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更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 专题 06 场景描写 (高分定律) 【考情分析】 年份 卷别 主题 话题 2023 新高考I卷 人与自我之个人成长 我被鼓励参加写作比赛 2023 浙江1月卷 人与自然之人与动物 我与蜂鸟的神奇邂逅 2022 新高考I&II卷 人与自我之个人成长 鼓励残疾男孩参加越野跑 2022 浙江6月卷 人与社会之善行义举 为无家可归者发放食物 2022 浙江1月卷 人与自我之个人成长 与“最不合拍”搭档成为好友 2021 新高考I&II卷 人与社会之亲情关爱 母亲节的惊喜 2021 浙江6月卷 人与社会之善行义举 帮助别人度过难关 2021 浙江1月卷 人与社会之故事+遇险 男孩意外卡住头而走红网络 【写作指导】 人与自然的和谐相处、自然灾害、环境保护、动植物的保护、人与动物等热门话题中都会涉及到场景 的描写,借景抒情,通过对景物的描写,寄寓、烘托着人物的抱负和情感是谋篇布局的一种写作手法。适 当的环境描写可以烘托氛围,衬托主题,折射人物内心世界。 (2022 年新高考 I 卷)Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route (路线) through thick evergreen forest .(走过终年常绿的茂盛的森林) 【素材宝库】 词汇积累之动词 , blow吹, whip鞭打, sting刺痛, kiss亲吻,stroked(轻抚) 风 howl嚎叫 , crash against击, pour down倾盆, fall 落下, 雨 beat against..拍打 , rise升起, set落下, kiss亲吻, flood in 照射进来, be bathed in沐浴在 阳光 come out出来 雪 dance跳舞, float/fall/drift飘, melt away融化, blanket裹住, cover覆盖更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 星星 shine闪耀,sparkle/twinkle闪耀, wink/blink眨眼睛, hide躲藏, decorate装饰, dot装饰 词汇积累之形容词(场景环境) dazzling 耀眼的 pale/faint 暗淡 pure纯洁的 dark黑暗的 dim昏暗的 feathery鹅毛般的 sparkling/twinkling/glittering闪闪发光的 lofty高耸入云 y雾蒙蒙的 fogg misty 有雾 undulating起伏的 amber-like 琥珀一样的 winding 蜿蜒的 steep 险峻的 sunny/rainy/cloudy/snowy starless没有星星 silky 丝滑的 hard 硬的 soft/gentle 轻的 strong/violent 猛烈的 sharp尖锐的 rough 粗糙的 icy/freezing冰冷的 shaggy毛茸茸的 warm温暖的 biting刺骨的 bumpy 崎岖不平的 burning/scorching火辣辣 sweet甜的 wet/dam潮湿的 choking 让人窒息的 bone-chilling刺骨的 strong 强烈的 fresh 新鲜的 smelly/foul/stinky 臭的;难闻的 fragrant 清香的 deep深的 noisy 吵闹的 gurgling 潺潺的(流水) deafening 震耳欲聋的 low小声的 high大声的 howling 怒号的;猛烈的 melodious悦耳的 短语积累 风 暴风雨之夜 a stormy night;四面受风 exposed to the four winds of heaven; 雨 连绵不断的雨 continuous/constant rains;在茫茫大雨中 in the blinding rain; 狂风暴雨 fierce/heavy/violent storms; 在春天温暖的阳光里 in the warm spring sunshine沐日光浴 bathe/bask in (the) sunshine;在盛 夏灼热的阳光下under the blazing/scorching/ burning sun of midsummer; 阳光 the setting/rising sun 落日/冉冉升起的太阳; 雪 深埋在雪中 be buried in snow;Get piled with snow白雪皑皑,积雪堆积如山; 星空 stars sparkled in the sky星星在天空中闪烁;the dark,raining evening 雨夜交加的夜晚 花草 fragile flowers 娇嫩的花;green grass 青草;fragrant roses 芬芳的玫瑰 鸟语 the twitter of birds 吱吱喳喳的叫声; birds soaring through the air空中翱翔的鸟儿 句式积累 1. The pure feathery snowflakes danced in the air, making a beautiful picture.更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 鹅毛般纯洁的的雪花在空中飞舞,像一幅美丽的图画。 2. Sparkling stars winked at me in a darkening sky. 夜空中的闪烁星星向我眨眼睛。 3. The scenery along the journey is just like a breath- taking landscape painting. 沿路的风景就像一幅美丽的山水画。 4.A heavy silence blanketed the room. 整个房子沉浸在一片寂寞中。 5.The beautiful park was a scented carpet of colours. 美丽的公园就是一个芬芳的彩色地毯。 6.Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. 顷刻间,黑暗统治了森林。 7.Darkness blanketed the whole room. 黑暗笼罩了整个房间。 8.The fragrant flowers attracted lots of butterflies,lingering(萦绕) around them. 鲜花的香味引来了很多蝴蝶,它们围着花朵。 9.The flowers were gently swaying in the breeze. 花儿在微风中轻轻舞动。 10.Blue skies stood tall and far. 蓝蓝的天空高高耸立。 11.The stars shine like diamonds. 星星如钻石般闪耀。 12.The beach is bathed in the amber-like sunshine. 海滩沐浴在琥珀色的阳光中。 13.The sky was dotted with sparkling stars. 天上繁星点点。 14.Stars winked at me in a darkening sky. 夜空中星星向我眨眼睛。 15. It felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch of his skin. 他感觉琥珀般的阳光亲吻着他的每一寸肌肤。 16.Clusters of stars decorate the vast sky like sparkling of jewels. 繁星像闪闪发光的珠宝一样装饰了浩瀚的天空。 17. I was disturbed by the annoying sound of the rain.更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 淅淅沥沥的雨声扰乱了我的思绪。 18.The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy clouds. 天空阴沉,乌云密布。 19. The sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of jewels. 天空是浓浓的灰色,伴着拥挤的朵朵云。 20. The thunder was rumbling in the distance. 远处雷声隆隆。 21.The rain was pouring down. 雨在倾盆而下。 22.Rain splashed against the windows. 雨点啪啦啪啦打在窗户上。 23. The pure feathery snowflakes danced in the air, making a beautiful picture. 鹅毛般纯洁的雪花在空中飞舞,像一幅美丽的图画。 24.The frozen snow crunched under our feet. 冻结的雪在我们的脚下嘎吱作响。 25. A gentle warm breeze stroked his head,comforting all his tiredness. 一阵和煦的微风拂过他的头,抚慰了他所有的疲惫。 26.The breeze gently kissed her cheeks. 微风轻柔地亲吻着她的脸庞。 27.The icy wind started howling, stinging my face. 寒风开始咆哮,刺痛了我的脸。 28.Wind and rain now whipped the house. 风和雨像鞭子一样击打着屋子。 29.Snow blanketed every rooftop and weighed on the branches of old trees. 雪覆盖了每一个屋顶,压在老树的枝丫上。 30.The sun was at its highest. The heat beat down on my head as if I was bacon under the grill. 太阳处于最高点,热浪击打在头上,我好像烤架下的培根一样。 31. The water kept rising. Two hours passed. He did not dare to move an inch for fear of slipping. 不断上升。两个小时过去了。他不敢动一英寸,怕滑倒。 32. The animals grew restless as if in anticipation of a disaster. 动物们变得焦躁不安,好像在等待一场灾难。更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 33. The roaring fire swallowed the whole house.怒火吞噬了整个房子。 谚语积累 1. There are four seasons in a day, ten miles in different days. 一天有四季, 十里不同天。 2. If you don't go to Songgu Temple, you will feel uneasy at home. 不到松谷庵, 回家心不安。 3. You can't go to Tiandu Peak and visit the mountains. 不上天都峰、游山一场空。 4. Spring is bright on the Yunwai Peak and ten thousand trees are red after the azalea blossoms. 云外峰上春光明,杜鹃开后万树红。 5. The moon shines between pines, and the clear spring stones flow upward. 明月松间照,清泉石上流。 6. Black clouds rise in the northwest and thunderstorms are bound to come.西北起黑云,雷雨必来临。 7. Old ancestors of Dongbifeng and Rain. 东比风、下雨的老祖宗。 8. Heavy fog is only three, after three cloudy and rainy days.大雾不过三,过三阴雨天。 9. Red sky at night,sailors delight.Red sky in the morning,sailor take warning.早霞不出门,晚霞行千里。 10. Halo around the sun or moon ,rain or snow soon. 日晕三更雨,月晕午时风。 11. When the stars begin to huddle ,the earth will soon become a puddle.月明星稀。 12. When ladybugs swarm, expect a day that’s warm.蚂蚁搬家,天将雨。 13. If bees stay at home,rain will soon come.if they fly away, fine will be the day蜜蜂迟归,雨来风吹。 14. Mother nature is good, also cold butcher.大自然是善良的慈母,同时也是冷酷的屠夫。 15. Rain comes after sunshine, and after a dark cloud, a clear sky.晴日之后有雨水,乌云过后见青天。 万能写作模板 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Early one weekend morning, I was sleeping like a log when the telephone rang. When I answered I heard my Grandma’s voice “Hey, sweetheart. I have missed you so much lately. Why don’t you come to the countryside and enjoy some fine views?” she asked. “Dad, Grandma is inviting us to her home,” I shouted to my father who was busy in the kitchen. “Fine with me,” he responded in a casual tone. After a quick breakfast, we drove to Grandma’s. Once we arrived, we were both thrilled by the breathtaking landscape. The plum trees in the backyard were ripe with fruit, while millions of wildflowers colored the valley. Grandma prepared delicious lunch including her special homemade apple jam, which was my favorite. Seeing my greedy eyes, grandma said “Take some when you更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 leave, and I’ve got plenty stored in the cellar (地窖) .” Talking and laughing, we didn’t even notice that it was late in the afternoon, though somewhat cooler than it had been that morning. Grandma suggested that we take her homemade wooden boat for a tour along the nearby river. Seated in the boat, looking up at the sky, I felt like the clouds were greeting us cheerfully from above. In the vast fields, the golden trees were like brides in the sun. The breeze skimmed over the surface of the field, carrying the sweet smell of the flowers. It was like a picture painted by one of the Dutch masters. “It is so nice to spend some quality time with family,” Dad murmured. “It feels like we’re on an adventure,” I added. “It’s been so much fun!” While we were admiring the splendid setting around us, the weather started getting hot and humid again. At first, we ignored this change, but when dad looked up at the sky, he saw dark, low clouds were approaching us. Then a fierce gale (大风) sprang up. Lightning flashed within the black clouds, followed by a roar of thunder. “Row!” Dad shouted, trembling, “A tornado (龙卷风) is coming!” There was no time to think. We rowed as fast as we could. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ Grandma opened the door for us. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________ 【答案】 There was no time to think. We rowed as fast as we could. Although I didn’t dare to look,I could feel the tornado getting closer as hail started to fall, hitting the creaky old boat hard. Chased by the relentless nightmare, I couldn't afford to let up for a moment. I didn't even wipe the sweat away as it streamed in my eyes and blurred my view. Finally Grandma's house appeared before my eyes. We jumped out of the boat and ran towards it. Gasping for breath, we buzzed the doorbell again and again. Grandma opened the door for us. We dripped water on her floor as we went inside, our shoes and clothes soaked through. Grandma said we needed to find a safer place to ride out the tornado, and we followed her into the cellar. Dad helped close off the entrance while I huddled in the dark corner, quivering from the cold and the fear. We stayed down there, waiting for the tornado to pass over us. We didn’t wait very long, for it was over in a matter更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 of minutes. However, after this experience, I appreciated every day with my family. 【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者和爸爸在周末去乡下奶奶家欣赏美景。在下午时作者又和爸 爸乘奶奶自制的木船到附近的河边去游览观光,一切都那么美好,突然乌云低垂,狂风、闪电、雷鸣接踵 而来,龙卷风来了!作者和爸爸经过努力和挣扎,终于回到了奶奶家躲避了龙卷风。 【详解】1.段落续写: ①由第一段首句内容“没有时间思考。我们尽可能快地划。”可知,第一段可描写作者和爸爸奋力划船, 与龙卷风争分夺秒的过程。 ②由第二段首句内容“奶奶为我们开门。”可知,第二段可描写作者和爸爸、奶奶一起躲避龙卷风。 3. 续写线索:奋力划船的过程——回到奶奶家——在家躲避龙卷风——作者的感慨 词汇激活 行为类 ①停止:let up/ shut off/ stop ②.模糊视线:blur vision/ blur one’s eye sight/ blur one’s view ③.躲避:ride out/ hide / stay away from 情绪类 ①. 感激的:grateful/ appreciative/ obliged ②. 害怕的:afraid/ frightened/scared 【点睛】[高分句型1]. Although I didn’t dare to look,I could feel the tornado getting closer as hail started to fall, hitting the creaky old boat hard. (使用了由although引导的状语从句和现在分词作状语) [高分句型2]. Chased by the relentless nightmare, I couldn't afford to let up for a moment. (使用了过去分词作 状语) [高分句型3]. Dad helped close off the entrance while I huddled in the dark corner, quivering from the cold and the fear.(使用了由while引导的状语从句) [高分句型4].Although I didn’t look back to see the tornado, I could feel its fierce speed unavoidably attack us. (使用由although引导的状语从句) 【 高考真题】 (2023年浙江卷1月) 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider- webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up. With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me. When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty? As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight. During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.” 注意: 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web. I rushed back to the deserted house. It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. Leaving the house, I couldn’t help wondering how it was getting on now. Had it managed to find its way back home, or was it still out there somewhere struggling to survive? I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash of movement caught my attention. I turned around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air. It seemed that the bird was waiting for me, its beady eyes locked on mine as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude. I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this sound and grateful creature, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared as I climbed into my car and drove away. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者被邀请去一个农场野餐,发现一个房子里有只蜂鸟被蜘蛛网 困住了,作者把蜂鸟救了,把蜂鸟带出去的时候它迟迟不肯走,当作者走到一条布满黑莓的小路时,它开 始动了,但是却不肯飞走,徘徊着,后来终于飞走了,当作者准备离开时,蜂鸟又飞到作者面前,好像是 在和作者告别。 【详解】1.段落续写: ①由第一段首句内容“几个星期后,我又去了农场。”可知,第一段可描写作者回到农场时所看到的和所 想到的。 ②由第二段首句内容“我正要离开,这时蜂鸟出现了。”可知,第二段可描写蜂鸟是如何对作者的以及作 者的感想。 2. 续写线索:想起救蜂鸟的时候——回到那个房子——想到那只蜂鸟——看见蜂鸟——蜂鸟的表现—— 作者的感想 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ①思绪回到……:thoughts drift back to/thoughts return to ②匆匆回到:rush back to/hurry back to ③盯着:eyes locked on/eyes staring at 情绪类更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 ①宽慰:feel a surge of relief/feel relieved ②感激:grateful/thankful 【点睛】[高分句型1] As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web. (由as引导的时间状语从句和when引导的限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. (由that引导的 主语从句) 【 名校模拟题提升练】 1.(2023江苏盐城·高三阶段练习)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇 完整的短文。 One day, some young people from a local rehabilitation (康复) center visited a wildlife park. Tippi, a guide, stood before a cheetah (猎豹). “Her name is Subira. She’s a three-year-old cheetah,” she tole the audience. All the visitors sitting in the chairs were amazed by the cheetah’s beauty, except a teenage boy, Cory. He pulled a long face and made noises, showing his boredom. Tippi continued, “The cheetah is the fastest animal on earth.” “Aren’t you, honey?” She asked in a cheerful tone, looking at the cheetah lying atop a tree. Giving Subira a dirty look, Cory replied, “Oh, just a skinny cat. Next! Bring out the stupid tigers or whatever so we can get this over with!” However, the cheetah gently looked at Cory and make a happy sound. “I think she likes you,” Tippi told Cory. “I don’t care,” the boy just replied. What had happened to Cory? Why was he so angry? The boy had dreamed of someday playing Major League Baseball and having many fans. He knew he had a promising future. That was before the car accident. In it, he lost his leg and also lost his hope, joy and spirit. He felt useless and hopeless. Now he sat in a wheelchair, angry at the world. He was here today on another “boring field trip” from the rehabilitation program. Suddenly, the creature jumped down. Seeming to show her skills, she immediately ran fast forward. “Oh, she’s so beautiful,” the crowd said. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “She only has three legs!” someone suddenly said, surprised. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________ At last, Cory smiled, with his eyes shining with hope and confidence in his professional future. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________ 【答案】 “She only has three legs!” someone suddenly said, surprised. The other young people looked on in silence, also surprised, but no one was more surprised than Cory. Looking at this amazing animal running at full speed, with his face breaking into a smile, Cory had admiration and asked how she could run that fast with three legs. Tippi replied, “Subira was born disabled, and no one thought she could run. But she loves running and has kept practicing ...” The boy silently listened with interest as Tippi continued telling Subira’s inspiring life story. At last, Cory smiled, with his eyes shining with hope and confidence in his professional future. After that tour, Copy practiced playing baseball, sitting in his wheelchair. But it proved challenging. However, every time Cory wanted to give up, the image of that three-legged cheetah running rapidly hit his mind and encouraged him. So he kept on and his skills improved over time. Eventually, Cory joined the national baseball league for the disabled and inspired many unfortunate people. And he was so proud and grateful to Subira who encouraged him to reach his goals. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了一些来自当地康复中心的年轻人参观了野生动物园。导游蒂皮是 一名向导向人们介绍动物的情况,而男孩科里的表现让人不解。 【详解】1.段落续写: ①由第一段首句内容“‘她只有三条腿!’有人突然惊讶地说。”可知,第一段可描写年轻人的惊讶,包括 科里在内,紧接着导游向人们介绍这个生物的情况。 ②由第二段首句内容“最后,科里笑了,他的眼睛里闪烁着对自己职业前途的希望和信心。”可知,第二 段可描写科里受到三条腿猎豹的鼓舞,开始坐在轮椅上练习打棒球,最后,科里加入了国家残疾人棒球联更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 盟,激励了许多不幸的人。 2. 续写线索:残疾猎豹——惊讶——受到鼓舞——坐轮椅打棒球——棒球联盟——激励他人 3. 词汇激活 行为类 (1)鼓舞:encourage/inspire (2)证明:prove /turn out (3)实现:reach /realize 情绪类 (1)感到惊讶:surprised /amazed (2)感激的:grateful /thankful 【点睛】[高分句型1]. Looking at this amazing animal running at full speed, with his face breaking into a smile, Cory had admiration and asked how she could run that fast with three legs.(运用了现在分词作状语和how引导 的宾语从句) [高分句型2]. And he was so proud and grateful to Subira who encouraged him to reach his goals.(由关系代词 who引导限制性定语从句) [高分句型3]. After that tour, Copy practiced playing baseball, sitting in his wheelchair.(现在分词作伴随状语) 2.(2023·广东·高三校联考阶段练习)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成 一篇完整的短文。 Caught in a flood Mary and her parents were downstairs in the living room. Mary was looking through the windows at the endless rain outside. It had been raining non-stop for three days. She had never seen a storm this bad. It was making her nervous. The wind roared and the rain beat on the roof and windows. Dad was listening to a weather report on the radio, while Mum was putting their important documents and disaster supplies into a bag. “Mum, Dad,” said Mary suddenly, “I think we should leave here right away!” “No,” said Dad. “It’s too late: The radio says the city has already been flooded.” “We can drive our car through the floodwater. Let’s us leave! I’m really scared!” cried Mary. “We can’t do that, honey,” explained Mum, “otherwise the moving water could wash the car away!” Mary walked to the door. She was curious to see how much water there was outside. “Don’t open the door!” shouted Mum and Dad at the same time. “The water may flood in!” Dad moved the dinner table against the door, in case the floodwater forced the door open. Mum waved to Mary to sit on the sofa. “Mary, don’t worry. Everything’s going to be OK,” she said softly, trying her best to更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 comfort Mary. Her voice was calm, but Mary could tell she was worried too. Without saying a single word, Dad walked to the sofa, sat down and hugged his wife and daughter. The sudden silence in the house seemed to make the wind and rain more frightening outside. What could they do? 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1: All of a sudden, the floodwater forced the door open. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________ Paragraph 2: Being upstairs, they breathed a sigh of relief. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________ 【答案】 All of a sudden, the floodwater forced the door open. Shocked, frightened and extremely scared, Mary saw the floodwaters pouring into the room, leaving the dinner table upside down. She didn’t know what to do, trembling, and turned to her mum for help. An idea occurred to Mum that they had to go upstairs, because they had no choice but to save themselves at that moment, and it would be of great danger to stay in place before rescue came to them. Dad also rushed to the second floor without hesitation, not forgetting to take the bag containing important documents and disaster supplies. Being upstairs, they breathed a sigh of relief. However, the floodwater had flooded into the whole living room更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 downstairs. They were all nervous and scared to see the floodwater rise further. Fortunately, what relieved them a little was that they prepared enough food and water supplies in advance. The rain was still raining non-stop. Mary and Mum became increasingly nervous while Dad kept giving them comfort and encouragement. Later, they learned from the radio that the government was organizing rescue groups to save people caught in their home by boat. Thinking they would be saved, they couldn’t be more excited. Until then, the easiness and warmth welled up in every corner of the room, seeming to make the floodwater outside less frightening outside. It doesn’t matter what you did when you were faced with tough situation, and what matters most is that you made a wise decision and well prepared. 【导语】本文以事件为线索展开,玛丽一家因为暴雨而被困在家,玛丽感到很紧张,而她的爸爸在听天气 预报,妈妈在整理重要文件和救灾物资。玛丽想要赶紧离开,但是爸爸告诉她城市已被洪水淹没,来不及 离开了。妈妈安慰了充满担心的玛丽,爸爸默默地拥抱了自己的妻子和女儿。 【详解】1. 段落续写: ①由第一段首句内容“突然,洪水把门冲开了。”可知,第一段可描写他们看到的可怕景象和害怕的心 理,以及采取的紧急措施。 ②由第二段首句内容“在楼上,他们松了一口气。”可知,第二段可描写洪水继续发展给他们带来的威 胁,他们得知将得救后的宽慰,以及面对洪水困境的感悟。 1. 续写线索:洪水把门冲开——所见所感——采取紧急措施——松一口气——洪水继续发展——得知将 得救——面对困境的感悟 2. 词汇激活 行为类 ①看到:see/spot/notice ②冲:rush/run/dash ③拿,带:take/grasp/get hold of ④给:give/offer/provide 情绪类 ①震惊的:shocked/astonished/stunned ②害怕的:frightened/scared/terrified ③紧张的:nervous/anxious 【点睛】[高分句型1] An idea occurred to Mum that they had to go upstairs, because they had no choice but to save themselves at that moment, and it would be of great danger to stay in place before rescue came to them. (that更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 引导同位语从句、because引导原因状语从句、before引导时间状语从句) [高分句型2] Fortunately, what relieved them a little was that they prepared enough food and water supplies in advance. (what引导主语从句、that引导表语从句) [高分句型3] It doesn’t matter what you did when you were faced with tough situation, and what matters most is that you made a wise decision and well prepared. (what引导主语从句、when引导时间状语从句、that引导表 语从句) 3.(2023·吉林长春·东北师大附中校考模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两 段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 As Hurricane Lan bore down on Florida, many residents who stayed put found themselves unable to leave even if they tried. For hours they were forced to fight heavy winds and attempt to escape flooding inside long-loved homes that had become frightening, deadly traps. Within days, around 100 deaths in the state would be attributed to the hurricane, many of them were older residents who drowned. When the water slipped in under the door of their home, it was just a glimmer on the floor, a sign that it was time to go. It was Wednesday, Sept.28, around noon, and Bishop woke up her two brothers, who had been resting after lunch. She pulled the wheelchair up to the oldest, Russell, 67. Her other brother, Todd, 63, could manage with a walker. Both men had been born with cerebral palsy (脑瘫), and their mental development was like that of a young child. About 10 years ago, they started showing signs of Parkinson’s disease. But they found joy in their surroundings. Todd liked collecting cans at the beach. Russell loved riding the bus and going to parks. Bishop, 61, was their lifeline, their little sister who had long felt an obligation to keep them safe. “We’ve got to get going!” she shouted to them. She went to open the front door. It would not move. The weight of the water on the other side had made it shut. She rushed to try the door to the garage. It, too, was stuck. That’s when the house began to flood. It went from ankle-deep to knee-deep in less than five minutes. Bishop knew that there was no way out. Now Bishop and her brothers were trapped. At 12:34 p.m., she called 911 but couldn’t get through. There was no one she could get in touch with. To try her fortune, she texted a neighbor, Walters, who was always there when neighbors were in need, “Water’s coming in.” Around her, she could hear the dining room hutch (餐具柜) tipping and crashing, the china breaking, the refrigerator toppling over. 注意: (1)续写词数应为150左右;更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The only way to go was up, so Bishop guided her two bothers to the stairs. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________ Bishop sank into despair, but she noticed it seemed water stopped coming in. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________ 【答案】 The only way to go was up, so Bishop guided her two bothers to the stairs. First she helped Todd pull himself slowly up to the second floor, where he waited in a chair. But stairs were impossible for Russell, who could not walk nor bend his stiff legs. Bishop tried hard to pull him up the stairs, but Russell was too heavy for her. She tried every possible position, switching from pushing to pulling, but Russel was yelling “I can’t, I can’t” all the time and he was slipping and sliding. Bishop sank into despair, but she noticed it seemed water stopped coming in. Looking outside, everywhere she saw it was water, and she could even see cars floating by. “Thank God, the wind and the rain stopped.” At around 6:30 p.m, Bishop heard a familiar voice calling outside, “Hello?! Hello?! Anyone in?” It was Walters. Standing in waist-deep water, Walters instructed two of his friends to paddle the canoes near. Bishop held her brothers tightly in her arms, crying “Thank God, Walters is coming to save us!” 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了飓风Lan袭击了佛罗里达州,几天之内,该州约有100人死于飓 风,其中许多是溺水身亡的老年居民,Bishop叫醒了两个哥哥,她的两个哥哥出生时都患有脑瘫,智力发 育就像一个小孩子,大约10年前,他们开始表现出帕金森病的迹象,由于水太多,Bishop打不开门, Bishop和哥哥们被困住了,她给邻居Walters发了一条短信说屋里进水了,Walters在邻居有需要的时候总 是在那里。在她周围,她能听到餐厅的厨具被掀翻了,瓷器碎了,冰箱倒了。 【详解】1.段落续写:更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 ①由第一段首句内容“唯一的出路就是上楼,所以Bishop带着她的两个哥哥上了楼梯。”可知,第一段可 描写Bishop如何尝试带哥哥上楼梯。 ②由第二段首句内容“Bishop陷入了绝望,但她注意到水不再进来了。”可知,第二段可描写Bishop和哥 哥们如何获救。 2. 续写线索:帮助Todd上楼——帮助拉Russell上楼——Russell上不 了楼——风雨停了——Walters赶到 ——Walters指示朋友救人——Bishop和哥哥们得救 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ①帮助:help/assist ②拉:pull/draw ③指示:instruct/direct 情绪类 ①感谢:thank/be grateful ②紧紧拥抱:hold...tightly in one’s arms/hug...tightly 【点睛】[高分句型1] First she helped Todd pull himself slowly up to the second floor, where he waited in a chair. (由关系副词where引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] But stairs were impossible for Russell, who could not walk nor bend his stiff legs. (由关系代词who 引导的非限制性定语从句) 4.(2023·河南·高三校联考阶段练习)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成 一篇完整的短文。 Working as a tour guide in the scenic White Island of New Zealand sounds like a dream come true for an adventurous man, unless of course, the incredible happens. At 21, Jack Stevenson was working as a tour guide on White Island when he was caught in the middle of a killer volcanic eruption. Considered an active volcano, many have questioned the decision to allow tourists to visit White Island. But its splendid scenery, warm and skilled natives there and adventurous exploration attract more than 18,000 people travel to that spot every year. Jack along with a group of tourists hiked its winding trails, admired the impressive beauty, dived into its cold lakes, and fished for treats in its streams. Of course, he knew the mountain was an active volcano... Still there is a village at the foot of it. Suddenly Jack found himself in the middle of the deadliest and most destructive volcanic event in its history.更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 Black smoke rolled down the side of the mountain towards the village as soon as they felt the earthquake, and then ash and rock erupted everywhere. Men, women and children tried their best to go as far away from the volcano as possible as the lava melted its way quickly. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 During the hurry to escape, Jack offered to help. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________ Jack is now back home in Whakatane, from where he can see White Island and read the letters from tourists. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 During the hurry to escape, Jack offered to help. He pulled out some blankets and got them wet. Thoughtfully, he shared them with some little children and needy people. He showed how to cover himself to avoid the smelly ashes and other possible damages from volcano eruption. The whole group were equipped immediately to run away to the bus at the entrance of the village. The bus driver drove quickly and to everyone’s relief, they managed to reach a safe place before the lava came along. Jack is now back home in Whakatane, from where he can see White Island and read the letters from tourists. Sincere thanks and best wishes are expressed in the simple words. He is deeply touched by the tourists and feels blessed to have the chance to help. Besides, what makes him even more delighted is that many of them have great interest and show strong desire to travel back there and visit it again. White Island is really a fascinating place for you to explore, for nature and for human. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了一个年轻导游在带领游客在风景秀丽的新西兰白岛游览,突然遭 遇火山喷发的故事。更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 【详解】1.段落续写: ①由第一段首句内容“在匆忙逃离的过程中,杰克主动提出帮忙。”可知,第一段可描写杰克帮助游客们 自救,避免了伤亡。 ②由第二段首句内容“杰克现在回到了瓦卡坦的家,在那里他可以看到怀特岛,还可以读到游客们的来 信。”可知,杰克及游客们安全回家,游客们写信给杰克向他表达谢意。 2. 续写线索:想到保护措施——成功避险——回家——游客感谢——杰克的感悟 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ①掏出,拿出:take out/pull out/draw out ②演示,示范:show /demonstrate/teach ③到达:reach /arrive at/get to 情绪类 ①感谢: sincere thanks/appreciation/ gratitude/being grateful ②开心,高兴:delighted /happy /glad/excited 【点睛】[高分句型1] He showed how to cover himself to avoid the smelly ashes and other possible damages from volcano eruption.(使用了“疑问词how+动词不定式”作宾语) [高分句型2] The bus driver drove quickly and to everyone’s relief, they managed to reach a safe place before the lava came along. (连词and连接了并列分句及before引导了时间状语从句及高级词汇to one’s relief) [高分句型3] Besides, what makes him even more delighted is that many of them have great interest and show strong desire to travel back there and visit it again.(what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句) 5.(2023·浙江金华校考阶段练习)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一 篇完整的短文。 Mother and I spent mornings cleaning up the dirt that blew into our house.Mother said all the dust was due to the drought, not only here in our village but all over the Great Plains. The dirt covered everything.When my sister, Amy, and I walked to school, we wore kerchiefs (方头巾) over our mouths so that we didn't breathe in the dirt.When the air quality was so bad that the school was closed, we stayed at home and helped Mother put wet sheets over the windows, but the dirt always found a way in. Last Sunday, there was no dirt in the air, only bright sunshine and a clear blue sky.After breakfast, Father headed out to the farm to check on the cattle while Mother started doing some washing.Amy and I played in the yard.Surprisingly, the temperature suddenly dropped. Then Mother shouted from the house, “Christine, you and Amy get inside, quick, now!”更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 I looked towards the west and saw a huge black cloud.All the birds flew away.“Amy, go with Mother!” I shouted,“I'll warn Father.” Amy ran towards the house.The storm hit so fast, and I barely saw her climb the steps.In an instant the day turned into night.I stumbled (绊倒) over our bicycles left carelessly in the yard.I screamed, hoping my voice would lead Father back. The dirt and sand stung (刺痛) my skin like a thousand bees.I needed to get to a shelter.Covering my face with one hand, I moved towards our car which was parked in the yard and opened the door.Dirt flew in with me as I closed the door.Father was still out there! I needed to help him find the car. I searched the dashboard (仪表板) and found the switch for the front lights.Would Father see them in the darkness? Was he safe? I pushed the horn (喇叭) again and again, hoping Father would hear it.I pushed until I had no more strength in my arms. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式作答。 Suddenly, Father's face appeared at the window. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ Finally, the wind stopped and the dust began to settle. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ 【答案】 Suddenly, Father's face appeared at the window.I was surprised and felt relief.He opened the door and sat next to me.He coughed and wiped his eyes with dirty hands.Then he pulled me into his arms, saying, “Oh, Christine, I'm happy you're safe!” I could feel the tears rolling down my dirty cheeks.“Where are your mother and Amy?” “They're in the house,” I said.Father turned off the car's lights and we waited in the car for hours. Finally, the wind stopped and the dust began to settle. Dirt piled up against the car windows.Father kicked against the door, opening it to let us out.We reached the front door just as Mother and Amy came out of the更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 house.“You and your father are safe!” Mother cried.“I'm safe thanks to Christine,” Father said.“I'm so proud of her.”Tears of joy rolled down my cheeks because our family had survived the horrible storm. 【分析】本文以天气为线索展开,作者描述了家乡充满灰尘的干旱天气以及暴风雨突然来临时的场景。 【详解】1.段落续写: ①由第一段首句内容“突然,父亲的脸出现在窗口。”可知,第一段可描写作者、父亲以及家人在暴风雨 来临时的处境。 ②由第二段首句内容“最后,风停了,灰尘也开始沉淀下来。”可知,第二段可描写风停后家人的团聚。 2. 续写线索:父亲进来——询问家人——等待——风停——团聚——自豪 3. 词汇激活 行为类 出现:appeared /turn up 到达:reached the front door /get to/arrive 哭:cried /burst into tears 情绪类 因为……而自豪:be proud of/take pride in 【点睛】[高分句型1] Father kicked against the door, opening it to let us out.(句中运用现在分词作伴随状语) [高分句型2] We reached the front door just as Mother and Amy came out of the house.(句中运用as引导的时间 状语从句) [高分句型3] Tears of joy rolled down my cheeks because our family had survived the horrible storm.(because引 导原因状语从句) 6.(2023·浙江高三检测)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 I live with my husband in San Luis Obispo, California, about three miles from the beach. Every few years, the humpback whales come into the bay for a few days while they’re migrating. November 2020 was one of those times, so we took out our yellow double kayak(皮艇)to watch the wildlife. We paddled out the length of the pier(码头)and saw seals, dolphins, and about 20 whales feeding on silverfish. We were in awe watching these graceful giants—each one about 50 feet long—breach and spray through their blowholes. We laughed when they turned their side fins so that it looked as if they were waving at us. At the time, my friend Liz was staying with us. The next day, I asked her if she wanted to go out on the water to see them. “No way,” said Liz, now 65. She was not an experienced kayaker and was terrified that the kayak would overturn while we were surrounded by hungry whales. “There’s nothing to worry about,” I assured her. “The craft更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 is stable, and we can turn back anytime. I’ve learned somewhere that whales have enormous mouths but tiny throats. Anything they can`t swallow they spit right out.” After some cajoling(劝诱), she finally agreed to join me. I didn’t want her to miss this magnificent experience and regret it later. Liz and I got out on the water at 8:30 the following morning. There were already about 15 other kayakers and paddleboarders in the bay. It was warm for November, so we wore T-shirts and leggings. After a half-hour, we had our first whale sighting just past the pier: two humpbacks swimming toward us. How amazing to be that close to a creature that size, I thought as the whales dipped under the waterline. When whales go down after breaching, they leave what looks like an oil slick on the water. I figured if we paddled toward that spot, we’d be safe from the whales, since they’d just left. We followed them at a distance—or what I thought was a distance. I later found out that it’s recommended to keep 300 feet away. We were more like 60 feet away. 注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右; 2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3. 续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好; 4. 续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: Suddenly, we felt our kayak rocking violently. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Still, I didn’t panic and I just kept thinking I’ve got to breathe in this “white wall”. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Suddenly, we felt our kayak rocking violently. A tightly packed swarm of fish, started jumping out of the water into our kayak. Their movement sounded like crackling glass all around us. We then realized, to our wide-更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 eyed horror, that the whales were charging toward us. I tried, with all my might, to pedal to safety, only to find we were in the middle of nowhere. Our kayak was lifted out of the water about six feet, bracketed by massive jaws. Liz and I slipped out of the kayak into the whale’s mouth. My body was engulfed except for my right arm and my paddle. Fright however, deprived Liz, my poor partner, of her ability to speak, to think and to fight. Still, I didn’t panic and I just kept thinking I’ve got to breathe in this “white wall”. My previous knowledge about whales proved to be true. As soon as the whale dipped underwater, it spit us out, and we popped back up onto the surface about a foot apart. The entire ordeal lasted only about 10 seconds. And I felt so blessed that we were both all fours. “I thought we were dead!” Liz said. We were not, of course. But I am much more aware of the power of nature and the ocean than I was before. Liz was shaken up, likening the ordeal to a near-death experience. But even she had to laugh when she got home that afternoon and realized she’d brought back a souvenir. When she pulled off her shirt, six silverfish flopped out. 【导语】这是一篇记叙文。主要讲述了作者的家乡加利佛尼亚的海湾里有很多鲸鱼。一天,作者邀请朋友 Liz和自己一起出海看鲸鱼,中途遇到险情,最后成功摆脱危险境地。 【详解】1.段落续写 由第一段首句内容“突然,我们感到皮艇剧烈地摇晃着。”可知,该段可描写作者和朋友Liz乘坐皮艇出 海看鲸鱼时,遇到险情。 由第二段首句内容“不过,我没有惊慌,我只是一直在想,我必须在这堵“白墙”里呼吸。”可知,该段 可描写作者摆脱险境的过程。 2. 续写线索:皮艇摇晃—掉进海里—被鲸鱼吞到嘴里—冷静应对—摆脱险境 3. 词汇激活 行为类 1. 摇晃:rock/shake 2. 意识到:realize/be aware of 3. 努力,尝试:try/struggle 情绪类 1. 恐怖:horror/fright 2. 意志力:might/will 【点睛】[高分句型1] We then realized, to our wide-eyed horror, that the whales were charging toward us.(that引 起宾语从句) [高分句型2] As soon as the whale dipped underwater, it spit us out, and we popped back up onto the surface更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 about a foot apart.(as soon as引起的时间状语从句) 7.(2022·江苏南京·校联考模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成 一篇完整的短文。 In late December, the cow path near our house in Tennessee was still covered with leaves, but I knew snow would be falling soon enough. My younger brother, Buddy Earl, and I were on an important mission: Go to Uncle Tommie’s place and get a goose(鹅). The hiking over Little Mountain and getting there would be worth it. Uncle Tommie raised the best geese around, and he’d offered to give us one for Christmas dinner. Uncle Tommie met us at the door. “I’m not rushing you boys,” he said, “but as light snow started, you’d better get the goose and head home.” It didn’t take me long to pick up a goose from his yard. Buddy and I said a quick thank you and goodbye. The snow came down harder, wind blowing every way. “I’m as cold as ice. How about you?” asked Buddy. I tapped the goose’s head. “I wish we had feathers to keep us warm like you,” I said. “Or heavier coats.” “Doug, I’m freezing,” Buddy said. I could hardly hear him over the wind and my own chattering teeth. “I think we should go back.” The idea was attractive, but we were closer to home than to Uncle Tommie’s house. We had to push on. I held the goose closer to my chest. The bird was the only warm thing about me. I stepped in front of my brother. “Buddy, open your coat!” “Are you crazy?” He asked. “I’ll lose the little warmth I have.” When he saw I was serious, he slowly unzipped (拉开……的拉链) his coat and opened it. I placed the warm goose inside his coat and zipped it back up. “Make sure you keep the goose’s head out so it can breathe.” Buddy sighed happily. My plan was working. 注意:1. 续写词数应为 150 左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “Doug, it is time for you to open your coat. ” ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ Hearing our surviving experience, my parents hesitated about what to do with the goose. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 【答案】 “Doug, it is time for you to open your coat. ” Buddy handed the goose to me. Its feathered body was as warm as angel feathers inside my coat. Putting my freezing hands on its body, I felt a rush of warmth sweeping over me. We passed the goose back and forth between us all the way home, battling biting cold. After what seemed like ages, we got home. Upon arrival, we couldn’t wait to explain to our parents how the goose had kept us from freezing. (76 words) Hearing our surviving experience, my parents hesitated about what to do with the goose. “What should we have for Christmas dinner?” They looked at us with a concerned look. “Anything but the goose. He has saved our lives.” Buddy and I exclaimed. Shifting gazes between us and the goose which was honking as if he were pleading too. “Fine. Then we’ll do without it,” my parents announced. “Hooray!” we sprang to our feet. That Christmas, we didn’t have a grand feast, but came upon a hero in our life. (75 words) 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者和弟弟巴迪·厄尔去汤米叔叔家买只鹅。因为父母要给他们一 只做圣诞晚餐。在回家的路上,雪下得更大了,风到处刮。鹅帮助作者他们取暖,回到了家。作者他们迫 不及待地向父母解释这只鹅是如何让他们免于冻僵的。最后父母决定不杀他们生命中的一位英雄。的故 事。 【详解】1.段落续写: ①由第一段首句内容“道格,你该把外套打开了。”可知,第一段可描写作者抱着鹅和弟弟一起冒着风雪 回家的经过。 ②由第二段首句内容“听到我们幸存的经历,我的父母对如何处理这只鹅犹豫不决。”可知,第二段可描 写作者父母决定不杀这只英雄鹅。 2.续写线索:冒雪——取暖——解释——决定——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 1.递过来:deliver/pass/hand over 2.回家:all the way home/go back home/return home 3.阻止某人做:keep us from/stop us from/prevent sb (from) 情绪类 1. 感谢:showing one's appreciation/show one's gratitude/be grateful 2. 担忧的:concerned /worried 【点睛】[高分句型1]. After what seemed like ages, we got home. (由连接词what引导的宾语从句作after的更多全科试卷及资料,请关注公众号:高中试卷君 宾语) [高分句型2].Shifting gazes between us and the goose which was honking as if he were pleading too.(运用了非 谓语动词,由关系代词which引导定语从句和as if引导的虚拟语气)