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考点巩固卷 22 书面表达之建议信
高考真题
1．【2023 ▪新高考I&II卷】假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练
习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training
after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups.
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little
room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with
someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own
partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课
后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】 1首先：to begin with → first of all
提高：improve → progress
建议：suggestion → advice
选择：choose → select
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own
partners.
拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let
students choose their own partners.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little
room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]
Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with
or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句）
2．（2023·北京·统考高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以
“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
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Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am
writing to offer you my suggestions.
试卷第2页，共3页I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can
participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by
themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which
will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→tip
提供：offer→provide
开展：carry out→conduct
主题：theme→topic
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am
writing to offer you my suggestions.
拓展句：Since you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am
writing to offer you my suggestions.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need
my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means
students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different
activities by themselves. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
3．（2021·北京·高考真题）【北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末
一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意并说明原因;
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】 3___________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend. I’ve just been told that I have to go and
visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. I hope the change won’t
cause you too much trouble.
How about going out next Saturday morning? If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at the school gate at 9: 00.
Please let me know what time suits you best. I should be available anytime next weekend.
In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowers
together.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封电子邮件，就因故不能赴约而致歉并
建议再约。
【详解】1.词汇积累
通知：tell→inform
除此之外：in addition→besides
适合：fit→suit
有空的：available→free
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowers
together.
拓展句：In addition, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park next Saturday, when we can go to see the flowers
together.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend.(运用了that引导的宾
语从句)
[高分句型2] I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was
suddenly admitted to the hospital. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
2023 年高考模拟真题
4．（2022·浙江·浙江省丽水中学校联考二模）假如你是李华，你已经订阅英文杂志English Writing一年
试卷第4页，共3页多了，请你给杂志英文主编写封英语信，内容包括：
1.阅读收获；2.有何建议；3.希望祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】Dear Editor,
Hope this mail finds you well. Having been a devoted reader of your magazine for one year, I am writing to
share with you my thoughts.
Whenever I receive your magazine, I will read each issue from cover to cover. The varieties of columns,
thrilling articles, impressive opinions and helpful writing tips have benefited me so much. The series of contents
not only improve my writing skills but also deepen my insight into profound English writing world. Meanwhile, I
suggest that your magazine should be a platform for us students to share our works.
Do hope English Writing will be more popular. Hope everything goes well with your work.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你已经订阅英文杂志English Writing一年多了，请你
给杂志英文主编写封英语信，内容包括：1.阅读收获；2.有何建议；3.希望祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：tip→advice→suggestion
忠实的：devoted→loyal
激动人心的：thrilling→exciting
有帮助的：helpful→of help
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Having been a devoted reader of your magazine for one year, I am writing to share with you my thoughts.
拓展句：Since I have been a devoted reader of your magazine for one year, I am writing to share with you my
thoughts.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Having been a devoted reader of your magazine for one year, I am writing to share with
you my thoughts. (运用了现在分词作状语)
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】 5[高分句型2] Meanwhile, I suggest that your magazine should be a platform for us students to share our works.
(运用了虚拟语气)
5．（2023·辽宁沈阳·沈阳二中校考模拟预测）假如你是学生会主席李华，为促进学生身心健康发展，请
你面向全体学生写一份倡议书，内容包括：
1.倡议目的；
2.倡议内容；
3.倡议与希望。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80词左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear fellow students,
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The Student Union
【答案】A Possible Version:
Dear fellow students,
As is known to all, it is health that really matters in the process of our learning and growth. Therefore, I
appeal to every individual to take action in order to improve our physical and mental health.
Balancing our study and life always comes first, for only by doing so can we refresh ourselves to greet the
new day ahead. Besides, it is also a must to participate in a variety of extracurricular activities, which can
definitely relieve us of stress. Plus, doing voluntary work is bound to make a big difference.
Let’s keep healthy both physically and mentally together!
The Student Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是学生会主席李华，为促进学生身心健康发展，请你面向全
体学生写一份倡议书。
【详解】1.词汇积累
为了：in order to→so as to
呼吁：appeal to→call for
健康的：healthy→fit
此外：besides→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
试卷第6页，共3页原句：Therefore, I appeal to every individual to take action in order to improve our physical and mental health.
拓展句：Therefore, I appeal to every individual to take action so that we can improve our physical and mental
health.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As is known to all, it is health that really matters in the process of our learning and
growth. (运用了as引导非限制性定语从句和强调句)
[高分句型2] Besides, it is also a must to participate in a variety of extracurricular activities, which can definitely
relieve us of stress. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
6．（2023·广东·华南师大附中校考三模）你是高中学生李华，你的英国朋友Anna计划明年夏天高中毕业
后来中国游玩，准备提前学一点汉语。她来email询问你关于汉语学习的建议。请给Anna回信，主要内
容包括：
1.学习难点；
2.方法建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Anna,
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Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Sample 1:
Dear Anna,
It’s wonderful to hear you’re planning to visit China and learning Chinese! I am thrilled to offer some advice
that may help you along your language learning journey.
Firstly, one of the biggest challenges of learning Chinese is the pronunciation and tones. The four basic tones
in Chinese can be tricky, and even slight variations in tone can change the meaning of a word. Listening to native
speakers and practicing with a tutor or language partner can help you to develop your ear for the language and
improve your pronunciation. Another challenge is getting used to the grammar. Chinese sentence structure is quite
different from that of English, so it may take some time to adjust. I suggest starting with basic sentence patterns
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】 7and gradually working your way up to more complex structures. It may also be helpful to focus on learning
practical vocabulary related to travel, such as directions, transportation, and ordering food. This will enable you to
communicate more effectively during your trip.
I hope these tips are helpful to you, and I wish you the best of luck in your language learning journey. Don’t
forget to have fun exploring the language and culture of China!
Best regards,
Li Hua
Sample 2:
Dear Anna,
Thank you for your email. I’m so looking forward to your visit to China and I think it’s a great idea to learn
some Chinese before you come.
English-speaking people often think Chinese is difficult to learn because we don’t use the alphabet, but in
practice it is not as difficult as it seems once you begin. What is much harder is the pronunciation, as the same
sound with different tones would mean different things and correspond to different characters. I think the best
advice about learning a language is to try to do a little every day — that’s much more effective, in my opinion,
than doing a lot once a week or once a fortnight. It’d be sensible to have some lessons, but you’d have to do a lot
of work on your own in between the lessons if you want to make good progress. Although pronunciation is
difficult at first, I think that’s what you should concentrate on. Don’t worry too much about the writing of the
characters. That way you’ll be able to communicate, even if you don’t know how to write.
Have fun in learning Chinese and enjoy the preparation process for your visit to China.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给计划明年夏天高中毕业后来中国游玩并准备学点汉语的
英国朋友Anna写一封关于汉语学习建议的信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的：thrilled→excited
习惯：get used to→become used to
有帮助的：be helpful→be of help
适应：adjust→adapt
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I suggest starting with basic sentence patterns and gradually working your way up to more complex
structures.
试卷第8页，共3页拓展句：I suggest that you start with basic sentence patterns and gradually work your way up to more complex
structures.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Listening to native speakers and practicing with a tutor or language partner can help
you to develop your ear for the language and improve your pronunciation.(运用了动名词短语作主语)
【高分句型2】It may also be helpful to focus on learning practical vocabulary related to travel, such as
directions, transportation, and ordering food.(运用了it作形式主语，不定式作真正主语的结构)
7．（2023·四川·石室中学校考模拟预测）假定你是一所国际学校的学生李华，世界读书日(World Reading
Day)临近，你校学生会准备组织相关活动，现向同学们征求建议，请你给学生会主席 David写一封建议
信，内容包括: 1.活动主题；2.活动内容。
注意：
1.字数80词左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version
Dear David,
I am writing to offer my suggestions for the upcoming World Reading Day celebrations. My proposed theme
is “The Power of Stories”, which celebrates the impact that stories have on our live.
To bring this theme to life, I suggest hosting a storytelling session to share students’ favorite personal stories,
and a creative writing workshop where students can learn how to craft their own stories. These activities will not
only encourage students to read the power of stories, but also provide them with a platform to express themselves
creatively.
Thank you for considering my suggestions.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学生会主席David写一封关于世界读书日组织活动的建议
信，内容包括：活动主题和活动内容。
【详解】1.词汇积累
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】 9提供：offer→ provide
建议：suggest → advise
鼓励：encourage→ inspire
影响：impact→ effect
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：These activities will not only encourage students to read the power of stories, but also provide them with a
platform to express themselves creatively.
拓展句：These activities will not only encourage students to read the power of stories, but also provide them with
a platform where students can express themselves creatively.
【点睛】【高分句型1】My proposed theme is “The Power of Stories”, which celebrates the impact that stories
have on our live.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和that引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】To bring this theme to life, I suggest hosting a storytelling session to share students’ favorite
personal stories, and a creative writing workshop where students can learn how to craft their own stories.（运用
了不定式作状语、动名词作宾语和where引导的定语从句）
8．（2023·吉林长春·东北师大附中校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Caroline来信说她打算
参加所在学校举办的文化节活动并介绍中国文化，想请你从下列主题中推荐一项：1.传统节日；2.文字发
展。请你给她回信，内容包括：
1.你的建议；
2.推荐理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Caroline,
试卷第10页，共3页Glad to receive your letter. With regard to the matter you mentioned, I’m writing to offer some suggestions.
I propose a brief introduction to the Chinese writing system be a good choice. To start with,China is widely
known for its incredible civilization. Written Chinese becomes an important means by which China’s present is
connected with its past. Moreover, Chinese writing is a significant part of the culture, known as Chinese
calligraphy.Today, many people enjoy practicing this classic art,making it popular both at home and abroad.
Hope my suggestions can help. If you have any question, please feel free to tell me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Caroline.
Glad to receive your letter. With regard to the matter you mentioned, I’m writing to offer some suggestions.
I propose Chinese traditional festivals. To start with, China is widely known for its rich history. Over 5000
years’ history has witnessed the creation of many Chinese traditional festivals. You can talk about the Chinese new
year, the Mid-autumn festivals, or the Dragon boat festival, each of which has incredible stories behind. Moreover,
celebrations of traditional festivals can reflect people’s lifestyles. You can even compare festivals and their
celebrations with the similar ones in your country.
Hope my suggestions can help. If you have any question, please feel free to tell me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Caroline写封回信，向她推荐一个主题以帮助她
参加其学校举办的文化节活动并介绍中国文化。
【详解】1.词汇积累
关于：with regard to→ in reference to/concerning/as to
首先：to start with→ first of all/firstly
此外：moreover→ what’s more/besides
重要的：significant → important
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Today, many people enjoy practicing this classic art, making it popular both at home and abroad.
拓展句：Today, many people enjoy practicing this classic art, which makes it popular both at home and abroad.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Written Chinese becomes an important means by which China’s present is connected
with its past.（运用了which引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】If you have any question, please feel free to tell me.（运用了if引导的状语从句）
9．（2023·重庆·统考三模）假定你是学生李华，你的南非朋友Louis对中国古代四大名著很感兴趣，希望
你能给他推荐其中的一部。请你用英语给Louis回信，内容包括：
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】 111. 简要介绍一本名著；
2. 说明你推荐的理由。
注意：
1. 词数80左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：
《三国演义》Romance of the Three Kingdoms
《水浒传》Water Margin
《西游记》Journey to the West
《红楼梦》A Dream of Red Mansions
Dear Louis,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Possible version
Dear Louis,
I’m glad you’re fond of our traditional culture and the China’s four great classical novels. I will recommend
Journey to the West to you at your request.
Journey to the West tells the story of Tang Xuanzang and his three disciples who go to India for Buddhist
scriptures. During their journey, they bravely face a series of dangers and finally conquer those devils and
monsters. This book is not only interesting in content and vivid in language, but also conveys a spirit of courage.
In our daily life, we are bound to meet with all kinds of challenges. We should be brave and never give up.
The book is well worth reading. I hope you will like it.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的名义给朋友Louis介绍四大名著中的一部，并说明
推荐的理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted/pleased
试卷第12页，共3页勇敢地：bravely→courageously
战胜：conquer→beat/defeat
各种各样的：all kinds of→a vareity of/vareities of
2.句型拓展
陈述句变到状语
原句：This book is not only interesting in content and vivid in language, but also conveys a spirit of courage.
拓展句：Not only is this book interesting in content and vivid in language, but also it conveys a spirit of courage.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Journey to the West tells the story of Tang Xuanzang and his three disciples who go to
India for Buddhist scriptures.（运用了who引导的限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]I’m glad you’re fond of our traditional culture and the China’s four great classical novels.（运用了
省略引导词that的宾语从句）
10．（2023·广东·统考二模）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Hans来信请你为他负责策划的4月20日“中
文日”班级庆祝活动提建议。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1.来信收悉；
2.提出活动建议；
3.望录制和分享。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Hans,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Hans,
I’m glad to hear you will hold an activity on the “Chinese Language Day”. Here are some tips to make it
amazing and educational.
First, engaging audience in entertaining activities is the key. It can start with Chinese calligraphy show
demonstrating the beauty of Chinese characters. Then, why not hold a Chinese speech contest to highlight the
unmatched charm of this elegant language? After that, it could be wrapped up with “Jasmine”, a traditional
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I am sure this will be a feast of culture and I sincerely hope you could record this unforgettable show and
share your achievement with me!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Hans回复邮件，为他负责策划的4月20日“中
文日”班级庆祝活动提建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
以……开始：start with→begin with
比赛：contest→competition
真诚地：sincerely→genuinely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First, engaging audience in entertaining activities is the key.
拓展句：First, what matters is to engage audience in entertaining activities.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m glad to hear you will hold an activity on the “Chinese Language Day”. （运用了
省略that的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】After that, it could be wrapped up with “Jasmine”, a traditional Chinese song, which will
certainly impress the audience.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
11．（2023·湖北·华中师大一附中校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校交换生Lucy准备参加所在城市组
织的汉语演讲比赛，特征求你的意见。请你回复一封邮件， 内容如下：
1. 表示鼓励；
2. 注意事项。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80词左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Lucy,
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试卷第14页，共3页Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Lucy,
I’m delighted to know that you will participate in the City’s Chinese Speech Contest. I firmly believe you
will win a prize.
Firstly, you should choose a topic that you’re familiar with. It would be better for you to choose impressive
examples to gain the recognition of the judges. In addition, you must be well prepared for it. For example, you
have to practise your spoken Chinese to express yourself more clearly and fluently.
I really hope that my advice will be of help to you. Wish you a great success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的建议信。要求考生给校交换生Lucy写一封建议信，以帮助其
更好地参加所在城市组织的汉语演讲比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted → happy/glad/joyful
首先：firstly→ first of all/initially
此外：in addition→ what’s more/besides
有帮助的：be of help→ be helpful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：For example, you have to practise your spoken Chinese to express yourself more clearly and fluently.
拓展句：For example, you have to practise your spoken Chinese so that you can express yourself more clearly
and fluently.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m delighted to know that you will participate in the City’s Chinese Speech Contest.
(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Firstly, you should choose a topic that you’re familiar with.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
12．（2023·山西朔州·怀仁市第一中学校校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jeff来信说他痴迷
于刷短视频，对学习失去了兴趣，很苦恼。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.肯定短视频在某些方面的好处；
2.你的建议；
3.表达祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jeff,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jeff,
I’m sorry to hear that you are addicted to short videos and lack interest in learning. I’m writing to offer you
some suggestions.
Short videos do have some benefits. We can release pressure, share good times, cherish memories, etc.
However, in my opinion, firstly, you should strike a balance between leisure activities and learning. Only on the
premise of self-consciousness can we benefit from modern technologies rather than being slaves of such new
technologies. You should focus on study, and don’t waste your time on distractions. Secondly, you can join your
friends in playing various sports activities, such as running, cycling or playing basketball, etc.
I hope my suggestions will be of some help for you. I believe you can make it.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Jeff写封信，肯定短视频在某些方面的好处，对
他沉迷刷短视频提点建议，并表达祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供：offer→provide
建议：suggestion→advice
然而：however→nevertheless
各种各样的：various→a variety of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Secondly, you can join your friends in playing various sports activities, such as running, cycling or playing
basketball, etc.
拓展句：Secondly, you can join your friends in playing various sports activities, which include running, cycling
or playing basketball, etc.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you are addicted to short videos and lack interest in learning. (运用
了that引导的宾语从句)
试卷第16页，共3页[高分句型2] Only on the premise of self-consciousness can we benefit from modern technologies rather than
being slaves of such new technologies. (运用了部分倒装句)
13．（2023·广东韶关·统考二模）假定你是李华, 你的英国笔友Mike所在的学校将开设汉语选修课。他
来信咨询如何布置一间教室来营造良好的汉语学习氛围。请给他回信，提出建议并说明理由。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右。2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
Greetings from China!
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文
Dear Mike，
Greetings from China! Hearing that the Chinese language will be an optional course in your school, I’m
writing delightedly to gave some practical advice on the decoration of your classroom.
I think it would be a good idea to put up some unique traditional Chinese elements like paper-cuts and
calligraphy works. Not only can they make the classroom more attractive, but they also carry rich Chinese cultural
and historical information. Furthermore, you can put a book shelf at the back of the classroom, where students can
get easy access to the Chinese language.
I firmly believe that if you decorate the classroom that way, it will surely create an amazing Chinese learning
atmosphere.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely.
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Mike写一封回信，告诉他关于如何布置一间教
室来营造良好的汉语学习氛围的建议并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴地：delightedly →joyfully
建议：advice →suggestion
吸引人的：attractive →appealing
此外：furthermore →what’s more
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同义句转换
原句：Hearing that the Chinese language will be an optional course in your school, I’m writing delightedly to
gave some practical advice on the decoration of your classroom
拓展句：Because I hear that the Chinese language will be an optional course in your school, I’m writing
delightedly to gave some practical advice on the decoration of your classroom
【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only can they make the classroom more attractive, but they also carry rich Chinese
cultural and historical information.（运用了倒装句）
【高分句型2】Furthermore, you can put a book shelf at the back of the classroom, where students can get easy
access to the Chinese language.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）
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