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第 1 讲 使用亮点词汇
请用亮点词汇替换下列句子中的黑体部分。
1．As high school students, we should be neatly dressed when at school.
are supposed to
2．The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.
challenging
3．I sincerely hope that you will consider my suggestions.
take my suggestion s into account
4．Our class thought of the idea of how to take advantage of used materials.came
up with
5．We should try to improve ourselves through learning and prepare for the future.
take pains; get prepared
6．I want to tell you something about my plan for the summer vacation and I'd like
you to help me. do me a favor /lend me a hand
7．Cinemas have gradually given way to the rise of the Internet and cell phones,
and the ticket price is increasing. on the increase/rise
8．When you are bored with the people around, you'd better find a quiet place,
listening to some classical music. fed up with
一篇高考作文在阅卷时往往在1分钟内就被判定优劣；大众化的词汇、平庸的
表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。如果一篇作文中突然出现几个
与众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇，老师的给分也绝不会吝啬！
一、使用亮点词汇的4种方法
1．“语”众不同，避免人云亦云
写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷人耳目一新
的感觉。
① I am Li Hua，a student studying in London, who is very glad to be
informed of the message that there will be a Chinese painting exhibition in your localart gallery.
→I am Li Hua，a student studying in London, who is more than thrilled to
be informed of the message that there will be a Chinese painting exhibition in your local
art gallery.
② In order to provide the students with a wonderful match, we need to
have enough training.
→In order to provide the students with a fantastic match, we need to have
enough training.
③Obviously，blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment.
→Apparently，blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment.
2．多种表达，避免重复
写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的
水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。
①Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer clothes with an
umbrella with you.
→Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer clothes plus an
umbrella with you.
② First of all, you should arrive on time because it is good manners to be on
time in China.
→First of all, you should arrive on time because it is good manners to be
punctual in China.
3．单词短语巧妙使用
一般情况下短语优先，应多使用词组、习语来代替单词，以增加文采。但有时单
词比短语更生动，可以“一词传神”。
① This is a friendly game, so we should remember the principle of friendship
first.
→This is a friendly game, so we should keep in mind the principle of
friendship first.
②We can look at this problem in many ways.
→We can view this problem in many ways.(view比look at更有内涵)
4．用高年级学到的词汇替代低年级学到的词汇
①Firstly, this is exactly what the British visitors are expecting.
→Firstly, this is precisely what the British visitors are expecting.② Second, I am trying my best to get the important knowledge and skills
concerning my position.
→Second, I am sparing no effort to acquire the essential knowledge and
skills concerning my position.
二、高分必备的24个亮点词汇
普通词汇 高级词汇 普通词汇 高级词汇
chance opportunity choice alternative
名词 idea opinion people individuals
result consequence effect influence
have possess develop promote
put up
replace substitute bear
动词 with
take into make
consider understand
account sense of
enough adequate rich abundant
形容 difficult challenging proper appropriate
词 vital/ absorbing/
important interesting
significant appealing
finally eventually hardly barely
副词
immediately in a flash nowadays currently
连词 so therefore and as well as
①We will try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.
→We will try our best to promote the traditional friendship between us.
② Finally your child will leave home to lead her own life as a fully independent
adult.
→ Eventually your child will leave home to lead her own life as a fully
independent adult.
请用亮点词汇替换下面作文中的加黑部分并背诵。
Dear Jason，
I'm very happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city
London.Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in.Its economy has been
developing fast during the past ten years.New bridges and roads have been built, high-
rise buildings standing in many parts of the city.More and more schools and
hospitals are useful for the native people.It is developing into a modern and beautiful
city.But there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and
serious air pollution, which have a bad effect on people's daily life.I think Quanzhou
should develop healthily and scientifically so that we could have a better hometown in
the future.
Yours，
Li Ming
[答案]
1．very→more than 2．fast→rapidly 3．built→set up 4．More and more→An
increasing number of 5．useful→available 6．Beautiful →charming 7．
But→However 8．serious→severe 9．effect→ influence/impact 10．I think→In
my opinion/As far as I am concerned
