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雅思写作:3分钟搞定开头段,46篇机考真题,直接背!
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雅思大作文,开头段写作一定要快!3分钟内直接搞定,这样给主体段的具体内容扩展留出足够的时间。
建议大家看完这篇文章,直接利用机考真题题库训练。
9月机考真题库,更新至46题,全部真题的开头段范例已更新完毕,可以直接背,有需要直接评论区!
开头段只需要写两句话:
1、改写题目
2、明确立场
1、题目改写句
这句话本身是对题目中的关键信息、场景复述,和题型无关。
而题目的关键信息只有三种情况:单一观点、社会现象、双边观点
我们需要完成的是:模版+题目内容改写
题目给出的一个观点、主张,通常会出现标志词:should / must / only … can / it is argued / some people believe / X is the best way
题目:People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
模版-1:It is widely believed that 【改写后的观点从句】.
范例:It is widely believed that people should be allowed to keep all their earnings instead of paying tax to the state.
模版-2:【主题名词短语】 is widely believed to 【…】.
范例:Keeping all of one's earnings is widely believed to be preferable to paying tax to the state.
题目给给出的是一个现象,往往是某种当下的趋势,通常会出现标志词:More and more … / Nowadays … / has become … / An increasing number of …
题目-1:More and more people no longer read the newspaper or watch TV programs to get news. They get news about the world through the Internet. Do you think it's a positive or negative development?
模版-1(主语是人 ):An increasing number of 【人】 are 【-ing …】.
范例:A growing number of people now get their news online rather than from newspapers or television.
题目-2:New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think it's a positive or negative development?
模版-2(主语是事):【事物】 has become increasingly 【adj】.
范例:Children's free time has become increasingly shaped by digital technology.
注意,因为现象型的题目,通常在说明的是一种变革和趋势,所以利用这个increasing的表达,来强调这一点,后续主体段写作不要丢。
题目给出的是两派争论,有两个观点,大多集中于双边讨论类题型,但其他题型也有少量存在,通常会出现标志词:Some … Others … / while / whereas / but some … think
题目:Some people say that children should go to school as young as possible, while others believe that children should go to school at least 7 years old. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
模版-1(概括):Opinions differ on 【名词短语概括】.
范例:Opinions differ on the right age for children to start school.
模版-2(复述):Opinions differ on 【whether A or B】.
范例:Opinions differ on whether children should start school as early as possible or wait until they are at least seven.
补充:如何进行有效概括?
先确定两个观点中重复出现的名词/事件,例如go to school,进行改写;其次,判断分歧的性质,进行概括;如果无法有效概括,那直接改用模版-2的方式,直接复述改写即可。
2、立场句
立场句最重要的是有清楚明确的立场,根据不同题型有细微区别,模版本身可以非常简单。
例如,观点类-To what extent do you agree or disagree?
模版:I largely 【agree / disagree】 with this view.
但是如果这么写,一方面模版痕迹太严重,另一方面,缺乏实质内容,有一些单薄。所以,我个人建议,是在这里留一个观点预告,让考官了解主体段写作的一个大方向。如果在开头段写作时,观点还没有成型,就可以在这里先留个空,写完主体段再回来填(别忘了!)
题目:People believe that using mobile phones and computers to communicate make us lose the ability to communicate with each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范例:I largely agree with this view, because digital contact is more convenient than meeting and leaves people with less practice in face-to-face talk.(because后的就是需要后续补充的内容)
完整的分题型立场句模版:
这里只列出了模版的句式,具体的范例,已经合并入9月机考真题库(更新至46题,全部真题的开头段范例已更新完毕,可以直接背,有需要直接评论区!)
A.观点类- To what extent do you agree or disagree?
模版:I largely 【agree / disagree】 with this view, because 【观点预告】
B.好坏类- Is it a positive or negative development?
模版:In my view, this is largely a 【positive / negative】 development, because 【观点预告】
C.比较类- Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
模版:In my view, the benefits of 【主题名词短语】 outweigh the costs.
D.讨论类- Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
D-1 题目改写句是概括:
模版:While some argue that 【对立侧】, I largely agree that 【支持侧】.
D-2 题目改写句是复述:
模版:Both views have some force, but I largely agree that 【支持侧】.
注意:因为概括情况下,改写句没有给出题目完整的双方观点,因此在这里可以点出两个观点的具体内容,并且给出立场
E.两段类-(报告型 + 混搭型)
E-1 原因+利弊/好坏
模版:One major reason is that 【Body1 第一条原因】, and 【立场句】.
E-2 困难/问题+方案
模版:One major problem is that 【Body1 第一条困难】, and the most effective solution is to 【Body2 第一条措施】.
E-3 原因+方案
模版:One major reason is that 【Body1 第一条原因】, and the most effective measure is to 【Body2 第一条措施】.
E-4 原因+影响
模版:One major reason is that 【Body1 第一条原因】, and the main consequence is that 【Body2 第一条影响】.
注意:两段类的题目问法比较多,需要注意问法,根据问题要求和具体主体段写作的内容补充完整开头内容即可;其次,注意E-2中problem-solution,E-3中reason-measure是相对合适的对应搭配。
3、一些训练建议
① 训练尽量用当月的机考真题,即便是远期考试的同学(10月、11月),也建议先用9月题库训练,因为目前机考真题跨月重复的概率超过50%;
② 如果有时间,最好能自己先练习开头段,再对比范例参考和修改;如果是真真的不够,也别光看,照着范例手打一遍,肌肉记忆效果更好。
最后,9月机考真题库持续更新,已经是训练营的同学,直接找我领就可以;
还没领到的同学,有需要,评论区告诉我。
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我是Austin施主,专注低分拔高、高效出分(训练营、一对一);
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