高中英语应用文写作 | 发表看法:学生课堂表现计入学期总分(浙江省杭州市第二高三年级)

Dear Chris,

I'm Li Hua from Class 1.Learning that you plan to include classroom performance in the semester grade and give it considerable weight, I would like to share my views.

It is a positive move to focus on classroom performance, which encourages active student participation. Placing too much emphasis on classroom performance, however, could be unfair to some students, since those who are shy and poor at speaking up may still listen attentively and finish their assignments on time.

It might be advisable to reduce the weighting moderately and diversify the assessment criteria by including group work, class notes and progress, which would both boost motivation and cater to students of different personalities.

It would be appreciated ifyou could take my suggestions into consideration. (119 words)

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

我是一班的李华。听说您打算将课堂表现计入学期总分并占较大比重，我想谈谈我的看法。

我认为关注课堂表现能鼓励学生积极参与，这是好事。但比重过大会带来压力，有些同学性格内向，不善发言，却同样认真听讲、按时完成作业，这样对他们不太公平。

建议您适当降低比重，并让评价标准更多元，比如结合小组合作、课堂笔记和进步幅度。这样既能调动积极性，又能照顾不同性格的学生。

希望您能考虑我的建议。

李华

（1）Learning that得知 you plan to include classroom performance in the semester grade and give it considerable weight让它占较大比重, I would like to share my views.

（2）It might be advisable to...是推荐的 reduce the weighting moderately and diversify the assessment criteria by including group work, class notes and progress, which would both boost motivation提升动机 and cater to迎合，满足 students of different personalities.

（3）It would be appreciated if如果...我将不胜感激 you could take my suggestions into consideration把...考虑在内.