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三、建议信
建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议，以便让对方
接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自
己的看法或观点；也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。具体写
作结构为：
1．开头表达写信目的常用语
(1)I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.我写信给你一些建议/忠告。
(2)I am writing to express my views concerning...
我写信是要表达我关于……的看法。
(3)You have asked for my advice about...and I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
关于……你向我征求意见，在此我尽力提出一些有用的建议。
2．主体部分表达建议常用语
(1)I think the most suitable...for you is...
我认为对你来说最适合的……是……
(2)I would like to suggest that...
我想建议……
(3)You’d better.../It’s best to...
你最好……/最好是……
(4)As far as I am concerned/In my opinion，it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。
(5)For one thing...；for another...
一方面……，另一方面……
(6)If I were you，I would...
如果我是你，我会……
(7)I think it would be more beneficial if you could...我认为如果你能……将会更有益。3．结尾表达希望常用语
(1)I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.
我希望你会认真考虑我的建议。
(2)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
我希望你会发现这些建议实用/有用/有帮助。
(3)I will be more than happy to see your improvements in this regard.
看到你在这一方面取得进步我会非常高兴。
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之
行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1．你建议的线路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
满分佳作 名师点评
Dear Jim ，
I’m happy to receive your letter and
know you’re coming to China.I am writing to
offer you some advice on which route to
1.文章开头扼要地介绍了写信的目的，使用
choose.
了建议信的套语I am writing to offer you some
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and
advice...。
Mount Tai，both are highly
2.书信的主体部分提出了自己的建议，使用
recommended.Personally，I prefer the one
了过渡性词语：Personally，Moreover；高级
along the Yangtze，the longest river and one of
词汇：highly，recommend，prefer，
the mother rivers of Chinese civilization.You
civilization，amazing，wellknown，
can learn a lot about the history of China and
sightseeing；还使用了复杂结构why引导的
Chinese people.Moreover，the scenery along
表语从句。
the river is amazing，with many wellknown
3.信的结尾使用了建议信的套语I hope you
sightseeing spots.That’s why I think the trip
will take my advice into account/consideration
along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
seriously and will have a good time in China.表
I hope you will take my advice into
达了希望。
account/consideration seriously and will have
a good time in China.
Yours ，
Li Hua假定你是李华，在你校学习的英国交换生 Frank 想参加中国诗词电视大赛(Chinese
Poetry TV Competition)，特地给你写信寻求建议。请你给他回一封信，要点如下：
1．乐意帮助；
2．具体建议；
3．表达祝愿。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Frank，
It’s amazing that you’re interested in the popular Chinese Poetry TV Competition and want
to take part.
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Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Frank ，
It ’ s amazing that you ’ re interested in the popular Chinese Poetry TV Competition and want
to take part.I’m delighted to offer you some tips.
First of all，you should surf the Internet to learn about the brief history of Chinese poetry to
get a better understanding of it.The resources are available on many relevant websites.Secondly，
you’d better recite as many poems as possible and seek help from teachers.Additionally ，
knowing how to enter your name for the competition and watching previous events will make you
well prepared.
Hope these suggestions above will help you get started.Good luck in the competition!
Yours ，
Li Hua
