武汉市2025 届高中毕业生四月调研考试英语试卷
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I hurried into Lehman's grocery store. I was there to buy my grandmother's
hearing aid
batteries(目的，可能是重点衔接内容). More importantly(后面的更重要), this was my chance to visit the love of my
life – Artie(强调名词的重要性后面的衔接点).
I ran to the shelf he was on(具体之处Artie 不是人，是个拟人的东西), and there he was, right where I last
saw him: a grey little guy with a large mouth that fit perfectly over my shoulder(能够放在肩膀上) as I
hugged him tightly. I adored that stuffed dolphin(Artie 是个海豚). As I held Artie, Mrs. Lehman,
who had always been kind to me, passed by and smiled knowingly, “Hugging(现在分词做伴随动作)
that dolphin again, huh?”(用旁观者的视角说明I 对于Artie 的情感)
But my brother, Rick, noticed I took a long time in Lehman's, saying(现在分词做伴随动作), “You
are a thirteen-year-old girl now. You are supposed to be quicker. Next time, I will go with you.”
Oh, great! My brother, Rick. He always laughed at me.
But I wouldn't give up. So, as we walked into the store, I suggested to Rick that he get the
batteries, since he was older. Then I headed towards Artie. There he was(倒装句), awaiting
me
(现
在分词做伴随动作). I grabbed him and hugged him tightly. Just then, I heard Rick saying, “What in
the world are you doing?” “This is Artie,” I said, “I hug him every single time I come here. I can't
afford it so I hope he doesn't get sold because I just love this little guy.” The look on Rick's
face was unreadable(情绪描写), but I knew deep down that he wasn't going to make fun of me. In
fact, a few times when he accompanied me to Lehman's, he said, “go on and hug your dolphin,
if it's still there.”
One day, Rick was not home, so I went to Lehman's alone. I went straight to Artie's shelf.
But he was gone. I searched every shelf but couldn't find him. Suddenly, a voice from the
counter interrupted my search.
注意:
1.续写词数应为 150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: It was Mrs. Lehman herself.
Paragraph 2: To my surprise, I found a box lying on my bed.
武汉市2025 届高中毕业生四月调研考试英语试卷
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I hurried into Lehman's grocery store. I was there to buy my grandmother's hearing aid
batteries. More importantly, this was my chance to visit the love of my life – Artie.
I ran to the shelf he was on, and there he was, right where I last saw him: a grey little guy
with a large mouth that fit perfectly over my shoulder as I hugged him tightly. I adored that
stuffed dolphin. As I held Artie, Mrs. Lehman, who had always been kind to me, passed by and
smiled knowingly, “Hugging that dolphin again, huh?”
But my brother, Rick, noticed I took a long time in Lehman's, saying, “You are a thirteen-
year-old girl now. You are supposed to be quicker. Next time, I will go with you.” Oh, great! My
brother, Rick. He always laughed at me.
But I wouldn't give up. So, as we walked into the store, I suggested to Rick that he get the
batteries, since he was older. Then I headed towards Artie. There he was, awaiting me. I grabbed
him and hugged him tightly. Just then, I heard Rick saying, “What in the world are you doing?”
“This is Artie,” I said, “I hug him every single time I come here. I can't afford it so I hope he
doesn't get sold because I just love this little guy.” The look on Rick's face was unreadable, but I
knew deep down that he wasn't going to make fun of me. In fact, a few times when he
accompanied me to Lehman's, he said, “go on and hug your dolphin, if it's still there.”
One day, Rick was not home, so I went to Lehman's alone. I went straight to Artie's shelf.
But he was gone. I searched every shelf but couldn't find him. Suddenly, a voice from the counter
interrupted my search.
注意:
1.续写词数应为 150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: It was Mrs. Lehman herself.
Paragraph 2: To my surprise, I found a box lying on my bed.
一、读后续写类型归类与构思思路分析
分析维度
内容
类型
情感成长类（Emotional Growth）+ 温情治愈类（Warmth &
Healing）
核心主题
情感依恋、亲情理解、成长认知
构思方向
主人公因情感寄托失落——他人善意介入——情感被理解——收获
成长与慰藉
续写框架
①第一段（接Mrs. Lehman）：情感低谷→善意安慰→情绪转折；
②第二段（接盒子出现）：情感升华→兄妹理解→主题升华
实施建议
第一段重点刻画Mrs. Lehman 传递温情、揭示Artie 去向、情感铺垫
第二段突出Rick 的成长与理解，用礼物象征情感弥合
衔接要点
不得新增人物突出“情感线”与“人物心理变化”与“Rick 渐渐转
变态度”的伏笔形成呼应
巧妙设计建
议
将“盒子”作为情感象征Rick 送Artie 回来的方式应略带惊喜或情
感暗示升华主题：成长不仅是放手，也是理解
二、续写中使用的“Story Mountain”结构分析
阶段
内容描述
原文对应
开端（Introduction）
主人公去商店，表现对
Artie 的喜爱
“There he was… I adored that stuffed
dolphin.”
上升行动（Rising
Action）
Rick 讽刺、阻碍 → 主
人公坚持
“You are a thirteen-year-old
girl…”/“Go on and hug your
dolphin…”
高潮（Climax）
Artie 突然不见 → 情感
冲击
“But he was gone…”
下降行动（Falling
Action）
Mrs. Lehman 出场 → 揭
示线索/解释 → 情感缓
解
Paragraph 1
结局（Resolution）
发现礼物 → Rick 的善Paragraph 2
阶段
内容描述
原文对应
意 → 情感升华与成长
三、可与原文衔接的线索与内容提取
类型
内容/原文句子
用于续写作用
情感描写
“I adored that stuffed dolphin.”、“I can't
afford it so I hope he doesn't get sold...”
表明Artie 对主人公的重
要性，形成情感驱动
动作描写
“grabbed him and hugged him tightly”
用于续写中情感动作描写
呼应
情感转折
“The look on Rick's face was unreadable.”
为兄妹理解埋下伏笔
人物变化
线索
“He said, go on and hug your dolphin...”
Rick 开始转变态度，为后
文行为合理化
伏笔
Rick 说下次自己去、却放弃；后续送礼是
合理发展
展现其逐渐理解妹妹的情
感寄托
冲突点
“Artie was gone.”
故事情感高点，引发悲
伤/转折
隐含线索
Mrs. Lehman 笑容、“voice from the
counter”暗示她知道Artie 去向
暗示温情解决方案即将揭
示
解决方案
Rick 买下Artie 或委托Mrs. Lehman 送还
情感落点+兄妹关系和解
四、关键构成要素对照表（情感、动作、语言等）
分析角度
内容
原文体现句
人物刻画
妹妹执着柔软、Rick 表面讽
刺实际体贴
“He always laughed at me.”、“Go on
and hug your dolphin...”
情感层次
喜爱→坚持→失落→理解→
感动
Hugging Artie → Gone → Gift
关键情节点
Artie 不见 → Mrs. Lehman
出现 → 礼物出现
“But he was gone.”、“It was Mrs.
Lehman herself.”、“To my
surprise...”
语言特色
情感细腻，口语化真实，夹
叙夹议
Hug him every single time I come
here...
分析角度
内容
原文体现句
关键词分析
hug, adore, love, gone, smile,
surprise
强化情感主线
心理描写
失落、期待、惊喜、感动
“The look on Rick’s face was
unreadable...”
动作描写
grab, hug, run, search
表现主人公的执着与情绪
环境描写
Lehman’s store 作为情感舞台“ran to the shelf he was on...”
隐含主题
理解与成长，兄妹之爱
结尾礼物的出现是升华
情感转折
自己买不到→哥哥出手
暗含转变
空间转换
家→店→回家发现礼物
提升情节节奏与变化感
时间过渡
一次次→某天→礼物出现
保持线性叙事节奏感
3. 情景化读后续写素材积累
1）动作描写推荐句
英文例句
中文翻译
She clutched the stuffed dolphin as if it were the
most precious thing in the world.
她紧紧抱着那只毛绒海豚，好像
那是世上最珍贵的东西。
He turned around sharply, his eyes scanning the
shelf.
他猛地转过身，目光扫视着货
架。
I reached out instinctively and pulled Artie into
my arms.
我下意识地伸手把Artie 抱进怀
里。
My steps quickened as I entered the store, heart
pounding.
我走进商店时步伐加快，心跳如
鼓。
She ran her fingers gently across the dolphin's soft
fabric.
她轻柔地抚摸着海豚柔软的表
面。
Rick stood frozen, hands half-lifted in surprise.
Rick 站在那里，手停在半空，满
脸惊讶。
I rushed from aisle to aisle, searching desperately.
我疯狂地在货架间来回奔跑，拼
命寻找。
He placed something behind his back, trying to
他把东西藏在背后，想要偷偷遮
英文例句
中文翻译
hide it.
掩。
I leaned over the counter, eyes wide with hope.
我伏在柜台上，眼神充满希望。
She held the box like a fragile treasure.
她像捧着宝物一样小心地拿着那
个盒子。
2）心理描写推荐句（10 个）
英文例句
中文翻译
A wave of disappointment washed over me.
一股失望感涌上心头。
My heart sank the moment I saw the empty shelf.
看到空空如也的货架，我的心沉了
下去。
I feared the worst—that someone had bought
him.
我担心最糟的情况——有人把他
买走了。
A flicker of hope still lingered in my chest.
一丝希望依旧在心中闪烁。
I felt a lump forming in my throat.
我喉咙发紧，几乎哽咽。
His silence confused me more than his words
ever could.
他的沉默比任何言语更让我困惑。
My cheeks burned with a mixture of shame and
love.
我的脸因羞愧与爱交织而泛红。
There was a tightness in my chest I couldn't
explain.
我胸口有种说不出的压抑感。
A warm rush of gratitude filled me.
一股温暖的感激涌上心头。
My mind raced with questions, my emotions
tangled.
我的脑中充满疑问，情绪交错难
辨。
3）环境描写推荐句
英文例句
中文翻译
The small store smelled faintly of pine and old
cardboard.
小店中弥漫着松木与旧纸盒的淡淡
味道。
A soft golden light filtered through the dusty
windows.
柔和的金色阳光透过布满灰尘的窗
户洒进来。
英文例句
中文翻译
The shelves stood tall, filled with carefully
arranged goods.
高高的货架上摆满了整齐排列的商
品。
The bell above the door jingled as I stepped
inside.
我走进去时，门上的铃铛叮当作
响。
The store was quiet, only the humming of the
fridge audible.
商店里一片寂静，只有冰箱轻轻嗡
鸣。
A faint breeze stirred the posters taped to the
window.
微风吹动贴在窗户上的海报轻轻晃
动。
Light danced on the polished counter surface.
光影在擦得锃亮的柜台上跳跃。
Behind the counter, Mrs. Lehman arranged
paper bags methodically.
柜台后，Lehman 太太一丝不苟地
整理着纸袋。
The familiar layout of the store gave me
comfort.
店里熟悉的布局让我安心。
In the back corner, where Artie usually sat, there
was only emptiness.
在后面的角落里，Artie 常在的位置
只剩空空如也。
4）高级替换词总结（常见词升级）
场景
常见词
高阶替换词
情感表达like
be fond of / be attached to / be drawn to
描述动作run
dash / rush / hurry / race
表示喜欢love
adore / cherish / treasure
描述悲伤sad
heartbroken / devastated / downcast
描述惊讶surprised astonished / stunned / speechless
4. 固定搭配、语法现象、生词短语与语料解析
固定搭配 & 词法现象
搭配
含义
示例
hug...tightly
紧紧拥抱
She hugged the dolphin tightly.
be supposed to do
应该做某事
You’re supposed to be quicker.
run to / run into
奔向/跑进
I ran to the shelf.
搭配
含义
示例
as if + 从句
好像……一样（虚拟语
气）
She acted as if she had lost a real
friend.
can't afford to
买不起/负担不起
I can't afford it.
hope (that) + 从句希望……
I hope he doesn't get sold.
the look on sb’s
face
某人脸上的表情
The look on Rick's face was
unreadable.
just then
就在那时（时间过渡）
Just then, I heard Rick say...
deep down
内心深处
Deep down, I knew he understood.
go on and do sth.
去做某事（鼓励语气）
Go on and hug your dolphin.
生词短语解析表
词/短语
词
性
词
义
近义词
反义词
例句1
例句2
clutch
v.
紧
握
grip / hold
release
She clutched the
dolphin tightly.
He clutched the
paper in fear.
adore
v.
极
度
喜
爱
love / cherish
dislike /
hate
She adored the
little dolphin.
I absolutely adore
classical music.
shelf
n.
货
架
rack / ledge
floor (反
义)
The shelf was
empty.
I placed the book
back on the shelf.
unreadable
adj.
无
法
解
读
的
blank /
expressionless
expressive
His face was
unreadable.
Her expression
was unreadable in
the dim light.
voice
interrupted
短
语
声
音
打
break in / cut
off
continue /
allow
A voice from the
counter
interrupted me.
Suddenly, a loud
voice interrupted
our talk.
词/短语
词
性
词
义
近义词
反义词
例句1
例句2
断
5. Possible Versions(3)
Version 1
Paragraph 1: It was Mrs. Lehman herself. She spoke softly, “I guess you’re
looking for Artie, the stuffed dolphin(衔接原文). I’m so sorry, but it was sold earlier
today.” My heart sank(情绪描写). I stood there, frozen(过去分词形容词做补语), feeling(现在分词做伴随动作)as
though the ground had disappeared beneath my feet(夸张描写). I had hoped—no, I had
convinced myself—that Artie would still be waiting for me. But now, hearing
Mrs. Lehman’s words(现在分词短语做原因状语), all that hope vanished in an instant(无灵主语句，夸
张？). Slowly, I turned and made my way home, the weight of disappointment
heavy in my chest(独立主格刻画人物心理). As I walked, I could feel the tears welling up(情绪描写),
but I fought them back. I couldn’t let anyone see my frustration. When I finally
stepped inside my house, the sadness took over(人物刻画，情绪描写), and I rushed to my
room, tears streaming down my face(独立主格，刻画人物). I lay on my bed, feeling
a deep
ache inside(现在分词做伴随动作，情绪描写). And then, something caught my eye(无灵主语句)—a box,
sitting
on the bed
(现在分词做后置定语).
Paragraph 2: To my surprise, I found a box lying on my bed. The wrapping
was simple(衔接原文，哥哥身份的符合), yet I could tell it had been done with care. My fingers
trembled slightly(人物状态刻画) as I
lifted the lid
. Inside, there it was—Artie(倒装句). I
gasped in disbelief(人物状态描写). The familiar dolphin, just as soft and comforting as I
remembered(原级比较，衔接原文), lay there waiting for
me
(现在分词做伴随动作). A note was tucked
in under its flipper: "I couldn’t let him slip away. Rick." A rush of emotion
flooded through me(情绪描写). My brother, the one who always teased me about Artie,
had secretly bought it for me. I hugged the dolphin tightly, feeling a wave of
graefulness
and
relief
. The tears I had been holding back finally spilled over
again(衔接原文), but they were tears of joy. I realized then that Rick had shown me
something I had never expected—his kindness, his care, (补充sth)hidden
beneath his
teasing exterior(过去分词做后置定语). Artie wasn’t just a stuffed toy; it was a symbol of a
bond that went beyond words(递进句式).
同义替换项：
“my heart sank” ≈ my heart dropped ( felt heavy, shattered)
“standing frozen” ≈ standing still (rooted, motionless)
“fought them back” ≈ held them back ( suppressed, stifled)
“caught my eye” ≈ drew my attention (grabbed my attention)
“trembled slightly” ≈ quivered gently ( shook lightly)
情绪动作描写：
Emotion: heart sank; tears welling up; frustration; sadness; disbelief; rush of
emotion; gratitude
Action: stood frozen; turned; walked home; rushed; lifted the lid; hugged
tightly; spilled over
词汇升级项:
sad = disheartened, devastated, downhearted, melancholy
She felt deeply disheartened after hearing the news.
The room was filled with a melancholy air after the announcement.
tears = weeping, sobs, moisture, wetness
His eyes were full of weeping as he spoke.
She wiped away the moisture from her cheeks.
hold back = suppress, restrain, stifle, bottle up
He tried to suppress his anger but couldn’t.
She had to bottle up her emotions during the meeting.
surprise = astonishment, shock, disbelief, amazement
His gesture filled me with astonishment.
I could hardly contain my shock when I saw the gift.
Version 2
Paragraph 1: It was Mrs. Lehman herself. Her voice was gentle(人物刻画) as she
spoke, “I suppose you're looking for Artie, the stuffed dolphin. I’m sorry, but it
was sold earlier today.” The words hit me like a cold wave(人物情绪描写). My stomach
tightened(人物情绪刻画), and for a moment, rooted
to
the
spot
(过去分词做任务状态描写), I couldn't
move, as if the ground beneath me had disappeared. I had convinced myself that
Artie would still be there, waiting
for me
(现在分词做伴随动作), but now it was gone. Slowly,
I turned and started walking back home, each step heavier than the last(独立主格，刻画
人物的深深失落感). The hope I had carried all the way to Mrs. Lehman’s house had
slipped away, and all I could feel was disappointment(人物失落的刻画). My mind raced(心理描
写), but I couldn’t bring myself to cry just yet. I was trying to hold it all in. When I
stepped inside my house, the weight of sadness was too much to bear(人物状态描写). I
quickly ran to my room, my tears finally falling freely(独立主格刻画人物的状态), unable
to
control the flood of emotions(adj 短语做补语)that came crashing down on me.
Paragraph 2: To my surprise, I found a box lying on my bed. I wiped my
tears and tried to check it, its plain brown paper contrasting with the pink
ribbon(独立主格补充描写，或者刻画盒子) wrapped
around it
(过去分词短语做后置定语). My curiosity instantly
took over(人物状态描写), and I opened it slowly, my heart racing(人物心理描写). There, nestled
inside(过去分词做方式状语), was Artie(倒装句), just as soft and comforting as I remembered. I
couldn't believe my eyes. I held it to my chest, feeling
a rush of joy and
disbelief(现在分词做伴随动作). There was a small note tucked
under its flipper
(过去分词做后置定语): “I
couldn’t let him slip away. Rick.” The words were simple, but they meant so much. I
had never expected something like this from him, especially since he
had always
teased me
about my attachment to the dolphin
(衔接原文). But now, in this quiet moment,
I felt a deep sense of warmth(情绪描写). Rick, in his own way, had shown me how
much he cared. I hugged Artie even tighter, a smile finally breaking through
my tears(独立主格刻画人物的开心).
同义替换项:
“heart racing” ≈ heart pounding (Syn: heart fluttering, heart thumping)
“tears falling freely” ≈ tears flowing uncontrollably (Syn: tears streaming,
weeping without restraint)
“couldn't move” ≈ frozen in place (Syn: rooted to the spot)
“just as soft and comforting” ≈ as soft and soothing (Syn: as gentle and
comforting)
“holding it all in” ≈ keeping it together (Syn: bottling up, suppressing
emotions)
动作心理描写:
Emotion: cold wave; tight stomach; disappointment; disbelief; joy; warmth
Action: couldn’t move; turned slowly; ran to my room; wiped my tears;
opened it slowly; hugged tightly
词汇升级项:
disappointment = disillusionment, discouragement, despair, letdown
He felt deep disillusionment when he saw the empty room.
The discouragement in her voice was evident when she spoke.
sad = downcast, melancholic, sorrowful, forlorn
His face was downcast after hearing the news.
She felt melancholic as she walked through the empty street.
tears = sorrowful tears, eyes brimming, tearful, wet cheeks
His eyes were brimming with sorrowful tears.
She wiped away the tearful marks on her cheeks.
surprise = astonishment, shock, bewilderment, amazement
She stared in astonishment when she saw the gift.
There was a look of shock on his face when he entered.
Versoin 3
Paragraph 1: It was Mrs. Lehman herself. Her voice was soft(人物刻画), yet the
words struck me with the force of a thunderclap(无灵主语句). “I guess you're looking
for Artie. Unfortunately, it was sold earlier today.” The reality of her words slowly
sank in(无灵主语句), and I stood frozen, unable
to process
(adj 短语做补充) what she was
saying. I had convinced myself that Artie would be waiting for me, as if
somehow it was meant to be(虚拟语气). But now, hearing
her
words
(现在分词短语做原因状语),
the dream shattered. A wave of disappointment washed over me(情绪描写), leaving
me feeling empty(现在分词做结果状语). I turned around slowly, walking
back home with
heavy feet(现在分词做伴随动作). I couldn’t stop thinking about how close I had been, yet
how far I was from what I wanted. As I stepped through the door of my house,
the sadness overwhelmed me(情绪描写), and I rushed to my room, tears
flooding
down my face(独立主格刻画人物的状态). I collapsed onto my bed, my heart aching from the
loss(独立主格，刻画人物的状态).
Paragraph 2: To my surprise, I found a box lying on my bed. The box was
simple, wrapped
in plain paper
(过去分词短语做后置定语) with a ribbon tied carefully around
it(with 复合结构). My curiosity took hold, and with trembling hands, I lifted the lid.
Inside was Artie(倒装句), just as soft and familiar as I had remembered. My heart
skipped a beat(心理描写), and I gasped in disbelief. There, lying in the box(现在分词做补语),
was my stuffed dolphin, the one I thought I had lost forever. A note
was tucked
inside the box: “I couldn’t let him slip away. Rick.” The words were simple, yet
they carried so much meaning. My brother had bought Artie for me. I could hardly
believe it. He had always teased me about my affection to Artie, but now, I
realized he had understood something deeper about me. I hugged the dolphin
tightly, a smile tugging at my lips(独立主格，刻画人物状态) as warmth spread through me. I
had never felt so grateful, so loved, in this quiet, unexpected way.
同义替换项:
“heart skipped a beat” ≈ heart fluttered (Syn: heart raced, heart jumped)
“tears streaming down my face” ≈ tears running down my cheeks (Syn:
weeping uncontrollably)
“wrapped in plain paper” ≈ covered in simple wrapping (Syn: encased in basic
paper)
“hugged tightly” ≈ embraced firmly (Syn: clutched close)
“the words sank in” ≈ the realization hit (Syn: it dawned on me, the truth
settled)
情绪动作描写:
Emotion: sadness; disappointment; disbelief; warmth; gratitude; joy
Action: stood frozen; walked back; rushed to my room; collapsed onto my
bed; lifted the lid; embraced firmly
词汇升级项:
disappointment = dismay, letdown, sorrow, dejection
She felt a wave of dismay wash over her.
He couldn’t shake off the dejection he felt after the conversation.
sad = forlorn, downcast, sorrowful, woeful
The forlorn expression on his face said it all.
Her sorrowful gaze lingered on the empty chair.
hugged = embraced, clutched, held, cuddled
She embraced the gift tightly, not wanting to let go.
He clutched the object as if it were the only thing that mattered.
