对标“工高铁” | 高一第一次月考英语作文高分攻略(附分班考试卷)

中考建议信13分一类文

新高一同学注意！

是不是有这种错觉：

我初中建议信写得溜溜的，

要点写全、不拼错单词，考试轻轻松松13-15分

可怎么一进入高一月考考场

根本拿不到高分！

原因在这里：

初中阅卷：少犯错=高分

高中阅卷：不犯错，仅仅只是及格门槛

那么，高一月考的建议信到底要写成什么样

才能戳中阅卷老师

稳稳拿高分？

“工高铁” 第一次月考作文考什么？

建议信

01 建议信架构&优选句型

Dear XX,

I’m more than delighted to hear from you asking for my advice on how to do sth. and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.

To begin with, if I were you, I would do sth. In addition, it couldn’t be better if you..., which can enable you to do sth(做这件事的好处). At last, it is strongly recommended that you should do ...,as +原因状语从句.

I hope you will find these proposals(建议)useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details./and I’m sure you'll …

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

02【2025-2026学年高新一中高一（上）月考英语试卷】

假定你是李华，你的好友Peter给你写信询问如何能将汉语学好，请给他写封建议信，内容包括：

1.多交中国朋友，练习口语；

2.听中文歌曲、看中文电影等；

3.记日记。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter，

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours，

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Peter,

I’m more than delighted to hear from you asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.

To begin with，if I were you, I would make more Chinese friends who can help practice your spoken Chinese. In addition，it could be better if you listen to Chinese songs and watch Chinese movies，which can enable you to gain a better understanding of Chinese. At last，it is strongly recommended that you should keep a diary，as it can improve your writing level.

I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I'm sure you'll make great progress in Chinese.

Yours，

Li Hua

新闻稿

01 新闻稿建架构&优选句型

(标题)

Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary__________(主题),which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school . Aimed at__________ (活动目的), this activity was well received in __________ (地方).

__________ (参与者)took an active part in the activity. The activity provided a platform for__________ (参与者)to__________ (活动内容一).Most impressively, __________ (活动内容二). With__________ (参与者的)active participation and__________ (其他人的)enthusiastic support, not only__________ (好处一)but__________ (好处二).It was not until half past six in the evening that the activity came to an end. The activity was of great benefit to us.

Undoubtedly, not only can this event enrich our school life, but also offer us opportunities to learn__________！

02【2025-2026学年铁一中高一（上）月考英语试卷】

假定你是李华，你校学生会上周举办了主题为"Fun with English, Shine with Confidence"的英语学科活动周(English Week)活动。请向校英文报投稿报道此次活动。

内容包括:1.活动过程;2.活动反响。

注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【参考范文】

Fun with English, Shine with Confidence

Last week witnessed an extraordinary English Week themed “Fun with English, Shine with Confidence”, which drew the attention of nearly every student. Aimed at arousing students’ interest in English, the event was well received on campus.

Students took an active part in various activities, including English singing and speech contests. Most impressively, students confidently performed English plays on stage. With students’ active participation and teachers’ enthusiastic support, not only was our school life enriched, but our confidence in using English was also strengthened.

Undoubtedly, the event offered us a valuable opportunity to learn English with fun and confidence.