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一、灾难逃生
【范文一】
假定你是李华，你校打算在本周末进行一次火灾逃生演练，请给你校英国交换生Tom
写封信，通知他参加。
内容如下：
1. 写信的目的；
2. 演练过程和意义。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节使行文连贯；
3. 参考词汇：火灾逃生演练fire escape drill 人造烟artificial smoke。
Dear Tom,
I am writing to inform you that our school will launch a fire escape drill this
Saturday.
The fire escape drill is scheduled to kick off at 9 a.m. lasting approximately two
hours. All the students are required to stay in their own classrooms first. Then the fire alarm
will sound. Meanwhile, the firemen will make some artificial smoke in the corridor. Seeing
the smoke, the students are supposed to evacuate the building in a quick and orderly way
under the guidance of the teachers. Half an hour later, we will run the drill again. The drill is
of great significance, which ensures we students know the right steps to take in case a fire
breaks out in a building.
Do come and take part in the drill.
Yours,
Li Hua
【高分句型】
1. The fire escape drill is scheduled to kick off at 9 a.m. (lasting
approximately two hours).（现在分词做状语）
2. (Seeing the smoke), the students are supposed to evacuate the building in a
quick and orderly way under the guidance of the teachers.（非谓语做状语）
3. The drill is of great significance, (which ensures we students know the
right steps to take in case a fire breaks out in a building).（which引导非限制性定语从句）
【范文二】
为了提升学生在自然灾害中的应急能力，学校组织了一次地震逃生演练，请你给校英
语报写一个报道，内容包括∶
1.时间和地点；
2.逃生技能；
3.活动效果。
注意
1.词数100左右
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
In order to improve students’ emergency response ability in natural disasters, an
earthquake escape drill was organized in our school campus last Friday. Here are the details
of the event.
First of all, the activity trained the students how to survive an earthquake. Such as in
the earthquake, to maintain the situation of the mind, do not panic; find some safe places to
stay and don’t run around. If it is in a tall building, do not take the elevator when escaping.
Besides, the students practiced the escape skills they had learned and experienced the sense of
urgency and panic when an earthquake happened. Eventually, as far as I am concerned,
the most important thing is that the students not only learned escape skills and knowledge
about the earthquake, but also improved their self-safety awareness.
So that’s the whole details.
【高分句型】
1. (In order to improve students’ emergency response ability in natural
disasters), an earthquake escape drill was organized in our school campus last Friday.
（介词短语做状语）
2. (If it is in a tall building), do not take the elevator when escaping（时
间状语从句的省略结构）
3. Eventually, (as far as I am concerned), the most important thing is that
the students not only learned escape skills and knowledge about the earthquake,
but also improved their self-safety awareness.（as far as I am concerned 条件状
语从句，not only…but also…结构）二、语言学习
【范文一】
（2008·全国II卷·书面表达）
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文，请你根据下列要
点写回信。
要点：
1. 参加中文学习班；
2. 看中文书刊、电视；
3. 学唱中文歌曲；
4. 交中国朋友。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
How are you doing? Recently, I have learned in your micro-blog that you have a
great desire to master Chinese. So, I am writing to give you some suggestions.
To begin with, it is obvious that you’d better take part in a language class, so that you
can enlarge your vocabulary and improve your grammar. Besides, you are supposed to
read more Chinese books and watch more Chinese TV programs, in order that you may
know more about our culture. What’s more, learning Chinese songs is also beneficial for
you, which can help you with your pronunciation and listening skills. Finally, if I were
you, I would make some Chinese friends.
Hopefully, these suggestions would be of great help for you. I have the confidence
that you would master this beautiful language soon. I am looking forward to your good
news.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【高分句型】
1. To begin with, (it is obvious that you’d better take part in a language class),
（主语从句） (so that you can enlarge your vocabulary and improve yourgrammar). （目的状语从句）
2. Besides, you are supposed to read more Chinese books and watch more
Chinese TV programs, (in order that you may know more about our culture). （目
的状语从句）
3. What’s more, learning Chinese songs is also beneficial for you（无灵主语
句）, (which can help you with your pronunciation and listening skills).（非限制性定
语从句）
4. Finally, if I were you, I would make some Chinese friends.（虚拟语气）
【范文二】
On English Study
No one can deny it is essential for us teenagers to master English. As for the
reasons, for one thing, English is not only simple but also useful; consequently, it is being
used by people from all over the world. For another, we need to pass a lot of English exams,
which will contribute to our future development.
Fortunately, there are many practical and effective ways for us to learn English well.
First and foremost, we are supposed to read more English books and listen to more English
songs, which is undoubtedly beneficial for our happy and healthy growth. Additionally, we
had better do more exercises, considering that practice makes perfect. Last but certainly not
least, it is high time that we communicated with our friends in this beautiful language. Only
in this way shall we have the chance of realizing our dreams.
【高分句型】
1. For another, we need to pass a lot of English exams, (which will contribute to
our future development). （非限制性定语从句）
2. First and foremost, we are supposed to read more English books and listen to
more English songs, (which is undoubtedly beneficial for our happy and healthy
growth). （非限制性定语从句）
3. Last but certainly not least, it is high time that we communicated with our
friends in this beautiful language. （虚拟语气）
4. Only in this way shall we have the chance of realizing our dreams.（倒装句）三、学校学习及生活建议
【范文一】
假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校英文报收到一封署名为Chris的高一新生的来信，
在信中Chris表示了自己不能适应高中生活，急需一些建议，为了帮助他，请给他用英
语写一封回信。
内容包括：
(1)表示理解并给予安慰;
(2)多与老师和同学们沟通、交流;
(3)建议合理分配时间(如学习、锻炼和休息的时间等);
(4)积极参加学校社团活动。
注意：
(1)词数100词左右;
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
Hearing from your letter and learning that you couldn’t adapt to your senior high life, I
feel so sorry and really understand you. Here is my advice.
First of all, communicating with your teachers and classmates is really of great
importance. It will be beneficial for you to adjust to the new environment and life. Besides,
you should allocate your time reasonably. For example, do some exercise and have a rest
regularly. In addition, you should take part in some school activities actively through which
you can make more friends in senior high.
The above I mentioned are my suggestions. Hope they will be effective.
Yours,
Li Jin
【高分句型】
1. Hearing from your letter and learning that you couldn’t adapt to your
senior high life.(现在分词短语做状语和that引导的宾语从句), I feel so sorry and
really understand you
2. First of all, communicating with your teachers and classmates is really of
great importance.（无灵主语句）3. In addition, you should take part in some school activities actively
through which you can make more friends in senior high.(介词+which引导定语从
句)
【范文二】
假定你是高三学生李华，校刊英文角邀请你给刚入学的高新生写封信，主题是“如何
规划高中生活”，内容包括：
1.表示欢迎；2.提出建议（学习方面和生活方面）；3.表达祝愿。
注意：
1.不得透露真实的姓名和学校；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.词数100左右。
Dear Freshmen,
I am Li Hua, a student who is going to graduate from our school. At first, I’d like to
extend my heartfelt welcome to all of you. Considering that senior high is greatly different
from junior high, I’m writing this letter to offer you some suggestions on how to spend your
high school fruitfully.
On one hand, you’d better put study first. Apart from spending most of your time on
study, you are expected to explore your own learning methods instead of relying too much
on your teachers. Meanwhile, keep a good state of mind the moment you come across
failure. On the other hand, it is of vital importance to get on well with your teachers and
classmates, with whom you can share your happiness and sorrow. In addition, don’t forget to
exercise regularly to build up your body.
I sincerely hope you have a bright future.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【高分句型】
1. I am Li Hua, a student (who is going to graduate from our school).
（运用了who引导的限制性定语从句）
2. (Considering that senior high is greatly different from junior high)（非谓语
做状语）, I’m writing this letter to offer you some suggestions on how to spend your
high school fruitfully.
3. (Apart from spending most of your time on study), you are expected to exploreyour own learning methods instead of relying too much on your teachers.（Apart from
介词短语作状语）
4. Meanwhile, keep a good state of mind (the moment you come across failure).
（the moment引导时间状语从句）
5. On the other hand, it is of vital importance to get on well with your
teachers and classmates, (with whom you can share your happiness and sorrow.)
（运用了it作形式主语，with whom引导非限制性定语从句）
【范文三】
Directions: Write an English composition in 120- 150 words according to the instructions
given below in Chinese.
转入居家学习以来，班上一些同学精神状态不佳， 生活作息也变得不规律，并流露出
焦虑和紧张。因此，老师准备开设一节线上班会课，帮同学们排忧解难。作为班会课
的发言代表，你准备写一篇发言稿。
内容包括：
1. 简述同学们在居家学习期间可能遇到的困难；
2. 结合你的实际经历，给同学们一些建议， 帮助他们调整生活和学习状态。
（文中不可提及真实姓名和学校）
Since the transfer to home study, some students in the class are not in good state.
Moreover, their daily life has become irregular and they show great anxiety and tension.
Although studying at home has many advantages, there also exist some problems among
students. On the one hand, due to the lack of strict management of the school, the students
are seriously late and leave early. On the other hand, students lack self-control, so the
assignment is always not completed in time and the learning effect is not good.
In view of the above phenomenon, I have the following suggestions. First of all, attend
class on time to make sure that you listen to the teacher carefully and take notes during class
time. Secondly, preview before class and review after class to make yourself ready for the
class. Of course, ask your teachers in time if there is any problem.
All in all, I hope you can be disciplined and efficient in your home study.
【高分句型】1. Since the transfer to home study, some students in the class are not in good
state.（since引导原因状语从句）
2. Although studying at home has many advantages, there also exist some
problems among students.（although引导的让步状语从句）
3. First of all, attend class on time to make sure that you listen to the
teacher carefully and take notes during class time.（that引导的宾语从句）四、旅游与计划
【范文一】
假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom计划寒假到湖北旅游﹐但不知道该做哪些准备，特
向你写信寻求建议。请根据以下要点给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1．查找信息确定旅行路线
2．提前预定酒店
3．找个当地的导游。
注意：1.词数80左右
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you’re going to visit Hubei in Winter holiday. I’ll give you some
advice and hope you have a good time travelling.
Firstly, you’d better surf the Internet to get some relevant information about the tourist
attractions of Hubei, which can help you decide where to go and how to go. In addition, it’s
wise to book your hotel room in advance so that you can have a place to rest when you reach
your destination. Last but not the least, as soon as you get to the destination, you’d better
contact a local guide in order to have a better understanding of the culture or the relics of the
place you will visit.
I hope you will have a comfortable and unforgettable experience in Hubei.
Yours,
Li Hua
【高分句型】
1. Firstly, you’d better surf the Internet to get some relevant information
about the tourist attractions of Hubei, (which can help you decide where to go
and how to go).（which引导非限制性定语从句）
2. In addition, it’s wise to book your hotel room in advance (so that you can
have a place to rest) (when you reach your destination).（so that引导目的状语从句、
when引导时间状语从句）
3. Last but not the least, (as soon as you get to the destination), you’d better
contact a local guide in order to have a better understanding of the culture or the relics of
the place (you will visit). （as soon as引导时间状语从句、引导词省略了的定语从
句）【范文二】
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友David暑假计划来中国北京观光旅游，他写信问你征集
旅游攻略，希望你能给他建议。请你根据以下内容给David回信，要点包括：
1. 旅游景点；
2. 住宿问题；
3. 交通方式。
注意：
1. 词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
I’m more than glad to hear that you are coming to Beijing for a visit this summer
holiday. Since it’s the first time for you to visit here, I’d like to give you some suggestions.
Beijing, the capital city of China, has a lot of places of interest, such as the Forbidden
City, the Summer Palace, and the Great Wall and so on. Not only can you enjoy the beautiful
scenery but also learn more about Chinese culture. As for accommodation, I will book a
hotel for you in advance, which is convenient for you to go wherever you want. Although
there are many means of transportation in Beijing, what I recommend is to take the subway
or the bus.
Looking forward to meeting you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【高分句型】
1. I’m more than glad to hear that you are coming to Beijing for a visit
this summer holiday. (由that引导的宾语从句)
2. Since it’s the first time for you to visit here, I’d like to give you some
suggestions. (由Since引导的原因状语从句)
3. Not only can you enjoy the beautiful scenery but also learn more about
Chinese culture. (由Not only引导的部分倒装结构)
4. Although there are many means of transportation in Beijing, what I
recommend is to take the subway or the bus. (由Although引导的让步状语从句和what引导的主语从句)五、运动与健康
【范文一】
2022年的秋季疫情使得同学们又开启了网课模式，为鼓励同学们积极锻炼，增强“运
动有助于健康”的意识，校学生会英语社团决定举办主题为“Life Lies in Movement”
的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1. 运动的好处；
2. 你喜欢的运动及理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 首段已给出，不计入总词数。
Life Lies in Movement
Due to the epidemic, our school launched the online course, during which many of us
students don’t get much exercise learning at home all day. However, it’s universally
acknowledged that physical exercise is so important to our health.
Taking exercise, which can not only enhance our immunity but also release us from
the fast-paced life, plays an important role in our heath. There are various kinds of sports
activities including ball games as well as other activities like swimming and hiking. When it
comes to the sports which I am fond of, running must be mentioned. For one thing, it is easy
to carry out. We can do running in our community or in the park, saving us much time and
money in finding a proper place. For another, we can do it as we like, by ourselves or in a
group. At last, all things taken into consideration, running not only brings us good health but
also a positive mind.
So why not choose a sport and enjoy its benefits?
【高分句型】
1. Due to the epidemic, our school launched the online course, during which
many of us students don’t get much exercise learning at home all day.（during which引
导非限制性定语从句）
2. However, it’s universally acknowledged that physical exercise is so
important to our health. (it为形式主语，that引导主语从句)
3. Taking exercise, which can not only enhance our immunity but also
release us from the fast-paced life, plays an important role in our heath. (无灵主语，which引导非限制性定语从句)
4. We can do running in our community or in the park, saving us much time and
money in finding a proper place. （非谓语做状语）
【范文二】
假设你是新华中学的高三学生李华，看到很多同学因为学习而忽略了体育锻炼，请按
照以下要点，以“Health and Sports”为题写一篇英语短文投稿给学校英语报社。
1.身体健康的重要性
2.运动对大家的好处
3.你的建议
Health and Sports
Good health is of vital importance to everyone. A healthy person can always be
energetic and enjoy his life. A person who is in poor health cannot work well.
When it comes to keeping healthy, playing sports enjoys widespread popularity
among people. As high school students, we must study hard and take many important exams,
which may make many students feel nervous. Therefore, it’s necessary to take exercise
regularly to help release stress. Physical exercise can help make muscles strong. What’s
more, while doing sports, we get relaxed, which can help us study more efficiently.
Since sports can make us physically and mentally healthy, we should do sports every day
no matter how busy we are. Do remember that good health is the best wealth.
【高分句型】
1. As high school students, we must study hard and take many important
exams, which may make many students feel nervous.（which引导的非限制性定语
从句）
2. Since sports can make us physically and mentally healthy, we should do
sports every day no matter how busy we are.（since引导的原因状语从句，no
matter how引导的让步状语从句）六、人物介绍
【范文一】
假定你是李华，将参加学校举行的以“The Person I am Especially Moved by”为主题的
英文演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1. 人物介绍；
2. 感动原因；
3. 对你的影响。
注意：1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear fellow students,
It’s my privilege to deliver a speech here. Of all the most respectable people, I am
especially moved by Zhong Nanshan.
This 85-year-old man with gray hair works really hard, for the people, for the
motherland, for his responsibility. He is one of Chinese heroes volunteering many times to
fight against pandemics. The picture of him resting on the high-speed rail seat made us
touched and tearful. Such great contribution did he make that he was awarded the Medal
of the Republic. His deeds and spirit do make a great difference to me.
Thank you.
【高分句型】
1. He is one of Chinese heroes volunteering many times to fight against
pandemics. (非谓语动词做后置定语)
2. Such great contribution did he make that he was awarded the Medal of
the Republic. (倒装句，即在“such…that+句子”句型中，such位于句首，该部分
用部分倒装)
【范文二】
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容
包括：
1.人物介绍（外貌特征、性格等……）；
2.尊敬和爱戴的原因；3.表达对该人物的情感。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。
The Person I Respect
There are many respectable people around us. And the person I respect most is my
physics teacher Ms. Li. She’s of medium height with long and blonde hair. She is so patient
with each student that we all like her.
For one thing, it’s her friendliness and the sense of responsibility that make me
admire her. When I failed the exam last month and was in low spirits, she patted me gently
on the shoulder and gave me great encouragement. For another, she teaches us not only
how to gain knowledge but also how to be a good person. I believe I can get better and better
with her teaching me.
Ms. Li is such a good teacher that I love her very much. Having set a great example to us
students, she fully deserves my respect. I also hope I can become a responsible teacher like
her someday.
【高分句型】
1. For one thing, it’s her friendliness and the sense of responsibility that
make me admire her. (强调句型)
2. When I failed the exam last month and was in low spirits, she patted me
gently on the shoulder and gave me great encouragement.（时间状语从句）
3. For another, she teaches us not only how to gain knowledge but also how to be
a good person.（not only… but also…）
4. Having set a great example to us students, she fully deserves my
respect. (现在分词作状语)
【范文三】
（2020·全国I卷·书面表达）
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，
内容包括：
1. 人物简介；
2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意：
1. 词数100词左右；
2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好
A Respectful Person
From my perspective, the most respectful person around me is my closest friend, Li Hua,
a 17-year-old boy currently studying in a key school of our province, who is good at almost
everything.
There are four main reasons why I admire, respect and appreciate him so much. To begin
with, having lived in Detroit for half a year as an exchange student, he does well in his
spoken English. Besides, as a top student, he gets high scores in all his exams. What’s more,
he gets along with everyone, enjoys a harmonious interpersonal relationship and is always
ready to help others. Finally, he has abundant life experience, for he once worked as a
volunteer for many companies.
Hopefully, I will be as excellent as him someday.
