适当补充，使文章内容充实；尽量多使用短语，写作中
要适当使用连接词，使行文连贯。
［写作步骤］
第一步，点明主题，通过介绍地球的重要性来引出保护地球的措施；
第二步，介绍保护地球的具体措施；
第三步，书写结语，展望美好的未来。
［亮点词汇］
① make a difference 产生影响
② instead of 而不是
［高分句型］
① To protect the earth, we can start by saving water, planting more trees and reducing pollution. (动词不定式
作目的状语)
② We can also save animals and recycle wastes whenever it is possible. (whenever引导让步状语从句)
14．（2023·山西大同·模拟预测）请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。
阅读可以使人更充实、丰富，可以滋润心灵，开启心智。No.1 Middle School针对学生在英语阅读方面存
在的问题，对全校2, 300名学生进行了一次调查，下面是相关的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. 简要说明图表内容；
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2. 结合自身经历，谈谈你在英语阅读方面的困难和你是如何克服的。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
No.1 Middle School did a survey among 2, 300 students about the problems of their English reading. Here
are the results. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
No.1 Middle School did a survey among 2, 300 students about the problems of their English reading. Here
are the results. 23% of the students aren’t interested in English reading. 25% of them say they hardly have time to
do English reading because of too much homework. 35% of them have difficulty in English reading and don’t
know how to do English reading in right ways. Besides, 17% say they don’t have proper reading materials.
As for me, I am fond of English reading. In the beginning, I had difficulty in understanding the meaning of
the materials because of too many new words. I wanted to give up but my English teacher Miss Yan, told me I
could find a wonderful world if I insisted. Therefore, I tried to guess the words’ meaning by reading the sentences
before and after them. At the same time, I also looked them up in the dictionary. Little by little, I could read more
articles. As my teacher said, my life becomes more colorful because of reading. What’s more, I find it easier to
study English.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。
③提示：文章为第一人称和第三人称，介绍学校关于英语阅读方面存在的问题的调查结果和自己在英语阅读方
面的困难和怎么克服的，内容描述完整，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍表格里面的信息；
第二步，介绍自己在英语阅读方面遇到的困难；
第三步，介绍自己怎么克服困难的。
[亮点词汇]
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①be interested in对……感兴趣
②because of因为
③have difficulty in doing sth.在……方面有困难
④As for me对我来说
⑤In the beginning开始
⑥What’s more另外
⑦look up查找
[高分句型]
①25% of them say they hardly have time to do English reading because of too much homework.（宾语从句）
②I wanted to give up but my English teacher Miss Yan, told me I could find a wonderful world if I insisted.（条件
状语从句）
③As my teacher said, my life becomes more colorful because of reading.（定语从句）
④What’s more, I find it easier to study English.（it固定句型）
15．（2023·陕西西安·模拟预测）上个月，西安市政府迎接了创建全国文明城市巡检。为配合此项工作，
上周日，你们学校组织了一场名为“文明无句号，创建无止境”的环保活动。请根据以下图片及提示，用英文写
一篇短文，简要介绍你们的活动和感受。
参考词汇: clean up; guide the pedestrians（行人）; volunteer; ...
要求：1. 使用参考词汇，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）
To build a civilized city, our school organized an environmental protection activity last Saturday. We did
many meaningful things.___________________________________________________________________________________________
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_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
To build a civilized city, our school organized an environmental protection activity last Saturday. We did
many meaningful things. It was a fine day. Some of our classmates helped with the cleaning. There was a lot of
garbage out there because of people’s uncivilized behavior. We cleaned them up. Some students helped direct
the traffic. If we encountered uncivilized traffic behavior, we would correct it promptly. Some students went to
the nursing home. We tell them stories to make them happy. Although we were tired this day, we were very
happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先承接短文开头。
第二步，介绍你们的活动和感受。
第三步，总结。
[亮点词汇]
①help with帮助
②because of因为
③clean up清理
[高分句型]
①If we encountered uncivilized traffic behavior, we would correct it promptly.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②Although we were tired this day, we were very happy.（Although引导的让步状语从句）
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