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专题 03 发言稿
演讲稿是在较为隆重的仪式上和某些公众场合发表的讲话文稿,是人们在工作和社会生活中经常使用的一
种文体。演讲一般用以交流思想感情、表达主张见解等,具有宣传、鼓动、教育等作用,以期使听众信服
并在思想感情上产生共鸣。
1)主题演讲类:围绕某一主题提炼延伸,交流思想情感,将听众的思维引向更高的境界,升华主题(对主题
的见解+自己的做法)
2)观点发表类:在会议或重要活动上就某话题发表自己的主张、见解(正反观点/利弊+自己的主张)
3)仪式致辞类:在仪式上说明活动安排或回顾以往活动,表示欢迎、感谢、勉励、祝贺等,交流感想,表
达祝愿(活动安排+目的/活动回顾+收获)
【2024全国甲卷】英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Development of Transport in China为题写
一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
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【答案】Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has seen enormous development.Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of
travelling.
Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green
alternative for short trips. Secondly, the introduction of high- speed trains has dramatically shortened travel times,
making intercity travel faster and more comfortable. Lastly, the proliferation of new energy vehicles underscores
China’s dedication to environmental sustainability, reducing reliance on fossil fuels. These developments illustrate
China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with
environmental responsibility.
In short, China’s transport system is embracing innovation and eco-friendliness.
【思路点拨】
1. 欢迎听众 (welcome your audience)
2. 介绍主题 / 自我介绍 (brief introduction of your subject)
* Today I am going to talk about …
* The purpose of my presentation is to introduce…
首段 简短介绍
3. 说明演讲结构 (explain the structure of your speech)
* I’ll mainly talk about three points…
* During my talk, I’ll be looking at three areas. First,… Second,…Third,…
* I’ve divided my presentation into four parts. They are…
陈述主题(present the subject itself)
演讲的 * So, to start with, I’d like to talk about the …
主体
正文 * The first problem today is that …
* Let’s go to the first topic…
1. 总结演讲(summarize your speech)
* To conclude/ In conclusion/ Now, to sum up,…
* So let me summarize what I’ve said.
* Finally, I’d like to repeat the points I made at the beginning.
概括总结
结束 * In conclusion, my recommendations are…
* I therefore suggest / propose / recommend the following strategy.
2. 致谢听众 (thank your audience)
* Many thanks for your attention.
* Thank you all for being such an attentive audience.【写作模板】
模板①
Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen,
It’s a great honor for me to stand here and give my speech._________(表示荣幸)My name
is __________.(自我介绍)The topic of my speech is ___________.(提出演讲主题)
To begin with, many people suggest that ___________. ( 话 题 或 现 象 列 举 )
Secondly, ___________. Thirdly, ___________ .
What I want to stress is that ___________.(重申主题)For one thing, . For another, .
Besides, ___________.(原因或重要性列举)In a word, ___________.(总结)
模板②
Good morning/afternoon/evening, everyone,
It’s nice to see all of you here. I feel honored to have opportunity to give/make/deliver you a speech
is a great pleasure for me to speak here. The topic of my speech is ___________________./Today I will
talk about ________________. /It’s nice to talk /speak about…( 演 讲 的 主 题 ) First of all,
___________________. Besides, ________________. Secondly, _________________________. What’s more,
__________________(具体内容)
As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, _____________. From what has been discussed above, we
can safely draw the conclusion that ____________. Thanks for your attention/listening.(总结演讲)
【必备词汇】
1.take part in/participate in 参加
2.be a helpful way to do sth. 是做某事的一种有用方法
3. prepare for/get ready for 做准备
4.develop/form a good habit of… 养成……的好习惯
5. in the process/course of… 在……的过程中
6. pay attention to/attach importance to 注意
7.try/do one’s best to do sth./make every effort to do sth. 尽力做某事
8.turn. Into. (使)变成;成为9. take responsibility to do sth. 负责做某事
10. narrow the generation gap 缩小代沟
11.guide to 带领到
12. be helpful/beneficial to 对……有帮助
13. be of great benefit 有很大的好处
14. make good use of.… 好好利用
15. take action/steps/measures 采取行动
16. It is high time sb. did sth. 到了某人该做某事的时候
17. be bound to 一定要……;注定
18. turn into. (使)变成;成为
19. make a difference 有影响;起(重要)作用
20. in conclusion 最后,综上所述
【万能句式】
【经典句型一】最常用的演讲开场句型
1.I am honored to... 我很荣幸……
【短评】这是演讲的第一大王牌句型,几乎每一场演讲都要以这个句型作为开场白。有人提出,这个句型
已经到了陈词滥调(cliche)的地步。但是,谦虚永远是一种美德,这个句型之所以能被古今中外无数演讲
大师所采用,当然有其吸引人的地方。
2.I am honored to have a chance to speak to you today.
我今天很荣幸跟大家讲几句。
3.I am honored to be here on such a special occasion.
我很荣幸在这个特别的时刻来到这里。
4.I am honored to introduce the founder of Crazy English,Mr.Li Yang.
我很荣幸地为大家介绍疯狂英语创始人—李阳先生。
这个句型也可以说成"It’s my (great) honor to..."
【经典句型二】最具感情色彩的演讲句型
1.Words can’t express... 言语表达不了……
2.Words can’t express how lucky I am.
简直不能用言语来表达我有多幸运。
3.Words can’t express how thankful I am.
言语表达不了我的感激之情。【经典句型三】最平实的演讲过度句型
1.Today I want to talk to you about... 今天我想跟你们谈谈……
(演讲都有个主题,如何在演讲中介绍自己的主题呢?这个句型是最常用的。)
2.Today I want to talk to you about a very important subject.
今天我将和你们谈一个非常重要的话题。
3.Today I want to talk to you about the future of business in China.
今天我将和你们谈一谈中国的商业前景问题。
【经典句型四】最具表达力的演讲句型
1.I sincerely hope... 我衷心希望……
2.I sincerely hope that you will take a minute to think about the future.
我们真心希望你能花一点时间考虑一下未来。
3.I sincerely hope that you will have a wonderful time tonight.
我们衷心希望你们今晚过得开心。
【经典句型五】最具领导风格的演讲句型
1.I ask all of you present to... 我要求在座各位……
2.I ask all of you present to join me in raising your glasses to our everlasting friendship.
我要求在座的各位与我一起举杯,为我们的友谊长青干杯。
3.I ask all of you present to join hands in the battle against corruption.
我要求在座各位携起手来反腐败。
【经典句型六】最具感染力的演讲句型
1.I know I speak for... 我知道我在为……说话。
2.I know I speak for the president and all the employees.
我知道我是代表着经理和所有的员工在说话。
3.I know I speak for several people in this room when I say that we are thankful for the improvements
in the company.
当我说我们为公司状况改善感到欣慰时,我知道这是代表你们当中几个人所说的。
【经典句型七】最具煽动性的演讲句型
1.I want to remind... 我想提醒……
2.I want to remind you that it’s never too late to learn.
3.我想提醒你们,无论何时开始学习都不迟。
4.I want to remind you all that we share the responsibility.
我想提醒大家,我们都得承担责任。【经典句型八】最常用的演讲结束句型
1.I wish you the best of luck in... 我祝你……好运
(这个句型不但演讲中常用,很多场合也能用得上,比如信函的结尾等。)
2.I wish you the best of luck in your new business venture.
祝你们新公司生意兴隆。
3.I wish you the best of luck in everything you do.
祝你们一切顺利。
【经典句型九】最具修辞色彩的演讲句型
1.Ask not what...can do for you, ask what you can do for...
不要问……能为你做什么,问问你能为……做什么
【短评】肯尼迪总统的那句"Ask not what your country can do for you, ask what you can do for your
country."成了千古绝唱,为世人广为传颂。我们可以将他这个句子中的鱼骨抽出来,造出不少同样铿锵有
力,同样震撼人心的句子。
2.Ask not what China can do for you, ask what you can do for China.
不要问中国能为你做什么,问问你能为中国做什么。
3.Ask not what society can do for you, ask what you can do for society.
不要问社会能为你做什么,问问你能为社会做什么。
4.Ask not what others can do for you, ask what you can do for others.
不要问别人能为你做什么,问问你能为别人做什么。
【经典句型十】最具震撼力的演讲句型
1.... means a great deal to... 对……意义重大。
2.This project means a great deal to our company.
这项目对我们公司来说意义重大。
3.Our company’s success means a great deal to China.
我们公司的成功对中国来说意义重大。
(2024·河南·模拟预测)假定你班外教George将班级分组,开展以“AI and Us”为主题的讨论,请你代表
你组用英语写一份发言稿,向班级汇报,内容包括:
1.对人工智能的认识;
2.你们的建议。注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear classmates,
I’m very pleased to report our group’s discussion on “AI and Us” on behalf of our group.
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【答案】Dear classmates,
I’m very pleased to report our group’s discussion on “AI and Us” on behalf of our group. Nowadays, AI
develops very fast. It’s a common thing to see intelligent robots in factories, hotels and other places. We are all
amazed by AI’s powerful functions. AI can now write articles for us, like ChatGPT, and even create videos, like
Sora, which can create realistic videos of up to 60 seconds based on texts given by users.
In the end, we suggest that we should strengthen the study of scientific knowledge, so that we can make
better use of it and make due contributions to the development of AI in the future.
Thank you very much.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生以“AI and Us”为主题,写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
普遍的:common→widespread
使惊讶:amaze→surprise
建议:suggest→advise
利用:make use of→take advantage of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We are all amazed by AI’s powerful functions.
拓展句:We are all amazed by AI’s powerful functions, which makes our life more convenient.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
We are all amazed by AI’s powerful functions. AI can now write articles for us, like ChatGPT, and even createvideos, like Sora, which can create realistic videos of up to 60 seconds based on texts given by users.(运用了
which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
In the end, we suggest that we should strengthen the study of scientific knowledge, so that we can make better use
of it and make due contributions to the development of AI in the future.(运用了that引导宾语从句,虚拟语气,
so that引导目的状语从句)
Writing 1
(24-25高三上·江西南昌·开学考试)假定你是学生李华,你校将举办一次有关农业劳动课重要性的英语演
讲比赛,你将代表班级参赛,请你以“On the importance of hands-on agricultural labor course”为主题写一篇
演讲稿,内容包括:1. 同学们对此课程的看法;2. 学习农业劳动课的意义。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Ladies and gentlemen,
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【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,
I am honored to stand here to deliver a speech. Today my theme is about “On the importance of hands-on
agricultural labor course”.
First and foremost, some students believe that there are many benefits to attend hands-on agricultural
courses, which can make them know more about agriculture and experience the hardships of farmers’ labor. What’s
more, the hands-on agricultural course will certainly improve students’ awareness of cherishing food.
Not only can learning agricultural courses offer an alternative to busy school life, but also it allows students
to gain direct labor experience and gradually establish a correct value of agricultural labor.
Thank you for your listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以“On the importance of hands-on agricultural labor course”为主题写一篇演讲稿,参加学校将举办的一次有关农业劳动课重要性的英语演讲比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
荣幸的:honored→privileged
提供:offer→provide
首先:first and foremost→in the first place
另外:what’s more→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am honored to stand here to deliver a speech. Today my theme is “The importance of hands-on agricultural
labor course”.
拓展句:I am honored to stand here to deliver a speech, the theme of which is “The importance of hands-on
agricultural labor course”.
【点睛】[高分句型1] First and foremost, some students believe that there are many benefits to attend hands-on
agricultural courses, which can make them know more about agriculture and experience the hardships of farmers’
labor. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Not only can learning agricultural courses offer an alternative to busy school life, but also it allows
students to gain direct labor experience and gradually establish a correct value of agricultural labor. (运用了部分倒
装句)
Writing 2
(24-25高三上·江苏南通·开学考试)今年巴黎奥运会上各国运动员展现出了很多精神品质。假如你是李华,
你将在班级进行的英语主题班会上介绍你最欣赏的运动员精神,内容要点如下:
1. 简单阐述该精神品质;
2. 它对你的学习生活的影响。
要求:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Friends,
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Thank you for your listening!
【答案】Dear Friends,
The spirit I admire most in athletes is perseverance. Perseverance means never giving up, no matter how tough
the situation is. This quality is essential for success in both sports and life. In my studies, I often face challenges
and setbacks. However, by adopting the spirit of perseverance, I have learned to stay focused and keep working
hard, even when things get difficult. This has helped me improve my grades and achieve my goals. I believe that
with perseverance, we can overcome any obstacle and reach our full potential.
Thank you for your listening!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生在英语主题班会上介绍最欣赏的运动员精神,并阐述其对自
己学习生活的影响。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
坚持不懈:perseverance→persistence
放弃:give up→quit
必要的:essential→necessary
帮助某人:help sb.→give sb. a hand
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:This quality is essential for success in sports and life.
拓展句:This quality is essential for success in both sports and life, as it helps individuals overcome obstacles and
achieve their goals.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Perseverance means never giving up, no matter how tough the situation is.(运用了no
matter how引导的让步状语从句)
【高分句型2】I believe that with perseverance, we can overcome any obstacle and reach our full potential.(运
用了that引导的宾语从句)
Writing 3
(2024·云南·模拟预测)假定你将参加学校组织的以“人工智能”为话题的英语演讲比赛,请你写一篇演
讲稿,内容包括:
1. 人工智能技术的优势和缺点;
2. 中学生如何合理使用人工智能技术。注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】范文
Honorable judges and fellow students,
It’s my distinct pleasure and honor to share my perspective on the responsible and intelligent use of artificial
intelligence.
Generally speaking, there are numerous advantages of AI, such as processing information at lightning speed
and assisting us in complex tasks, thus enhancing our ability to learn and grow. Nevertheless, as we embrace these
advancements, it is crucial to be aware of the potential downsides. For instance, over-reliance on AI can lead to a
decrease in our ability to innovate and think critically.
In conclusion, as a student, it is imperative that we approach AI with caution and wisdom. Only in this way
can we reap its benefits while minimizing any potential downsides. That’s all. Thank you.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇演讲稿,参加学校将组织的以“人工智能”为话题的
英语演讲比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
许多:numerous→plenty of
加强:enhance→strengthen
例如:for instance→for example
总之:in conclusion→all in all
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:For instance, over-reliance on AI can lead to a decrease in our ability to innovate and think critically.
拓展句:For instance, if we are over-reliant on AI, it can lead to a decrease in our ability to innovate and think
critically.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Only in this way can we reap its benefits while minimizing any potential downsides. (运用了only+状语位于句首引出的部分倒装句和while引导的时间状语从句的省略)
[高分句型2] Nevertheless, as we embrace these advancements, it is crucial to be aware of the potential downsides.
(运用了as引导的时间状语从句和it作形式主语,动词不定式作真正的主语)
Writing 4
(2024·河北邢台·模拟预测)假设你是李华,母亲节将至,你准备以母亲节为主题写一篇英语演讲稿,谈
谈你准备送给母亲的节日礼物并陈述理由,可适当添加细节。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Classmates,
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Thank you for your listening!
【答案】Dear Classmates,
Mother’s Day is approaching. It is a reminder of the greatness and selflessness of mothers and also a time to
express our gratitude to them. I have selected an ideal gift for my mother, which will be a delicious meal all by
myself.
Mother has been devoting herself to building a warm and harmonious family. With her loving care, I have
grown up to be independent, responsible and helpful. By making her a meal, I wish to show her that I am grateful
for all her sacrifices and that I am mature enough to shoulder the responsibilities that a son/daughter should assume.
A meal is a small gift, but I think nothing is better than the pure love it demonstrates.
Thank you for your listening!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以母亲节为主题写一篇英语演讲稿,谈谈你准备送给母亲的
节日礼物并陈述理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达:express→convey
感激:gratitude→thankfulness
感激的:grateful→thankful承担:shoulder→undertake
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Mother’s Day is approaching. It is a reminder of the greatness and selflessness of mothers and also a time to
express our gratitude to them.
拓展句:Mother’s Day, which is a reminder of the greatness and selflessness of mothers and also a time to express
our gratitude to them, is approaching.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I have selected an ideal gift for my mother, which will be a delicious meal all by myself.
(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] By making her a meal, I wish to show her that I am grateful for all her sacrifices and that I am mature
enough to shoulder the responsibilities that a son/daughter should assume. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和that引
导的限制性定语从句)
Writing 5
(24-25高三上·福建南平·开学考试)假定你是李华,报名参加学校“Be Sporty, Be Healthy”为主题的演讲
比赛。请你写一份英文演讲稿,内容包括:
1.问题:学业紧张,疏于活动;
2.建议:合理安排,正常锻炼
注意:词数80左右。
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【答案】
Be Sporty, Be Healthy
Hello, everyone!
I feel honored to be here to talk to you on exercise. We students are heavily burdened with school work, and
thus spare little time for regular physical exercise.
However, we all need a sound body. So I suggest we fit exercise into our busy schedule, making it part of our
daily routine. Put down our books to stretch our arms from time to time. Do some jogging and jumping everyday. Ifwe are able to make exercising our life habit, we will surely benefit from it both physically and mentally.
That’s all.Thank you.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Be Sporty, Be Healthy”为主题,写一篇演讲稿参加学校举
办的演讲比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
然而:however→nevertheless
健康的:sound→healthy
建议:suggest→recommend
能够做某事:be able to do sth.→have the ability to do sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:However, we all need a sound body.
拓展句:However, we all need a sound body, which is essential for leading a healthy and active life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】So I suggest we fit exercise into our busy schedule, making it part of our daily routine.
(suggest后面运用了that引导的宾语从句,that被省略)
【高分句型2】If we are able to make exercising our life habit, we will surely benefit from it both physically and
mentally.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
Writing 1
【2021年全国乙卷】你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛,
内容包括:
1. 分析优势与不足;
2. 提出学习建议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
【答案】one possible version:
Be smart online learners
Network learning has increasingly become an important means for people to acquire knowledge and solve
problems.But being smart online learners has its advantages and disadvantages.First of all, as smart online learners, we can make full use of the most extensive educational resources to
broaden the horizon. Besides, We can take the initiative in our study by ourselves without time and space limit.
Of course, these disadvantages are as follows.Faced with all kinds of information on the internet, We can't tell
the difference between the true and the false, which may be harmful to our study and life. On the other hand, online
learning itself has some imperfections, making it difficult for us not to be affected.
In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper
way to make our study more efficient.
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以 Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛。
1. 词汇积累
充分利用:make full use of→ make the most of
扩宽,丰富:broaden→ enrich
各种各样: all kinds of→ varieties of
不完美:imperfection→ defect
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a
proper way to make our study more efficient.
拓展句:In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages ,
finding a proper way to make our study more efficient.
Writing 2
【2021年浙江卷1月】假定你是李华,下周有新西兰学生访问你校,你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此
写一篇 发言稿,内容包括:
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 介绍活动安排;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】Distinguished guests:
On behalf of our school, I would like to convey my sincere welcome for your visiting.At first, it is of significance to fully understand the school. As scheduled, all of you will visit the museum,
which contains the splendid history of our school. Furthermore, our classes are worthy of being attended, because
you can appreciate the differences between Chinese and western teaching methods. After that, it is at canteen that
you can have a special lunch with our students.
As mentioned above, I extremely expect your coming. May you have an unforgettable experience.
Writing 3
【2021年天津卷】
假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 《最美中华》栏目,
请你给该栏目投稿,介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括:
(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等);
(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等);
(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
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【答案】
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of interest,
such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.
Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most impressive isits many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. What’s more , walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance
to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here.
Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It dates from over 2,000 years ago. However, it is still
playing an important part in irrigation today.
I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the construction
Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文,要求给英文网站《最美中华》栏目投稿,介绍介绍一个国内你喜
欢或去过的地方。
【解析】第一步:审题
体裁:说明文
时态: 一般现在时
结构:总分法
第一段是文章的总起段,说明四川省有很多著名的景点;第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程,
第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。
要求:
1. 说明四川省有很多著名的景点
①四川的地理位置:中国西南部
②著名景点:九寨沟、都江堰灌溉工程
2. 介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程
① 九寨沟是自然保护区
②给人印象最深的层层叠叠的瀑布和五颜六色的湖泊,有很多珍稀动植物
③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前,现在仍然起着灌溉的作用
3. 你对该地方的印象和感受:九寨沟的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造会让你惊叹
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be located in;world-famous;places of interest;a nature reserve ;impressive;multi-level waterfalls;
have a chance to do…;rare animals;scenic spot;date from;play an important part in;be amazed by
第三步:连词成句
(1) Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China.
(2) It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.
(3)Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province.
(4) What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.(5) Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden
monkeys.
(6) There are many species of rare plants protected here.
(7) Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
(8) It dates from over 2,000 years ago.
(9) It is still playing an important part in irrigation today.
(10) I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by its construction.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇
1.表递进关系:what is more
2.表转折关系:however
3.表示列举:such as, like
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.(what引导的主语从句)
[高分句型2]
Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden monkeys.
(现在分词作状语)