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第 21 讲 书面表达之建议信
(模拟精练+真题演练)
1.(2023·湖南永州)
最近你的笔友Mike在与同学的交往中遇到了烦恼,他写邮件向你寻求帮助,请你以李华的身份给他写一
封邮件,提出你的一些建议,帮助他解决烦恼。
注意:1)文中请勿使用真实人名。
2)词数:不低于80词,文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3)语句通顺,意思连贯,表达正确,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:share, solve, friendly, respect (尊重)
Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some problems with your schoolwork and classmates. I’m glad to help you.
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I hope everything will go well with you soon.
Yours
Li Hua
2.(2023·陕西咸阳)
假如你是李华,你的朋友王磊给你发邮件说他最近很不开心。请你根据下面的表格提示,用英语给他
回一封电子邮件,给他提一些建议,帮助他尽快摆脱烦恼。
1)家庭作业多,几乎没有时间休息;
问题
2)压力大,经常感到紧张。
1)制订学习计划,找到适合自己的学习方法;
建议 2)学会放松;
3)多与父母、老师或朋友交谈。
参考词汇:
nervous (紧张的), great pressure (压力大), make a plan, go for a walk, relax …
要求:
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1)参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2)语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3)文中不得出现任何真实信息;
4)词数:不少于50词。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)
Dear Wang Lei,
I am sorry to know that you are unhappy these days.
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Yours,
Li Hua
2.(2023上·陕西延安)
青少年在成长过程中难免会遇到一些困惑。假如你是李华。昨天你收到你的美国笔友 Jim的电子邮件。
请你根据他提出的问题,给他回一封电子邮件,向他提出合理的建议。
Dear Li Hua,
How’s everything going? I am not good these days. I have lots of homework every day and I have no time to
do what I like. And I am a little fat. I worry about my health. What should I do? Can you give me some advice?
I expect to receive your reply.
Yours,
Jim
要求:
(1)语句通顺,逻辑合理,可适当发挥;
(2)意思连贯,书写规范;
(3)70词左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some problems in life.
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Hope you can be better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
3.(2023·浙江湖州)
假设你是李华,以下是你的英国朋友 Tony 发给你的一封电子邮件,请根据该邮件内容给他回复一封
邮件。
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注意:
(1)邮件中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
(2)词数 80 左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
To: Li Hua
From: Tony
Hi, Li Hua,
Long time no see. I left my hometown with my parents and went to a new school. But I don’t have any friends
now so I feel upset these days. Life is kind of boring so I want to find some good ways to have fun. Can you give
me some advice? Hope to get your reply soon.
Yours,
Tony
Hi Tony,
I know how you feel.
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Hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
4.(2023·江苏常州)
假如你是李蕾,刚刚收到一封来自英国朋友Sandy的邮件。她在邮件中说自己想上一门艺术课,但是
不知道选什么好,想听听你的建议。请根据表格提示,选择或自拟1—2门艺术课,给出建议并阐述理
由,用英语给Sandy回复一封邮件。
Suggestions Reasons
painting/drawing lessons. make you creative…
piano/violin/guitar
make you relaxed…
lessons
dancing/singing lessons help you stay healthy…
要求:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.词数:100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
Dear Sandy,
Glad to hear from you. Since I’m taking art lessons, I have some ideas to share with you.
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Yours
Li Lei
5.(2023·广西·统考三模)
假如你是李华,你的好朋友Lucy是月光中学的初三学生,中考将至,她写邮件询问你,如何缓解学
习压力。请你根据下面的导图内容,用英文给她回复一封邮件。内容要点:
listen to some soft music
watch some interesting movies
How to relieve (缓解) study pressure?
ask your parents or teachers for help
……
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含以上要点,可以适当发挥;
2. 文中不能提及本人的真实姓名、地名和校名;
3. 字数80左右,开头不计入总词数。
Dear Lucy,
How are you these days?
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Yours,
Li Hua
6.(2023·安徽合肥·统考一模)
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike作为交换生,将于下个月来你校交流学习。请给他写一封电子邮
件,向他介绍你们学校并提出一些旅行建议。
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要点如下:
( 1)介绍学校:课程多样,活动丰富;
( 2)旅行建议:绿色出行,体验文化……
要求:
( 1)语句通顺,符合逻辑,可适当发挥;
( 2)不可出现真实姓名与学校名称;
( 3)词数80—100。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to know that you’ll visit our school as an exchange student.
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I’m looking forward to meeting you here.
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
8.(2023·天津河西·统考模拟预测)
假设你是戴安娜老师,你的学生Steve转入另一个城市的一所高中。Steve给你发邮件,倾诉他在新学
校的一些烦恼。请根据提示内容,给Steve回一封邮件,提出如下建议。
(1)主动问候同学,课间和同学交谈;
(2)课上参与小组讨论,表达自己的想法;
(3)参加班级活动和学校社团(如运动会、歌咏比赛等);
(4)你希望……
参考词汇:小组讨论group work 表达express
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Dear Diana,
I just came to a new school. I miss you all very much. I find it difficult to get on well with my new classmates.
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What should I do?
Steve
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Dear Steve,
I have learned about your problems. I think
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9.(2023·浙江杭州·统考二模)
美国朋友Sam发来的邮件,请阅读后以电子邮件的形式回复。
要求:
①可适当添加内容让行文通顺、连贯。
②字数不少于80词。
To: Li Ping
From: Sam
Subject: What should I do?
Dear Li Ping,
How is everything going with you? I’m stressed out these days. My last exam results dropped once again and I
really don’t know how to improve my grades. What’s worse, my parents always compare me with others and expect
too much from me. It’s difficult to get on well with them. I am so upset. What should I do? Please give me some
advice.
Looking forward to your quick reply!
Yours,
Sam
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10.(2023·浙江杭州·校联考二模)
假定你是李平,你的笔友Rose发来一封邮件,她计划九月份来杭州观看第19届亚运会。请根据Rose
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在电子邮件中的提问,给她写回信。词数80左右。
To liping@sina.com
From rose@mail.com
Hi, Li Ping
How are you doing recently?
I’m really excited to tell you that I will go to your city Hangzhou for the Asian Games in September. I think it
will be a good chance for me to learn more about your city and your country. I’m planning to learn Chinese. Can
you give me some suggestions about how I can learn it well? And I know Hangzhou is famous for something like
tea, umbrellas, scissors and so on. I want to buy some of them for my friends as gifts. Could you give me some
suggestions about it? Hope I could get some good ideas from you.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Rose
To rose@mail.com
From liping@sina.com
Dear Rose,
Yours,
Li Ping
11.(2023·河北·统考中考真题)
王梅的英国朋友Tony要来中国学习汉语,下面是Tony给她发来的电子邮件的部分内容。请你根据所给内
容,以王梅的名义回复。
You know, in English, given names (名字) come first and family names (姓) come last. How about Chinese
names? And can you help me choose a Chinese name and tell me its meaning?
注意:(1)回复邮件须回答所给邮件内容中的两个问题,可适当发挥。
(2)回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名,所起名字只限于备选名字。
(3)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
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备选名字:王健(Wang Jian);李聪(Li Cong);张友好(Zhang Youhao)
Hi Tony,
I’m very happy to know that you’ll come to China to learn Chinese.
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Yours,
Wang Mei
12.(2023·山东滨州·统考中考真题)
假如你是李华,近日你的英国笔友Amy发来邮件,向你诉说她最近的困扰;自己体型微胖,想通过节
食减肥,以更美的面貌进入新的学校学习。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回封邮件,谈一谈你对这问
题的见解。
参考词汇: diet(v.节食), appearance (n.外貌), inner beauty (内在美)
Dear Li Hua,
I have been a bit larger than other girls since I was little. For a long time, this really troubled me. I feel more
worried because I will start my senior high school life soon! I am afraid that the students in the new school will
laugh at me because I am “big”. I decide to look more beautiful, so I want to lose weight by dieting. What do you
think of my plan? Can you give me some advice?
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Amy
要求:1.要点齐全,并适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名;
3.卷面整洁,书写美观,可适当加2—3分;
4.80词左右。开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Amy,
I have received and read your letter, in which you said you wanted to lose weight by dieting.
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13.(2022·广西河池·统考中考真题)
今年4月,教育部颁发了《义务教育劳动课程标准(2022年版)》。从2022年秋季学期起,多种劳
动技能将纳入中小学课程,引发同学们的热议和关注。假如你是李华,请根据下面内容对即将开设的
劳动课(labor classes)写一封信给校长,提出你的想法及建议。
1.感觉非常高兴及兴奋。从中可以学到一些劳动技能,学会照顾自己(learn some labor skills, look after)。
2.希望学校能提供给每班劳动课的场地。每周开课两节。由生活经验丰富的老师教授同学们如何做饭、种
菜……(补充两个内容)(provide ... for, with rich experience, teach)。
3.希望学校在期末举行各种劳动技能比赛;邀请家长们参观并分享劳动课成果(at the end of, hold, labor
achievements)。
写作要求:
1.不得使用真实姓名和学校名;
2.内容需包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
3.字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清晰;
4.词数100左右。(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。)
Dear headmaster,
My name is Li Hua. I’m in Class 6, Grade 8. It is said that we are going to have labor classes next term. All my
classmates are interested in it. I’m writing to you to share my ideas about the coming labor classes.
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That’s all my opinions. We’re looking forward to the classes. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
14.(2022·湖北十堰·统考中考真题)
假设你叫李华,即将从初中毕业。请你根据下面表格中的信息给校长写一封信,谈谈你对学校的一些
看法。
优点 不足
优秀的老师 课外活动少
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友好的同学 休息时间短
美丽的校园 ……
你的建议……
提示词:schoolyard校园
要求:1.短文应涵盖上述所有内容,可适当发挥。
2.行文连贯,条理清楚,语句通顺,书写规范。
3.不得在文中出现学校名称和人名。
4.词数80-100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总数。
Dear Mr./Ms. Headmaster,
I am writing to show my sincere gratitude to you for the progress I have made in the past three years.
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Best wishes.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
15.(2022·四川自贡·统考中考真题)
假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Mike来信说他在人际交往方面感到迷茫,希望得到你的帮助。请写封
回信,内容包括:
1. 表示理解和安慰;
2. 建议:正确认识自己的不足;处理好和父母的关系;处理好与同学、朋友之间的关系;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How’s everything going?
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Yours,
Li Hua
16.(2022·北京·统考中考真题)
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣,他给你发来邮件,询问中国人日常生活中
的基本社交礼仪,如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。请你用英语回复一封邮件,介绍你所知道的相关礼仪。
提示词语:manners, shake hands, polite, gift, chopsticks
提示问题:· What do we do when we meet people for the first time?
· How do we behave properly at table?
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners.
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I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
17.(2022·浙江金华·统考中考真题)
假如你是Li Hua,你的外国好友Frank来信告知他将成为你校七年级新生。请根据下列表格中的内容,
结合自己初中阶段学习、生活等方面的经历,回一封邮件,供他参考。
注意:1. 文中必须包含所给的内容要点,可适当发挥;参考词汇供选择使用;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数:80~100;
4. 邮件的格式及正文首句已给出,不计入总词数;正文首句仅供选择使用。
正文首句: I’m glad to know you’re coming to study in our school.
内容要点 参考词汇
Things needed notebook, dictionary,…
Attitude(态度)to take hard-working, active, happy,…
Relationship to develop respect, get along with,…
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Dear Frank,
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
18.(2022·浙江绍兴·统考中考真题)
假设你是刘军,在上周末的乡村旅游中,你发现了一些游客的不文明行为。请根据下表信息给某英文
报VOICE栏目的编辑写一封邮件,反映这些问题并提出建议。
Uncivilized behaviors Suggestions
● threw rubbish
● put rubbish
everywhere
into bins
● picked flowers
● …
● climbed trees
注意:
(1)邮件内容必须包括上表所有信息,可适当增加细节;
(2)你的建议至少两条;
(3)词数:80—100;
(4)邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:不文明行为uncivilized behavior;编辑editor
Dear editor,
I was shocked to see some uncivilized behaviors when I took a trip to a village last weekend.
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Yours sincerely,
Liu Jun
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