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英语读后续写必背满分素材
必背满分素材 1——喜悦快乐兴奋激动
动作/语言描写/情感词汇
1. I could hardly contain my joy/ happiness/delight and danced into the house.
我抑制不住内心的喜悦，蹦蹦跳跳地进了家门。
2. At the sight of such a lovely rabbit, I was wild with delight/ joy and followed its track.
一看到如此可爱的兔子，我欣喜若狂，跟着追了过去。
3. Delighted and thrilled, I gave a jump in the air and then skipped into the supermarket.
我高兴而兴奋地蹦跶了一下，然后蹦蹦跳跳地进了超市。
4. Full of happiness/ Pleased beyond description/ Overjoyed, he jumped up and ran happily
around the yard.
他高兴极了，跳起来，高兴地再院子里跑。
5. Her hands were trembling with excitement as she opened the box.
当她打开盒子时，她的手激动得发抖。
6. “Aha! I catch you!” a trace of please/ joy can be noticed in his voice.
“啊哈！我抓住你了！”他的声音里带着一丝喜悦。
神态描写+情感词汇
1. A smile lit up his face and his eyes were shining/ twinkling/ sparkling with great joy/
excitement.他脸上露出了笑容，双眸闪烁着喜悦/激动的光芒。
2. He could hardly wait to share his trip, his face glowing with joy/ delight.他迫不及待地讲述
起他的旅程，脸上洋溢着喜悦。
3. She felt on top of the world/ over the moon, and every freckle on her cheeks was dancing
with joy.她高兴极了，脸上的每一个雀斑都雀跃起来。
4. Tears of joy/ happiness welled up in their eyes as they hugged tightly together.他们喜极而
泣，紧紧拥抱在一起。
5. She came up to him, with a smile shining like a diamond. In no time his eyes were filled with
warm and excited tears.她挂着灿烂的笑容走到他面前。他立即激动地热泪盈眶。
借用修辞手法
1. I’m in good mood at the moment, just like the white clouds in the blue sky.
我此刻心情舒畅，就像蓝天白云那样自在。
2.She was overflowing with happiness, humming and skipping like a bird.她开心得像小鸟一样
哼唱跳跃。
3. Stars appear in the sky, twinkling their eyes at them in happiness/ delight/ joy.天上繁星点点，
开心地向他们眨眼睛。
借景（自然环境/人物活动场景）抒情
1. Flowers were waving in the breeze of the early spring. Birds were singing, the air was filled
with laughter, and everyone was in the best of moods. （综合场景）
花儿在早春的微风中摇曳。鸟儿在歌唱，空气中满是欢声笑语，人人心情愉悦。
2. An air of delight and excitement settled over the crowd.人群既喜悦又激动。
必背满分素材 2——吃惊惊讶
（肢体）动作／语言描写十情感词汇
1."So two are cheaper than one?"Alice asked in a surprised voice/tone, taking out her purse.
爱丽丝拿出钱包，非常惊奇地问，“这么说，两个比一个更便宜？”
2.Everyone gasped in astonishment as the cars came around the last bend.
汽车转过最后一个弯道时，人人都惊得倒吸了一口气。
3.Hearing the unexpected news, Mary froze with shock, as if rooted to the spot.
听到这个意外的消息，玛丽呆住了，动弹不得。
4.The car was gone in seconds, leaving Alice shaking her head in disbelief.几秒钟后汽车开走了，爱丽丝难以置信地摇头。
5.The little boy was speechless with shock. He gaped at me.
小男孩惊得说不出话，目瞪口呆地看着我。
6.He was too surprised/astonished to speak or even to think.
他惊讶得说不出话来，甚至脑子都不灵了。
神态描写＋情感词汇
1.A spark of surprise flashed/passed across his face. He froze there, staring at me with wide
eyes.他脸上闪过一丝惊奇。他惊得瞪大眼睛看着我。
2.The moment I opened the box, my eyes grew wide/ widened in great surprise/astonishment.
我一打开盒子，就惊奇地睁大了眼睛。
3.My jaw dropped/fell in astonishment when I saw the size of the audience.
看到观众如此之多，我惊讶得张口结舌。
借用修辞手法
1. When Josh heard what Franklin wanted, his mouth opened wide enough to swallow a dentist.
（夸张） 当乔希听到富兰克林想要的东西时，他的嘴张得大得足以吞下牙医。
2.When I looked at the grade on my math paper, my jaw dropped to the ground.（夸张）
看到数学卷子成绩的那一刻，我惊得下巴掉在了地上。
3.Two months later, we overheard that the old Tom had died. It came as a bolt from the blue.（夸
张）两个月后，我们偶然听到老汤姆去世的消息。这犹如晴天霹雳。
必背满分素材 3——难过上心沮丧
（肢体）动作／语言描写＋情感词汇
1.The expression on her face upset Mr. Smith deeply. With a heavy heart, Mr. Smith walked
home.她脸上的表情让史密斯先生很难过，他心情沉重地走回家。
2.He paused, and covered his face with his hands/buried/ hid his face in his hands, too upset
to speak.他将脸埋在手里，难过得说不下去了。
3.She was numb with grief as she watched him go. Inside the coach, she cried the bitterest tears
of her life.她看着他离去悲伤得失去知觉。马车内，她流下了一生中最伤心的泪。
4.I felt so sad that I found myself crying unconsciously, unable to hold/fight back my tears.
我难过得哭了，无法抑制我的眼泪。
神态描写+情感词汇
1. He shook his head miserably/sadly, tears pouring/ running/streaming/rolling down his
cheeks/face. 他难过地摇摇头，潸然泪下。
2.Her heart ached. She felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn't help crying/sobbing
bitterly.她的心好痛，她悲伤得忍不住哭泣。
3.Tears welled up in her eyes, and her heart seemed to be torn.她泪如泉涌，心都要碎了。
借用修辞手法
1. His last word went like a bullet to her heart. She burst into tears and ran out of the room.（比
喻）他最后一句话太扎心了。她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。
2.I felt like I were floating in an ocean of sadness, and words could not express my sorrow.
（比喻）我感觉正漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。言语无法表达我的哀伤。
3.There were sad hearts at his house that night. He felt as if a knife were cutting his heart.（拟
人）那天晚上他家里的人心里都很悲伤。他觉得心如刀割。
必背满分素材 4——恐惧
（肢体）动作／语言描写＋情感词汇
1.When that dog jumped out at me, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.
那条狗突然跳出来冲向我，我吓呆了，一动也不敢动。
2. I was seized/overcome by a strong sense of horror. I trembled all over and my palms were
sweating.我害怕极了，浑身发抖，手心都出汗了。
3.He panicked, covered his eyes with his hands and screamed loudly in fright/fear/terror.他惊慌失措，用手蒙住眼睛，惊恐得大声尖叫。
4.He was thrown into panic, his hands shaking with fear. 他一下子惊慌起来，吓得双手颤抖。
5.Frozen/Numb with fear, Mac couldn't say a word and dared not look at his father's cloudy
face.麦克吓呆了，一句话也说不出来，也不敢看他爸爸那张阴云密布的脸。
神态描写＋情感词汇
1.Jane turned white/pale, and a look of panic/horror crossed/spread across her face.
简脸色变得苍白，脸上掠过惊恐的神情。
2.His face was dead with fright, and his knees were knocking in fright.
他吓得面无人色，双腿直哆嗦。
借用修辞手法
1.A flood of fear welled up in/swept over/swallowed/ overwhelmed him. His throat tightened
and his knees felt weak.（无灵主语句）
他惊恐不已，他喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。
2.I was shaking like a leaf. I had never been so scared in all my life.（比喻）
我瑟瑟发抖。我一辈子从未这么害怕过。
3.Panic began to boil in his stomach. He shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.
（无灵主语句十比喻） 他恐慌起来。他浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。
必背满分素材 5——感动激动温暖宽慰骄傲
（肢体）动作／语言描写＋情感词汇
感激、感动
1.With tears of gratitude rolling/streaming down his checks, Peter hugged Green tightly,
saying “You've saved me today. I couldn't thank you enough.”感激的泪水顺着他的脸颊流下，彼
得紧紧地拥抱着格林，说：“今天你救了我。我对你感激不尽。”
2. Touched deeply and feeling a lump in my throat, I clapped my hands even more loudly.
我非常感动，喉咙哽咽，更大声地鼓掌。
3. “I owe my parents a lot,” he admitted. “我非常感激我的父母。”他承认。
4. It is very moving to see how much strangers can care for each other.
看到陌生人之间这般彼此关照，实在令人感动。
宽慰、温暖和骄傲
5.I finally sat down and cried, a mixture of warmth and relief flooded/washed over me.
我终于坐下来哭了起来，心中满是温暖和宽慰。
6. Alice stepped into the tall building where she worked and breathed a sigh of relief.
爱丽丝走进她上班的大楼，松了口气。
7.Relieved, she went home with a weight lifted off her heart.
她松了口气，回家了，心头重担卸下。
8.I felt a rush of pride, ran to my sister, and put my arms around her.
我骄傲极了，跑过去用双臂搂住我的妹妹。
9.How proud she was when she was told the news!
当她被告知这个消息时，她特别骄傲！
神态／心理活动十情感词汇
感激、感动
1. He nodded slowly and smiled with a look of gratitude.
他慢慢地点了点头，露出了感激的微笑。
2. Tears of gratitude welled up in her eyes as she accepted the flowers.
当她接过鲜花时，感激的泪水涌上了她的眼睛。
3.With grateful tears hanging in his eyes, he kept expressing his gratitude, “Thank you so
much!”他眼中满是感激的泪水，不停地说：“非常感谢！”
温暖、宽慰和满足4.There is always a smile of contentment on her face.
她脸上总是挂着心满意足的微笑。
5.Seeing their task finished gave the manager a sense of satisfaction. He glanced at them with a
pleased smile.
经理看到任务完成了，很满意。他带着满意的笑容瞥了他们一眼。
借用修辞手法或无灵主语句
温暖、宽慰
1.Her heart beat fast, and the blood warmed and relaxed every inch of her body.（无灵主语句）
她的心跳加快，热血温暖了全身，身心完全地放松下来。
2.They looked at each other, and felt a wave of relief went through／flooded over／washed
over them.（无灵主语句）他们凝视彼此，心中一阵宽慰。
骄傲、满足
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1.I was blown away and my heart felt so full of pride and love for the brave boy.（无灵主语句）
我被震撼了，我心中满是对这个勇敢男孩的骄傲和爱。
2.Lucy’s face wore a satisfied expression．（拟人）
露西一脸的心满意足。
必背满分素材 6——“头”和“手”动作
头部动作
1.He was in a bad mood, but he dropped/lowered/hung/bent his head to hide it.
他心情不好，但他低下头来掩饰。
2.Steven walked slowly to the bus, his head down, tears in eyes.
史蒂文低着头，眼里含泪，慢慢地向公交车走去。
3.He buried his head in his hands, greatly annoyed.
他双手抱头，十分生气。
4.I walked out of the class, looking straight ahead with my head high.
我走出教室，高昂着头直视前方。
5.She turned her head away, and I felt I should go. But I couldn't. She turned back to look at me.
她扭过头去，我觉得自己该走了，却欲行又止。她转过身望着我。
手臂肩部的动作
1.As I stopped the car and opened the door, he threw himself/ran into my arms and held me
long and hard. 我停下车，打开车门，他冲进我的怀里，久久地紧紧地抱住我。
2.Jack stood silently with his arms folded/crossed.
杰克双臂环胸，一声不吭地站着。
3.She hugged them to her chest, and at last she was able to look up with tearful eyes and a smile.
她把它们紧紧地抱在胸前，终于抬起头来，泪流满面地微笑着。
4.I bent myself down, gave this poor boy a warm hug and kissed him gently on his forehead.
我弯下腰，给了这个可怜的男孩一个温暖的拥抱，在他的额头上轻吻了一下。
5.The policemen rushed past him, shouldering him aside.
警察们从他身边匆匆走过，用肩膀把他推到了一边。
手部的动作
1.In spite of this, he smiled to me and shook me warmly by the hand.
尽管如此，他还是对我微笑，并热情地握着我的手。
2.The teacher nodded with satisfaction and thumbed up to him.
老师满意地点了点头，向他竖起大拇指。
3. I dug/reached/dived into my pocket to get out my cellphone. 我在口袋里掏出手机。4.She picked up one of the photos, gazed at it for a while, and placed it carefully into the album.
她拿起一张照片，盯着看了一会儿，然后小心翼翼地放进相册里。
必背满分素材 7——“脚”和“腿”动作
脚部动作
1.He leapt jumped/sprang to his feet/jumped up and rushed out of the living room.
他一跃而起，冲出起居室。
2.He approached the chair and gave it a push with a foot. 他走近椅子前，用脚推了一下。
3.She planted her feet firmly to the spot and refused to move.
她牢牢地站在原地，一动也不动。
4.He was so worn out that he lifted his feet to leave as if they were 100 kilos.
他是如此疲惫以至于抬脚离开时好像双脚有千斤重。
5.The little man left the cottage with a sad, slow step.
小个子男人迈着忧伤的步子慢慢走出了小屋。
6.She tapped/stamped her feet impatiently.
她不耐烦地跺着脚。
腿部动作
1.Jenny walked slowly to the front, with her legs trembling and her heart bumping nearly out of
her chest.
珍妮两腿发抖慢慢地走到讲台，心都快跳出来了。
2.Jill crossed her legs and rested her chin on one fist, as if lost in deep thought.
吉尔盘着腿，一个拳头支着下巴，仿佛陷入了沉思。
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3.This time I leapt/sprang from my seat like a rocket. 这次我像火箭一样从座位上跳了起来。
5.Overwhelmed with terror, he stood rooted to the ground and felt his knees as weak as
rubbers.他惊恐万状，呆在原地，双膝发软。
各种各样的“走”
1. He stepped back in astonishment and moved towards the door. 他惊愕地后退了一步，向门
口走去。
2.She slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the window. 她溜下床，踮起脚尖走向窗边。
3.She picked herself up and limped away in tears. 她爬起来，流着泪一瘸一拐地走了。
4.She paced up and down in the kitchen, and then wandered down to the gate and back.
她在厨房踱来踱去，然后漫步走到大门口又回来。
5.He made his way through the back door, and out into the yard. 他从后门出去，走到院子里。
6.He stormed out and slammed the door shut. 他怒气冲冲地走了出去，砰的一声把门关上。
7.We marched through the corridor and entered the dining room.
我们穿过走廊进入餐厅。
8.Tom was dragging through the snow when the girl walked straight to him, trembling with cold.
汤姆正慢腾腾地在雪地里走着，这时女孩冷得发抖径直向他走去。
9.He stole/slid into the house, stepped forward to the shelf and crept behind it.
他偷偷溜进房间，走到架前，蹑手蹑脚地躲到后面。
各种跑
1.Steve was jogging around the garden when a stranger paused and stared at him.
史蒂夫正在花园里慢跑，这时有个陌生人突然停下来盯着他看。
2.Racing home, Tom burst through the bedroom. 汤姆飞奔回家，冲进卧室。
3.She pulled off her shoes and ran, barefoot and fast. 她脱下鞋子光着脚飞快地跑着。
4.The man made a rush for the exit and escaped/fled away with great panic.那人冲向出口，惊恐地逃走了。
5.The little child flew like a bird downstairs.
那个小孩儿像小鸟似的下了楼梯。
6.He sprung from his chair and dashed to pick up the telephone.
他从椅子上一跃而起，冲过去拿起电话。
7.The thief grabbed his cellphone, fled into the crowds, squeezed onto the bus, and disappeared.
小偷抢走他的手机，逃进人群，挤上公交车，不见了。
必背满分素材 8——能“看”会“说”
“看”来“看”去
1.The little prince gazed at him for a long time.小王子盯着他看了很久。
2.He just stood there, staring at me blankly. 他只是站在那里茫然地看着我。
3. As I glanced at Mark to see what he was doing, he winked at me.
当我瞥了一眼马克，看他在做什么时，他向我眨了眨眼。
4.He twisted his body round to look/glance over his shoulder.
他扭转身子回头向后看。
5. Ben looked at me in horror for a moment and then his eyes dropped to his feet.
本惊恐地看了我一会儿，然后垂下眼睛看着自己的脚。
6. The little prince sat down on a stone, and raised his eyes toward the sky.
小王子坐在一块石头上，抬头望着天空。
7.She sat up, her eyes fixed on Joan's face.
她紧盯着琼的脸坐起来。
8.Sylvia spotted Tom out of the corner of her eye walking by, but she did not look out of the
window.西尔维娅用眼角的余光看见汤姆走过，但她没有往窗外看。
9.Her eyes fell/landed on the photos.她的目光落在照片上。
10.I caught a glimpse of him as he walked into the room. 当他走进屋子时，我瞥见了他。
能“言”善“说”
1.She looked at him with an angry glance and said impatiently “Leave me alone！”（“说＂动词
＋副词） 她生气地看了他一眼，不耐烦地说：“别烦我！”
2.He stopped me and added in a soft tone,“I do miss you!" 他拦住我，轻轻地说：“我真想你！”
（“说”动词十语气）
3.“Who broke the glass?” the boy asked in a trembling voice／ the boy asked ，
his voice
trembling.（“说＂动词＋嗓音） 男孩声音颤抖地问道，“谁打碎的玻璃？”
4.“There's nothing we can do about it now!”she sighed, patting me on the shoulder and left
silently.“现在我们无能为力了！”她叹了口气，拍拍我的肩膀，默默地离开了。
5.“I don't want to go!” screamed Wilbur, throwing himself to the ground.
“我不想去！”威尔伯尖叫着，扑倒在地。
6. She murmured a thank you and ran all the way home. 她低声说了声谢谢就一路跑回家了。
7.“Help me!”she yelled at the top of her voice.
“救命！”她扯开嗓子喊道。
必背满分素材 9——环境与场景描写
直接描写客观环境，如日月星辰、风云雷雨雪、山川河流
阳光、月光、星光
1.Morning sunshine flooded in through the open curtains.
清晨的阳光透过拉开的窗帘倾泻进来。
2.The sun was beginning to set, glittering red through the leaves.
太阳开始西落，树叶里映射出红色斜晖。
3.The mountain was bathed in the quiet moonlight.
山沐浴在静谧的月色中。4.The sky was dotted with sparkling stars, shining like diamonds.
夜空繁星点点，像钻石般闪耀。
5.The windows were open and white sunlight was coming in as well as the smell of fresh grass.
A wind blew through the room.
窗子开着，小草清新的气息飘进来，白色的阳光洒进来，一阵风儿吹过房间。
风、云、雷、雨、雪和雾
6.White clouds flow in the blue sky like quiet fish swimming in broad ocean.
蓝天上白云轻飘，宛如大海里安静的鱼儿在游动。
7.The rain came pouring down, and the winds beat against the house.
大雨倾盆而至，狂风敲打着房屋。
8.Thunder rumbled in the mountains all around and rain began to fall in heavy drops.
山里雷声隆隆，雨点开始大颗大颗地往下落。
9.The feathery snowflakes danced in the night air, making a beautiful picture.
鹅毛般的雪花在夜空中飞舞，形成了一幅美丽的图画。
山川、水流、河流、海洋
10.It is a green valley far from any town, surrounded by steep, rocky mountains.
这是一个远离市镇、葱葱郁郁的山谷，群山环绕，山势陡峭，岩石林立。
11. A little way off was a small brook, rushing and sparkling along between green banks, and
murmuring in a soft voice.
离此处不远，有一条小溪，沿着绿色的堤岸奔流不息，熠熠发光，发出潺潺的流水声。
12.The lakes shone like glass in the setting sun and looked wonderful.
湖水在落日的余晖下闪亮如镜，景色迷人。
13.The sea was still quiet as if it had fallen asleep, without wind or waves.
大海依旧风平浪静，好像睡着了一样。
必背满分素材 10——汪星人和喵星人
汪星人的外貌
1. The dog has golden fur which feels very comfortable, like touching the soft cotton.
小狗有着金黄色的毛，摸着十分舒服，像是摸着柔软的棉花一样。
2.I heard a rush outside and a great dog ran by. It was a lionlike creature with long hair and a huge
head.我听见外面唰的一声，一条大狗窜了过去。它长着一副狮子的模样，毛很长，头很大。
汪星人动作与叫声
1.The puppy leaped to his feet, wagging his tail and his eyes sparkling with excitement.
小狗跳起来，兴奋地摇着尾巴，眼睛闪闪发亮。
2.The dog stood up on its hind legs/raised its whole body on its hind legs and licked me
affectionately as it used to do. 狗用后腿支起全身，像往常那样亲热地舔我。
3.At the sight of a stranger approaching, the dog watched him, ears up, head slightly cocked.
那只狗看到陌生人走近，竖起耳朵，微微抬起头，注视着他。
4.The dog stretched, shook himself and circled several times before dropping to the ground.
狗仲了个懒腰，抖了抖身子，转了儿圈才趴在地上。
5.The dog sat down,panting, with its tongue hanging out of its mouth, and its great eyes half shut.
狗坐下来，喘着气，舌头伸到嘴外，两只大眼睛半闭半合。
6.The dog wandered off to rest her nose in her paws. 那只狗走开了，把鼻子搁在爪子上休息。
7.The dog sniffed my hand eagerly,bushy tail wagging.He licked me.
这条狗急切地嗅着我的手，摇着毛茸茸的尾巴。他舔了舔我。
8.The dog barked even louder, “RUFF! RUFF!RUFF!”It rushed round in a circle, chasing his tail.
狗叫得更响了：“汪！汪！汪！”它追着自己的尾巴转圈。
喵星人动作与叫声
1.The cat bit, scratched and yelled.那只猫又咬又抓又叫。
2.The cat crouched down, ready to spring on the mouse. 猫蹲下身来准备向老鼠猛扑过去。3.The kitten made a soft meow and curled itself into a furry little ball.
小猫轻轻叫了一声，蜷成了一个毛茸茸的小球。
4.The cat nuzzled up to my leg, meowing happily.
猫咪在我的腿边蹭来蹭去，高兴地喵喵叫着。
5.The cat sits purring so nicely by the fire licking her paws and washing her face.
那只猫坐在炉边发出动听的咕噜咕噜的声音，舔着爪子洗脸。
6. The cat raised its whole body on its hind legs and clawed at the door.
猫用后腿撑起全身用爪子抓着门。
7.The kitten caught my foot in her paws, and tried to make a plaything of it.
这只小猫用爪子抓着我的脚，想把我的脚当作玩物。
8. The cat arched its back when it heard the sound. 猫听到声音就拱起了背。
9.She lay on her back, and slowly rolled, paws tucked up, head back, so that her creamy chest was
exposed. 她仰面躺着，慢慢地打滚，爪子向上翘着，头向后仰着，露出了白肚皮。
汪星人和喵星人的续写结尾
When dealing with them, it's not we who take care of them, but most of the time, it's they that heal
us.在和他们相处的时候，不是我们照顾他们，大多数时候，是他们治愈我们。
