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Unit 4 Part 4 Writing 专项练
写作题目
假定你是李华，你的加拿大好友Paul发来邮件，说他准备春节期间来你所在的城市旅
游。请你给他回复一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．介绍你所在城市的旅游景点：
2．自荐给他当导游。
注意：
1．词数80左右：
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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思路点拨
主题 旅游 体裁 应用文
人称 以第二人称和第 时态 一般现在时和一
一人称为主 般将来时
布局 第一部分：介绍旅游景点；
第二部分：自荐当导游。
遣词造句
I．用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1．____ n．港口
2．____ adj.令人惊叹的；很好的
3．____ n．古董；古物adj.古老的；古董的
4．____ n．手艺；工艺；技艺
5．____ n．岸：滨
6．____ n．风景：景色
7．____ n．最好最精彩的部分
8．____ adj.令人愉快的；友好的
Ⅱ．本单元语块、语法运用
1．完成句子
(1)这个城市位于我们省的东部。
The city ____ ____ ____ the east of our province.
(2)这是一个有大海港的海滨城市。
It is a seaside city ____ ____ ____ ____.
(3)市中心有两个美术馆。
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(4)在那里你可以看到许多当代艺术家的杰出作品。
You can see many ____ ____ of contemporary artists there.
(5)还有一座世界著名的博物馆。
There is also ____ ____ ____．
(6)在博物馆里，你可以看到历史悠久的古董手工艺品。
In the museum, you can see antique arts and crafts that ____ ____ ____ ____．
2．句式升级
(7)用过去分词短语作状语合并句子(1)(2)
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(8)用定语从句合并句子(3)(4)
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(9)用定语从句合并句子(5)(6)
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3. 连句成篇
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实战演练
假如你是新华中学的李华，开学后你向你们学校的英文校报投稿，讲述自己暑假期间
独自去杭州旅游的经历。要点如下：
1．游览了三个景点：苏东坡纪念馆、西湖、千岛湖；
2．这次旅游不但开阔了你的眼界，还让你更了解外面的世界。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：苏东坡纪念馆Su Dongpo Memorial Hall 魅力 charm 千岛湖 Qiandao Lake
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遣词造句
I．用本单元所学单词或短语填空
答案 1. harbo(u)r
2. awesome
3. antique
4. craft
5. shore
6. scenery
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8. pleasant
Ⅱ．本单元语块、语法运用
答案 1．完成句子
(1)is located in
(2) with a big harbo(u)r
(3) in the center of
(4) awesome works
(5) a world-famous museum
(6) have a long history
2．句式升级
答案 (7) Located in the east of our province, it is a seaside city with a big harbo(u)r.
(8) There are two art galleries in the center of the city, where you can see many awesome
works of contemporary artists.
(9) There is also a world-famous museum, where you can see antique arts and crafts that have
a long history.
3. 连句成篇
参考范文
Dear Paul,
I'm glad to know that you are planning to visit my city during the Spring Festival. Now I'm
writing to tell you something about my city.
Located in the east of our province, it is a seaside city with a big harbo(u)r. There are two art
galleries in the center of the city, where you can see many awesome works of contemporary
artists. There is also a world-famous museum, where you can see antique arts and crafts that have
a long history. The park along the shore is also worth visiting because you can enjoy the beautiful
scenery and get close to nature.
Now it's just the time of the Spring Festival, so you will have a chance to experience the
customs of this traditional festival. This will be the highlight of your trip. What's more, I will be
greatly honored to be your guide. I believe you will have a pleasant trip.
Looking forward to seeing you in China.
Yours sincerely,
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写作积累
1. We can go up to the Longevity Hill and have a broad view of all the fascinating scenes
there.
我们可以登上万寿山，在那儿所有的迷人景色都能一览无遗。
2. A peaceful and tranquil atmosphere permeates the place.这地方充满着一种宁静的气氛。
3. But I'm afraid one day is not enough to see all the interesting places.但是恐怕要看遍所有
有趣的地方一天时间是不够的。
4. Now, we come to another magnificent chamber in which you can see all kinds of ancient
furniture.
现在，我们来到另一个宏伟大厅，在这里你可以看到各种古老的家具。
5. We are deeply attracted by its interesting history.我们都被它有趣的历史深深地吸引住了。
实在演练
【思路导航】 本题要求写一篇游记，游记就是对一次游览经历的记述。根据要求，
文章是以记录行程为主，即按照游览的先后次序来写。第～段引入话题，说明去杭州旅游
了。第二段具体描述旅游经历，即按照要点要求，分别对三处景点（苏东坡纪念馆、西湖
千岛湖）进行介绍。第三段进行总结，说明旅游给自己带来的益处。写作时注意准确运用
时态，即主要使用一般过去时。在使用熟悉的单词和句式的同时，也要注意使用高级词汇
和高级句型，使文章显得更有档次。
【范文赏读】
During this summer holiday, I made a wonderful trip to Hangzhou. I spent three days there.
On the first day, I went to the famous Su Dongpo Memorial Hall, where I enjoyed the charm of
ancient Chinese culture. The next day, I went to the West Lake. It greatly impressed me with its
beautiful scenery. On the last day, I visited the Qiandao Lake, where I took many beautiful photos.
This trip is of great benefit to me. For one thing, it broadens my horizons. For another, it
makes me know more about the outside world.
【亮点点击】 文中准确使用了过渡词，如 On the first day, The next day, On the last
day，使得行文连贯、条理清晰。另外，文中恰到好处地使用了where引导的定语从句
(where I enjoyed the charm of ancient Chinese culture)等。impress, broaden one's horizons等单
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