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本节内容包含：试题解读＋写作要点＋可用素材（含词汇、句式）＋注意事项＋满分作文2篇（附亮点评析、满分揭秘）＋参考范文（附译文）
■经典考题（计15分）
美好人生需要方向指引。成长路上，我们要学会发现自我优势，提炼方法，坚定前行。请你围绕下图提示的三个问题，结合自身实际，选取相关信息，以“ICanIWill”为题，写一篇英文演讲稿，参加学校的英语素养大赛。
注意：
1.根据上图所给提示，适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.词数80左右，已给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数。
ICan IWill
Dear teachers and classmates,
It’s my great honor to make a speech here._______________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
◆名师解析
1. 试题解读
本题为校园素养大赛演讲稿，紧扣青少年成长励志主题，围绕擅长之事、成功秘诀、未来规划三大线索行文，引导学生正视自身长处、总结成长方法、树立奋斗目标。试题给出丰富话题短语，降低选材难度，要求结合个人真实经历合理拓展。文体为演讲，语言需积极自信、口语流畅有感染力。侧重考查一般现在时、一般将来时、状语从句等初三核心语法，严格要求80 词主体篇幅，禁止透露真实个人信息。兼顾基础词汇运用、篇章逻辑与情感表达，综合检测学生英语综合输出能力，兼具语言考查与德育引导双重作用。
2. 写作要点
⑴承接演讲开篇，点明自身特长，补充简短亲身小事，使内容真实丰满；
⑵结合成长经历说明成功秘诀，选用 2 至 3 个提示词块介绍日常坚持的做法；
⑶运用 be going to 与 will 两种将来时态，写出详细、可行的长期成长规划；
⑷结尾紧扣标题升华主旨，抒发自信奋进的青春态度，呼应演讲稿励志主题。
3. 可用素材
⑴词汇：
play sports 进行体育运动；paint pictures 画画；make friends 交朋友；deal with problems 处理难题；practice more 多加练习；be a good listener 善于倾听；ask for help 寻求帮助；be confident 保持自信
⑵句式：
As long as I hold on to practice, I can make steady progress day by day. 只要坚持练习，我就能日复一日稳步进步。
Confidence and constant efforts will light up my way forward in growth. 自信与不懈努力，会照亮我成长前行的道路。
4. 注意事项
⑴演讲语气热情大方，长短句搭配提升朗读节奏感，杜绝生僻超纲词汇；文中不能出现真实姓名、班级、学校等隐私信息，避免扣分。
⑵主体内容控制在80 词上下，严格按照特长、秘诀、计划分层写作，保证时态统一、逻辑清晰，完整回应三个核心问题。
满分作文展示1
I Can I Will
Dear teachers and classmates,
It’s my great honor to make a speech here. I am good at running. Last term I fell behind in the race, but I didn’t lose heart and kept training.
My secret is to practice more every morning and stay confident. Whenever I meet difficulties, I will ask my PE teacher for professional advice.
I am going to stick to daily running training. I will take part in the school sports meeting and challenge myself bravely.
I firmly believe hard work never fails. I trust myself, I Can and I Will!
That’s all. Thank you!
亮点评析
①用词地道高级，lose heart、stick to、hard work never fails 都是考场加分短语；
②whenever 引导让步状语从句，句式丰富，打破单一简单句结构；
③加入赛场失利小故事，细节真实，增强演讲稿真情实感；
④结构清晰，三段分别对应三大设问，收尾点题，演讲感染力十足。
满分揭秘
本篇以长跑为写作素材，贴合校园日常，完整覆盖全部写作要点，审题无疏漏。词汇全部来自初三核心知识点，易理解、易模仿。简单句与复合句错落搭配，时态运用规范无错误。叙事简短走心，语言口语化适配演讲场景，词数精准达标，无隐私信息，行文积极励志，是适配中等水平学生的高分标准范文。
满分作文展示2
I Can I Will
Dear teachers and classmates,
It’s my great honor to make a speech here. I do well in painting. In my spare time, I love to draw natural scenery and record warm little moments around me.
My secret lies in long-time practice and being a good listener. I always listen carefully to art teachers’ suggestions to improve my painting skills.
I’m going to attend weekend painting courses. I will create more works and take part in city-level painting competitions.
Confidence pushes me to move forward. I believe I can achieve my art dream, I Can I Will!
That’s all. Thank you!
亮点评析
①替换基础表达，do well in、lie in long-time practice 提升文字档次；
②并列名词短语、不定式结构丰富句式，语法亮点清晰；
③绘画题材新颖，风景、生活细节描写让文章内容饱满不空洞；
④行文层层递进，从爱好到方法再到目标，逻辑流畅自然。
满分揭秘
本文选用绘画作为核心素材，区别于常见运动题材，选材新颖亮眼，更容易获得阅卷好感。全文严格按照试题三个问题分层展开，条理分明。词汇丰富但不超纲，复合句使用恰当，体现扎实语法功底。文字柔和细腻，契合演讲温暖励志的氛围，词数符合要求，要点齐全无失误，适合想提升作文区分度的学生背诵参考。
◆参考范文
I Can I Will
Dear teachers and classmates,
It’s my great honor to make a speech here. I’m skilled at making friends and dealing with my classmates’ small troubles in daily school life.
My secret is being a good listener and daring to ask others for advice when I get stuck. I always stay confident to comfort upset partners around me.
I am going to organize small group activities at breaks. I will keep listening patiently and offer help to more students in need.
Kindness and persistence make me stronger. I Can, I Will chase a better version of myself!
That’s all. Thank you!
译文：
我能做到，我必将全力以赴
尊敬的老师、亲爱的同学们：
很荣幸能站在这里发表演讲。我擅长与人交友，也总能化解同学们校园日常里遇到的各类小烦恼。
我的秘诀是学会耐心倾听，遇到难题时敢于主动向他人寻求建议。我始终满怀自信，安抚身边情绪低落的同学。
课间我计划组织各类小组小活动，坚持耐心倾听心声，主动帮助更多有需要的同学。
善良与坚持让我不断成长。我能行，我定会奔赴更好的自己！
我的演讲完毕，谢谢大家！
