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续写语言之亲情类
知识点1 模板1
第一段：
孩子的困境（自卑、胆怯、纠结、想放弃）
→长辈鼓励或指引（多为语言、事例、名言警句）
→受到鼓励，调整心态
第二段：
孩子遵照指引克服困难
→孩子的感悟，长辈的肯定
→情感升华，主题感悟
提分词汇及短语
stroke one’s hair 轻抚某人的头发
stoke away one’s tears 轻轻拭去某人的眼泪
seek guidance from 向...寻求指导
throw one’s arms around sb 抱住某人
hands gently on each shoulder 双手轻轻搭在双肩上
inspire sb. with one’s enthusiasm 用某人的热情激励某人
sweep sb. up into one’s arms 一把将某人抱进怀里
point sb. in the right direction 为某人指明正确的方向
be scared to death 害怕得要死
make one’s hair stand on end 令人毛骨悚然
one’s heart is in one’s mouth 提心吊胆
shake with fear 吓得发抖
经典范文
Every time I faced challenges/ I’m feeling stressed or overwhelmed, a thought of giving up
flashed in my mind, but the support of my family gave me the strength to keep going.There came
a powerful voice,“Don’t be afraid.This is a great chance and I believe you can make it.”I looked ather,tears of love and gratitude welling up in my eyes.Under the guidance of sb , I took positive
actions and started all over again.
The instant the performance was over,I rushed to he,hugged him tightly and said thanks to
him.Patting me gently on my shoulder,he smiled and praised him ”Not a problem.you are a clever
boy,I know you can make it and I am proud of you, not just in leaning.And we are family,aren’t
we.”But for his help, I wouldn’t have finished my performance smoothly.Not until then did I
become aware of the significance of families.
巩固练习：汉译英
1．一股幸福与温暖流遍全身，妈妈轻轻地亲了两个姐妹。(汉译英)
2．清晨的阳光照进来，全家人沉浸在幸福和爱中。(汉译英)
3．温暖的金色阳光透过窗户的照进来温暖了我们。(汉译英)
4．从父亲的话中，我意识到家庭是世界上最重要的。(汉译英)
5．正是在那一刻，我对家庭的意义有了充分的认识。(汉译英)
知识点2 模板2
第一段：
亲情危机（吵架、犯错、生活拮据）
→离家出走
→第三人的指点帮助/个人觉悟
→认识错误，决定道歉
第二段：
具体措施、努力过程（为父母做一顿饭、给父母买礼物、陪父母聊天等来表达自己的歉
意）
→亲情修复，情感升华，主题感悟
提分词汇及短语
have a quarrel with sb 与某人争吵
beg for one’s forgiveness 乞求某人原谅an exchange of bitter words 恶语相向
fall into conflict 陷入冲突
burst into anger 勃然大怒
can’t control one’s temper 无法控制自己的脾气
anger fills one’s voice 充满愤怒的声音
make one’s blood boil 使某人怒火中烧
forgive sb. for doing sth 原谅某人做某事
a sense of relief floods over sb 深感宽慰
regret doing sth 后悔做某事
be sunk in deep thought 陷入沉思
经典范文
At the door, Jenny met her father, who just came back from work. The attentive father
quickly sensed his daughter’s unhappiness and asked what was wrong. Jenny told her father the
whole story.Thinking about the harsh words she had poured to her mother, she couldn’t control her
tears of guilty any more.Sth. from a stranger made her feel grateful, but she have never thanked
her mum for what she has done for her.On the way home, she made up her mind to make an
apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.Her father said gently”Why
not cook a dinner for Mom by yourself.”
At last, her mother came back.Seeing the daughter, she breathed with a sigh of relief.To her
surprise, instead of scolding her, she wiped her tears away and said to her patiently, “where have
you been? I’m worried about you.”“we all make mistakes but we can correct them.I believe you
are an honest and brave girl. Honesty is the best policy.”Feeling of guilt swept over her,she
stepped forward and hugged Mother tightly.Then the family enjoyed the dinner happily.It was at
the moment that I finally realized that nothing is more precious than mother’s love.
巩固练习：汉译英
6．直到那时我才意识到家庭的重要性。(汉译英)
7．汤姆深深地感觉到是爱让世界运转。(汉译英)8．是妈妈让我的童年多姿多彩。也是她向我展示了给予的真正意义。（汉译英）
9．我突然想到，我父亲教我的宝贵的一课肯定会指引我未来的道路。(汉译英)
10．他走到弟弟身边，轻轻地摸着杰克逊的头发，说：“对不起我发脾气了。”(汉译英)
真题演练
1.（2025·江西上饶·一模）
11．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was the beginning of December. People were busy in my home. The living room,
transformed into a sort of workshop, was piled with boxes, wrapping paper, and some colorful
ribbons (缎带). At the center of it all was my mother, Lee-Ann.
Every year, Lee-Ann organized a Christmas charity drive, collecting donations, gifts, and
food hampers (食品篮) for families in need within our community. It was a tradition she had
started when I was just a toddler, fueled by her belief that everyone deserved to experience the joy
and warmth of life, regardless of their circumstances.
“But, Mom, do you think we can manage? I mean, it’s amazing what you’re doing, but it’s a
lot of work, and...” I asked.
She stopped wrapping and looked up at me, her gaze firm yet gentle. “Mark, do you know
why I do this every year?” she asked.
I shook my head, realizing I had never really known her motivations.
“Because,” she continued, “giving brings us together. It reminds us that we’re all part of a
bigger family. And if we can make even a small difference in someone’s life, then all the effort is
worth it.”
Moved by her words, I nodded, understanding for the first time the depth of her
commitment.
The days that followed were a lot of activities. Our family, along with a group of volunteers
drawn in by my mother’s infectious enthusiasm, worked tirelessly. We wrapped gifts, packed food
hampers, and arranged deliveries. My mother was everywhere at once, encouraging, and spreading
cheer.
On Christmas Eve, as we loaded the last of the hampers into the van, my mother turned to
me and said, “ Ready for the final round?”注意：(1) 续写词数应为150左右；
(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I smiled, filled with a sense of pride and purpose. “Let’s do it.”
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“But Mom,” I replied, “you’re the real superhero here.”
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2．（2025·贵州遵义·二模）
12．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续
写的词数为150词左右。
Eunice had loved music for as long as she could remember. When she was a baby, she
would clap and sing along to the tunes on TV shows with delightful enthusiasm. When she saw
some musical notes written in a magazine, she could sing them all. Her parents were amazed that
she could read music at such a young age. So her father decided to gift her a piano to nurture her
talent. Overjoyed, Eunice excelled in her piano playing.
Eunice’s mum, a conservative lady, has strict rules and unique insights into music. Classical
music, to her, is a blend of wisdom and history. She believed it had the power to nourish the soul
and deepen one’s understanding of the world. In contrast, she thought pop music lacked the lasting
depth and beauty of classical music. Her mother discouraged her from playing that kind of music.
“Jazz and blues are wicked and lead to things like dancing!” Her mum would say with a serious
look on her face.As Eunice grew older, she enjoyed diverse music from radios, record players, and street
musicians. It all sounded amazing, and how could such wonderful music possibly be wicked? Her
father, understanding her love for music, encouraged her to play all kinds of music when her
mother was not home. He kept watching out of the front window to see if her mother was coming
back.
“Here she comes! Stop playing!” he would whisper urgently whenever he spotted her
mother approaching. Playing this diverse music became their cherished secret.
After years of studying, her family found it difficult to support her musical education.
Fortunately, her piano teacher Miss Mazzy came to her aid and collected donations from the
people of the town. The generous neighbours readily supported her, providing her with the funds
she needed. To express her gratitude, Miss Mazzy arranged for Eunice to perform a special
concert.
The girl was both excited and nervous. She worked especially hard to polish up twelve
pieces, including several pop music pieces. However, she was afraid that her mother would come
and find out her secret love for pop music during the concert.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As she stepped on the stage, she was surprised to see her mother in the front row.
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After playing all the twelve pieces, Eunice’s mother approached her with pride.
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1．A surge of happiness and warmth running through her, Mom kissed the two sisters gently.
【详解】考查动词、时态和独立主格。“一股幸福与温暖”翻译为a surge of happiness and
warmth；“流遍全身”翻译为run through somebody；“一股幸福与温暖流遍全身”可以用
“逻辑主语+现在分词”构成的独立主格表示，翻译为a surge of happiness and warmth
running through her。“妈妈”翻译为Mom；“亲”用动词kiss；“两个姐妹”翻译为the
two sisters；“轻轻地”翻译为gently；句子描述过去发生的事，用一般过去时。故整句翻
译为A surge of happiness and warmth running through her, Mom kissed the two sisters gently.
2．The early sunlight streaming in, the whole family was bathed in happiness and love.
【详解】考查独立主格结构和时态。“清晨的阳光照进来”为独立主格结构：名词+现在
分词形式，翻译为the early sunlight streaming in；主语“全家人”为the whole family；表示
“沉浸在”短语为be bathed in；表示“幸福和爱”为happiness and love。发生在过去用一
般过去时。故翻译为The early sunlight streaming in, the whole family was bathed in happiness
and love.
3．The warm golden sunlight flooded in through the window and warmed us up.
【详解】考查动词、形容词和时态。“温暖的金色阳光”翻译为the warm golden
sunlight；“照进来”用动词短语flood in表示；“透过窗户”翻译为through the
window；“温暖……”用动词短语warm up；句子描述过去发生的事，用一般过去时。故
翻译为The warm golden sunlight flooded in through the window and warmed us up.
4．From my father’s words, I have realized that family matters the most in the world.
【详解】考查宾语从句和介词短语。根据所给中文提示词，“从父亲的话中”可用介词短
语，译为“from my father’s words”，“我意识到家庭是世界上最重要的。”可用宾语从句
结构，其中“我意识到”作主句，描述父亲的话对自己的影响，用现在完成时，译为“I
have realized”，“家庭是世界上最重要的”为宾语从句，“家庭”作主语，译为
“family”，“是最重要的”用动词短语“matter the most”，描述客观事实，用一般现在时，
“世界上”作地点状语，译为“in the world”。故译为：From my father’s words, I have
realized that family matters the most in the world.
5．It was at that moment that I had a full understanding of the significance of family.
【详解】考查强调句型。本句描述过去发生的事情用一般过去时。表示“正是在那一刻”
使用强调句型 It was… that…，强调时间状语“at that moment”。“对……有了充分的认
识”可译为 had a full understanding of，“家庭的意义” 对应 the significance of family。故答案为It was at that moment that I had a full understanding of the significance of family.
6．Not until then did I become aware of the significance of family.
【详解】考查固定句型和时态。“直到那时”翻译为not until then；“我”是I；“意识
到”用短语become aware of表示；“家庭的重要性”翻译为the significance of family；not
until then放在句首，句子用部分倒装；句子描述过去发生的事，用一般过去时，此处用助
动词did构成部分倒装。故整句翻译为Not until then did I become aware of the significance of
family.
7．It is love that makes the world go round and Tom felt it deep in his little heart.
【详解】考查强调句。表示“爱”应用love；表示“让世界运转”应用make the world go
round，陈述客观事实，使用一般现在时，对主语love进行强调，使用强调句，其基本句型
是：it is+被强调部分+that+句子其他部分；表示“汤姆深深地感觉到是”应用 Tom felt it
deep in his little heart，此处使用一般过去时。故翻译为It is love that makes the world go
round and Tom felt it deep in his little heart.。
8．It was Mom that made my childhood colorful. And it was also she that showed me the true
meaning of giving.
【详解】考查强调句和动词时态。表示“妈妈”应用Mom；表示“使”应用make；表示
“我的童年”应用my childhood；表示“多姿多彩”应用colorful，形容词作宾补；表示
“她”应用she；表示“向某人展示”应用show sb. sth.；表示“我”应用me；表示“给予
的真正意义”应用the ture meaning of giving。此处陈述过去发生的事情，使用一般过去时，
结合句意可知，两句话都使用强调句对主语进行强调，其基本句型是：it was+被强调的部
分+that+句子其他成分。故翻译成：It was Mom that made my childhood colorful. And
it was also she that showed me the true meaning of giving.。
9．It occurred to me that the precious lesson taught by my Dad would definitely guide the way of
my future.
【详解】考查固定句型、非谓语动词和动词。根据句意，表示“我突然想到”为固定句型
“it occur to sb. that…”，其中it为形式主语，位于句首，首字母需大写，that引导的为主语
从句作真正主语，该句描述的是过去发生的事情，所以使用一般过去时，谓语动词为
occurred；表示“宝贵的一课”为the precious lesson作从句主语，表示“我父亲教我的”作
定语修饰lesson，表示“教”为teach，与lesson之间为被动关系，所以此处使用过去分词
短语作后置定语，即taught by my father；表示“会指引我未来的道路”应为guide the wayof my life，结合句意，该句描述的是发生在将来的动作，且主句为一般过去时，所以，此
处使用过去将来时，谓语动词为would guide，表示“肯定”为definitely作状语修饰谓语，
置于would与guide之间。故翻译为It occurred to me that the precious lesson taught by my
Dad would definitely guide the way of my future.
10．Approaching his brother, he gently stroked Jackson’s hair, murmuring, “Sorry for losing my
temper.”
【详解】考查动词（短语）、副词、名词和非谓语动词。句子在描述过去发生的事情，时
态应用一般过去时；主语“他”用代词he，状语“轻轻地”可用副词gently，谓语“摸
着”可用动词stroke，宾语“杰克逊的头发”用名词短语Jackson’s hair；“走到弟弟身边”
和“说”可处理为分词作状语，“走到……身边”可用动词approach，其宾语“弟弟”用
名词短语his brother，“说”可用动词murmur，approach及murmur和逻辑主语he之间都
是主动关系，因此均用现在分词形式；“对不起我发脾气了”是“说”的内容，可用直接
引语表示，“因做某事而对不起”可用固定表达sorry for doing，“发脾气”可用动词短语
lose my temper。故可译为：Approaching his brother, he gently stroked Jackson’s hair,
murmuring, “Sorry for losing my temper.”
11．例文1：
I smiled, filled with a sense of pride and purpose. “Let’s do it.” As we made our rounds,
delivering hampers and seeing the joy on the faces of those we helped, I felt a profound
connection to the community and to my mother’s mission. Each “thank you” and every smile was
a reminder of the impact of her work. Later that evening, as we sat around our own Christmas tree,
my mother wrapped an arm around me. “Thank you, Mark,” she said. “For being my right-hand
man.”
“But Mom,” I replied, “you’re the real superhero here.” She laughed softly. “Maybe, but every
superhero needs a team. And I’ve got the best one.” That year, like every year, my mother, Lee-
Ann, showed us the true meaning of giving and the power of compassion. She taught us that by
coming together to support one another, we could create ripples of kindness that would extend far
and wide. I was grateful to her. In my eyes, and in the eyes of our community, she was, and always
will be, a superhero.
例文2：
I smiled, filled with a sense of pride and purpose. “Let’s do it.” With that, we set off on ourjourney to distribute the gifts and food hampers to the families in need within our community. The
air was crisp with the chill of winter, but it did nothing to dampen our spirits. Each family we
visited was overwhelmed with gratitude, their eyes lighting up as they received the much-needed
supplies. At one stop, after helping a single mother and her children unpack the hamper, my
mother placed a gentle hand on my shoulder and said, “You know, you’re a hero today.”
“But Mom,” I replied, “you’re the real superhero here.” My mother’s dedication to this charity
drive went beyond mere organization and planning. It was a testament to her belief in the power of
giving and the importance of community. As we completed our deliveries and returned home, I
couldn’t help but feel a sense of accomplishment and gratitude for having a mother who taught me
the true meaning of Christmas—not just the presents and decorations, but the joy of giving and the
warmth of being part of a larger family.
【导语】本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了作者母亲每年组织圣诞慈善活动，为社区中有需
要的家庭收集捐款、礼物和食品篮的传统。作者起初对这项工作的艰巨性表示担忧，但在
母亲的话语激励下，作者开始理解并投入到这项工作中。在圣诞节前夕，作者与母亲一同
完成最后一轮物资派送，深刻体会到了这项工作的意义。
【详解】1.段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“我微笑着，心中充满了自豪感和使命感。”可知，第一段可描写作
者和母亲一起进行最后一轮物资派送，看到受助者的笑脸，感受到与社区和母亲使命的深
刻联系，以及母亲对作者的感谢。
②由第二段首句内容““但是妈妈，”我回答，“你才是这里真正的超级英雄。””可知，
第二段可描写作者对母亲的赞美，以及母亲对团队合作重要性的认识。
2.续写线索：派送物资——看到笑脸——感谢母亲——赞美母亲——母亲教我们认识到给
与和团队合作的重要意义
3.词汇激活
行为类
①派送：deliver/distribute/hand out
②拥抱：wrapp an arm around me/hug me /give me a hug
③轻声笑：laugh softly/smile gently/chuckle
情绪类
①快乐：joy/happiness/delight
②感激：grateful/thankful/appreciative【点睛】[高分句型1] As we made our rounds, delivering hampers and seeing the joy on the
faces of those we helped, I felt a profound connection to the community and to my mother’s
mission.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2] She taught us that by coming together to support one another, we could create
ripples of kindness that would extend far and wide.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）
12．Paragraph 1:
As she stepped on the stage, she was surprised to see her mother in the front row. Her heart
raced and she felt scared. She took a deep breath, filling her lungs with air, and let it out slowly to
calm her nerves. She glanced down at her hands, resting on the piano keys, and remembered all
the long hours she had spent practicing. She lifted her gaze to meet her mother’s, who was
watching her with a curious and proud expression. With a determined nod, Eunice placed her
fingers on the keys and began her first piece, allowing the southing melody to wash away her
worries and carry her into the world of music.
Paragraph 2:
After playing all the twelve pieces, Eunice’s mother approached her with pride. “I didn’t
know you could play like this. I’m so proud of you,” she said, her voice filled with surprise and
admiration. Tears welled up in Eunice’s eyes as she hugged her mother tightly. Eunice not only
impressed her audience but also gained a deeper understanding and acceptance from her mother.
From then on, she continued to explore various genres of music, always finding new ways to
blend them into her own unique style.
【导语】本文以人物为线索，讲述了Eunice从小热爱音乐，但在母亲的保守观念下，她对
流行音乐的热爱只能作为秘密。幸运的是，她的父亲和老师都给予了她支持。在老师的帮
助下，Eunice举办了一场音乐会，但在音乐会上，她意外地发现了坐在前排的母亲。
【详解】1.段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“当她走上舞台时，她惊讶地看到妈妈坐在前排。”可知，第一段可
描写Eunice看到母亲后的紧张心情，以及她如何克服紧张情绪开始演奏。
②由第二段首句内容“演奏完全部十二首曲子后，Eunice的母亲骄傲地走近她。”可知，
第二段可描写演奏结束后，母亲对Eunice的骄傲和赞赏，以及Eunice的感动和与母亲的拥
抱，还有之后Eunice继续探索音乐之路的决心。
2.续写线索：上台——紧张——深呼吸——看到母亲——坚定演奏——演奏结束——母亲赞赏——Eunice感动——拥抱母亲——继续探索音乐
3.词汇激活
行为类
①深呼吸：took a deep breath/filled her lungs with air/let it out slowly
②抬起目光：lift her gaze/raise her gaze
③拥抱：hugged her mother tightly/gave her mother a tight hug
情绪类
①心跳加速：Her heart raced/Her heart was beating faster
②骄傲：be proud of/take pride in
【点睛】[高分句型1] She took a deep breath, filling her lungs with air, and let it out slowly to
calm her nerves.（运用了现在分词短语作伴随状语）
[高分句型2] She lifted her gaze to meet her mother’s, who was watching her with a curious and
proud expression.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）
