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2024-2025 学年七年级上期期末考点大串讲（人教版）
专题 09 书面表达（15 篇）
同步作文（7篇）
1．假如你结识了一位新朋友Alan Smith，下面表格是他的相关信息，请据此写一篇小短文，让大家
一起来认识一下你的这位新朋友吧。
Name Alan Smith
Age 13
Country The US
School Guangming Middle School
Favourite colour White
Favourite sport Football
Pet Bird
Favourite hobby Piano
Lucky number 8
写作要求：
1.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数60左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
I have a new friend. His name is Alan Smith.__________________________________________________
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【参考答案】
I have a new friend. His name is Alan Smith. Alan is his first name and Smith is his last name. He is thirteen
years old. He comes from the US, a beautiful country. He’s a student in Guangming Middle School now. His
favourite colour is white and he likes white clothes. He likes football best and often plays it with his friends. His pet
is a bird and he likes to listen to it. His hobby is playing the piano and he can play many pieces of music. His lucky
number is 8.
I hope to be good friends with him all the time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为人物介绍短文；
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学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，用于描述Alan Smith的当前情况；
③提示：根据给出的Alan Smith的相关信息，考生需全面介绍Alan，包括姓名、年龄、国籍、学校、喜好
（颜色、运动、宠物、爱好）以及幸运数字，并确保信息准确无遗漏，同时可适当添加细节使介绍更加生
动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出新朋友。通过“I have a new friend.”直接引出文章的主题，即介绍Alan Smith；
第二步，具体阐述Alan Smith的信息。按照给出的信息点逐一介绍Alan Smith，包括他的姓名（Alan
Smith）、年龄（13岁）、国籍（美国）、学校（光明中学）、最喜欢的颜色（白色）、最喜欢的运动
（足球）、宠物（鸟）、爱好（弹钢琴）以及幸运数字（8）；
第三步，总结或表达感受。简单表达对结识Alan的喜悦或期待与他共度时光的心情。
[亮点词汇]
①come from来自
②favourite colour最喜欢的颜色
③play...with和……一起玩
④be good friends with和……成为好朋友
[高分句型]
①He is thirteen years old and comes from the US, a beautiful country. (定语从句，非限制性定语从句对先行词
US进行补充描述)
②His hobby is playing the piano and he is able to play many pieces of music.（并列句，两个简单句通过并列连
词and连接）
2．在英语课上，老师要求你介绍一下你的家人。假设你叫Nancy，请你根据你的全家福说说你的家
庭情况。
写作要求：
(1)语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥；
(2)60词左右；
(3)书写规范，卷面整洁；
(4)文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
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学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司____________________________________________________________________________________________
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【参考答案】
Hello! I am Nancy. My last name is Read. I am a girl. Look! Here is a photo of my family. My grandparents
are Tim Read and Lisa Read. My father’s name is Victor and my mother is Gina Read.
This is my uncle. He is Jack. That is my aunt. She is Lucy. That boy is my cousin. He is Dave. Dave and I
are good friends. I love my family.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍个人信息；
第二步，介绍家庭信息。
[亮点词汇]
①a photo of一张……的照片
②good friends好朋友
[高分句型]
①This is my uncle.（this is是一个介绍某人的句子）
3．假如你是 Daming，你校的一个友好学校组团参观你校。你作为导游，请你根据图片信息，写一
篇短文介绍一下你的新学校。
写作要求：
（1）语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥；
（2）60词左右；
（3）书写规范，卷面整洁；
（4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
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学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司____________________________________________________________________________________________
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【参考答案】
Hello and welcome to our school. My name is Daming, and I’m your guide today. Let’s begin our tour. Our
school is a new school. It is clean and tidy. This is playground. It’s really big. We raise the flag here every Monday
morning. The big building behind it is the classroom building and tall trees and beautiful flowers around it. The
next place on our tour is our big school library. There are many kinds of books in it. Look, there is a dining hall. We
usually have lunch in it. That’s the end of our tour. Thanks.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给图片信息完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之
间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表示欢迎并介绍自己；
第二步，具体根据图片信息描述自己的学校；
第三步，最后表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
① raise the flag升旗
② many kinds of 许多种类的
③ the end of……的最后
[高分句型]
There are many kinds of books in it.（there be句型）
4．假如你是Mike，你的美国笔友Tom想知道你最喜欢的学科，请你根据提示写一篇英语短文，介
绍你最喜欢的科目。
写作要求：
1. 短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 词数：60词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
写作要点：
1. What’s your favourite subject?
2. Why do you like it?
3. How do you learn it?
Dear Tom,
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学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司How is everything going? _________________________________________________________________
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Looking forward to your email.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Mike
【参考答案】
Dear Tom,
How is everything going? I’d like to tell you something about my favourite subject.
My favourite subject is English. I like it because it is interesting. I like my English teacher, who is kind and
patient. She helps me a lot when I am in trouble. She always tells me how to learn English. I learn English by
listening carefully in class, watching English movies and reading English stories after class.
What about you? What’s your favourite subject? Looking forward to your email.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Mike
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括3个问题要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用
短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山：介绍自己最喜欢的学科；
第二步，依据问题要点，逐一陈述，适当拓展；
第三步，关心对方，期待对方的回复。
[亮点词汇]
①watch English movies 看英语电影
②how to learn English 如何学习英语
[高分句型]
①I like my English teacher, who is kind and patient. (who引导的非限制性定语从句)
②She helps me a lot when I am in trouble. (when引导的时间状语从句)
5．假如你叫王强，想加入英语俱乐部。请根据以下内容写一封信，介绍一下你的个人情况。
Name: Wang Qiang
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学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司Age: 12
School: No. 5 Middle School
Likes: English, playing basketball and tennis
Can: paint, play the guitar, sing English songs
要求：
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 词数70左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir,
My name is Wang Qiang. __________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Wang Qiang
【参考答案】
Dear Sir,
My name is Wang Qiang. I am 12 years old. I’m a student of No. 5 Middle School. I want to join your club
and I can speak English well. I like English and playing basketball. I also like playing tennis very much. I can do
many things. I can paint well, and I can play the guitar. I can sing some English songs, too. Can I join the English
club?
Yours,
Wang Qiang
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一
人称写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，想加入英语俱乐部；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍“我”的个人情况；
第三步，书写结语，询问是否可以加入英语俱乐部。
[亮点词汇]
①join the English club加入英语俱乐部
②like ... very much非常喜欢
[高分句型]
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学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司I want to join your club and I can speak English well.（and连接的并列句）
6．假如你叫杨迪，你的英国笔友Bob想了解你上学日一天的生活，请你根据下面的图片提示，给他
写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你一天的情况。
注意：
（1）回复邮件须包括以上内容提示，可适当发挥。
（2）60词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：get up；have breakfast；go to school；go home；dinner；go to bed
Hi Bob,
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Yours,
Yang Di
【参考答案】
Hi Bob,
This is my school day life. I usually get up at 6:30 a.m., and then I have breakfast at 7:00. At 7:30 a. m., I go
to school. I like walking to school. I have four lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. I go home at 5:00
p.m. After dinner, I do my homework first. I go to bed at 9:30 p.m.
Yours,
Yang Di
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；
第二步，具体阐述一天的具体作息。
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学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司[亮点词汇]
①get up起床
②have breakfast吃早饭
③go to school去学校
④go home回家
⑤go to bed睡觉
[高分句型]
I have four lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. (and连接的并列句)
7．请以“My birthday party”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文。
内容提示: When is your birthday?
Where do you often have your birthday party?
Who do you invite to your party?
What do you do at the party?
How do you feel on that day?
My birthday party
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【参考答案】
My birthday party
Hello, my birthday is on July 5th. I usually have a party at my house. I invite my friends to my birthday
party. My mother always makes my favourite food for me. My birthday party begins at five o’clock in the
afternoon. I wear my favourite blue clothes. We sing, dance and play games at the party. We all have a god time at
my birthday party. How happy we are!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括生日派对的具体时间以及举行的一些活动等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍生日的具体时间以及派对举行地点；
第二步，具体介绍生日派对的活动；
第三步，最后表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①in the afternoon下午
②have a good time玩得开心
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学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司[高分句型]
How happy we are! (how引导的感叹句)
期末真题（8篇）
1．同学们已经成为中学生一学期了，相信大家的初中生活一定丰富多彩！假设你是Amy，你在澳大
利亚的笔友 Tonya想了解你的校园生活。请根据下面的要点提示，用英语写一封邮件给 Tonya。
要点提示：
内部设施 学校又大又漂亮，有花园、图书馆、操场……
周边设施 附近有餐馆、服装店、书店、礼品店……
学校8:00上课，下午5:00放学，学很多有趣的学科，最喜欢……因为……
学校有不同的俱乐部，我参加了……
校园生活
学校有美味且健康的午餐和晚餐，有蔬菜、米饭、水果……
老师和同学都很友好且乐于助人……
节日活动 每年元旦 (New Year’s Day)，学校都举行元旦庆祝活动……
注意事项：
（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）内容必须包含表格中的所有信息，并适当发挥；
（3）词数 100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等相关信息。
Dear Tonya,
I’ve been a middle school student for a term. I love my school very much. I would like to tell you something
about my school and school life.__________________________________________________________________
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Lots of love,
Amy
【参考答案】
Dear Tonya ，
I’ve been a middle school student for a term. I love my school very much. I would like to tell you something
about my school and school life.
Our school is big and beautiful. It has a beautiful garden and a modern library. We can read different kinds of
books in the library. We also have a big playground. There are many restaurants, clothes shops, bookshops and gift
shops near our school. It’s very convenient to buy things.
Our class begins at 8 a. m. and ends at 5 p. m. I study many interesting subjects. I like English best because I
think it is very useful. There are many different clubs. I am in the Reading Club. We can have lunch and dinner at
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学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司school. There are vegetables, rice, fruit, meat and so on. All my teachers and classmates are friendly and helpful.
Every year, our school has New Year’s Day celebrations. All the teachers and students get together and have
a wonderful time.
Lots of love,
Amy
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括学校的介绍、上下学时间以及学校周边情况等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍喜爱学校，引出主题；
第二步，具体介绍内部设施、学校周边设施、校园生活以及节日活动；
第三步，最后总结自己喜欢学校生活。
[亮点词汇]
① different kinds of 不同种类的
② and so on 等等
③ get together 聚集在一起
[高分句型]
It’s very convenient to buy things.（it作形式主语）
2．今年的元宵节 (the Lantern Festival) 邻里国际小区将举办中国民俗活动，让生活在小区的外国朋
友们欢度佳节。请根据表格中的提示内容，补全英文邀请信。你可以通过想象进行补充描述，注意信息完
整，内容连贯和书写规范。
Fun things for the Lantern Festival
make yuanxiao make lanterns guess riddles have a big dinner
Dear friends,
Happy New Year! The Lantern Festival is coming. We will have a Lantern Festival party in our neighborhood (小
区) on Feb. 24th. We are going to do a lot of fun things
together._____________________________________________________________________________________
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Will you _________________________? Please send us an email at 73458971@qq.com by Feb. 4th.
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学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司Yours,
Community Service Center (社区服务中心)
【参考答案】Dear friends,
Happy New Year! The Lantern Festival is coming. We will have a Lantern Festival party in our
neighborhood on Feb. 24th. We are going to do a lot of fun things together. You can learn how to make yuanxiao
and make beautiful lanterns. We will guess riddles on that day. What’s more, we will have a big dinner together.
Will you join us? Please send us an email at 73458971@qq.com by Feb. 4th.
Yours,
Community Service Center
【详解】[总体分析]
②题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，包括：注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错
误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍活动的时间和地点；
第二步：具体介绍活动内容；
第三步：邀请他们参加活动，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of很多
②What’s more还有
[高分句型]
You can learn how to make yuanxiao and make beautiful lanterns.（and连接并列成分）
3．根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提
示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
这个秋天，大家正式告别了小学生活，成为一名初中生(junior high school student)，开启了新的人生。
假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tony想了解你们学校和你的中学生活。请你根据Tony提出的问题给他回一
封邮件，介绍一下你的校园、你的新朋友，以及你怎样看待你的初中生活。
提示词语：big, library, helpful, wonderful
提示问题：
●What’s your school like?
●Who is your new friend?
●What do you think of your school life?
Dear Tony,
I'm happy to tell you something about my new school.___________________________________________
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学学科科网网（（北北京京））股股份份有有限限公公司司____________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Tony,
I’m happy to tell you something about my new school.
It’s a big school with two thousand students and one hundred teachers. There are six buildings in the school.
They are a teaching building, an office building, a science building, a library, a dining hall and a sports hall. We
have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon. Most of classes are very interesting. We often
read our favourite books in the library. We can play basketball, tennis and volleyball in the sports hall. I have some
new friends at school. My best friend is Lily. She is kind to me. I like to play with her. After school, we often join
different clubs.
My new school life is really interesting. I feel very happy and enjoy my life here.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：题目要求根据提示向美国笔友描述一下学校和学校的初中生活、自己的新朋友以及自己怎样看待
初中生活。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍学校的样子；
第二步，介绍自己的新朋友；
第三步，谈自己对初中生活的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①science building科学楼
②be kind to对……好
③play with和……玩
[高分句型]
①There are six buildings in the school.（用there be句型表示某地有某物）
②It’s a big school with two thousand students and one hundred teachers.（with的复合结构作后置定语）
4．假如你是李华，你的学校正在组织开展“十佳少年”评选活动，请根据下表要点提示，写一篇文
章介绍自己。
姓名 Li Hua 喜欢的食物 水果和蔬菜
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生日 4月5日 喜欢的课程/原因 英语， 很有趣；数学， 很有用
父亲， 母亲， 妹
家庭成员 喜欢做的事 帮助别人
妹
参考词汇：成员 member 别人 others
要求：
(1)作文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
(2)作文包含所有要点，并可以适当发挥。
(3)书写工整，语句通顺有条理。
(4)词数：60词左右。 (文章的开头已给出，但不计入总词数)
Hello, everyone, my name is Li Hua.________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________
【参考答案】
Hello, everyone, my name is Li Hua. I am 13 years old and my birthday is on April 5th.
I have a happy family with my father, mother, and younger sister. I like eating fruit and vegetables because
they are healthy. My favorite sport is ping-pong. At school, I enjoy English because it is very interesting, and I also
like math because it is very useful. I love helping others and often assist my classmates with their studies. I hope to
be one of the “Top Ten Students.”
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，在每个要点下要适当增加细节，使表述内容
更完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，作文开头已给出，承接开头，继续介绍个人信息；
第二步，具体介绍自己推荐自己为“十佳少年”的原因，分别从不同方面介绍自己；
第三步，总结上文，表达期望——成为“十佳少年”。
[亮点词汇]
①have a happy family有一个幸福的家庭
②like doing sth喜欢做某事
③assist sb with sth帮助某人做某事
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①I like eating fruit and vegetables because they are healthy. (原因状语从句)
②I enjoy English because it is very interesting, and I also like math because it is very useful. (并列句和原因状语
从句)
5．假如你是李玲，下周六是你的生日，你将要在家举办生日聚会。请根据下面的提示信息，给你新
结识的朋友特蕾西写一封信，邀请她来参加，并提示她在中国参加生日聚会的注意事项。写作要点：
1. 表达结识她的喜悦之情。
2. 介绍生日聚会的具体安排。
①时间：下周六晚上五点
②你家的地址：青年路28号
③乘车路线：乘坐1路或者18路公交车，在人民路下车，向前走五分钟。
3. 提示她在中国参加生日聚会的注意事项。
写作要求:
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear Tracy,
How are you doing? ______________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________
I do hope you will come.
Yours,
Li Ling
【参考答案】
Dear Tracy,
How are you doing? I really feel very happy because I can know you, such a good friend. Here’s good news
to tell you. Next Saturday is my birthday. I’m going to have a birthday party in the evening at home. It’s going to
begin at 5: 00 p. m. Would you like to come? I also invite some of my friends. I live at No. 28 Qingnian Road. You
can take the No. 1 bus or the No. 18 bus, and get off at the bus stop of Renmin Road. Then walk along the road for
five minutes. I’m sure you can’t miss it. Remember that it’s polite to bring a small gift when you join in a party in
China. Also, people who are invited to the party should come a little earlier.
I do hope you will come.
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Li Ling
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写
作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出邀请对方参加自己的生日聚会；
第二步，具体介绍生日聚会的时间地点等细节；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①feel+adj感觉……
②invite邀请
③get off下车
[高分句型]
①Remember that it’s polite to bring a small gift when you join in a party in China. (that引导宾语从句)
②people who are invited to the party should come a little earlier. (who引导定语从句)
6．假如你是李华，你的好友Mary发来电子邮件询问你在学校的学习及生活情况。请根据下表内容回
复一封邮件。50词左右。邮件格式及开头已给出，不计入总词数。
上午：四节课（8:00—11:30）
课程安排
下午：三节课（13:30—16:20）
课外活动 和朋友一起打乒乓球……
最喜欢的科
地理 有趣、实用
目
原因
不喜欢的科
数学 乏味、难
目
Hi Mary,
Thank you for your e-mail. I want to tell you something about my school day._________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________
Yours,
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【参考答案】
Hi Mary,
Thank you for your e-mail. I want to tell you something about my school day.
In the morning, we have four classes. Class begins at 8:00 and finishes at 11:30. In the afternoon, there are
three classes from 13:30 to 16:20. After that, we play games. I like to play ping-pong with my friends. It’s fun and
relaxing. My favourite lesson is geography. I think it’s interesting and useful. I don’t like math because it’s not fun.
It’s difficult.
How about you?
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出对文章内容的介绍；
第二步，具体介绍学校的学习及生活情况；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①In the morning 在早上
②play games 玩游戏
③play ping-pong with... 和……打乒乓球
[高分句型]
①I don’t like math because it’s not fun. It’s difficult.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I think it’s interesting and useful. （省略that的宾语从句）
7．根据下面表格所提供的信息，用英语写一篇60词左右的短文，向你的朋友介绍一下Linda Brown的
情况，可适当发挥，文中请勿出现真实的校名、班级和姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
First name Linda
Last name Brown
Chinese name Yu Mei
Sex (性别) Girl
Age (年龄) 12
Birthday January 5th
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Favorite sport Volleyball: fun, relaxing
Favorite subject Science: difficult, interesting
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________
【参考答案】
I’d like to introduce Linda Brown to you. Her first name is Linda and her last name is Brown. Her Chinese
name is Yu Mei. She is a 12-year-old girl. Her birthday is on January 5th. Her telephone number is 555-8864. Her
favorite sport is volleyball because it is fun and relaxing. Her favorite subject is science. She thinks it is difficult but
interesting.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍Linda Brown的情况。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to想要
②introduce...to...介绍……给……
[高分句型]
①Her favorite sport is volleyball because it is fun and relaxing.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②She thinks it is difficult but interesting.（省略that的宾语从句）
8．进入初中之后，你们班上转来了一名新(new)同学Lucas Smith。英语课上，老师请你根据以下提示
信息用英语写一篇短文，向大家简单介绍一下Lucas。
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1.语言通顺、表达清楚、语法正确、书写规范；
2.所写短文必须包括以上所有要点，并作适当发挥，使短文通顺、流畅；
3.不少于60词。首句已给出，不计入总词数。
I have a new classmate. ____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
【参考答案】
I have a new classmate. His name is Lucas Smith. He is from Canada. He lives in Guiyang with his family
now. Now he studies in Dejiang No. 4 Middle School. His telephone number is 0851-87654789. There are four
people in his family. They are his father, mother, brother and him. His room is very tidy. His books are in the
bookcase, his clock is on the desk, and the toys are in the toy box. He likes sports. He has a basketball and a
football. He thinks football is very fun.
I am sure you will make friends with Lucas.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料所给提示较多，切勿遗漏；注意书写开头和结尾。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接表达我有新同学；
第二步，介绍具体的个人信息；
第三步，总结并表达想和别人成为朋友的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be from来自
②live in住在……
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④make friends with 和……交朋又
[高分句型]
①There are four people in his family.（there be句型）
②I am sure you will make friends with Lucas.（宾语从句）
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