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细节的增添与润色
1.列举具体的实例进行补充说明
(1)我们青少年应尽我们所能保护环境、拯救地球。
We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.
→We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example,
we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, refuse to use single-use products,
plant more trees and save water and energy(我们可以用可回收袋代替塑料袋,拒绝使用
一次性产品,种植更多的树木,节约水和能源).
(2)我要花一些时间和父母在一起。
I’ll spend some time staying with my parents.
→I’ll spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some
housework(与他们聊天和做一些家务).
(3)我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。
I would like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me.
→I would like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me.If possible, we can
travel together or share traveling experiences(如果可能的话,我们可以一起旅行或者分享
旅行经历).
2.增添与所写信息相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容
我发现了一些不良行为。
I found some bad behavior.
→I found some bad behavior.Some people scribbled on the wall, some people played
soccer on the lawn and some people threw rubbish everywhere(有些人在墙上乱涂乱画,
有些人在草坪上踢足球,有些人到处扔垃圾).
3.增加相关信息的时间、地点等内容
(1)我要和父母一起去超市购物。
I’m going to do some shopping with my parents in the supermarket.
→I’m going to do some shopping with my parents in the supermarket and won’t be back until
about 5:00 in the afternoon(直到下午五点左右才回来).
(2)我已经带来了你让我归还的这两本书。
I have brought with me the two books you asked me to return.→I have brought with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library(去市图书
馆).
4.适当增加与所给信息相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容
(1)假设你是李华, 你的英国笔友Henry最近来信询问你高考后的暑假安排。请根据下面要
点写一封回信, 说明你的计划, 并简述理由。
要点: a.休息; b.读书; c.参加社会活动。
①I need a good rest.I’ll do some reading.
→I need a good rest because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years(因为
经过所有这些年的辛苦工作,我确实感到累).Of course, I’ll do some reading for fun, and for
knowledge as well(为了乐趣也为了知识).
②I’ll take part in some social activities.
→If I have free time(如果我有时间), I’ll take part in some social activities.
→If possible(如果可能的话), I’ll take part in some social activities.(条件状语)
→I’ll take part in some social activities so that/in order that I can know more about
society(为了更好地了解社会).
(2)Tracy来电话说和你在博尔顿咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)的见面取消。
Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee.
→Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee as she had something
important to do (因为她有重要的事情做).
5.结尾适当发挥, 写出个人感受、评价、希望、愿景、倡议等
(1)Tired as I was this summer holiday, I felt very happy for what I did.(个人感受)
(2)As far as I’m concerned, such activities are necessary and meaningful.(评价)
(3)In a word, if she would like to learn Chinese, I hope she will do it well.(愿景)
(4)As students, it’s our duty to protect our school environment and make it clean.(倡议)
【拓展训练】
假如你是班长, 你们学校本周日将组织一次参观首都博物馆的活动, 请你写一个通知。
相关内容如下:
安排:
1.上午8:00 在学校大门口集合, 集体乘车去首都博物馆;
2.上午8:40 在导游的带领下参观首都博物馆;
3.中午12:00 参观结束, 集体乘车返回学校。要求:
1.参观过程中请自觉遵守公共秩序;
2.馆内禁止录像和开闪光灯拍照;
3.参观后每人写一篇日记。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.通知的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear students,
Attention, please.
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
【综合演练】
1．假如你是李华，收到外国朋友Tom的来信，信中说他正在学习中文古诗词，感觉很困
难。请回一封信，内容包括：
1.学习方法建议；
2. 鼓励 Tom。
注意： 1.词数80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
_______________________________________________________________________________
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__________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2．假定你是李华，交换生Terry在你校成语闯关比赛(Idiom Challenge Competition)中荣获
二等奖，请你给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括：
1. 向他表示祝贺；2. 肯定他的付出。注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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3．假定你是李华，你校上周五邀请专家做了题为“Artificial Intelligence and Our Life”的讲
座。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 时间和地点；
2. 讲座内容；
3. 收获和启发。
注意：
1. 写作词数为80个左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
A lecture on Artificial Intelligence and Our Life
_______________________________________________________________________________
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________________________________________________________
4．假定你是李华，校学生会将组织一次爱心捐赠活动(a charity donation activity)。请你用
英语为本次活动写一则书面通知。内容包括：
1. 活动时间和地点；
2. 活动内容；
3. 号召参加。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
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5．2024年是中国农历龙年。假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Julia正在学习汉语，她来信说
她对“龙”的寓意非常感兴趣。请你给她回信，内容包括：
1. 给予鼓励；
2. 介绍“龙”的象征意义。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为100左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Julia,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．假如你是校学生会成员李华，为号召大家积极参与节约用水活动，请你代表学生会发出
一份倡议书，内容包括：
(1)发出倡议的原因和目的；
(2)浪费用水的现象和节约用水的方法；
(3)发出倡议。注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear schoolmates,
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The Student Union
参考答案
1．Dear Tom,
I am sorry to hear that you were in low spirits after you did not do well in your learning
Chinese poems. What was worse, you lost heart and no longer studied as hard as before.
Actually we always meet problems in learning Chinese poems, which are the essence of
Chinese culture. However, why don't you take an active attitude towards the temporary trouble ?
By encouraging ourseleves and reading more poems loudly, we will find the sense of language so
that we could no longer feel it challenging.
Just as the old saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only with more practice can we
harvest/reap the fruit of success.
Yours
Lihua
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Tom回信，就他学习中文古
诗词的困难给与建议。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
情绪低落：in low spirits → in a bad mood
更糟糕的是：what was worse→ worse still
事实上：actually→ in fact
困难的：challenging → difficult2.句式拓展
倒装句变强调句
原句：Only with more practice can we harvest/reap the fruit of success.
拓展句：It is only with more practice that we can harvest/reap the fruit of success.
【高分句型1】Actually we always meet problems in learning Chinese poems, which are the
essence of Chinese culture.（运用了which 引导非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】By encouraging ourseleves and reading more poems loudly, we will find the
sense of language so that we could no longer feel it challenging.（运用了动名词作宾语以及so
that引导的目的状语从句）
【高分句型3】Only with more practice can we harvest/reap the fruit of success.（运用了
“Only +状语”引起的部分倒装）
2．Dear Terry,
I'm writing to extend my warmest congratulations to you for your outstanding performance
in Idiom Challenge Competition, where you were awarded the second prize.
Your achievement is truly commendable, and it reflects your hard work and dedication
towards this competition. It is evident that you have put in a large amount of effort to master the
idioms and their meanings. Your success is a testament to your perseverance and commitment to
excellence.
Once again, congratulations on your well-deserved accomplishment ! I am confident that
this recognition will motivate you to continue striving for greatness in your future study. Keep up
the fantastic work, Terry!
Best
wishes! Yours
sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。交换生Terry在考生所在学校的成语闯关比赛
(Idiom Challenge Competition)中荣获二等奖，请考生给他写一封祝贺信。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
表达：extend→express比赛：competition→match
明显的：evident→apparent
激励：motivate→inspire
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：Your achievement is truly commendable, and it reflects your hard work and dedication
towards this competition.
拓展句：Your achievement is truly commendable, which reflects your hard work and dedication
towards this competition.
【高分句型1】I am confident that this recognition will motivate you to continue striving for
greatness in your future study.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】I'm writing to extend my warmest congratulations to you for your outstanding
performance in Idiom Challenge Competition, where you were awarded the second prize.（运用
了where引导的定语从句）
3．范文
A lecture on Artificial intelligence and Our Life
Last Friday, our school invited an expert to deliver a lecture titled “Artificial intelligence
and Our Life” in the school’s lecture hall.
The lecture covered various aspects of artificial intelligence (AI) and its impact on our daily
lives, from self-driving cars to smart homes. Besides, expert also explained potential challenges
brought by AI, encouraging students to deeply think about it.
The lecture left us with profound insights. Not only has it broadened our understanding of
it, but it has also inspired us to learn more about the modem technology.
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写报道介绍“Artificial Intelligence and
Our Life”讲座。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
各种各样的：various→a variety of
此外：besides→in additions
演讲：lecture→speech
影响：impact→influence
2.句式拓展简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, expert also explained potential challenges brought by AI, encouraging students to
deeply think about it.
拓展句：Besides, expert also explained potential challenges brought by AI, which can encourage
students to deeply think about it.
[高分句型1] Besides, expert also explained potential challenges brought by AI, encouraging
students to deeply think about it. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Not only has it broadened our understanding of it, but it has also inspired us to learn
more about the modem technology. (运用了not only…but also…句型和倒装)
4．参考答案
Notice
In order to advocate helping people in need, a charity donation activity, organized by the
Students’ Union, will be launched in our school.
The event will take place in the playground at 3 p. m. this Saturday and will last for two
hours. There will be 20 stands set up to collect different types of items. A variety of items,
including books, pens, basketballs and clothes, can all be donated. This event holds great
significance as a small kind act can make a difference to others.
We hope everyone will actively participate in this event!
Students’ Union
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一则通知，说明爱心捐赠活动。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
为了：in order to→so as to
建立：set up→build
各种各样的：a variety of→various
参加：participate in→take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：There will be 20 stands set up to collect different types of items.
拓展句：There will be 20 stands set up, whose aim is to collect different types of items.
[高分句型1] In order to advocate helping people in need, a charity donation activity, organized by
the Students’ Union, will be launched in our school. (运用了不定式作目的状语和过去分词作定语)
[高分句型2] We hope everyone will actively participate in this event! (运用了省略that的宾语
从句)
5．Dear Julia,
Knowing that you are learning Chinese and want to know the symbolic meaning about
Chinese dragon, I am very pleased and I wish you will make much progress soon. Meanwhile,
having a good knowledge of Chinese will benefit you greatly in the future.
I did a little research about the role of dragons in Chinese culture, which I think may be
helpful. The dragon is a mythical creature in Chinese culture. It is considered as a symbol of
power, strength, success and good luck. The Chinese dragon is not only a symbol of China, but
also a symbolic language sign which is used in plentiful Chinese idioms and proverbs. I will send
you a Chinese Idiom Dictionary to help you better understand Chinese culture.
If you have further questions, feel free to ask.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Julia写封回信，向她介绍在
中国“龙”的寓意。
【要点分析】1. 词汇积累
高兴的：pleased→delighted
掌握，精通：have a good knowledge of→have a good command of
有帮助的：be helpful→be of help
被认为：be considered as→be recognized as
2. 句式扩展
同义句转换
原句：Meanwhile, having a good knowledge of Chinese will benefit you greatly in the future.
拓展句：Meanwhile, it is clear that having a good knowledge of Chinese will benefit you greatly
in the future.
【高分句型1】I did a little research about the role of dragons in Chinese culture, which I think
may be helpful. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】The Chinese dragon is not only a symbol of China, but also a symbolic language
sign which is used in plentiful Chinese idioms and proverbs. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
6．Dear schoolmates,
Because of water pollution and ever-lasting population, human beings face serious water
crisis. Aimed at saving water, the water-saving program has been held recently in our school. As
for us students, it’s essential and vital to participate in it.
As a matter of fact, there are many phenomena of water wasting in our daily life. For
example, many students spend too much time having a shower and don’t turn off the tap
immediately after washing hands, both of which lead to water wasting. Therefore, effective
measures should be taken to raise everyone’s awareness of saving water. First we can take a bath
instead of taking a shower, and switch off the tap at once after washing hands. What’s more,
reusing water is also a good way to save water.
My dear friends, let’s join hands to take action immediately. Every effort counts.
The Student Union
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表学生会写一份倡议书，号召号召大
家积极参与节约用水活动。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
因为：because of→owing to
发起：hold→launch
重要的：vital→significant
例如：for example→for instance
2.句式升级
简单句变复合句
原句：Aimed at saving water, the water-saving program has been held recently in our school.
拓展句：The water-saving program, whose aim is to save water, has been held recently in our
school.
【高分句型1】For example, many students spend too much time having a shower and don’t turn
off the tap immediately after washing hands, both of which lead to water wasting.（运用了动名
词作宾语，和“介词+关系代词”引导的非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Therefore, effective measures should be taken to raise everyone’s awareness of
saving water. （运用了不定式作目的状语）
