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专题 48 书面表达建议信、邀请信和申请信（核心考点精讲练）
建议信
一、必备词汇和万能句式
必备词汇
1.gve/offer sb. some advice(on) 给某人提建议
2.ask sb. for advice 向某人征求意见
3.as follows 如下
4.in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view 在我看来
5.find..…helpful/useful/beneficial 认为……有用
6.take part in/participate in... 参加
7.follow/take/adopt one's advice 采纳某人的建议
8.take sth. into account/consideration 把……考虑在内
9.with regard to 关于；就
10. put forward 提出
11.in this regard/in this respect 在这点上/在这方面
12.share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某事
13.with time going on 随着时间的推移
14. Be faced with 面临
15.take sth. seriously 重视；认真对待
必备词汇句型
第一部分：说明写信的目的
套语：
1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps
the following suggestions are helpful.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following
suggestions are helpful to you.
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients
（顾客）.
我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。
4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions
here.
你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few
suggestions.
很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。
6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English
well in high school.
很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。
第二部分：介绍详情、说明原因
套语：
(1) 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。
It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their
speeches.
(2) 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。
We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00.
(3) 下午，我们会一起……
During the afternoon, we’ll...together.
(4) 记得带上水和午餐。
Remember to take water and lunch with you.
(5) 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。
By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club.
(6) 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。
I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite
you to be part of the contest.
(7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。
Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】(8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。
I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there.
第三部分：提出建议
套语：
我建议……
I’d like to suggest that…
May I suggest that…?
In my opinion…
I would like to make a recommendation that…
I am writing to advise…
If I were you, I would…
第四部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复
套语：
1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never
say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。
3. Best wishes!
（给你）最美好的祝愿！
4. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
5. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your
studies/work！
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。
6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
二、写作模板
模板①
Dear________,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】conducive suggestions here.
In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容).
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to
further details.
Good luck with your________________(祝愿).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②
Dear_______,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建
议的主题).
Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also
helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________.
(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下)
As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建
议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心和决心).
I hope ____________(表达愿望)。
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
(2018年全国卷I) 假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件问你询问有关习俗，
请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 到达时间；
2. 合适的礼物；
3. 餐桌礼仪。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
试题分析
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】近几年新课标全国Ⅰ卷的书面表达一直很稳定。形式上看为提纲类书信体作文，内容上依然为彰显中
国传统文化突出中国传统价值观。今年作文考题与2017 年考题的汉语提示内容有相同点，即既注重对时
间表达的考查，又突出了中国元素之礼仪之邦涵盖的礼尚往来与餐桌礼仪。本题也具有以往试卷的半开放
式的命题特点，这就要求我们适当地增加细节，以使文章内容充实、行文连贯。需要注意的是，本文是一
封回信，考生内容上要兼顾这些细节，才能把分数拿到更高。在书信体告知中，一般会使用第三人称和第
二人称交替进行写作，时态应该以一般现在时为主。
One possible version,
Dear Terry,
I’m glad to hear you will pay a visit to your Chinese friend and inquire some Chinese traditional customs. I’d love
to introduce some to you.
First, being on time is one of the most important for Chinese. So I suggest you arriving five to ten minutes earlier.
In addition, some suitable gifts such as fruits or flowers should be chosen. However, an umbrella as a gift is
considered to bring bad luck to the receiver. Remember to avoid it. Finally, you should pay special attention to
Chinese table manners. For example, you can’t take up your chopsticks until the host, especially the elders do.
Wish you a good time with your Chinese friends.
Yours
Lihua
邀请信
一、必备词汇和万能句式
必备词汇
1. 邀请 invite/ invitation
2. 做演讲 make/deliver a speech
3. 评委 judge
4. 感激 appreciate (vi. )/ be grateful
5. 荣幸 honor (v./n.)
6. 欢迎 welcome (v./n./adj.)
7. 接受邀请 accept sb’s invitation
8.代表学校 on behalf of our school
9. 我想邀请你做... I’d like to invite you to...
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】10. 举办活动的目的是... The purpose of the activity is to
11. 活动的细节有... Here are some details about the activity...
12.如果……我将感到荣幸 It’s my honor if...
13.欢迎你参加 You are welcome to...
必备句型
【篇首句】介绍自己，简要说明活动，并邀请对方。
1. I’m Wang Ming from YuWen School，the president of the Student Union.
我是来自育文学校的王明，学生会主席。
2. An English speaking contest of our school will be held on August 6.
我们学校有一场英语演讲比赛将在8月6号举行。学科&网
3. There will be a party in my garden on Sunday.
周日，在我的花园里会举行一场聚会。
4. I’d like to invite you to judge it.
我想邀请你做它的裁判。
5. I’m writing to invite you to...
我写信是邀请你……
6. I wonder if you can come to...
我想知道你是否能来……
7. We sincerely hope you can attend it.
我们真诚希望你能够参加。
8. It’s my pleasure/a great honour for me to invite you to...
我很荣幸的邀请你……
9. It’s a pity that you have to go back to America soon. So a farewell party for you will be held in the Sun Club this
Saturday evening. Could you come at 6:00 pm?
很遗憾你不久就要回美国了。所以，这周六，在阳光俱乐部我们会为你举行一个欢送会。下午六点你能来
吗？
【篇中句】介绍活动具体内容，并说明受邀人参加理由。
1. It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their
speeches.
它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。
2. We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00.
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。
3. During the afternoon, we’ll...together.
下午，我们会一起……
4. Remember to take water and lunch with you.
记得带上水和午餐。
5. By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 in front of your apartment and it will take you directly to the club.
顺便说一下，你可以乘坐你家公寓前的322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。
6. I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite
you to be part of the contest.
我知道你的母语是英语，还是一个英语老师。我，代表我们学校，真诚的邀请你来比赛现场。
7. Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.
既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。
8. I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there.
我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。
【篇尾句】期待对方接受邀请，并期待对方尽快回复。
1. Will you be available during that time? Please contact me at 1234567 at your earliest convenience.
那期间你有空吗？请方便时尽快给我打电话1234567。
2. Would you please let me know as soon as possible if you can accept my invitation?
请尽快告诉我你能否接受我的邀请好吗？
3. We will feel much honored if you could come.如果你能来，我们会非常荣幸。
4. We are looking forward to your coming.我们期待着你的到来。
5. I am longing to see you soon.我期待着尽早见到你。
二、写作模板
模板①
Dear________,
________(开门见山地点、活动)，It would be pleasant to have you here(表达邀请愿望). Will you give
me the pleasure of your company(正式发出邀请)？
During the party/conference, we will have a lots of activities you will be interested in (开始介绍活
动内容). First, __________(介绍举行的活动一). Second, _________(介绍举行的活动二). I know/believe
you be very interested in _________(引出受邀请人参加的理由). First/For one thing________(希望受邀人
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】参加的理由一)，Second/For another__________(希望受邀人参加的理由二)。 The party/conference would
not be complete without you(总结受邀人参加的必要性).
The party/conference will begin at ________(提出活动的地点). It is possible for us to meet at
________(提出具体约定时间). We do hope you can come ________(再次发出邀请).
Yours
Li Hua
模板②
Dear________,
There will be a________(内容) at/in________(地点) on________(时间). We would be honored to
have you there with us.
The occasion will start at________________(具体时间). This will be followed by a________(进一步
的安排). At ________________(时间), we will have ________________________(另一个安排).
I really hope you can make it. RSVP before_________________________(通知你的最后期限).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
2019·全国卷III假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括:
1.时间；
2.活动安排；
3.欢迎他表演节目。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】____________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version,
Dear Allen,
I’m Li Hua. Having known that you like music from our school paper, I am writing to sincerely invite you to join
the school music festival to be held on July 26.2019,which is aimed at improving our abilities to appreciate beauty.
Come and join us. I hope you can become a member of our school music band. Then you can sing an English song
with us. Definitely, you can take part in other musical activities. You can also watch a variety of colorful
performances. Besides, you can attend a lecture about music by a famous musician around 3-5 pm. I think we can
have a good time!
I'm looking forward to your reply soon. (120 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
申请信
【写作方法】
1. 首段：
a. 自我介绍；
b. 申请原因；
c. 说明写信目的。
2.主体：
a. 详述有关背景资料：资历、教育经历、工作经历、兴趣爱好；
b. 询问有关学校、课程等具体内容。
3.尾段：
a. 强调上述材料的重要性；
b. 希望尽快得到答复；
c. 要求手册及申请表；
d. 表示感谢。
【写作流程图】
说明写信目的
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】介绍自我(包括：学历、工作简历、在学校或工作单位的表现)
说明申请该职位或学校的原因
恳请招聘单位或所申请的学校考虑自己的申请，并表示谢意，期望回复
第一部分：说明写信的目的
套语：
(1) 兹申请刊登在……上的……工作。
I am writing to apply for the post of … advertised in …
(2) 见……上刊登的贵公司广告，我谨申请应聘贵公司的……职务。
In reply to your advertisement in …, I beg to apply for the post of … in your company.
(3) 看到贵公司在报上招聘……的广告，我马上感到这正是我这段时间所要寻找的工作，并且我能胜任。
Immediately I saw your advertisement in the paper for …I felt it was just the kind of post for which I have the
qualifications and for which I have been looking for some time.
(4) 我想申请入贵校学习。
I would like to apply for admission to your college.
(5) 我想在贵校……系继续深造。
I would like to further my studies in …Department of your university.
第二部分：介绍详情
套语：
(1) 我的专业是……，我了解贵校在上述领域有极好的项目。
My major is…, and I understand your university has a good program in this field.
(2) ……年，我出生于……，毕业于……大学……专业。毕业后一直在……工作，因此积累了该领域丰富
的经验。
Born in …in…, I graduated from…University majoring in …I have been working in …since my graduation, and I
have therefore attained rich experience in this field.
(3) 毕业后，我先担任……，随后担任……，现任职于……
Upon graduation, I first worked as … The following job was …and currently I am working for/in …
(4) 我现在就读于北京第二外国语学院英语专业，即将毕业。
I am now studying at Beijing Second Foreign Language Institute and will soon be graduated as an English major.
第三部分：说明申请该职位或学校的原因
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】
