专题 01 应用文之征文投稿
考情分析
年份 卷区 话题 命题形式
Be smart online learners
全国乙卷 提纲类
2021年
浙江卷1月
新西兰学生访问你校致辞
提纲类
写作方法指导
演讲稿一般由呼语、正文和结束语三个部分组成，大多分为三种，一种是活动组织者的
演讲（例如运动会前主席的演讲）；一种是作为活动参与者的演讲（例如竞选）；第三种
是就社会热点话题的观点表达，可以参照议论文。而演讲稿的内容大多是在题干已经给出
所以演讲稿的结构较为简单，可以两段式，也可以三段式。
第一部分：自我介绍，开门见山地提出本人要谈的问题和看法
第二部分：活动组织者需要对活动进行介绍，可以参照如下顺序：名称，举办方，意
义目的，时间地点，活动评价，参与感受，活动的特别要求。如果是活动参与者，需
要写出参与原因和目的，个人优势等。如果是热点话题的观点表达，可以按照议论文
的内容结构。
第三部分：照应开头，总结全文，谈谈自己的感想或期望
写作模板
模板①
Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen,
It’s a great honor for me to stand here and give my speech._________（表示荣幸）My
name is __________.（自我介绍）The topic of my speech is ___________.（提出演讲主题）To begin with, many people suggest that ___________. （ 话 题 或 现 象 列 举 ）
Secondly, ___________. Thirdly, ___________ .
What I want to stress is that ___________.（重申主题）For one thing, . For another, .
Besides, ___________.（原因或重要性列举）In a word, ___________.（总结）
模板②
Good morning/afternoon/evening, everyone,
It’s nice to see all of you here. I feel honored to have opportunity to give/make/deliver you a
speech is a great pleasure for me to speak here. The topic of my speech is
___________________./Today I will talk about ________________. /It’s nice to talk /speak
about…( 演 讲 的 主 题 ) First of all, ___________________. Besides, ________________.
Secondly, _________________________. What’s more, __________________(具体内容)
As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, _____________. From what has been discussed
above, we can safely draw the conclusion that ____________. Thanks for your attention/listening.
(总结演讲)
常用表达
1．Warmly welcome to…
2．We feel greatly honored to see/meet/be with…
3．We feel it a great honor to…
4．We are very excited and delighted at…
5．Now let's give our warmest welcome to…
6．On behalf of…I am delighted to welcome all of you to…
7．I'm honored to have this opportunity to welcome all of you to…
8．It gives us a great pleasure to get together with our honorable guest from…First of all, I would
like to introduce…to you.
9. The topic of my speech is…
10. It's nice/wonderful/exciting/inspiring to speak/talk about…
11. As we all know…/It's known to us all that…
12．Please take our kind respects to…
13．Let's give our best regards and respects to…
14．We wish…a pleasant journey home and good health.
15．Wish…the best of health and success.
16．I am looking forward very much to seeing…again.
17．Good-bye is a sad thing to say, but I must say goodbye and I hope I'll see…again.18. To sum up/To conclude/All in all/In conclusion/In a word…
19. What I want to stress/emphasize is…
20. Personally, I think it necessary/important/valuable/useful/beneficial/vital/a good idea for
sb.to…
高考真题精讲
（2021年全国乙卷）你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇
发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1. 分析优势与不足
2．你的学习建议。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Be Smart Online Learners
Good morning, everyone,
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【答案】One possible version:
Be Smart Online Learners
Good morning, everyone,
It’s my great honor to share my views about being smart online learners.
Learning online has become popular these days. On the one hand, it provides us great
convenience to study and saves us lots of time. On the other hand, it does unavoidable harm to our
eyesight. What’s worse, it’s really hard for those lacking self-control to acquire what they want.
As far as I’m concerned, we should make a practical learning plan, create an appropriate
environment for learning, and above all have strict self-discipline. Only in this way can we make
the network serve us to the most extent.
Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就在线学习写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
分享：share → exchange
流行的：popular → gain popularity
提供：provide → offer → give损害：do harm to → harm→ do damage to
获得：acquire → obtain→ gain
就我而言：as far as I’m concerned → from the point of my view → in my opinion
合适的：appropriate→ proper
最重要的是：above all → the most importantly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：What’s worse, it’s really hard for those lacking self-control to acquire what they want.
拓展句：What’s worse, it’s really hard for those who lack self-control to acquire what they want.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s my great honor to share my views about being smart online
learners.
（运用了It is +adj+(for sb) to do sth的句式。）
【高分句型2】Only in this way can we make the network serve us to the most extent.（运用了
部分倒装句。）
（2021年浙江卷）假定你是李华，下周有新西兰学生访问你校，你将作为学生代表致欢迎
辞。请为此写一篇 发言稿，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；2. 介绍活动安排；3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Distinguished guests:
On behalf of our school, I would like to convey my sincere welcome for your visiting.
At first, it is of significance to fully understand the school. As scheduled, all of you will visit
the museum, which contains the splendid history of our school. Furthermore, our classes are
worthy of being attended, because you can appreciate the differences between Chinese and
western teaching methods. After that, it is at canteen that you can have a special lunch with our
students.
As mentioned above, I extremely expect your coming. May you have an unforgettable
experience.
名校模拟题提升练 10 篇
1．（2023秋·四川遂宁·高三射洪中学校考开学考试）近年来，科技的高速发展给人们的生
活带来了巨大的改变。假设你是李华，有意参加你校将举办的 TECH TALK 活动。请以
“Technology and Lifestyles”为题，写一篇演讲稿，内容如下：1. 科技的重要性
2. 举例说明科技对人类生活的积极影响
3. 你对科技应用的态度
注意：词数120字左右。
Ladies and gentlemen,
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【答案】One possible version
Ladies and Gentlemen,
I’m Li Hua. I am delighted to speak on the topic of “Technology and Lifestyles” at the TECH
TALK event.
The development of technology has brought a massive transformation to our lives.
Technology has impacted our lives in so many areas, including healthcare, communication, and
transportation. For example, medical technology has advanced treatments, allowing us to save
more lives. Communication technology enables us to connect across the globe, further expanding
our horizons. Additionally, transportation technology has made travel more efficient and cost-
effective.
However, in spite of its many advances, technology has some limitations and negative
impacts. Over-dependence on technology can create social and personal problems, such as
addiction and mental issues.
To conclude, technology plays a critical role in society, and we must use it wisely and
responsibly. We must utilize the benefits of technology while also being mindful of its potential
negative consequences. By working together, we can create a healthier and more sustainable
future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于你校将举办的 TECH TALK 活动，
以“Technology and Lifestyles”为题，写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted →pleased
大量的：massive → plenty of
影响：impacted→ influenced
总之：To conclude→ In a word
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句原句：For example, medical technology has advanced treatments, allowing us to save more lives.
拓展句：For example, medical technology has advanced treatments, which allow us to save more
lives.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Communication technology enables us to connect across the globe,
further expanding our horizons.（运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语。）
【高分句型 2】However, in spite of its many advances, technology has some limitations and
negative impacts.（运用了However 副词的转折，以及in spite of的介词短语作状语。）
2．（2023·天津河西·统考三模）假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津，下周你校将与英国姊妹
校线上“云”交流校园生活。高中三年即将结束，回顾丰富多彩的校园生活，哪一次校园
活动给你留下了美好而深刻的印象呢?请你以“The Most Impressive School Activity”为题写
一篇发言稿。
内容包括：
1.介绍活动过程;
2.分享个人感受。
注意：短文不少于100词。
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【答案】Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Jin, a senior three student from Chenguang high school. I’m more than delighted to
communicate with the classmates from the sister school in Britain online about campus life.
Looking back, I find the past days have witnessed plenty of memorable activities. And the one that
impressed me most is the coming-of-age ceremony.
The meaningful event was held on May 4th to honor the students who had turned 18. We
gathered at the stadium, wearing traditional dresses. First, our principal sincerely extended his
congratulations on us becoming grown-ups. And we reviewed our high school life together, which
was full of happiness. Then followed the Confucian-style coming-of-age ceremonies —Ji Li (for
girls) and Guan Li (for boys). Finally, we made a solemn vow to shoulder the responsibilities of an
adult.
Personally, this activity not only exposed us to traditional Chinese culture, but also motivated
us to embrace the new identity and live up to our promise. We, 18-year-olds, should cherish our
youth.
That’s all. Thank you.
【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生以“The Most Impressive School Activity”为
题写一篇发言稿。【详解】1.词汇积累：
高兴的：delighted→pleased/cheerful
回顾：review→look back/retrospect
激励：motivate→inspire/stimulate
2.句式拓展：
原句：Personally, this activity not only exposed us to traditional Chinese culture, but also
motivated us to embrace the new identity and live up to our promise.
拓展句：Personally, not only did this activity expose us to traditional Chinese culture, but also it
motivated us to embrace the new identity and live up to our promise.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Looking back, I find the past days have witnessed plenty of memorable activities.(运用了现在分
词作状语。)
【高分句型2】
And we reviewed our high school life together, which was full of happiness.(运用了which引导
非限制性定语从句。)
3．（2023·江西九江·统考二模）为了给正在迎战高考的高三学子加油鼓劲，你校拟举行一
场英语演讲比赛，请你结合自身或者身边人的经历，以“Positive Attitude Makes Perfect”为
题写一篇演讲稿。要点如下：
1. 高三学生学习现状；
2. Positive attitude 的力量；
3. 表达祝福。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头已为你写好，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Positive Attitude Makes Perfect
Dear teachers and students,
I am so honored to have a chance to deliver a speech here,
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【答案】范文：
Positive Attitude Makes Perfect
Dear teachers and students,
I am so honored to have a chance to deliver a speech here, where I want to share my journey
of “Positive Attitude Makes Perfect”.
Though knowing nothing is more important than diligence and persistence in Senior 3, I stillfeel frustrated when faced with seemingly endless obstacles in my study. Without a positive
attitude, I would surrender to them at any time. What I bear in mind is to be positive about
everything, which not only inspires me to brave difficulty in my way but also helps me make great
progress.
A positive attitude is a lighthouse guiding us to our destination and a warrior protecting us
from failure, with which I firmly believe that we can have a bright future. May we succeed!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生结合自身或者身边人的经历，以“Positive
Attitude Makes Perfect”为题写一篇演讲稿参加学校的英语演讲比赛，内容包括高三学生现
状和Positive attitude的力量并表达祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会：chance →opportunity
屈服，让步：surrender →give in
记住：bear in mind →keep in mind
取得很大进步：make great progress →make great advances
2.句式拓展
宾语从句变同位语从句
原句：A positive attitude is a lighthouse guiding us to our destination and a warrior protecting us
from failure, with which I firmly believe that we can have a bright future.
拓展句：A positive attitude is a lighthouse guiding us to our destination and a warrior protecting
us from failure, with which I hold the firm belief that we can have a bright future.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am so honored to have a chance to deliver a speech here, where I want
to share my journey of “Positive Attitude Makes Perfect”（运用了where引导的非限制性定语
从句）
【高分句型2】What I bear in mind is to be positive about everything, which not only inspires
me to brave difficulty in my way but also helps me make great progress.（运用了what引导的主
语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句和并列连词“not only…but also…”连接两个并
列结构）
4．（2023秋·天津·高三统考期末）假定你是晨光中学的李津，你校将举办以生态旅游为话
题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“Let’s Promote Ecotourism”为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1.当前趋势;
2.你的观点(良好旅游体验、生态友好可持续发展、促进经济发展等等);
3.你的倡议。
注意：
1.词数100以上;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3.开头已给出，不计入总数。
Let’s Promote EeotourismGood morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I’d like to take this opportunity to talk about
ecotourism.
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【答案】Let’s Promote Eeotourism
Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I’d like to take this opportunity to talk about
ecotourism. Commonly regarded as low impact travel to undisturbed places, ecotourism has
become increasingly popular these year.
As for me, ecotourism is a true eco-friendly trip. With the aim of sustainable development,
ecotourism calls on tourists to enjoy the scenery without damaging the natural environment.
Therefore, it does little harm to the environment. By being exposed to natural areas, tourists can
have a pleasant experience to get close to nature. Meanwhile, ecotourism benefits the economic
development of local communities.
Ecotourism means responsible and sustainable travel. We have only one planet. To protect
our planet, I do hope we can live in harmony with nature and make sure that ecotourism can
provide positive experiences for both visitors and hosts.
Thanks for listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生就“Let’s Promote Ecotourism”写一篇发言
稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
目的：aim→purpose/intention
伤害：do harm to→be harmful to/harm
对……有益：benefit→be beneficial to
确保：make sure→ensure/guarantee
2.句式拓展：
合并简单句
原句：As for me, ecotourism is a true eco-friendly trip. With the aim of sustainable development,
ecotourism calls on tourists to enjoy the scenery without damaging the natural environment.
拓展句：As for me, ecotourism is a true eco-friendly trip, which calls on tourists to enjoy the
scenery without damaging the natural environment with the aim of sustainable development.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Commonly regarded as low impact travel to undisturbed places, ecotourism has become
increasingly popular these year.(运用了过去分词作状语)
【高分句型2】To protect our planet, I do hope we can live in harmony with nature and make sure that ecotourism
can provide positive experiences for both visitors and hosts.(运用了动词不定式作目的状语和
that引导宾语从句)
5．（2023·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈尔滨市第六中学校校考一模）假设你是红星中学的李华。近期，
你校正在开展“捐献一本书，奉献一份爱”的主题活动，以帮助贫困地区的孩子体会阅读
的乐趣。你将作为学生代表面向交换生进行英文演讲，号召大家积极参与活动。演讲内容
如下：
1. 活动简介；
2. 活动意义；
3. 发出号召。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear fellow schoolmates,
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【答案】Dear fellow schoolmates,
Do you have books piling up in corners, stacked in piles on desks, or overflowing from your
bookshelves? An activity entitled “Devote Your Love by Donating a Book” held by our school this
month can help you find a perfect destination for these used books.
As its name suggests, to participate in this activity, all you need is books. A stand has been set
up at the entrance to the teaching building, where volunteers will be collecting books. These
donated books will finally be packed and delivered to children with a burning passion for reading.
Dedicated to helping children in poverty-stricken areas to enjoy the fun of reading, this
activity is worth your attention. Due to poverty, these children are unlikely to access the outside
world. Books, however, can better link them with the world, igniting their passion for knowledge
and inspiring them with hope.
One book may seem trivial, but one book per student in our school can make a big difference.
Do you want to share the joy of reading with them? Do you want to give them a chance to broaden
their horizons? Please join us in this empowerment activity
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇演讲稿。要求考生写一篇英文演讲稿，呼吁交换生积极参与
捐书活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
堆积：pile up→ heap up
参与：participate in→ take part in强烈的爱：a burning passion→ an intense love
致力于：Dedicated to→ Devoted to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Dedicated to helping children in poverty-stricken areas to enjoy the fun of reading, this
activity is worth your attention.
拓展句：Because it is dedicated to helping children in poverty-stricken areas to enjoy the fun of
reading, this activity is worth your attention.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Dedicated to helping children in poverty-stricken areas to enjoy the fun
of reading, this activity is worth your attention.（运用了过去分词导语充当句子原因状语）
【高分句型 2】Books, however, can better link them with the world, igniting their passion for
knowledge and inspiring them with hope.（运用了现在分词短语充当伴随状语）
6．（2023·四川凉山·统考二模）假定你是李华, 你校下周即将举行成人礼仪式，你有幸被
选为学生代表发言，请用英语写一篇发言稿，主要内容如下：1. 成人礼的意义；2. 感恩老
师；3. 告别同学并祝福。
注意：字数100左右。 参考词汇：the coming-of-age ceremony 成人礼仪式
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【答案】Dear teachers and my fellow students,
I’m honored to be chosen as the speaker of the coming-of-age ceremony on behalf of our
classmates. The ceremony is a grand occasion when we are announced to be grown-up, who must
take on the responsibility of our home and country as an adult.
How time flies! My dear teachers, it seems like yesterday when I first stepped into the
classroom, greeted by your caring eyes and encouraging smiles. Upon our graduation, what pops
up from my deepest heart is the endless gratitude for your company during my facing different
challenges in the past three years.
I’m convinced that each of us has some bittersweet memories with our deskmates,
roommates and classmates. Now as we set sail ahead, I wish you to be admitted into your ideal
university. And in your long life journey, I also wish you to be embraced warmly in the world.
That’s all. Thanks.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求考生在学校下周即将举行的成人礼仪式上，
作为学生代表发表演讲，阐明成人礼的意义，感恩老师，告别同学，并表达祝福。
【详解】1. 词汇积累：选择：choose→select
成年人：grown-up→adult
感谢、感激：gratitude→appreciation
旅行：journey→tour
拥抱：embrace→hug
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I’m honored to be chosen as the speaker of the coming-of-age ceremony on behalf of our
classmates.
拓展句：I’m honored that I am chosen as the speaker of the coming-of-age ceremony on behalf
of our classmates.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】The ceremony is a grand occasion when we are announced to be
grown-up, who must take on the responsibility of our home and country as an adult.（运用了以关
系副词when引导的限制性定语从句和以关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句。）
【高分句型 2】 Upon our graduation, what pops up from my deepest heart is the endless
gratitude for your company during my facing different challenges in the past three years.（运用了
以连接代词what引导的主语从句。）
7．（2023·河南·校联考模拟预测）你校将于下周举办题为I have a dream的英语演讲比赛，
请你准备一篇演讲稿。内容包括：
1. 你的梦想；
2. 实现梦想的措施。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I have a dream
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【答案】One possible version:
I have a dream
Hello, my dear teachers and fellow students,
I am very happy to stand here to talk about my dream. I am sure that everyone has his or her
dream. Our dreams are like a lighthouse, without which we might get lost in our lives.
My dream is to be a teacher and devote myself to the education in the countryside. From now
on, I will try my best to read as many books as I can in order to broaden my horizons. Thoughdifficult it might be, I will never give up until my dream comes true.
That’s all. Thanks!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求考生就下周即将举办的题为I have a dream的
英语演讲比赛，准备一篇演讲稿。内容包括：1. 你的梦想；2. 实现梦想的措施。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：happy→glad/delighted
确信： be sure →make sure
为了：in order to→so as to
放弃：give up→abandon
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：From now on, I will try my best to read as many books as I can in order to broaden my
horizons.
拓展句：From now on, I will try my best to read as many books as I can for the purpose that I can
broaden my horizons.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am sure that everyone has his or her dream. (运用了that引导的宾语从
句)
[高分句型2]Our dreams are like a lighthouse, without which we might get lost in our lives.(运用
了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3]Though difficult it might be, I will never give up until my dream comes true. (运用
了倒装句)
8．（2023·青海西宁·统考一模）假定你是李华，你校英语角将举办主题为“Sharing”的英
语沙龙活动，并特邀你在活动中发言。请你写一篇发言稿谈谈分享的益处。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone!
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All in all, sharing makes us have a better life. Thank you for listening!
【答案】 Good morning, everyone!
Sharing brings me a lot. Self-confidence is the most precious thing it brings.
As I entered the third grade of junior high school, I was in a new class. I often shared all thechanges after the first exam with my new friends. The competitive atmosphere made me nervous. I
failed my world with low scores until my best friend put his hand on my shoulder. When I share
my feelings with him, I feel very relaxed. His words of encouragement help me regain my
confidence. Encouraging words can help people in difficulties to tide over difficulties.
All in all, sharing makes us have a better life. Thank you for listening!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你校英语角将举办主题为“Sharing”的
英语沙龙活动，并特邀你在活动中发言。请你写一篇发言稿谈谈分享的益处。
【详解】1.词汇积累
紧张的：nervous→stressed
度过：tide over→get through
获得：regain→obtain
宝贵的：precious→valuable
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I often shared all the changes after the first exam with my new friends. The competitive
atmosphere made me nervous.
拓展句：Although the competitive atmosphere made me nervous, I often shared all the changes
after the first exam with my new friends.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I failed my world with low scores until my best friend put his hand on my
shoulder. (运用了until引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] As I entered the third grade of junior high school, I was in a new class. (运用了as
引导时间状语从句)
9．（2023·陕西宝鸡·统考模拟预测）假设你是李华。近期，你校英语俱乐部将举办迎新派
对，请你代表高三学长发言，向来自高一的新成员分享你的高中生活以及给他们的建议。
请你根据以下要点写一篇发言稿。
1. 你的高中生活回忆；
2. 给高一新成员的建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good afternoon! My dear new friends,
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That’s all! Thank you for your listening!
【答案】 Good afternoon! My dear new friends, now I feel honored to share something
about my senior high school life with you.
Actually, there are lots of precious memories in this school. But what I want to share most is my
experience of being a member of the English Club. During the last two years, I’ve participated in
many interesting and meaningful activities, such as English speech competition, from which I’ve
not only gained knowledge and skills, but also made some friends.
In my opinion, to enjoy a wonderful senior high school life, firstly, you should have clear goals.
What’s more, make sure you have a reasonable plan and manage your time well. Of course, don’t
be afraid of asking for help whenever you have trouble. And I am always here ready to help you!
That’s all!That’s all! Thank you for your listening!
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生写一篇发言稿，向来自高一的新成员分享你的高中生
活以及给他们的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
许多：lots of→a great number of
珍贵的，有价值的：precious →valuable
参加：participate in →take part in
获得：gain→acquire
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Actually, there are lots of precious memories in this school.
拓展句：Actually, there are lots of precious memories in this school, which make a deep
impression on me and are unforgettable.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
But what I want to share most is my experience of being a member of the English Club.（运用
了what 引导的主语从句）
【高分句型2】
During the last two years, I’ve participated in many interesting and meaningful activities, such as
English speech competition, from which I’ve not only gained knowledge and skills, but also made
some friends.（运用了介词+关系代词引导的非限定性定语从句）
10．（2023秋·天津·高三天津市第四十二中学校考期末）假设你是晨光中学的李津。你校
英语俱乐部将举办一次英语演讲比赛。请你以“Every Setback Is a Test for Us”为题写一篇
演讲稿，内容包括：
1. 描述你自己经历的一次挫折；
2. 你克服挫折的体会和建议。注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：setback挫折
Every Setback Is a Test for Us
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Jin Today I am very glad to have the chance to speak about the topic:
Every Setback Is a Test for Us.
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Thanks, for your Listening.
【答案】
Every Setback Is a Test for Us
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Jin Today I am very glad to have the chance to speak about the topic:
Every Setback Is a Test for Us.
As we all know, everyone will face some setbacks every now and then. I came across many
setbacks in my study and life. I failed in my physical final exam when I was in Senior One.
Knowing the result, I cried hard. I analyzed the situation and studied harder. Finally, I became
good at physics. In my opinion, when setbacks happen, we should be brave and stay optimistic. It
is a good way to relieve the pain by turning to our trusted ones for comfort, watching a funny
movie, listening to music or visiting a beautiful place.
Suffering is the most powerful teacher of life and every setback is a test for us. I absolutely
believe that we need to face the setbacks bravely and learn from them. Only the one who passes
the test can succeed.
Thanks, for your Listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求考生以“Every Setback Is a Test for Us”为题
写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：描述你自己经历的一次挫折；你克服挫折的体会和建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
不时地：every now and then→ever and again
遇到：come across→encounter
发生：happen→take place
完全：absolutely→totally
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I analyzed the situation and studies harder. Finally, I became good at physics.
拓展句：I analyzed the situation and studies harder, which finally made me become good at
physics.【点睛】[高分句型1] I failed in my physical final exam when I was in Senior One. (运用了
when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Only the one who passes the test can succeed.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从
句)
