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第 25 讲 书面表达之提纲作文
（模拟精练+真题演练）
1.（2023·江苏宿迁·校联考一模）
习近平在讲话中引用李大钊的话说， “青年者，国家之魂”，“一个民族只有寄望青春、永葆青春
才能兴旺发达。” 作为青少年的我们，现行之重是当好学生。请以“How to Be a Good Student”为题，谈
谈我们应该怎样做，才能不负自己，不负时代赋予我们的责任。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含表格中的提示，可以自由发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，合理展开想象；
2. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
How to Be a Good Student
As teenagers, we should be good students at present. Then what should we do?
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How to be a good student?
As teenagers, we should be good students at present. Then what should we do?
First of all, listen to the teachers carefully in class. We can go over what we have learned as often as possible
and prepare for the new knowledge in time. Also, We can read different kinds of books in our free time.
Secondly, it is important for us to do some exercise and have a healthy diet. We should go to bed early and get
up early. Thirdly, We must obey school rules and traffic rules. Besides, we should behave politely in public. We
should always respect the old and care for the young.
What’s more, we should do some housework at home. And it is meaningful for us to work as volunteers in our
community.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要求已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接上文，表述在学习方面我们应如何做好；
第二步，表述在运动、个人安全及行为表现方面我们应该如何做好；
第三步，表述在其他方面我们应该如何做好。
[亮点词汇]
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①at present目前
②different kinds of不同种类的
③What’s more此外
[高分句型]
It is meaningful for us to work as as Volunteers in our community.（it作形式主语）
2.（2023·宁夏银川·校考模拟预测）
即将成为一名高中生的你，应该怎样完善自己而成为一名优秀的高中生呢？请你根据提示内容，以
“How to be an excellent high school students”为题，写一篇英语短文。
提示：1.develop good study habits
2.obey the school rules
3.love labor (劳动), learn basic life skills
4.be polite and friendly to others
要求：1.文中须包含提示内容中的各项；
2.至少补充一条自己的想法；
3.合理增加细节，以使行文连贯。
注意：1.词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数);
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
How to be an excellent high school student
I am going to be a senior high school student. And how to be an excellent high school student?
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How to be an excellent high school student
I am going to be a senior high school student. And how to be an excellent high school student?
Firstly, I must obey the school rules, going to school on time and never smoking. Secondly, as a high school
student, it’s important to have good study habits. I should listen to the teachers carefully in class and do some sports
to relax myself after school. Thirdly, I am going to communicate better with my teachers and classmates, be polite
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and friendly to others. Fourthly, at home I will try my best to help my parents do some housework, like doing the
dishes and cleaning the house when they are very tired every day. At last, I’ll protect the environment and take an
active part in the volunteer work as often as possible.
Following these suggestions, I believe I can be an excellent student.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先承接短文开头。
第二步，介绍自己要成为一名优秀的高中生该如何做。
第三步，总结全文，表明自己的美好愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①on time准时
②listen to听
③do some sports做一些运动
④communicate with与……沟通
⑤take an active part in积极参与
[高分句型]
①Secondly, as a high school student, it’s important to have good study habits.（it的固定句型）
②Fourthly, at home I will try my best to help my parents do some housework, like doing the dishes and cleaning
the house when they are very tired every day.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③At last, I’ll protect the environment and take an active part in the volunteer work as often as possible.（as often
as possible尽可能经常）
3.（2023·辽宁朝阳·校联考二模）
在过去的几年里，涌现出了很多为了梦想拼搏奋斗的人物。例如，圆梦航天，胜利返航的神舟十三号
的3名宇航员；开场失利，永不言弃，最终夺得亚洲杯冠军的中国女足运动员……正是这种对梦想执着追
求的精神，使得他们为祖国做出了突出贡献。作为新时代的青少年，你的梦想是什么？请以“My Dream”
为题，写一篇短文。
要点：1.你的梦想是什么？
2.原因是什么？
3.为此你会怎么做？
注意：1.词数90左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不允许出现自己的真实姓名和学校。
My Dream
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My Dream
Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor.
When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me
and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I am very healthy. Since then I have
hoped to become a doctor. In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much
as possible and help them out of danger. To be a doctor is really good. I think my dream will come true one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的梦想是什么；
第二步，介绍自己为什么有这个梦想；
第三步，介绍为梦想可以做什么。
[亮点词汇]
①cheered sb. up使某人振作起来
②in order to为了
[高分句型]
①When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors.（when引导时间状语从句）
②I think my dream will come true one day.（省略that的宾语从句）
4. （2023·辽宁盘锦·校联考三模）
拥有健康的体魄在我们的日常生活中尤为重要。某校园英文网站以“How to live a healthy life”为题征文，
请从运动、饮食、睡眠、心态等方面提出建议，呼吁同学们关爱自己的健康。
要求：
1.内容符合题目要求，词数80-100；
2语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
How to live a healthy life
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How to live a healthy life
As the saying goes, “You don’t know what health is until you lose it.” So it is very important to live a healthy
life. Here is my advice.
First, you should do more exercise to build up your body. Maybe running in the morning is a good choice. At
the same time, you’d better get enough sleep during the night. You are supposed to go to bed early and get up early.
Staying up late is harmful to your health. And then it’s a good idea to keep a balanced diet and develop a good
eating habit. For example, it’s necessary to eat some fruit and vegetables every day. More importantly, holding an
active and optimistic attitude toward life is rather important. Whenever you are in trouble, you can try to
communicate with your parents and learn to relax.
All in all, I hope everyone can pay more attention to health and everyone can benefit from healthy living
habits.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中如何过健康的生活的介绍要点， 适当添
加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，借用“简单介绍如何过健康的生活”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“运动、饮食、睡眠、心态等”几个方面重点介绍如何过健康的生活的具
体情况；
第三步，书写结语：希望每个人都能更加关注健康，每个人都可以从健康的生活习惯中受益。。
[亮点词汇]
①do exercise做锻炼
②build up one’s body强健体魄
③go to bed上床睡觉
[高分句型]
①First, you should do more exercise to build up your body.（to do不定式作目的状语）
②Staying up late is harmful to your health.（动名词作主语）
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5. （2023·吉林长春·长春市解放大路学校校考模拟预测）
初三的生活是具有挑战性的，我们可能面临各种困难。如：沟通问题，学业压力、健康问题等。假如
你是李华，值此毕业之际，你校英语社团公众号计划做一期主题为“学长学姐有话说”的推送。请你
根据下列要点用英语给八年级的学弟学妹们写一则寄语。不少于40词。
要点：1. 看法；
2. 建议；
3. 寄语。
要求：要点齐全；表达通顺； 简洁得体。
Dear 8th-graders,
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Dear 8th-graders,
How time flies! Now I am graduating from our school. In Grade 9, I have learnt a lot. Although it was hard, I
made great progress in my grades. I thank my ninth grade life, which helps me grow up. At the moment, I would
like to share my experience of school life with you.
It is not enough to just study hard. There are some good ways to improve our study. Different subjects need
different ways. But one thing in common is taking notes carefully in class, and review them after class. Another
thing is asking questions during or after class. Besides, don’t be afraid of making mistakes, try to learn from
mistakes. You should also exercise more and keep healthy because it is the most important thing for you.
Wish you all the best.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示内容给八年级的学弟学妹们写一则寄语。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己对九年级生活的看法；
第三步，向八年级的学弟学妹们介绍学习的一些建议；
第四步，表达希望。
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[亮点词汇]
①make progress取得进步
②grow up成长
③in common共同的
④be afraid of doing sth.害怕做某事
[高分句型]
①Although it was hard, I made great progress in my grades.(although引导的让步状语从句)
②I thank my ninth grade life, which helps me grow up.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
6. （2023·福建福州·福建省福州第十六中学校联考模拟预测）
假如你是李华，上周末你们学校组织学生去一所盲人学校帮助盲人学生。你受学生会委托为校宣传栏
“英语天地”写一篇短文介绍此次活动，并谈谈感受。词数80左右。
Time last weekend
Place at a blind school
Activities do the cleaning, read books, play games...
Feeling(s) ...
注意事项：
1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚， 表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
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Last weekend the students from our school volunteered to help the blind students at a blind school.
We started by helping the blind students do the cleaning. After that, we read some interesting books to them.
We were lost in the books and communication with them so that we nearly forgot the time. After lunch, we played
games with them. But with time going by, we had to say goodbye to our new friends in the afternoon.
Many students said they were happy that they could offer help to those who badly needed it. In return, the blind
students also taught them how to face difficulties in a positive way.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是记叙文，为材料作文；
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② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：材料所给内容不得遗漏，注意“感受部分”需自行阐述。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明活动的时间、地点、人物；
第二步，详细介绍活动的具体内容；
第三步，写出活动后感受。
[亮点词汇]
① volunteer to do sth. 自愿做某事
② in return 作为回报
③ time going by 时间在流逝
[高分句型]
① We were lost in the books and communication with them so that we nearly forgot the time.（so that引导结果状
语从句）
② Many students said they were happy that they could offer help to those who badly needed it.（宾语从句、原因
状语从句）
7．（2023·重庆大渡口·统考二模）
人生中有很多第一次，如第一次学游泳，第一次跟家人外出旅行， 第一次做家务，第一次赢得比赛
等，一定有一次让你记忆深刻。请以“The First Time I ________.”为题，用英语写一篇短文说说你的某个
第一次经历及感受。
要求：
1. 将题目补充完整。
2. 80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
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The First Time I made dumplings
I can always get the high mark in the exam, so I am very confident that I can do everything well, but the
experience of making dumplings for the first time changes my idea.
Last Sunday, mother asked me to make dumplings with her. Originally, I thought it was just a piece of cake for
me. With her showing me step by step, I followed her as she showed me, but soon I found my dumplings could not
cover well. I tried another one, still the same. Never had I felt so discouraged. Noticing my embarrassment, my
mother smiled and said practice made perfect. Then I tried again and again. My efforts paid off at last and I made a
perfect dumpling. I was glad that I had learned a new skill.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
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时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意根据提示要点适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图借用“我人生中第一次包饺子”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述第一次包饺子的过程；
第三步，书写结语，表达我很高兴学会了包饺子。
[亮点词汇]
①a piece of cake小菜一碟
②step by step一步一步地
③practice made perfect熟能生巧
[高分句型]
①Never had I felt so discouraged. （倒装句）
②I can always get the high mark in the exam, so I am very confident that I can do everything well, but the
experience of making dumplings for the first time changes my idea.（so...that...句型）
8.（2023·福建南平·校联考模拟预测）
国家提出将 “劳动教育（labor education）”纳入中小学国家课程方案，请结合自身的劳动经历，谈
谈你对劳动教育的看法。内容包括：
你对劳动教育的看法 be good for health; relax from the hard study...
at home: do the dishes...
你自身的劳动经历及感受
at school: clean the classroom...
你对劳动教育课程的建议 offer different kinds of labor classes; hold competitions about labor skills ...
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
2. 短文必须包含表格内所有信息，可适当发挥；语句通顺，意思连贯,书书工整；
3. 词数：80词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
It’s reported that labor education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in
China. I think
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It’s reported that labor education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in
China. I think it is good for our health. We can relax from the hard study by doing labor.
I often do labor at home. For example, I do the dishes, sweep the floor and take out the rubbish. At school I
often clean the classroom and water flowers. I really feel happy.
I have some ideas about the course. The school can offer different kinds of labor classes. It can also hold
competitions about labor skills. They will make our school life more colorful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示内容谈谈对劳动教育的看法，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍你对劳动教育的看法；
第二步，介绍你自身的劳动经历及感受；
第三步，介绍你对劳动教育课程的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for对……有好处
②do the dishes洗碗
③different kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
We can relax from the hard study by doing labor.(动名词作宾语)
9．（2023·福建三明·统考模拟预测）
近年来中学生身体健康越来越受到重视。假定你是李华，你校英语校报正在开展主题为“我运动，我健
康”的征文比赛。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向校报投稿。
内容包括：
1. 你的运动方式（两种）；
2. 你对运动的看法：（1）增强体质；（2）缓解压力；（3）……。
注意：
1. 所写内容应包括以上要点，内容连贯，并进行合理拓展；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 词数80左右。
As students, we can do different kinds of sports after class.
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【答案】例文
As students, we can do different kinds of sports after class. As for me, I think walking is good for health. I
often walk on the playground for half an hour. Another sports that I like is playing football. I often play it with my
friends after school. It is very interesting.
There is no doubt that doing sports is helpful for us. It can not only build up our bodies but also help keep us
healthy and strong. What’s more, when we feel stressed, we can do some sports to relax ourselves. The most
important is that we can make friends when we do sports. I met my best friend when I once played football on the
playground.
Let’s do more sports. In this way, we can be healthy and happy every day.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：这是一篇材料作文，为议论文；
② 时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作内容包括自己的两种运动方式、对运动的三点看法（即好处）。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的两种运动方式；
第二步，介绍对于运动的三点看法，即运动的好处；
第三步，呼吁多运动，保持健康。
[亮点词汇]
① as for me 对我来说
② build up our bodies 锻炼我们的身体
③ relax ourselves 放松自己
④ in this way 用这种方法
[高分句型]
There is no doubt that doing sports is helpful for us.（同位语从句）
10．（2023·重庆大渡口·统考一模）
假如你是李平，你校英语校报正在开展“Good ways to spend your free time.”的征文活动。请结合下表
所列活动方式和你的亲身经历，选择2—3项展开描述， 并简单说明理由，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
要求：
1. 80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 活动方式与内容均可结合自身实际进行适当拓展；
3. 文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；
参考信息：
Good Ways to Spend Your Free Time
◆do housework ◆have a picnic
◆do sports ◆read books
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◆take photos ◆watch movies
◆…
As we know, we have more free time after school now. But what are the good ways to spend it?
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【答案】例文
As we know, we have more free time after school now. But what are the good ways to spend it?
As for me, doing sports is the best way. It’s not only good for our health, but also free ourselves from a long
day’s hard work. So every evening, I play table tennis with my parents. We really enjoy it.
Since I was a kid, I have dreamt about being a writer. However, I didn’t have enough time to practise my
writing. But now I can spend hours reading at weekends and try writing some short stories online. What fun!
All in all, I feel so glad that we have more time to live a richer and happier life now.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数
要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，结合你的亲身经历介绍放松的好方式——运动；
第二步，结合你的亲身经历介绍放松的好方式——阅读；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also…不仅……而且……
②dream about doing sth梦想做某事
③spend time doing sth花时间做什么
④be worth doing sth值得做某事
⑤try doing sth尝试做某事
[高分句型]
①All in all, I feel so glad that we have more time to live a richer and happier life now.（结果状语从句）
11．（2023·四川凉山·模拟预测）
2012年7月24日，中办国办印发《关于进一步减轻义务教育阶段学生作业负担和校外培训负担的意
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见》。《意见》一经出台，在教育界引起了轩然大波。一时间，学生和家长们对轻松的学业反而不知
所措。请你根据以下提示，就实施双减政策后学生如何规划自己的学习和课余生活写一篇短文。
要求: 1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺；
2. 短文应包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译。
3. 词数80左右。文章开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
双减政策下学生如何规划自己的学习和课余生活
1. 充分利用在校时间。
在校 2. 提高课堂听课效率。
3. 及时向老师和同学寻求帮助，解决学习问题。
1. 培养兴趣爱好。
2. 坚持阅读书籍和运动。
在家
3. 参与家务劳动。
4. 制定每日学习计划。
你的感受 ……
It’s really a wonderful news that the policy of “double-lightening the burden” has been carried out.
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It’s really a wonderful news that the policy of “double-lightening the burden” has been carried out. However,
we students have to deal with the new challenge of making the best of our time after school. Here are some ways to
help us get used to this big change.
On the one hand, we’d better make full use of the time at school. We are supposed to listen to teachers more
carefully than before and take notes of key points in class. Then it’s important and necessary to ask our teachers or
classmates for help whenever we have trouble in our study.
On the other hand, going home early does not mean that we can play freely. Firstly, we are supposed to take up
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some healthy and meaningful hobbies to enrich our after-school life. Secondly, we should keep reading and
exercising every day. Lastly, it’s a good idea to offer to help around the house.
In addition, making a good plan at the start of the day can help us better use our time. In this way, we can feel
more focused, so that we will be able to finish our schoolwork more effectively. Hopefully, the policy of “double-
lightening the burden” will surely relieve our study pressure and help us grow up healthily and happily.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，提出双减政策下应该如何规划学习和课余生活；
第二步，在校应当充分利用时间、认真听课、及时寻求帮助；
第三步，在家应当培养兴趣爱好、坚持阅读和运动、参与家务；
第四步，提出制定学习计划并总结。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with处理
②get used to习惯
③On the one hand..., on the other hand...一方面……另一方面……
④be supposed to do应该做某事
⑤take up继续、开始从事
⑥offer to do主动做某事
⑦in addition另外
[高分句型]
①Then it’s important and necessary to ask our teachers or classmates for help whenever we have trouble in our
study.（状语从句：由whenever引导时间状语从句）
②On the other hand, going home early does not mean that we can play freely.（宾语从句：由that引导宾语从
句）
③In this way, we can feel more focused, so that we will be able to finish our schoolwork more effectively.（状语
从句：由so that引导目的状语从句）
12．（2023·陕西西安·校考模拟预测）
健康对我们每个人来说都是最为重要的，但是怎样保持健康呢？你知道哪些可以帮助我们保持健康的
生活习惯吗？请根据所给提示谈一谈如何在日常生活中保持健康。
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Dos:
1.多吃蔬菜、水果；
2.有规律地（regularly）运动并且运动后适量喝水；
3.充足的睡眠……
Don’ts:
1.吃太多垃圾食品（junk food）；
2.熬夜，太过劳累……
要求：（1）短文需包括提示内容并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名等个人信息；
（3）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（4）字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，条理清楚。
How to stay healthy
Health is the most important thing for all of us. In order to stay healthy,
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【答案】例文
How to stay healthy
Health is the most important thing for all of us. In order to stay healthy, I’d like to share some of my ideas.
First, we should keep a balanced diet. It’s a must for us to stay away from food that is rich in oil and fat.
Instead, fruit and vegetables, containing a lot of nutrients, can benefit us. Don’t eat too much junk food because it is
bad for us.
Second, taking regular exercise is necessary. It is sure to make us stronger. Also, remember to drink some
water after doing sports instead of soft drinks.
Third, enough sleep is of great importance. We shouldn’t stay up late or be too tired.
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All in all, let’s make a change from small things and live a healthy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以How to stay healthy为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍保持健康是重要的；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“饮食、运动、睡眠”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①keep a balanced diet保持均衡饮食
②stay away from远离
③be bad for对……有害
④instead of而不是
[高分句型]
①It’s a must for us to stay away from food that is rich in oil and fat.（that引导的定语从句）
②Don’t eat too much junk food because it is bad for us.（because引导的原因状语从句）
13．（2023·甘肃武威·校考模拟预测）
“少年智则国智，少年强则国强”，请根据下图提示写一篇短文，描述作为青少年的你们将如何成长，
并说明原因或目的。
develop some
build up our bodies 骑 自 行
跳舞 interests；
by...; 车
画画 make ourselves
keep healthy… 打篮球
fully developed
help parents do
打 扫 卫
housework;
生 ? 请补充
learn to be
遛狗
independent
要求：
1) 除提示中的内容外，请你至少再补充一条；
2）语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范，可适当发挥；
3) 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
4) 80 词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
As teenagers, we are the future of our homeland. We should develop ourselves fully. But how? Here is my
opinion.
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【答案】例文：
As teenagers, we are the future of our homeland. We should develop ourselves fully. But how? Here is my
opinion.
Basically, we should build up our bodies by taking some exercise, doing some sports, such as running,
swimming, playing basketball and so on. In this way, we can keep ourselves strong and healthy. What’s more,
developing some interests is a good way to make ourselves fully developed. We can learn to play the piano, sing
songs, dance, collect stamps, draw pictures and so on. As a saying says, “you can never learn too much.”
In addition, I think it’s our duty to do some housework at home. We should help do some cleaning, water the
flowers or walk the dog. Then our parents can live an easier life. Also, by doing this, we can learn to be
independent and get ourselves well prepared for the future life.
If we do these things well, we will be able to grow up as a fully developed person.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出“少年智则国智，少年强则国强”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，描述作为青少年的你们将如何成长，从“运动、学习、生活”等方面阐述；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的想法和期待。
[亮点词汇]
①build up增强
②as a saying says俗话说
③get well prepare for为……做好准备
[高分句型]
①In addition, I think it’s our duty to do some housework at home.（宾语从句）
②If we do these things well, we will be able to grow up as a fully developed person.（if引导的条件状语从句）
14．（2023·甘肃陇南·模拟预测）
暑假悄然而至，在这个期待已久的假期中，你想要做什么？Jim正在考虑他的假期，他打算找一份工
作，如果他找到工作，就能赚到一些钱，买衣服、买书籍、买音乐光盘、上网球课……
请你以Jim的语气写一份自己的暑假计划，注意使用if引导的条件状语从句。
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I’m thinking about what I’m going to do.
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I’m thinking about what I’m going to do. Maybe I’ll get a job. If I get a job, I will have some money to buy
some new things. Maybe I’m going to buy some new clothes when I start school again in September. I can buy
some books or some music CDs. I really love jazz. If I get some money, I will buy some more CDs for my jazz
collection. Or I can use the money to take tennis lessons. I play tennis well, but I’d like to play it better.
Do you agree with my plan?
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示，以Jim的语气写一份自己的暑假计划。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍自己的假期计划；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①play tennis打网球
②agree with同意某人的看法
[高分句型]
①If I get a job, I will have some money to buy some new things.(if引导的条件状语从句)
②I’m going to buy some new clothes when I start school again in September. (when引导的时间状语从句)
15．（2023·内蒙古·统考中考真题）
“绿色”不仅仅是一种颜色，也意味着一种低碳环保的生活方式。请以“My Greener Life”为题，为学
校的英语报刊写一篇征文。
要点：
1. What do you usually do to live a greener life? （rubbish, bicycle. . .）
2. What have you learned from it? /What are the changes in your life?
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3. What are you going to do in the future?
要求：
1. 文章应包括所有要点并围绕要点适当发挥；
2. 文章应句式多样，语句流畅，意思连贯；
3. 词数90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息；
2. 不许抄袭、套改。
My Greener Life
Green is more than just a colour. It also means a kind of greener life.
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【答案】例文
My Greener Life
Green is more than just a colour. It also means a kind of greener life. It is necessary for us to have a greener
life. As for me, I want to be a greener person. I often walk or ride bicycles to school every day instead of taking a
bus or a taxi. I remember to turn off the lights when I leave rooms. I never throw away the rubbish everywhere.
Thanks for the greener lifestyle, I have learned the importance of environment protection. it helps us save
energy, reduce pollution and waste. Besides, I’ve also got a lot of knowledge about it such as how to sort rubbish,
how to keep a greener diet and so on. My greener life makes me healthier and happier than before.
As teenagers, we should have green living habits. On one hand, I will do little things from myself. On the
other hand, I will call on more people around me to have a greener life. What’s more, I will make posters or give
lectures even set up a greener club one day.
Only in these ways, can we build a greener and civilized society.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的
逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
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第一步，阐述自己如何过绿色生活；
第二步，介绍从环保生活学到了什么；
第三步，介绍未来如何做等；
第四步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of代替
②on one hand...on the other hand一方面……另一方面……
③call on呼吁
[高分句型]
① I remember to turn off the lights when I leave rooms.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Only in these ways, can we build a greener and civilized society.（倒装句）
16．（2023·西藏·统考中考真题）
在全民阅读的浪潮中，阅读已成为我们生活中的一部分，青少年应该养成阅读习惯，以“Enjoy
Reading”为题写一篇英语短文。
Kinds （种类）
W story books, newspapers...
hat? Favorite （最喜欢的）
My favorite is...
Reasons （原因）
W
be interested in
Enjoy hy?
get knowledge and open eyes
reading
Time （时间）: on weekends, in free
time
H Places （地点）: at school, in the
ow? library
Ways （方式）: on the Internet, on
paper
写作要求:
1）词数不少于70词，短文的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2）语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确；
3）写作要点齐全，可适当发挥；
4）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。
Enjoy Reading
Reading has become one of the most important parts in my daily life.
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【答案】例文：
Enjoy Reading
Reading has become one of the most important parts in my daily life.
I like story books and newspapers. My favorite book is Journey to the West. Because I am interested in
watching Sun Wukong beating bad people. Whenever I see Sun Wukong win, I am very excited. Besides, reading is
also a good way to make me get knowledge and open my eyes. I usually read on weekends or in my free time.
Sometimes I read in the library. I like to read on the Internet because there are a lot of books there. I am used to
writing some good sentences on paper.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己喜欢什么种类的书以及自己最喜欢的书；
第二步，介绍自己喜欢读书的原因；
第三步，介绍自己读书的时间、地点和方式。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②a good way to do做某事的好方法
③be used to doing习惯做某事
[高分句型]
①Whenever I see Sun Wukong win, I am very excited. (whenever引导让步状语从句)
②I like to read on the Internet because there are a lot of books there. (because引导原因状语从句)
17．（2023·内蒙古呼和浩特·统考中考真题）
你校将举办以“自我提升”为主题的英文征文活动，请你写一篇文章分享自我提升的四种方法。
内容包括：1. 运动；2. 读书；3. ……；4. ……
要求：1. 需写出适当的开头和结尾；
2. 要点齐全，语言流畅，书写规范，可适当增加细节；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等；
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4. 词数80—100左右。
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【答案】例文
Life is really a long lesson, so I have to improve myself. Here are my ideas.
First, I can do sports, such as swimming and running because it can build up my body. Besides, it’s necessary
to spend time reading books. Reading makes me wise as well as open my eyes. What’s more, I help my parents do
housework. I share my parents’ work and learn some life skills. Finally, doing volunteer work is a good choice. It
makes me a person of responsibility.
I make it that way and my life is bright, happy and meaningful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：文章主要以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据提示内容分享自我提升的四种方法，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍如何进行自我提升；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②as well as也
[高分句型]
①First, I can do sports, such as swimming and running because it can build up my body.(because引导的原因状语
从句)
②Finally, doing volunteer work is a good choice.(动名词作主语)
18．（2023·湖北荆门·中考真题）
我国于今年5月30日成功发射神州十六号载人飞船。航天员乘组中的载荷专家桂海潮从小就有一个航
天梦，并不断在为实现梦想而努力。假如你是李华，请根据以下要点，号召大家向桂海潮学习，通过
努力实现梦想。
要点：
1. 努力学习各种知识， 丰富大脑；
2. 积极参加体育锻炼，增强体质；
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3. 勇于面对不同挑战，永不放弃；
4. 乐于寻求他人帮助，学会合作；
5. 你的看法……
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名或地名；
2. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 要点齐全，内容可适当发挥；
4. 词数：100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：发射 launch （v. ）；丰富大脑 enrich one’s mind；乐于 be willing to do；合作 cooperate（v.）
Dear teenagers,
I’m Li Hua from Jingmen. China launched the Shenzhou-16 successfully on May 30th this year. One of the
astronauts Gui Haichao is our model. As teenagers, we can learn a lot from him to realize our dream.
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【答案】例文
Dear teenagers,
I’m Li Hua from Jingmen. China launched the Shenzhou-16 successfully on May 30th this year. One of the
astronauts Gui Haichao is our model. As teenagers, we can learn a lot from him to realize our dream.
If we want to realize our dreams, first of all, we should work hard to learn all kinds of knowledge to enrich our
brains. Second, we should take an active part in physical exercise to build up our body. The body is the root of
everything. Third, we must be brave enough to face different challenges and never give up. Finally, when you are in
trouble, be willing to ask others for help. Besides, it is important to learn to cooperate with others.
In my opinion, we need a firm heart if we want to realize our dreams. We should have a strong sense of
purpose and work hard to do it step by step.
The Students’ Union
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写
作重点。
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[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出；
第二步，根据要点提示具体阐述努力实现梦想需要做的事情；
第三步，最后表达个人观点。
[亮点词汇]
①all kinds of各种各样的
②take an active part in积极参与
③never give up永不放弃
④in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
①If we want to realize our dreams, first of all, we should work hard to learn all kinds of knowledge to enrich our
brains.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②Finally, when you are in trouble, be willing to ask others for help.（when引导的时间状语从句）
19．（2023·辽宁阜新·统考中考真题）
根据要求完成作文。
“读书破万卷，下笔如有神。”阅读不仅能让我们获得知识，而且能开阔我们的眼界。在科技发达的
时代，人们有多种多样的阅读方式，比如看纸质书、报纸和杂志，在线阅读或者使用 app听书等。你最喜
欢哪一种阅读方式呢？请以“My favorite way of reading”为题写一篇英文短文。
提示词语：e-book, environment, convenient, download, search for information
提示问题：
1. What’s the importance of reading?
2. What’s your favorite way of reading?
3. Why do you choose this way? (至少写出2点理由)
要求：
1. 紧扣主题，语言连贯，语法正确，书写规范。
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名与人名，词数在60—80词左右。
My favorite way of reading
Today, reading has become an important part of everyday life.
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【答案】例文
My favorite way of reading
Today, reading has become an important part of everyday life. As people’s living standard is improving
constantly, reading has won the hearts of most people. The more books we read, the wiser we’ll become. There are
many kinds of reading ways, such as newspapers, magazines, e-books, etc.
Compared with reading e-books, reading paper books is my favorite. Firstly, reading in the libraries and taking
away books back home are simple and everyone can do it. Secondly, paper books do less harm to our eyes if we use
the proper positions. I feel relaxed after looking through some interesting comic books and storybooks. Thirdly,
paper books can be reused over and over again if they are kept well. Moreover, we can take down some useful
notes and make learning marks while reading easily.
As the saying goes that “reading is the education in a classroom that has no walls”. Let’s start to read a
meaningful book.
例文
My favorite way of reading
Today, reading has become an important part of everyday life. Reading not only provides us with endless
knowledge, but also makes us understand what’s going on around the world. With the rapid development of modern
technology, our reading ways have changed a lot. There are many kinds of reading ways, such as newspapers,
magazines, e-books, etc.
I like reading e-books best. First, we can easily download new books from the Internet. It is much easier and
quicker to search for the messages we want to read. And we can also write notes or mark some important
information in an e-book. Moreover, a number of e-books can be stored in a small machine, which is easy to take.
Last but not least, e-books save a lot of paper and are good for the environment.
In short, no matter which way you choose, I hope you can feel the joy of reading.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍读书的重要性；
第二步，介绍你最喜欢的阅读方式；
第三步，介绍为什么选择这种方式。
[亮点词汇]
①take down 记下
②do harm to对……有害
③the 比较级, the 比较级 越……，越……
[高分句型]
①There are many kinds of reading ways, such as newspapers, magazines, e-books, etc.（There be句型）
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② Let’s start to read a meaningful book.（祈使句）
20．（2023·四川乐山·统考中考真题）
2022年1月生效的《家庭教育促进法》规定：未成年人的父母或其他监护人应该重视家庭教育，关心孩子
身心健康。对于此规定，作为学生的你有话想说。请你给校英语专栏写一篇短文，对父母提出建议并表明
观点。内容包括：
1. 多花时间陪我们，如教做家务、一起玩耍等；
2. 帮助我们养成好的习惯；
3. 常与我们沟通谈心；
4. 信任我们并保护我们的隐私。
注意：
1. 词数80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。
参考词汇：physical and mental health身心健康；privacy n.隐私
According to the law “Family Education Promotion”, parents or other guardians of minors should be
responsible for family education. It asks parents to pay attention to children’s physical and mental health. Here are
my suggestions for parents.
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【答案】参考范文
According to the Law “Family Education Promotion”, parents or other guardians of minors should be
responsible for family education. It asks parents to pay attention to children’s physical and mental health. Here are
my suggestions for parents.
First of all, I think parents should spend more time with us. For example, parents can teach us to do housework
and play with us in spare time. Second, parents should help us to get into good habits, such as eating healthy food,
doing sports and so on. What’s more, parents had better communicate with us more often. That’s because some
misunderstandings are caused by lack of communication. Finally, I hope parents can trust us and protect our
privacy. We children need more personal space.
In my opinion, we can work together to understand and respect each other so that we can make progress.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；
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②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示的要点逐个进行阐述，对父母提出建议，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，表明自己的观点并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①get into good habits养成良好的习惯
②had better do sth最好做某事
③communicate with sb和某人交流
④lack of……的缺乏
[高分句型]
①First of all, I think parents should spend more time with us.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）
②That’s because some misunderstandings are caused by lack of communication.（because引导的表语从句）
③In my opinion, we can work together to understand and respect each other so that we can make progress.（so that
引导的结果状语从句）
21.（2023·广西·统考中考真题）
艺术充满魅力，艺术课使校园生活丰富多彩。你校英文周刊以“My favourite art course”为题向同学们
征稿。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 学校开设的艺术课（如音乐、绘画、舞蹈、书法、戏剧等）；
2. 你最喜欢的一门艺术课及其开课情况（如上课时间、活动等）；
3. 喜欢的理由。
注意：
1. 词数为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：art course（艺术课），painting（n.绘画），calligraphy（n.书法），drama（n.戏剧）
My favourite art course
Art courses are important at school.
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【答案】例文：
My favourite art course
Art courses are important in school. We have many art classes in our school, such as music, painting, dance,
calligraphy, drama and so on. However, my favorite art class is painting.
I attend three classes a week which are held on Mondays, Wednesdays and Thursdays from 4 p.m. to 5 p.m.
Our school holds a painting competition on June 30 every year.
I enjoy painting because it brings me happiness. With my crayons, I can paint a vibrant world and anything
that catches my fancy. Additionally, drawing allows me to express my emotions through pictures when words fail
me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给的要点提示，介绍最喜欢的一门艺术课，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，并点明自己最喜欢的艺术课是绘画；
第二步，具体介绍课程、活动的安排；
第三步，介绍自己喜欢绘画的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②from...to...从……到……
③allow sb to do允许某人做某事
[高分句型]
①I attend three classes a week which are held on Mondays, Wednesdays and Thursdays from 4 p.m. to 5 p.m.
(which引导的限制性定语从句)
②I enjoy painting because it brings me happiness.(because引导的原因状语从句)
③Additionally, drawing allows me to express my emotions through pictures when words fail me.(when引导的时
间状语从句)
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