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人教版九年级英语Unit11 Sad movies make me cry.
写作主题:effect and feelings
一,话题分析:
本单元的话题是“影响和心情”,属于说明文的范畴,主要考查学生事物或者事件对自己造成的影响,
并且能发表一些感受和看法。事物是如何影响自己的,说明理由。重点考查学生以下能力:
1. 掌握make sb +形容词 结构(make+人+宾补)。
2. 熟练使用复合句;
3. 能描述事物对于自己的影响并且说明感受、理由。
二,写作步骤:
1.总分总结构。短文通常分为三个部分:
总------第一部分:开门见山,直入主题。
分-------第二部分:说明感受及理由。
总——第三部分:呼应主题。
2.人称:第一人称。
3.时态:一般现在时。
三,词汇积累:
1. make sb sad/sleepy/happy/nervous/relaxed使人伤心、想睡、开心、紧张、放松的
2. movies/novels/housework/story/music电影、小说、家务活、故事、音乐
3. listen to quiet music听安静的音乐
4. drive me crazy让我抓狂
5. be sure to do确信做
6. have a lot in common有很多共同之处
7. make some mistakes犯错
8. lately最近
9. too much太多
10. unhappy不开心
11. in that case那样的话
12. make friendship stronger让友谊牢固
13. feel like doing想做.......
14. happen发生15. have to 不得不
16. have fun玩得开心
17. too...to太.....而不能
18. make some new friends交一些新朋友
19. worry about担心
20. try to尽力做
21. to start with首先
22. hand back收回
23. think about想着......
24. feel much better感觉更好一些
25. get mad生气
四,句型积累:
1. The movies make me.....电影让我.....
2. The music makes me....音乐让我
3. I don’t feel like doing....我不想......
4. The movie was so sad that it made....电影如此伤感以至于让.....
5. I don’t want to do...because.....我不想做....因为.....
6. I’m not happy because I’m always worried about....我不开心因为我担心......
7. Don’t be too hard on yourself.不要太过于责怪自己。
8. I have learned that it can help me grow up.我学会了它能帮我成长。
9. I think it’s impolite to keep others waiting.我认为让别人等是不礼貌的。
10. Thanks to the experiences,I began to....多亏那次经历,我开始.....
五,写作训练一
家务是生活中的一部分,我们作为一名家庭成员,应该学会分担家务。请以“Doing housework makes
me_______”为题目,用英语写一篇短文,叙述一次你做家务的经历,并谈谈你的感受。词数90词左右
Doing housework makes me________
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_________________________________________________________________________________________六,写作训练二 (原创好题)
爱如沙漠里的绿洲,滋养着人的心灵;爱无处不在,来自父母,来自好友,来自老师,来自同学甚至陌
生人。请用英文以 “Life is full of love”为题写一篇短文。
要点:1.你经历过的充满爱的故事;2.这件事对于你有什么影响。词数90词左右。
Life is full of love
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写作训练三 (原创好题)生活中,总有一些经历、习惯或者爱好会给你带来快乐,让你开心。请以
“________makes me happy”为题,并根据一下要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文。
要点:1.什么让你快乐; 2.它是如何让你感到快乐的;3.你的感受。
_________________makes me happy
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范文赏析:训练一: Doing housework makes me happy
Doing housework is part of my life.It’s necessary to share housework with other family
members.I’d like to tell you one of my experiences.
Last Sunday,I made a special dinner for my mom.It didn’t work as well as I thought.I hurt
my fingers while cutting food,and I forgot to put salt into the dishes.When my mother came back
home,she was so happy that she hugged me and kissed me.
From this experience,I’ve learned doing housework can not only help me grow up but also
bring happiness to my family.
训练二: Life is full of love
Life is full of love.I still remember one thing that touches me a lot.
It was a rainy day.I failed my math exam and I felt very upset.What’s worse,I didn’t bring my
umbrella.I felt even more worried.Suddenly,the raindrops disappeared. To my surprise,I saw a big umbrella
and the smiling face of my classmate.He said that an exam couldn’t stand for everything.He believes I
can get good grades next time.I knew he cared me.And his words really cheered me up.It made me
happy.After that ,I worked harder and made great progress.
训练三: Reading makes me happy
I love reading very much.It makes me happy.I think reading can not only help me get knowledge
but also open my mind.More importantly,reading bring me happiness.
First,there are many stories in books.Some of them are interesting.Some of them are educational.I
always lose myself in books and have learned a lot from as well.Second,reading books helps me a lot in
my studies.Books are really useful when I meet difficulties.They make me skillful at solving problems.
All in all,books have become a good friend of mine.It’s a part of my life. A good book is like a
good friend.So,do more reading,and become happier.